2022年六級考試點評（1）2022年六級考試答案

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四六級考試網權威發(fā)布2022年六級考試作文范文點評（1），更多2022年六級考試作文范文點評（1）相關信息請訪問大學英語四六級考試網。在大學英語六級考試中，寫作片面是不是會另好多同學頭疼。不知如何下筆，寫出來之后也不知道自己寫的怎么樣。為了讓同學有更加明顯地寫作思路，下面為為大家距離點評作文，夢想能扶助到同學們。MyopiniononcertificatecrazeThegrowingtendencyamongcollegestudentstogetallkindsofcertificateshasnowevolvedintoacraze.Justrandomlyaskastudentwhatheorsheisbusilyengagedindoing,quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthatheorsheispreparingforacertificateofsomekind.So,why’sthecraze?Thereasonbehindthisphenomenoniscommon—theenormouspressureoffindingajob.Facedwithaharshjobmarket,moststudentshavenochoicebuttoseekmorecertificatestoparlaytheirqualifications.Anotherfactoristhatdiplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavilyintermsofsignifyingone’sability.Forthesakeofincreasingtheiroddsoflandingabetterjob,thestudentsarecompelledtorunfromoneexamtoanother.ThoughIhaveanopenmindtowardthecrazeoncertificates,Isuggestthatstudentsshouldbemorerationalwhenitcomestocertificates,sincetheydonotnecessarilytelltheirability.Instead,theyshouldbemoreinvolvedinlearningandcapabilityboosting,thus,opportunitieswouldcomequitenaturally.文章點評：這是一篇“中等偏上”的學生作文。本文先對學生的考證熱舉行簡介，引出全篇;接著分析這一現(xiàn)象背后的理由;整體看思路明顯，規(guī)律嚴密，行文流暢，句式多變，用語較為地道。本篇亮點表達：Thegrowingtendency…h(huán)asnowevolvedinto…bebusilyengagedindoingThereasonbehind…h(huán)arshjobmarkethavenochoicebutto…parlaytheirqualificationssth.weighsheavilyintermsof…increasingone’soddsof…beinvolvedindoing…becompelledtodo…h(huán)aveanopenmindtoward…capabilityboosting本文有待提高之處：1.文章布局上，能看得出該同學試圖采用探討文的“三段式”(提出問題、分析問題、解決問題)。規(guī)律嚴謹，論證嚴密;句式表達生動，用語較為地道。2.微觀語言點方面，有個主謂一致的方面的錯誤(diplomaandcertificatesstillweighsheavily);有些語句稍顯啰嗦，比quitepossibly,youwouldgettheanswerthat…大可簡化成you’dmostlikelybetoldthat…更好，意思沒有絲毫減損，表達力反而鞏固大量;另外某些用語多重復，譬如job屢屢展現(xiàn);為了制止此類現(xiàn)象，文中的theenormouspre