中學英語作文寫作教案

9/9授課主題作文寫作教學目的保證英語句子書寫美觀、沒有明顯病句重、難點書寫規(guī)范；句型把控英文寫作指導一、做題步驟一審”即審題。主要是看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達的含義，抓住要點，注意文體是什么，準備寫作的人稱和時態(tài)：如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時態(tài)；如是簡介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。故事性文章一般用過去時，其中表達感受時可用現(xiàn)在時。說明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時，舉例時可用過去時?！岸憽奔戳芯V。主要是列個提綱，考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型，要能根據(jù)自己的英語水平，盡量揚長避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場合，語言要地道。“三連”即連句成文。根據(jù)短文的內容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的靈活運用，長、短句，簡單句，復合句要搭配運用?！八母摹奔葱薷臐櫳?。主要是看全文符不符合題目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點；語法是不是正確，包括單詞的拼寫、大小寫、標點符號、時態(tài)、語態(tài)、單復數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。*總之做到三審：體裁、時態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯—>短語—>句式；三查：要點、拼寫和語法、連貫文章分3段：（1）綜述：概括性強，最多2句話引入主題；（2）正文——主要內容：層次性強，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話；（3）結尾：緊扣主題，2句話內結束，盡量升華。二、常用連接詞：連詞：1)表層次:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,whatismore,last,also,andthen,next,besides,atfirst;atlast;intheend…when/while/assoonas/not…until…inaddition,finally,ononehandontheotherhand，each/onecoinhastwosides，2)表轉折；but,however,though,although,afterall,inspiteof,fortunately，unfortunately，atthesametime…3)表遞近：inaddition,besides,moreover,what`smore4)因果because,so,becauseof,thanksto,dueto,for,since,owingto,asaresult(of),hence,thus5)例證forexample,forinstance,suchas6)表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…h(huán)avegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;7)總結AsIsee,Asforme，Asweallknow,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,Ithink...,infact,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,insummary,tosumup,AsfarasIknow，Inmyopinion三、常見的插入語有形容詞(詞組)、副詞、不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞短語、介詞短語、從句以及固定短語。

1.常見的形容詞(詞組)、副詞作插入語的有:sure

enough(果然);

strange;

worse

still(更糟糕的是);mostimportant(最重要的是);honestly;obviously;however;otherwise;luckily;unfortunately;besides;first;second;especially;surprisingly等。例如:Worsestill,thelioncouldevencarryoffthebabyinitsmouth.Wemustdotheexperimentcarefully;otherwiseyou'llgetanotherresult.Honestly,Idon'tneeditatthemoment.Helikesthecountry,especiallyinspring2.常見的不定式有:totellthetruth;tobeshort(簡單地);tobeginwith(首先);tobesure(自然、當然、果然);tobehonest/frank;tomakethingsworse;tomakealongstoryshort;tospeakof(值得一提的是),tobefair,tosumup(概括地說)等。這些插入語表示說話人的態(tài)度,在句子中作獨立成份。3.常見的介詞短語有:infact;inaddition;inaword;ontheotherhand;inotherwords;inone'sopinion;inthatcase;bytheway;ofcourse;asarule(通常);toone'ssurprise;forexample;onthecontrary(相反);inaway(在某點上、在某種程度上);foronething;foranother(thing)等。例如:Inaway,Ithinkwebothwoninthegame四、文中正確使用兩三個好的句型，如：賓語從句、狀語從句、動名詞做主語等。1、賓語從句舉例：IbelieveTianjinwillbemorebeautifulandprosperous.2、狀語從句舉例：Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment，ourhometownwillbecomecleanandbeautiful。3、動名詞做主語舉例：Readingbooksinthesunisbadforoureyes。it做形式主語：It’sbadforoureyestoreadbooksinthesun。4、常用狀語從句句型：1)時間when，not…until，assoonas2)目的sothat...；todo(為了)3)結果so…that...，too…to…(太……以至于……)4)條件if，unless(除非)，aslongas(只要)5)讓步though，although，eventhough，evenifnomatterwhat/when/where/who/which/how6)比較as…as…，notso…as…，than附：掌握常用句型：下面只列舉比較常用的。1.inorderto為了實現(xiàn)他的夢想，他學習非常努力。Heworkedveryhardinordertorrealizehisdream.2.so…that他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了。Theywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbutyawn.3.wouldrather…than他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。Hewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself.4.notonly…butalso在短短的三年的時間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學位。Injustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherdoctor’sdegree.5.either…or如果考試過關，你可以買一個MP3或去云南玩一趟。YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupasstheexam.6.neither…nor他是一個無聊的人，既不愛娛樂，也不愛讀書。Heisaboringman.Helikesneitherentertainmentnorreading.7.aswellas他善良又樂于助人。Hewaskindaswellashelpful.8.…aswell這個小孩活潑又可愛。Thechildisactiveandfunnyaswell.9.One…theother你看見桌子上有兩只筆嗎？一支是紅色的，另一支是黑色的。Haveyouseentwopensonthedesk?Oneisred,theotherisblack.10.Some…others每個人都很忙，有些在讀書，有些在寫作。Everyoneisbusyinclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.11.not…until直到他告訴我發(fā)生的事，我才了解真相。Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.12.finditadj.todo…我覺得作聽力時有必要作筆記。Ifinditnecessarytotakenoteswhilelistening.五、認真檢查，檢查信息點是否全面，時態(tài)、人稱是否一致，句子結構是否清晰，短語使用、單詞拼寫是否準確等。檢查后，將草稿謄寫在紙上，請注意按結構分段，書寫清晰。下面列舉一些在檢查中可發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯誤：1.Welivemoreandmorecomfortable。改正：comfortably(副詞修飾動詞)2.wecangetmanyinformationsbyreadingnewspapers。改正：muchinformation(不可數(shù)名詞由much修飾)3.TherehasmanyprogramsinTV。改正：TherearemanyprogramsonTV。(Therebe句型和介詞短語)4.Ithinkrideabikecankeepourhealth。改正：Ithinkridingabikecankeepushealthy。(動名詞作主語)建議大家練習或模仿不同題材的文章，特別注意改錯總結和吸取范文中好的結構與表達方法，適當運用于自己的文章中。寫作技巧專題復習一．句型變化擴張擴張原則1：表達觀點要“自我”Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymuchmoreattentionontheweaksubjects!擴張原則2：兩句之間要過渡Ileftmypenathome.Whatwasworse,thedrugstorewasclosedthatday.變形原則3：凡是問題闡述用形容詞句型?。∑胀壘湫蚑heenvironmentisbad.比較級句型Theenvironmentisgettingmuchworsethanbefore.Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse最高級句型Ihaveneverseentheworseenvironment.變形原則5：表達作用多用it句式…isa…wayto…閱讀能幫助我放松自己。Readingisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.看電影能幫助我們學習英語。WatchingmoviesisawonderfulwaytolearnEnglish.變形原則6：增強情感轉感嘆閱讀對我們很有益.Howbeneficialitisforustoread！作運動對學生很重要.Howimportantitisforstudentstodosports.變形原則7：事情到感情句型Itmakessb.feel…that…IwasveryhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.ItmakesmefeelhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.變形原則8：形容詞句型升級：itisoneofthemost…Itwasanunusualexperienceinmylife.Itwasoneofthemostunusualexperienceinmylife.變形原則12：活用therebe結合定從:Manyreasonsmademelikereading.TherearemanyreasonswhyIenjoyreading列舉式結構:firstofall,secondly,besides,what'smore,lastbutnotleast,Foronething,Foranother,二.詞匯變化變化原則1：make更有feelAfterdoingsports,Ifeelrelaxed.Itmakesmefeelrelaxedtodosports.ImadeaprogressinEnglish.Ifeelproud.ItmakesmefeelproudtomakeaprogressinEnglish.變化原則2：連詞不再用and增補notonly…butalso…,aswellas…進階what’smore/worse,furthermore轉折while,however變化原則3：喜歡不再like—用befondof,enjoy,becrazyaboutIamfondofreadingbooks.變化原則4：凡是提出措施咱盡量不用should！！用“suppose”、“hadbetter”，“havenochoicebut”，“it’sourdutyto”三、如何開篇：1、主旨設問更給力Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustodosports.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforourhealthandstudy.Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustoprotectenvironment.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforliving.Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustolearnEnglish.Why?Becauseit’sthemost-widelyusedlanguageintheworld.2、頭文字D從D開始，從我們到我Differentpeoplehavedifferent_____,but/andIhave/prefer______3、議論文結構開頭方式：Inmyopinion,we,students,aresupposedtotakemoreafter-classactivities!議點闡述：TherearemanyreasonswhyIsupportit!(列舉式)總結陳述：Aboveall,itissoobviousthatwe...(強調主題！)開頭方式:Inmyopinion,we,students,aresupposedtotakemoreafter-classactivities!議點闡述：TherearemanyreasonswhyIsupportit!(列舉式)總結陳述：Aboveall,itissoobviousthatwe...(強調主題！)4、英語書信的常見寫作模板

開頭部分：How

nice

to

hear

from

you

again.

Let

me

tell

you

something

about

the

activity.

I’m

glad

to

have

received

your

letter

of

Apr.

9th.

I’m

pleased

to

hear

that

you’re

coming

to

China

for

a

visit.

I’m

writing

to

thank

you

for

your

help

during

my

stay

in

America四、如何結尾1.各種號召--事不宜遲Don’tputitoff.2.各種越--多多益善the+比較級+主謂，the+比較級+主謂越…就越…Thebetterwetakecareoftheenvironment,themorebeautifultheworldwillbe.2.名言警句學習類Practicemakesperfect.運動類Romewasnotbuiltinaday.環(huán)保類Nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.愛好類Interestistheb