非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用

關(guān)于非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用第一頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四閱卷老師喜歡的句子、同位語結(jié)構(gòu)、with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章簡潔、通順；盡量使用動(dòng)詞短語和詞組、定語從句等復(fù)合句，修辭潤色文章。使用分詞短語(非謂語動(dòng)詞）第二頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用第三頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四1.Seeingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.

2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.

3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.

Correction寫作中非謂語動(dòng)詞常見的錯(cuò)誤Seenclimbingcalling第四頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四1.Whensheheardthenews,sheburstintocrying._________thenews,sheburstintocrying.2.AustraliaislocatedonthewestcoastofthePacific.AustraliaisthelargestcountryinOceania.Australia，__________________thewestcoastofthePacific，isthelargestcountryinOceania.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子Hearinglocatedon第五頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四3.ThoughIadmitwhathehassaid,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.__________________________________________,Istilldoubthedidn’tdohisbest.4.BecauseImissedthebus,Iwenttoschoollate.

__________________________,Iwenttoschoollate.AdmittingwhathehassaidMissingthebus第六頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四5.WhenIwaswalkinginthestreet,Isawhim._____________inthestreet,Isawhim.6.Ifyouworkhard,________________hard,youwillsucceed.WalkingWorking第七頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四7.Althoughhehadfailedmanytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.________________manytimes,hedidn’tloseheart.8.Asshewasscoldedbytheteacher,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead._____________________,thegirlsattherewithoutliftingherhead.HavingfailedScoldedbytheteacher第八頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四例文(1)：Gettingback

whatyouhavelostwouldbeanunforgettableexperience.LastMonday,Ilostmyexpensivecellphone,onwhichmynamewasinscribed(刻).Fortunately,itwasreturned.Thatmorning,Irushedoutofmyhouseandjumpedintoataxi,forIwouldbelateforthefinalexamination.Onarrivingatschool,Iheadedtomyclassroomquickly,notnoticingthatIhadleftmycellphoneonthebackseat.

Enjoytwoessays第九頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Thereisalwayssomeonebehindus,caringaboutus.Oneverydaymorning,walkingoutofthedoorwaytogoto

school,wemaybetoldtopayattentiontothetraffic,nottofightorquarrelwithothers,andmayevenbetoldtochewslowlyattable.Being

achild,wemayfeeltiredofthosewords.whenwecomehomeafterschool,she

hastriedherbesttoprovidewhatshehasforus.Evenifwhatweneedisjust

aglassofwater,shewillalsokeepitinmind.例文(2)第十頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Whennoticinghergreyhairsandthewrinklesaroundhereyes,IrealizeIhavegrownupwhilesheisnolongeryoung.It’stimethatIshoulddosomethingforher,evenonlygivingherbacksomemassageormakingacupofteaforhercanmakeherfeelthatsheseemstobethehappiestwomanintheworld.Doyouknowwhosheis?SheisourMom.第十一頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Funtime!

Pickoutapictureandfinishthetask

第十二頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四playmusicmakehappy

Playingmusic

makesthem

happy.makeasentenceusingnonfiniteverbs第十三頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四___________bythereporterfromCCTV,themansaidhewasveryhappy.(interview)InterviewedFinishthesentenceusingnonfiniteverbs第十四頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四e.g.Havingfinishedmyhomework,Iwentontohelpmyparents.listento/

burstoutlaughingHavinglistenedtothesongcalled“Gangnamstyle”,weburstoutlaughing.Followtheexampleandmakeasentence.第十五頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四3.Moyanstoodthere

andwassurroundedbymanyreporters.

Moyanstoodtheresurroundedbymanyreporters.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子←第十六頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Combinethefollowingsentences1.Assoonastheyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.第十七頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四2.IfIamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.第十八頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish(目的)

Hestudiesharder.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.第十九頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四4.Whenhelefttheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.5.Becauseheisill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.

Whenleavingtheclassroom,hedidn’tsaygoodbyetome.

Beingill,hecan’tattendthemeeting.第二十頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四6.Thepolicemansawthethiefwhowasstealingabike.7.Theboyswhoswamintheriverwereindanger.Thepolicemansawthethiefstealingabike.

Theboysswimmingintheriverwereindanger第二十一頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四8.Becausehehadn’tseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.Nothavingseenthefilmbefore,hewenttothecinema.第二十二頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子1.因?yàn)樵谶@國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。用連詞becauseBecauseshehasnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.第二十三頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四2.這本用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂用定語從句Thebook,

iseasytounderstand.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Thebook,

iseasytounderstand用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,

writteninsimpleEnglish,第二十四頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四3.他們是來自于幾個(gè)國家的游客。用定語從句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十五頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四4.發(fā)現(xiàn)他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。用并列句He

foundhisbestfriendfrustratedand

hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Finding

hisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十六頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四

①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.

Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子第二十七頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章第二十八頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓第二十九頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓第三十頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓第三十一頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化后的文章第三十二頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四要求：1.用2-3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容

2.2-3句話要有連貫性necessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.（2011高考模擬）高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣。Havingatry第三十三頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四翻譯:高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣。Step1：拆分成幾個(gè)簡單句(中文)①高考臨近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)②保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。(havearightattitude)③它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡單句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Havingatry第三十四頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Step3：合并句子

With

NationalCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

to

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:Havingatry第三十五頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Step3：合并句子

WithCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

whichhelpsusto

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.

②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.Havingatry第三十六頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四要求：1.用2-3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容

2.2-3句話要有連貫性（2011高考模擬）Havingatrynecessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.第三十七頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenough

sleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.

Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.第三十八頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四

Passage：

Havingenoughsleep

isnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewayto

improveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.Havingatry第三十九頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四

WithCollegeEntranceExamination

coming,itisimportant

tohavearightattitude

whichhelpsusto

relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.

Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewayto

improveourlearningintheclass.

Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.

Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.第四十頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四二.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔三.巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四.嘗試多

樣化表達(dá)方式一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力①強(qiáng)調(diào)句②With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)③定語從句④名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)⑤各種狀語從句⑥被動(dòng)語態(tài)第四十一頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,paynoattentionto3.stickout，tripover(絆倒),angry…Abeggar第四十二頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四1.一天，一個(gè)乞丐在路邊討錢，但是李先生匆忙趕路上班，沒有注意到那個(gè)乞丐。2.結(jié)果這個(gè)乞丐很生氣，伸出拐杖，差點(diǎn)把李先生絆倒了。3.意識(shí)到他是個(gè)殘疾人，李先生想給他一些錢。4.于是他拿出了一張百元鈔票,突然一陣風(fēng)把鈔票吹到了空中。5.看到被風(fēng)吹到空中的百元鈔票，乞丐迅速跳起來去追那張鈔票，使李先生非常驚訝。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：用五個(gè)句子寫出下列信息點(diǎn)，注意非謂語和復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用。第四十三頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四AbeggarWriting2.MrLihurriedhome,payingnoattentiontoabeggar.1.Thebeggarlayontheground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingoverMrLi,which

madehimveryangry.

Makeanending第四十四頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四

Exchangeanddiscussyourpartner’scomposition,followingthecriteria.Pairwork第四十五頁，共四十九頁，編輯于2023年，星期四Abeggar

Oneday,

hurrying

home,Mr.Lipaidnoattentiontothebeggarwholayontheground,sleeping.Suddenly,thebegga