書面表達(dá)專項(xiàng)突破日記課件

1.日記文體概述英語(yǔ)日記一般記錄一天發(fā)生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分為記事、議論、描寫、抒情等。寫英語(yǔ)日記要注意下面幾點(diǎn)：

一、格式英語(yǔ)日記由書端和正文組成。書端指寫日記的星期、日期和天氣，頂格寫在左上角，先寫星期，再寫日期，最后寫天氣。(例如：FridayFebruary26th,2016Sunny)

二、時(shí)態(tài)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞多用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，但是要根據(jù)具體情況使用其他時(shí)態(tài)。三、寫正文時(shí)應(yīng)注意的問(wèn)題1.圍繞一個(gè)主題來(lái)展開。2.若無(wú)法用已學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)來(lái)表達(dá)某種意思，可采用“同義轉(zhuǎn)換法”。3.結(jié)尾最好用一句話來(lái)總結(jié)自己的感想或體會(huì)。6.給……一些忠告/建議___________________7.幫助某人做某事___________________8.出發(fā)；動(dòng)身___________________9.發(fā)生___________________10.積極參加……___________________takeanactivepartin…give…someadviceonhelpsb.withsth.setofftakeplace11.散步/休息___________________12.采取有效措施做某事___________________13.乘坐公交車/火車/自行車___________________14.拍照___________________15.在家/在上班___________________beathome/beatworktakeawalk/takearest/breaktakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.bybus/train/bike(takeabus/train/biketo…)takephotos/pictures套用句式今天我在廣州經(jīng)歷了一件難忘的事。2.昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。3.這是我第一次做……2.LastnightIwenttotheKTVwithsomeofmygoodfriends.1.IhadanunforgettableexperienceinGuangzhoutoday.3.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhaddonesth.習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò)，背經(jīng)典范文)WednesdayJuly20,2015FineYesterdayIwenttoQingdaowithmyfamilybythetrain.Thesunshineandfreshairtheremadeuscomfortably.Wewenttotheseaside,wheretheseawasasblueasthesky.Bathinginthesunshineonthebeachwerereallyanenjoyablething.IfortablewasTherewebuymanyinterestingsouvenirs.Iwasplanningtosendthemmyfriends.Weatemanythingthere,suchasfish,prawn(大蝦),beefandsoon.Theywereverydelicious.Atnighttheylivedinahotelnearbywherewascleanandtidybutthepricewasreasonable.Qingdaoissuchabeautifulandinterestingplacethatitiswellworthseeasecondtime.bought∧tothingswewhich/thatandseeing1.去掉train前的the因?yàn)槌俗煌üぞ卟挥枚ü谠~fortably→comfortable作賓補(bǔ)用形容詞。3.were→was動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。4.buy→bought這是一篇日記，講述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。5.在myfriends前加to表示“把某物送給某人”用sendsth.tosb.。課堂練習(xí)假設(shè)你是李華，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴)在公園爬山時(shí)遇到一個(gè)外國(guó)人來(lái)旅游。你和他進(jìn)行了交流。請(qǐng)圍繞這個(gè)事情寫一篇日記。要點(diǎn)如下：1.想跟他談話卻不知所措。2.你向他介紹你的城市。3.他給你一些學(xué)習(xí)的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好。SundayMarch20,2016FineThismorningwhenIwastakingawalkinthepark,Isawaforeignerenjoyingthebeautyofthecity.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhadseenaforeigner.Iwantedtotalkwithhim,butIwassoexcitedandnervousthatIdidn’tknowwhattodoandhowtostartaconversation,thoughIdidwellinEnglishclasses.EagertopractisemyspokenEnglish,Iencouragedmyselfandwenttosayhelloandwelcometohim.Hewasveryfriendlyandwetalkedforabout15minutes.Asanative,Iintroducedsometouristattractionsandtastyfoodtohim.Finally,hegavemesomeadviceonhowtofurtherimprovemyEnglish.Itwasmorethananexperience!SaturdayApril2,2016CloudyThisafternoonItookpartinanorganizedactivitywiththethemeof“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”inthesciencemuseum.Fromtheactivity,Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeople’sharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.Besides,manypeoplehuntwildanimalsfortheirmeatandmoney.Tomakemattersworse,inresponse,thedecreaseisdoingharmtopeople’slife.Soitisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasures

toprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlifereservesandpassing