高考英語：熱點9“應(yīng)用文”真題分析

熱點09應(yīng)用文（全國卷）命題趨勢命題特點以提綱類為主要命題形式，提示內(nèi)容較為簡潔;體裁和題材相對穩(wěn)定，以應(yīng)用文為主，選材均與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活及社會熱點相關(guān)。命題超勢”命題將會保持穩(wěn)定性，實用類將會成為發(fā)展趨勢，內(nèi)容上會靈活多變，加大開放性。試卷年份體裁話題題材全國卷I2021（甲卷）建議信中國傳統(tǒng)文化哪些中國傳統(tǒng)文化更吸引外國朋友2020參賽短文社會生活身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人2019申請信社會生活畫展志愿者2018建議信社會生活餐桌禮儀2017告知語言學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)計劃安排全國卷II2021（乙卷）演講稿學(xué)習(xí)生活線上學(xué)習(xí)2020記敘文學(xué)校生活采摘活動2019告知信學(xué)校生活球隊比賽事宜2018通知學(xué)校生活觀看英文短片2017邀請信藝術(shù)參觀剪紙藝術(shù)展全國卷III2021（新高考）略2020電子郵件學(xué)校生活征求英語短劇的意見2019邀請信學(xué)校生活邀請參加音樂節(jié)2018告知信學(xué)校生活體育活動項目開展情況2017邀請信學(xué)校生活邀請外國友人加入校隊滿分技巧一、解題步驟書面表達(dá)分步驟：1、審體裁f審人稱f審時態(tài)7列要點f謀篇章2、列出詞匯和句型一連詞成句段落—清晰完美收尾3、檢查拼寫三核實標(biāo)點-檢查句子結(jié)構(gòu)是否正確—檢查要點是否遺漏—檢查詞數(shù)是否符合要求二、實戰(zhàn)技巧寫好高考“書面表達(dá)”絕非一日之功，關(guān)鍵在于平時扎扎實實的訓(xùn)練。但是，在夯實語言基本功的前提下，熟悉、掌握一定的應(yīng)試技巧，也非常重要。根據(jù)‘書面表達(dá)”常見錯誤及評卷要求，建議使用“一式，兩頭，三寫，四關(guān)”的應(yīng)試搶分技巧。具體為：一式寫對格式要求記住英語常用文體的格式和應(yīng)用文體的寫作方式和特點。二頭寫好兩頭要求靈活運用熟悉的句式和表達(dá)手法，使文章開頭和結(jié)尾結(jié)構(gòu)正確，言簡意賅。三寫規(guī)范三寫在高考英語書面表達(dá)的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，正確拼寫和使用標(biāo)點符號及書寫的美觀程度也是影響得分的一個重要指標(biāo)，因此考生要高度重視。許多考生只重視書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容的訓(xùn)練和提高，卻忽視了卷面規(guī)范書寫的訓(xùn)練，導(dǎo)致本不該的失分。四關(guān)突破四關(guān)所謂“四關(guān)”是指突破內(nèi)容要點關(guān)、行文邏輯關(guān)、語法規(guī)則關(guān)和習(xí)慣表達(dá)關(guān)。要求內(nèi)容要點準(zhǔn)確全面，行文邏輯通順嚴(yán)密，語言運用正確得當(dāng)，表達(dá)方式符合英語習(xí)慣。當(dāng)然，在備考過程中，有針對性地背誦一些高分句式，套用合適的寫作模塊，可以幫助大家在短時間內(nèi)在書面表達(dá)上搶得高分?。?021年全國高考乙卷英語試題）你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：.分析優(yōu)勢與不足；.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。注意：.詞數(shù)100左右；.題目和首句已為你寫好。Besmartonlinelearners【答案】onepossibleversion:BesmartonlinelearnersNetworklearninghasincreasinglybecomeanimportantmeansforpeopletoacquireknowledgeandsolveproblems.Butbeingsmartonlinelearnershasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Firstofall,assmartonlinelearners,wecanmakefulluseofthemostextensiveeducationalresourcestobroadenthehorizon.Besides,Wecantaketheinitiativeinourstudybyourselveswithouttimeandspacelimit.Ofcourse,thesedisadvantagesareasfollows.Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecanttellthedifferencebetweenthetrueandthefalse,whichmaybeharmfustudyandlife.Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingiforusnottobeaffected.Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesfindaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.J滿分技巧）本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以Besmartonline遂@^^題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽。【詳解】.詞匯積累充分利用：makefulluseoffmakethemostof擴寬,豐富：broaden—enrich各種各樣：allkindsof—varietiesof不完美：imperfection—defect.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvanta；findaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.拓展句：Inconclusion,weshouldhaveagoodunderstandingofitsadvantagesanddisadvantfindingaproperwaytomakeourstudymoreefficient.【點睛】高分句型1]Facedwithallkindsofinformationontheinternet,Wecan'ttellthedifferencebetw（andthefalse,whichmaybeharmfultoourstud（非n謂語作^狀語和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）高分句型2]Ontheotherhand,onlinelearningitselfhassomeimperfections,makingitdifficult:beaffecte（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）(2020年全國統(tǒng)一高考英語試卷(新課標(biāo)H))上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包括：.農(nóng)場情況；.采摘過程；.個人感受注意：.詞數(shù)100左右；.題目已為你寫好。題目:MyWeekendMyWeekend【答案】onepossibleversion:MyWeekendOrganizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.Thefarmissituatedatthefootofamountain,theskyisblueandtheairisfresh.Wewereattractedbythebeautifulscenery.Therearedifferentkindsoffruittreesaswellasavarietyofanimals.Onarriving,wesawredripepeacheshangingonthetree.Usingbasketsandladders,Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.Icouldn'twaittotakeabite,andthesweetjuicewentdownmythroat.Iwasgratefulforthisopportunitytogetclosetonature.NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!____ 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J第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，上周末，你和同學(xué)參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動。內(nèi)容包括：1.農(nóng)場情況；2.采摘過程；3.個人感受。第二步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：pickpeaches,issituated,beautifulscenery,fruittrees,avarietyofanimals,Usingbasketsandladders,takeabite,begratefulfor,getclosetonature,feastonthesweetness.第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。本文用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達(dá)方式，如Organizedbythestudentunion,agroupofvolunteerswenttoHopeFarmtohelpthefarmerspickpeacheslastweekend.和Usingbasketsandladders運用了非謂語動詞；Wefirstpickedtheonesthatweremostbeautifulincolor,thenthosethatwereripeandsoft.運用了定語從句；NotonlywouldIbeabletoexperiencefruitpicking,butIcouldalsofeastonthesweetness!運用了連詞notonly...but…和倒裝句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。（2019?全國卷ni）假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內(nèi)容包括:.時間；.活動安排；.歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。J滿分技巧）【審題謀篇】體裁邀請信人稱第一、二人稱為主時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時為主要點1.音樂節(jié)舉辦的時間；2.活動內(nèi)容安排；3.歡迎他表演節(jié)目【提綱要點】.第一段一一點明主題發(fā)出邀請，并介紹音樂節(jié)的具體內(nèi)容①點明主題AChineseclassicalmusicconcertwill_be_heldinthemusichallofourschool.②發(fā)出邀請I'dliketoinviteyouto_joinme.③活動安排Manymusicmasterpieceswillbeplayedbyafamousband.④歡迎他表演節(jié)目Youarewelcome-togiveaperformance..第二、三段——表達(dá)期盼，期待回復(fù)⑤表達(dá)期盼——我將在音樂廳入口等你I'llmeetyouattheentranceofthemusichall.⑥期待回復(fù)Lookingforwardtoyourreply!【潤色升級】.將①句增加時間細(xì)節(jié)，并用賓語從句進(jìn)行表達(dá)I'mgladto_tell_you_that_a_Chinese_classical_music_concert_will_be_held_in_the_music_hall_of_our_school_on_November_8th..將②句用非謂語動詞作狀語表達(dá)，并與④句合并Knowing_thatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,I'd_like_to_invite_youtojoinmeand_youarewelcometogive_a_performance..將⑤句用if條件句表達(dá)，并增加細(xì)節(jié)If_itisconvenientforyou,」'llmeetyouattheentranceof_the_music_hall_at_7:00_that_evening.【規(guī)范謄寫】DearAllen,lfmLiHua,yourChinesefriend.IfmgladtotellyouthataChineseclassicalmusicconcertwillbeheldinthemusichullofourschoolonNovember8th.Accordingtotheconcertposter,manymusicmasterpieceswillbeplayedbyafamousbandKnowingthatyouarefondofclassicalmusic,lrdliketoinviteyoutojoinmeandyouarewelcometogiveaperformance.I'msureitisagoodchancetoperformyourfavoritemusic.Ifitisconvenientforyouflfllmeetyouattheentranceofthemusichallat7;_00thatevening.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua四（2018.全國卷H）你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片GrowingTogether,內(nèi)容包括：.短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展；.放映時間、地點；.歡迎對短片提出意見。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。滿分技巧【審題謀篇】體裁通知人稱第二人稱為主時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時為主要點1.短片內(nèi)容；2.放映時間、地點；3.歡迎對短片提出意見【提綱要點】.第一段——點題：你受學(xué)生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片①Recently,anoutstandingshortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!.第二段——主體段落展開：短片內(nèi)容；放映時間、地點；歡迎對短片提出意見。②短片內(nèi)容：學(xué)校的發(fā)展Themovieisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.③放映時間、地點ItwillbeshowninthelibraryonJune9th.④歡迎參加會后討論并對短片提出意見Everyoneofyouisbewelcometotakepartinthediscussionheldafterwardsandgiveyourcomments.⑤我們期待你的評論和反饋。Weareexpectingandencouragingyourcommentsandfeedback..第三段——表達(dá)期望⑥Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhave_a_great_timethen.【潤色升級】.句②通過增加定語從句來拓展要點ThenameofthemovieisGrowingTogether,whichisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool..句③通過增加具體時間和地點拓展要點Itwillbeshownonthefourthflooroftheschoo]libraryfrom2 : 00to4 :00intheafternoononJune9th..句④和句⑤用非謂語動詞作狀語合并為一句，實現(xiàn)句式升級Everyone_ofyouiswelcometotakepartinthediscussionheldafterwards,expected…and…encouragedtogiveyour…comments：and…feedback.Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,anoutstandingshortfilmwillbeshowninourschool.Welcometojoinusandenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingTogetherwhichisadocumentaryaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschooLltisbelievedthatthemoviewillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,pleasenotethatitwillbeshowninthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th.WhaVsmore,everyoneofyouiswelcometowatchthemovieandtakepartintheheateddiscussionheldafterwards,expectedandencouragedtogiveyourcommentsandfeedback.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.Lookingforwardtoyourparticipation.StudentUnion五（2017?北京高考）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video

【審題謀篇】體裁圖畫類周記人稱第一人稱為主時態(tài)一般過去時為主要點1.激烈討論后決定制作視頻；2.準(zhǔn)備素材，采訪拍攝；3.后期制作；4.畢業(yè)典禮放映【提綱要點】.第一段——點明主題①畢業(yè)在即，激烈討論后決定制作視頻Graduationfinallycame.Aftera_heateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideo..第二段——主體內(nèi)容②準(zhǔn)備素材——采訪老師，拍攝學(xué)校生活Weinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.③后期制作——爭論保留什么Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.④典禮放映Thevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony.⑤發(fā)表感悟——很有成就感Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.【潤色升級】.將②句增加“花費時間”細(xì)節(jié)，并升級為定語從句Material_collectingtookusawholeweek,during_which_we_interviewed_our_teachers_and_took_pictures_of_everyaspect_of_school_life..將③句增加細(xì)節(jié)，渲染討論及效果Wedebatedoverwhat_to_put_into_the_video.Somecompromises_wereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect..將④句升級用when狀語從句表達(dá)并增加“效果”細(xì)節(jié)Severaldayslater,whenthe_videowasplayedon_thegraduationceremony,_it_was_well_receivedGraduationfinallycame.Myclassmatesand1decidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwh-—ichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreat—se-scofachievement. ,—— 知識梳理第1部分考場作文常見的錯誤及防范措施一考場作文常見的三類錯誤考場作文常見的錯誤主要分為三類：詞匯類錯誤、語法類錯誤和漢語式英語?！ㄒ唬┰~匯類錯誤 ——考試時，考生很容易出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫錯誤和詞形變化錯誤；而詞性不清和詞匯用法方面的錯誤主要還是受漢語思維的影響。其應(yīng)對措施是在備考時要多注意容易拼錯或容易出現(xiàn)詞形變化錯誤的單詞，真正用心去體會英語詞匯的詞性和運用，對一些固定習(xí)語更不能想當(dāng)然地改動。.單詞拼寫錯誤誤：Bytheway,he'saseniorHighSchoolstudentnamedLihuafromTianJin,china.正：Bytheway,he'saseniorhighschoolstudentnamedLiHuafromTianjin,China..詞形變化錯誤誤：Peoplethrowedcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater.正：Peoplethrewcans,paper,bagsandsoonintotheriverwater..詞性不清錯誤誤：Everyoneinmyfamilyislikethedog.正：Everyoneinmyfamilylikesthedog..詞匯用法錯誤誤：Heopenedthelightafterheenteredtheroom.正：Heturnedonthelightafterheenteredtheroom..擅自改動習(xí)語誤：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancewitheducation.正：Nowadaysmostparentsattachmuchimportancetoeducation.J限時檢測）''■ _ （限時：10分鐘）改正下列句子中的錯誤Doingapart-timejobalwayseffectsstudy.ThereisnodoubtthatkeepinganEnglishdiaryhelpsyoualotwithwritenEnglish.Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.WemustpayattentionourpronunciationwhenwespeakEnglish.⑤Weareallentireresponsibleforouractionsandforourreactions.答案：①effectSTaffects②writen—written③In—To④attention后力口to?entire—entirely——（二）語法類錯誤 ——一個正確的句子除了用詞得當(dāng)外，語法也應(yīng)該準(zhǔn)確無誤。如果語法不正確，再好的構(gòu)思也難以正確地表達(dá)，語法類錯誤的多少會直接影響作文的檔次。英語書面表達(dá)中語法類錯誤主要表現(xiàn)在：.時態(tài)錯誤誤：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetohed.正：Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehadgonetobed..語態(tài)錯誤誤：Childrenwhoraiseinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears.正：Childrenwhoareraisedinpoorfamiliescangenerallydealwithproblemsmoreeffectivelyintheiradultyears..主謂一致錯誤誤：SomestudentslikebooksthatiswrittenbyLuXun.正：SomestudentslikebooksthatarewrittenbyLuXun..比較級使用錯誤誤：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingmoreandmoresmaller.正：Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,theworldseemstobegettingsmallerandsmaller..非謂語動詞使用錯誤誤：Theteachercameintothelab,followingbysomestudents.正：Theteachercameintothelab,followedbysomestudents.［限時檢測）（限時：10分鐘）改正下列句子中的錯誤①Ifitwon'traintomorrow,we'llgocamping.NotonlyTombutalsoIaretiredofoneexaminationafteranother.Theythinkstudentsshouldhavetheirowntimetostudyanditismorequieterathome.Therearealotofstudentsstandinaqueuetowelcometheoldsoldier.ShesaidshewouldpayavisittoSuzhouinthenextmonth.答案：①won't—doesn't②are—am③more-much或去掉more④stand-standing⑤去掉in——（三）漢語式英語 ——一般來說，英漢兩種語言既有許多相似之處，又有許多不同之處。在寫作時如果想當(dāng)然地去寫，會出現(xiàn)許多漢語式英語，其中主要包括：.純漢語式思維和漢語式語序誤：Atthisschoolstudying,Ireallyveryhappy.正：Studyingatthisschool,Iamreallyveryhappy..句子成分殘缺①誤：Therearemanystudentsdon'tsupporttheproject.正：Therearemanystudentswhodon'tsupporttheproject.②誤：Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.正：Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatesweresittingintheclassroom..句子粘連誤：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofthemworkinthesamecompany.正：Theoldmanhastwosons,andbothofthemworkinthesamecompany.正：Theoldmanhastwosons,bothofwhomworkinthesamecompany..主謂搭配不當(dāng)誤：Hehappenedanaccidentyesterday.正：Anaccidenthappenedtohimyesterday..動賓搭配不當(dāng)誤：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoimprovetheirproduction.正：Theyaretryingtheirbesttoincreasetheirproduction..形容詞和名詞搭配不當(dāng)誤：Wewalkedafarwaybeforeplantingtrees.正：Wewalkedalongwaybeforeplantingtrees..動詞和副詞搭配不當(dāng)誤：Mygrandfatherverylikesblackteaandhasiteveryday.正：Mygrandfatherlikesblackteaverymuchandhasiteveryday..介詞和賓語搭配不當(dāng)誤：Theywillbuildamonumentonmemoryofthenationalhero.正：Theywillbuildamonumentinmemoryofthenationalhero.J限時檢測）"「一 （■' （限時：10分鐘）改正下列句子中的錯誤Weareimpossibletofinishtheworkinsuchashorttime.It'sknownthatthecostinbigcitiesisveryexpensive.Hecameheretoattendthemeetingincar.Ihaven'theardfromyourletterforalongtimeandImissyouverymuch.Ihavemanycollectionsofstamps,someofthemaremyfavorite.答案：①Weareimpossible—Itisimpossibleforusexpensive—high③in—by④yourletter—you⑤some前力口and或them—which二防范出現(xiàn)錯誤的兩個措施句子正確是作文得高分的關(guān)鍵和保證，考場上要避免上述低級錯誤，可采取以下兩個措施。 （一*）確定王語 英語句子無論多長都有自己的主語（祈使句省略了主語you）。寫句子前首先要確定主語，其次要特別注意漢語與英語的區(qū)別。例如：.北京八月多雨。誤：BeijingrainsmuchinAugust.正：ItrainsmuchinBeijinginAugust..寫得很匆忙，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)書中滿是錯誤。誤：Writteninahurry,wefoundthebookfullofmistakes.正：Writteninahurry,thebookwasfoundfullofmistakes（byus）. （一0確定謂語動詞 英語中沒有動詞就構(gòu)不成句子，但動詞千變?nèi)f化，稍不注意就會寫錯句子。在寫句子時應(yīng)特別注意以下幾個方面。.注意及物與不及物動詞的正確運用誤：Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasraisedinthepasttwentyyears.正：Thelivingstandardofthepeoplehasrisen/hasbeenraisedinthepasttwentyyears..注意延續(xù)性與非延續(xù)性動詞的正確運用誤：Hisgrandmotherhasdiedforfifteenyears.正：Hisgrandmotherhasbeendeadforfifteenyears..注意一些不可用于被動語態(tài)的動詞或動詞短語誤：Thatdictionaryisbelongedtothelibrary.正：Thatdictionarybelongstothelibrary.1限時檢測）

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J（限時:20分鐘）I.以下句子含有考生常犯的錯誤，請改正Itishightimethatwedosomethingtoreducetrafficaccidents.答案：do—did或在do前加shouldWhilehavingourdinner,thedoorbellrang.答案：having前力口wewere或thedoorbellrang—weheardthedoorbellringingRecentlyourvillagehastakenplacegreatchanges.答案：Recentlygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourvillage.DrSmith,togetherwithhiswife,aretoarriveontheeveningflight.答案：are—isEatingatschoolisveryconvenientforstudents.答案：Itisveryconvenientforstudentstoeatatschool.WouldyoupleasemeetmyuncleattheairportbecausethisishisfirsttimevisittotheUS?答案：去掉timeThecarhittedtheoldmananddrivedaway.答案：hitted—hit;drived—droveIhavetwofriends,theirnamesareTomandJim.答案：their—whose或their前加andTherearemanystudentsareplantingtreesonthehill.答案：去掉第二個are或在students后加whoAtweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepoolorgoforapicnic.答案：swimming-swim下面的考生作文中共有10處語言錯誤，請改正假定你是李華，最近與好朋友Lucy吵架了，現(xiàn)在給外教Melinda寫一封郵件請求幫助。郵件內(nèi)容包含：.吵架的原因；.吵架后的心情；.請求Melinda給出解決辦法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMelinda,ThereasonwhyIamwrittingtoyouisbecauseIquarreledwithmyfriendLucyandIneedyourhelpnow.Thequarrelwasoccurredwhenwewerediscussingwhetherweshouldgoshoppingatlastweekend.Becausethecomingexamination,sheinsistedonstudyingatschoolwhileIopposedstrongly.Aftertheincident,wehavenotchattedanymore,causedmegreatdepression.IamsinceresorrytoseethingsgoinglikethisandIhavebeenfeltfrustratedeversince.Ireallydon'twanttolosethisfriend.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeeffectiveandpracticaladvices?Lookingforwardtoyoureply.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua第一句：第二句：第三句：第四句：第五句：第七句：第八句： 答案：第一句：writting-writing;because-that第二句：去掉was;去掉at第三句：Because后力口of第四句：caused—causing第五句：sincere—sincerely;felt—feeling第七句：advices—advice第八句：you—your1限時檢測）（一）（限時:45分鐘）.按分類提示，改正下列句子中的唯一一處錯誤題組1連詞類錯誤Inaddition,theclimatehereisverysimilartothatintheUSA,thusthereisnoneedforyoutoworryaboutit.答案：Inaddition,theclimatehereisverysimilartothatintheUSA,Aandthusthereisnoneedforyoutoworryaboutit.so.Althoughitwasnotexpensive,inordertobuymethegift,butmydadmadeeveryefforttoearnthemoney.答案：Althoughitwasnotexpensive,inordertobuymethegift,but/butmydadmadeeveryefforttoearnthemoney.yet.Thereasonisoftenbecausethepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.答案：Thereasonisoftenbecausethepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimethatforotheractivities..Firstly,weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousethatwe'velearnedinordertohaveabettergraspofit.答案：Firstly,weshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestousethatwe'velearnedinordertohavewhatabettergraspofit..Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,thatcauses100,000deathsperyear.答案：Around540millionpeopleareaffectedbysecond-handsmoke,thatcauses100,000whichdeathsperyear..Ourclassismadeupof52students,allofthemarefriendlyandhard-working.答案：Ourclassismadeupof52students,Aallofthemarefriendlyandhard—working.或andOurclassismadeupof52students,allofthemarefriendlyandhard-working.whom題組2動詞類錯誤.LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusingabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.答案：LearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusingabouttheconfusedChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails..Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwillbringsomegiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.答案：Secondly,ifIwereyou,Iwillbringsomegiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommywouldowncountry..What'smore,inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itofimportanceforyoutobeawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry.答案：What'smore,inordertohavemuchknowledgeofChineseculture,itAofimportanceisforyoutobeawareofthecontent,Tangpoetry..IfyouwanttohaveaDNAdetection,youhavetopayfor125pounds.答案：IfyouwanttohaveaDNAdetection,youhavetopayfor125pounds..Onlyinthiswaytheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.答案:OnlyinthiswayAtheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.can.Lastofall,topromotetheunderstandingandfriendshipbetweenthestudentsofthetwocountries,Ihopeyoucandosomething,suchashelpuspracticeourspokenEnglish.答案：Lastofall,topromotetheunderstandingandfriendshipbetweenthestudentsofthetwocountries,Ihopeyoucandosomething,suchashelpuspracticeourspokenEnglish.helping.Knownthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.答案：Knownthatourlibraryisgoingtobuybooks,I'dliketogivesomesuggestions.Knowing.Weatherpermits,wewillhaveapicnictomorrow.答案：Weatherpermits，wewillhaveapicnictomorrow.permitting.Weofferawiderangeofholidaystochoose.答案：WeofferawiderangeofholidaystochooseA.from題組3介詞、冠詞、代詞類錯誤.Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmeclearly.答案：Bydoingso,Icannotonlysharegoodideaswithothersbutalsolearntoexpressmemyselfclearly..Goodopinionsareworthstickingbecausetheycanbenefitusall.答案：GoodopinionsareworthstickingAbecausetheycanbenefitusall.to.WhenIhavedifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofthemajority.答案：WhenIhaveAdifferentopinion,Imaychoosetogiveitupandrespecttheopinionofathemajority..Twoyearsago,ourteacherofferedusananswerforadifficultmathprobleminclass.答案：Twoyearsago,ourteacherofferedusananswerforadifficultmathprobleminclass.to.Theblackboardisinfrontoftheclassroom.答案：TheblackboardisinAfrontoftheclassroom.the.Nowadaystherearestillmanypoorstudents.Theycannotaffordtogototheschool.答案：Nowadaystherearestillmanypoorstudents.Theycannotaffordtogototheschool..Shemetandeventuallymarriedwithamanconsiderablyyoungerthanherself.答案：Shemetandeventuallymarriedwithamanconsiderablyyoungerthanherself..Severalyearslater,awordcamethathehadsucceededinsolvingthedifficultproblem.答案：Severalyearslater,iwordcamethathehadsucceededinsolvingthedifficultproblem..Bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseitwon'tgiveoffwastegas.答案：Bicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendlybecauseitwon'tgiveoffwastegas.they.Asisknowntoweall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.答案：Asisknowntoweall,withtheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards,carshaveusbecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife..Contrarywithpeople'sexpectations,mostoftheChinesemothersarenotinfavoroftheauthor'swaysheeducatedchildren.答案：Contrarywithpeople'sexpectations,mostoftheChinesemothersarenotinfavorofthetoauthor'swaysheeducatedchildren.題組4形容詞和副詞類錯誤.Thatsuregaveusagreatsenseofachievement.答案：Thatsuregaveusagreatsenseofachievement.surely.Wearenowlivinginaninformationage,inwhichTV,cellphonesandtheWebarewideused.答案：Wearenowlivinginaninformationage,inwhichTVcellphonesandtheWebarewidewidelyused.29.Ithinkit'samoreperfectopportunityformetofurtherdevelopmyabilities.答案：Ithinkit'samNreperfectopportunityformetofurtherdevelopmyabilities..Heisaboredboyandwealldislikehim.答案：Heisaboredboyandwealldislikehim.boring.Onlybraveonescanwatchsharksinthedeeplyocean.答案：Onlybraveonescanwatchsharksinthedeeplyocean.deep.Assoonasshesawtheresults,shegotanexcitinglookinherface.答案：Assoonasshesawtheresults,shegotanexcitinglookinherface.excitedII.修改下面學(xué)生高考書面表達(dá)中的六處錯誤(2019?天津高考)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，英國友好校將派教師來你校參加為期一周的暑期交流活動。活動期間，英方教師Chris將做一個有關(guān)西方藝術(shù)的講座。現(xiàn)就講座內(nèi)容征求你校學(xué)生的意見。請根據(jù)以下提示給Chris寫一封電子郵件：(1)你喜歡的講座話題(從音樂、美術(shù)、舞蹈中任選其一)；(2)選擇該話題的原因及關(guān)于該話題你感興趣的內(nèi)容；(3)希望從中有何收獲。DearChris,I'mLiJin,astudentatChenguangHighSchool.MyclassmatesandIareoverjoyedtohearbecauseyou'llstayinourschoolforoneweekinthissummervacation,duringthattimeyou'llgiveusapresentationaboutartinwesterncountries.Nowthatyou'reaskingouropinionaboutwhatwewanttolistentomost,Ifeelmuchhonoredtotakethechancetomakemyvoicehear.Personally,I'dwanttolearnaboutwesternpainting.Severalreasonmayaccountformypreference.Foronething,I'minterestedtolearnhowwesternpaintinghasdevelopedintowhatitistodaythroughhistory,andthemostinfluentialartistsineachperiodofitsdevelopment.Additional,I'mcrazytolearnhowtoappreciatewesternpaintings,anditcan'tbebetterifyoucantellussometricksabouthowtopaint.Thankyouforyourtime.Yours,LiJin答案：DearChris,I'mLiJin?astudentatChenguangIlighSchool.MyclassmritesandIarcOverjoyedtohearbecauseyou'llstaythfitinourschoolforoneweek"in-thissummervacation，dur-ingthatlimeyou'llgiveusapresenlationaboutartinwhichwesterncountries.Nowthatyou'reaskingouropinionaboutwhalwcwanitolisteniomost.Ifeelmuchhonoredtotakethechancetomakemyvoicehear.?heardPersonally,Idwanttolearnaboutwesternpainting,SeveralreFisorimayticcounlformypreference,ForoneS'reasonsthingiI'minterestedtolearnhowwesternpaintinghasdevelopedintowhatitistodaythroughhistory*andthemostinflucnti:ilartistsineachperiodofitsdevelopment,Additional.】mcrazytolearnhowtofippreciatewest-⑥Additionallyernpaintings,anditcantbebetterifyoucantellussometricksabouthowtopaint.Thankyouforyourtime.Yourp■LiJin，知識梳理）第2部分高分亮點塑造一 吸引眼球的亮點詞匯要想寫出一篇水平比較高的書面表達(dá)，高級詞匯的使用必不可少，它會大大提升文章的檔次，從而幫助考生獲得高分。要做到準(zhǔn)確使用高級詞匯，應(yīng)該注意以下幾個方面：——（一）使用亮點詞匯的四種方法 ——.標(biāo)新立異“語”眾不同在寫作時，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍﹦e人可能想不到的詞匯或表達(dá)，會體現(xiàn)出自己的高水平。①Ourteam,besidesregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.—Ourteam,apart/asidefromregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.②Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationceremony,itwasverypopular.—Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationceremony,itwaswell-received..多樣表達(dá)避免重復(fù)在寫作時應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的單詞或短語，要盡量用貼切多樣的詞語來展示自己的水平。用詞不同、表達(dá)方式迥異，也是高級用法。③Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.—Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.④We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.—We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingandwe'vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe..單詞短語短語優(yōu)先在單詞和短語表示同一個意思時，優(yōu)先使用短語。恰當(dāng)使用短語，一方面能使文章更加生動，另一方面也能展示出學(xué)生扎實的語言功底。⑤ThereisnodoubtthatyoushouldknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.—ThereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.⑥Firstly,thefinalexamofthistermiscomingsoIambusypreparingforit.—Tobeginwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.⑦Ihearthatheisill,andIdecidetovisithimthisSunday.—Ihearthatheisill,andIdecidetopayavisittohimthisSunday.4.用高級詞匯取代簡單詞匯為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，顯示出自己的寫作水平，應(yīng)盡量避免反復(fù)使用低年級學(xué)過的簡單詞匯，盡量用高中階段學(xué)到的詞匯來代替。⑧IshouldsaysorryforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.—IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.⑨Solongasweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergiveup,wearesuretoachievesuccess.—Solongasweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergiveup,weareboundtoachievesuccess.1限時檢測）（限時:5分鐘）用高級詞匯完成句子Ofthetwo,Ithinkthelatterisbetter.—Ofthetwo,thelatter.Quiteafewthingscausedthetrafficproblem.—Quiteafewthingsthetrafficproblem.Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.—Wecanthisprobleminmanyways.答案：①winsmy