讀后續(xù)寫：Jobo trees on the hill 講義-高考英語作文備考

廣東省廣州市高三一模英語讀后續(xù)寫題目：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。SandyandJanecametoseethejobotreeonthehilltopagain.Jobosweretheirfavoritefruit,butthetreebelongedtoaladywholivedinthehousebythehill.Theyheardshewasdifficult,butthatsometimesshewouldgivefruitinreturnforanerrand(差使).Thegirlsfinallygatheredtheircouragetoknockonherdoor.Anelderlywomanwithafiercelookanswered,staringdownatthegirls.“Weheard…,"saidSandy,hervoiceshaky,“thatyougivejobosinpaymentforrunninganerrand.”Theladyraisedoneeyebrow,thenwentintothekitchenandtooktwobaskets.Shepushedthemintothegirls’hands.“Gofillthesewithjobos,andcomerightback.”Thegirlsracedupthehilltothetreeandfilledthebasketswiththeripestjobos.Backatthehouse

theladyfilledabagwithriceandhandedittoSandy.“Takethisbagandonebasketofjobostothe

Brownfamily.Andaskthemforthepaymentthelady,"addedwithatightsmile.“Ifyoureturnwithoutthepayment,youwon'tgetthefruit.”Thegirlsstruggledallthewaywiththebagandthebasket.Whentheywerethere,Mrs.Brownansweredthedoor.Insideonthefloorwerethreelittlechildren,eachpaintingsomethingonpapers.Mr.Brownwaslyingsickinbed.Timeswerehard.Thegirlshandedherthefood.“Thisisfromtheladywiththejobotree,"saidSandy.

“Sheaskedforthepayment,too."Janesaidawkwardly.“Thepayment!Thepayment!"Thechildrenrepeated,wavingthepaperintheirhandshappily.SandyandJanelookedateachotherstrangely.Withasmile,Mrs.BrownhandedSandyalargesealed(密封的)envelopesofullthatitwasalmoststartingtobreakopen.Thegirlssaidgoodbyeandleftquickly.“Iwonder,”Sandymurmured,“whetherMrs.Browncanaffordtopayforthatfood.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.今天心情好，我提供了4篇范文。與大家玩一個游戲，互動一下，猜一猜，你覺得下面哪一篇是官方范文另外，官方范文具備什么樣的特點？什么樣的范文才是好范文？！范文1：Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback."DoyouthinkMrs.Brownreallyhadenoughmoneytopayforthefood?"SandyaskedJane,hervoicefullofconcern."Idon'tknow,"Janereplied,herbrowfurrowed."Butatleastthechildrenwerehappywiththepaperandthepaints."Thegirlswalkedinsilenceforawhile,lostintheirthoughts.Whentheywerealmostatthelady'shouse,Sandyspokeup."WhatifMrs.Browncouldn'tpayandwegetpunishedfornotbringingthepayment?"Janeshookherhead."Idon'tthinktheladywouldpunishus.Sheseemedkindenoughtogiveusthejobosinexchangefortheerrand."Whentheyreachedthelady'shouse,theyhesitatedforamomentbeforeknocking.Attheverymoment,theelderlywomanopenedthedoorwiththesamefierceexpression,andthegirlshandedhertheenvelope.Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled."Ah,thepayment,"shesaid,noddingtoherself.Shecountedthepapersandcheckedthemcarefully.Thensheturnedtothegirlsandsaid,"Thankyou,dears.Youdidagoodjob.Here'syourreward."Shehandedthemtwobasketsfilledwithjuicy,ripejobos.SandyandJanelookedateachotherwithdelight."Thankyousomuch,"theysaid,beamingwithhappiness.Astheywalkeddownthehill,munchingonthesweetfruit,theycouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofsatisfaction.TheyhadhelpedMrs.Brownandherfamily,andtheyhadearnedtherewardtheywanted.Itwasagooddayafterall.范文2：Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback."It'sweird.”Janesaid."WhyweretheBrownssohappyaboutthepayment?Theyhadnomoney!”Sandydidn'treply.ShewasstillupsetaboutthesceneofMr.Brownsickinbed."Whydidtheladyaskforitifshewastohelpout?Itdoesn'tmakesense"Janccontinued,frowning.Sandynoddedwithadeep

sigh."Maybeit'snotwhatwethinkitis.ButIagree,something'snotright.Well,Iwishwecouldhaveourpayment."Theywentsilentfortherestofthewayback.Whentheywereinthelady'shouseagain,Janehandedovertheenvelope.

Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled."Ohyes,lovely!"Shewasunfoldingpapersonebyone."Beautiful!”Theladywentquicklyintothekitchenandbegantapingthemtothewall.Thetwogirlspeekedin.Onthepaperswerecolorfuldrawings,obviouslyfromthechildrenoftheBrowns!Thegirlslookedatcachotherandbrokeoutinsmiles.Aftertheladyfinished,shejoinedthetwogirlsagain.“Andhere'syourpayment,shesaid,handingtheotherbasketofjobostothegirls.“Thankyou,"theysaidwithadmiration."Anytime,"saidthelady.“Comeagain,girls.”Asthywalkedhome,SandyandJaneenjoyedtheirtreat.Thejuicethatrandowntheirarmswasassweetandwarmasthefeelingtheyhadinside.范文3：Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback."Itseemstherearealotofpapernotesinit,"saidSandy.Jane,however,thoughtitcouldn’tbethecase.Sheletoutalongsigh.Curiousandanxiousastheywere,theydidn'thavethecouragetoopenitbeforehandwithoutthelady'sapproval.Backtothehouse,theycarefullyhandedtheenvelopetothelady.Shetookitwithexpectationglitteringinhercyes.Thetwogirlsheldtheirbreathandcouldwaitnomore.

Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.OnthepaperswerecolorfulpicturesfromtheBrown'skids!Thegirlslookedateachotherandsmiledinrelief.Thentheladyhandedthemtheotherbasketofjobos."Goodjob,youngladies.Here'syourpayment,”shesaidwithawink.Thegirlstookthebasketingreatdelight,“Thankyou....Couldwecomeagainnextweek?”askedthegirlseagerly.Theladylaughed,“Whynot?”Astheyenjoyedthesweetrewardontheirwayhome,JaneandSandyfeltsogratefulandluckytohaveseenawarmheartthroughacoldface.范文4：Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.

Tappingherchin,Sandymurmured,“Ifit’smoney,that’sagreatdeal!Ifit’snot,whatcoulditbe?”Jane,lostinthought,didn’treplyatonce.Sheplacedherpalmsonenvelope,r