中學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文寫作教案

9/9授課主題作文寫作教學(xué)目的保證英語(yǔ)句子書寫美觀、沒有明顯病句重、難點(diǎn)書寫規(guī)范；句型把控英文寫作指導(dǎo)一、做題步驟一審”即審題。主要是看清楚題目要求，讀懂題目所表達(dá)的含義，抓住要點(diǎn)，注意文體是什么，準(zhǔn)備寫作的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)：如果是日記和故事，宜采用過去時(shí)態(tài)；如是簡(jiǎn)介之類的，宜采用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。故事性文章一般用過去時(shí)，其中表達(dá)感受時(shí)可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。說明性或議論性文章一般用現(xiàn)在時(shí)，舉例時(shí)可用過去時(shí)?！岸憽奔戳芯V。主要是列個(gè)提綱，考慮所要選用的單詞、詞組、句型，要能根據(jù)自己的英語(yǔ)水平，盡量揚(yáng)長(zhǎng)避短，避難就易。遇到想不起的詞、句時(shí)，就用同（近）義詞或同義句代替，不要使用沒有把握的詞句，并且要綜合考慮所涉及到的情景、場(chǎng)合，語(yǔ)言要地道?！叭B”即連句成文。根據(jù)短文的內(nèi)容要求，確定先寫什么，后寫什么，按照表述內(nèi)容的情節(jié)發(fā)展和實(shí)際需要，重新排列組合已寫成的句子，劃分必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句式的靈活運(yùn)用，長(zhǎng)、短句，簡(jiǎn)單句，復(fù)合句要搭配運(yùn)用?！八母摹奔葱薷臐?rùn)色全文。主要是看全文符不符合題目要求，行文是否流暢，有沒有遺漏要點(diǎn)；語(yǔ)法是不是正確，包括單詞的拼寫、大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、冠詞等。*總之做到三審：體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱；三思：詞匯—>短語(yǔ)—>句式；三查：要點(diǎn)、拼寫和語(yǔ)法、連貫文章分3段：（1）綜述：概括性強(qiáng)，最多2句話引入主題；（2）正文——主要內(nèi)容：層次性強(qiáng)，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個(gè)方面，每個(gè)方面最多2句話；（3）結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。二、常用連接詞：連詞：1)表層次:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,tobeginwith,tostartwith,whatismore,last,also,andthen,next,besides,atfirst;atlast;intheend…when/while/assoonas/not…until…inaddition,finally,ononehandontheotherhand，each/onecoinhastwosides，2)表轉(zhuǎn)折；but,however,though,although,afterall,inspiteof,fortunately，unfortunately，atthesametime…3)表遞近：inaddition,besides,moreover,what`smore4)因果because,so,becauseof,thanksto,dueto,for,since,owingto,asaresult(of),hence,thus5)例證forexample,forinstance,suchas6)表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…h(huán)avegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.benefitsb.;sbbenefitfromsth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy…;befondof…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;7)總結(jié)AsIsee,Asforme，Asweallknow,ingeneral,generallyspeaking,Ithink...,infact,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,inshort,insummary,tosumup,AsfarasIknow，Inmyopinion三、常見的插入語(yǔ)有形容詞(詞組)、副詞、不定式、現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)、介詞短語(yǔ)、從句以及固定短語(yǔ)。

1.常見的形容詞(詞組)、副詞作插入語(yǔ)的有:sure

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still(更糟糕的是);mostimportant(最重要的是);honestly;obviously;however;otherwise;luckily;unfortunately;besides;first;second;especially;surprisingly等。例如:Worsestill,thelioncouldevencarryoffthebabyinitsmouth.Wemustdotheexperimentcarefully;otherwiseyou'llgetanotherresult.Honestly,Idon'tneeditatthemoment.Helikesthecountry,especiallyinspring2.常見的不定式有:totellthetruth;tobeshort(簡(jiǎn)單地);tobeginwith(首先);tobesure(自然、當(dāng)然、果然);tobehonest/frank;tomakethingsworse;tomakealongstoryshort;tospeakof(值得一提的是),tobefair,tosumup(概括地說)等。這些插入語(yǔ)表示說話人的態(tài)度,在句子中作獨(dú)立成份。3.常見的介詞短語(yǔ)有:infact;inaddition;inaword;ontheotherhand;inotherwords;inone'sopinion;inthatcase;bytheway;ofcourse;asarule(通常);toone'ssurprise;forexample;onthecontrary(相反);inaway(在某點(diǎn)上、在某種程度上);foronething;foranother(thing)等。例如:Inaway,Ithinkwebothwoninthegame四、文中正確使用兩三個(gè)好的句型，如：賓語(yǔ)從句、狀語(yǔ)從句、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)等。1、賓語(yǔ)從句舉例：IbelieveTianjinwillbemorebeautifulandprosperous.2、狀語(yǔ)從句舉例：Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment，ourhometownwillbecomecleanandbeautiful。3、動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)舉例：Readingbooksinthesunisbadforoureyes。it做形式主語(yǔ)：It’sbadforoureyestoreadbooksinthesun。4、常用狀語(yǔ)從句句型：1)時(shí)間when，not…until，assoonas2)目的sothat...；todo(為了)3)結(jié)果so…that...，too…to…(太……以至于……)4)條件if，unless(除非)，aslongas(只要)5)讓步though，although，eventhough，evenifnomatterwhat/when/where/who/which/how6)比較as…as…，notso…as…，than附：掌握常用句型：下面只列舉比較常用的。1.inorderto為了實(shí)現(xiàn)他的夢(mèng)想，他學(xué)習(xí)非常努力。Heworkedveryhardinordertorrealizehisdream.2.so…that他們太累了，除了伸懶腰什么都做不了。Theywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbutyawn.3.wouldrather…than他寧愿聽他人講而不愿自己說。Hewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself.4.notonly…butalso在短短的三年的時(shí)間里她不但完成了所有課程，而且還獲得了博士學(xué)位。Injustthreeyears,shehadnotonlyfinishedallthelessons,butalsoreceivedherdoctor’sdegree.5.either…or如果考試過關(guān)，你可以買一個(gè)MP3或去云南玩一趟。YoucouldeitherbuyanMP3orgotoYunnanforavisitifyoupasstheexam.6.neither…nor他是一個(gè)無(wú)聊的人，既不愛娛樂，也不愛讀書。Heisaboringman.Helikesneitherentertainmentnorreading.7.aswellas他善良又樂于助人。Hewaskindaswellashelpful.8.…aswell這個(gè)小孩活潑又可愛。Thechildisactiveandfunnyaswell.9.One…theother你看見桌子上有兩只筆嗎？一支是紅色的，另一支是黑色的。Haveyouseentwopensonthedesk?Oneisred,theotherisblack.10.Some…others每個(gè)人都很忙，有些在讀書，有些在寫作。Everyoneisbusyinclassroom.Somearereading,othersarewriting.11.not…until直到他告訴我發(fā)生的事，我才了解真相。Ididn’tknowthetruthuntilshetoldmewhathappened.12.finditadj.todo…我覺得作聽力時(shí)有必要作筆記。Ifinditnecessarytotakenoteswhilelistening.五、認(rèn)真檢查，檢查信息點(diǎn)是否全面，時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否一致，句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否清晰，短語(yǔ)使用、單詞拼寫是否準(zhǔn)確等。檢查后，將草稿謄寫在紙上，請(qǐng)注意按結(jié)構(gòu)分段，書寫清晰。下面列舉一些在檢查中可發(fā)現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤：1.Welivemoreandmorecomfortable。改正：comfortably(副詞修飾動(dòng)詞)2.wecangetmanyinformationsbyreadingnewspapers。改正：muchinformation(不可數(shù)名詞由much修飾)3.TherehasmanyprogramsinTV。改正：TherearemanyprogramsonTV。(Therebe句型和介詞短語(yǔ))4.Ithinkrideabikecankeepourhealth。改正：Ithinkridingabikecankeepushealthy。(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))建議大家練習(xí)或模仿不同題材的文章，特別注意改錯(cuò)總結(jié)和吸取范文中好的結(jié)構(gòu)與表達(dá)方法，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用于自己的文章中。寫作技巧專題復(fù)習(xí)一．句型變化擴(kuò)張擴(kuò)張?jiān)瓌t1：表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)要“自我”Inmyopinion,weshouldpaymuchmoreattentionontheweaksubjects!擴(kuò)張?jiān)瓌t2：兩句之間要過渡Ileftmypenathome.Whatwasworse,thedrugstorewasclosedthatday.變形原則3：凡是問題闡述用形容詞句型??！普通級(jí)句型Theenvironmentisbad.比較級(jí)句型Theenvironmentisgettingmuchworsethanbefore.Theenvironmentisgettingworseandworse最高級(jí)句型Ihaveneverseentheworseenvironment.變形原則5：表達(dá)作用多用it句式…isa…wayto…閱讀能幫助我放松自己。Readingisagoodwaytorelaxmyself.看電影能幫助我們學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)。WatchingmoviesisawonderfulwaytolearnEnglish.變形原則6：增強(qiáng)情感轉(zhuǎn)感嘆閱讀對(duì)我們很有益.Howbeneficialitisforustoread！作運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生很重要.Howimportantitisforstudentstodosports.變形原則7：事情到感情句型Itmakessb.feel…that…IwasveryhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.ItmakesmefeelhappythatIgotanAinEnglishlastterm.變形原則8：形容詞句型升級(jí)：itisoneofthemost…Itwasanunusualexperienceinmylife.Itwasoneofthemostunusualexperienceinmylife.變形原則12：活用therebe結(jié)合定從:Manyreasonsmademelikereading.TherearemanyreasonswhyIenjoyreading列舉式結(jié)構(gòu):firstofall,secondly,besides,what'smore,lastbutnotleast,Foronething,Foranother,二.詞匯變化變化原則1：make更有feelAfterdoingsports,Ifeelrelaxed.Itmakesmefeelrelaxedtodosports.ImadeaprogressinEnglish.Ifeelproud.ItmakesmefeelproudtomakeaprogressinEnglish.變化原則2：連詞不再用and增補(bǔ)notonly…butalso…,aswellas…進(jìn)階what’smore/worse,furthermore轉(zhuǎn)折while,however變化原則3：喜歡不再like—用befondof,enjoy,becrazyaboutIamfondofreadingbooks.變化原則4：凡是提出措施咱盡量不用should??！用“suppose”、“hadbetter”，“havenochoicebut”，“it’sourdutyto”三、如何開篇：1、主旨設(shè)問更給力Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustodosports.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforourhealthandstudy.Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustoprotectenvironment.Why?Becauseit’sgoodforliving.Ithinkit’sveryimportantforustolearnEnglish.Why?Becauseit’sthemost-widelyusedlanguageintheworld.2、頭文字D從D開始，從我們到我Differentpeoplehavedifferent_____,but/andIhave/prefer______3、議論文結(jié)構(gòu)開頭方式：Inmyopinion,we,students,aresupposedtotakemoreafter-classactivities!議點(diǎn)闡述：TherearemanyreasonswhyIsupportit!(列舉式)總結(jié)陳述：Aboveall,itissoobviousthatwe...(強(qiáng)調(diào)主題！)開頭方式:Inmyopinion,we,students,aresupposedtotakemoreafter-classactivities!議點(diǎn)闡述：TherearemanyreasonswhyIsupportit!(列舉式)總結(jié)陳述：Aboveall,itissoobviousthatwe...(強(qiáng)調(diào)主題！)4、英語(yǔ)書信的常見寫作模板

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America四、如何結(jié)尾1.各種號(hào)召--事不宜遲Don’tputitoff.2.各種越--多多益善the+比較級(jí)+主謂，the+比較級(jí)+主謂越…就越…Thebetterwetakecareoftheenvironment,themorebeautifultheworldwillbe.2.名言警句學(xué)習(xí)類Practicemakesperfect.運(yùn)動(dòng)類Romewasnotbuiltinaday.環(huán)保類Nothingisimpossibletoawillingmind.愛好類Interestistheb