讀后續(xù)寫：圣誕節(jié)溫情助人的讀后續(xù)寫匯總試題與優(yōu)秀范文-高三英語寫作專項(xiàng)

圣誕節(jié)溫情助人的讀后續(xù)寫匯總試題與優(yōu)秀范文1.

2021.12杭二模擬試題（暫無范文）Rob

wasfifteenyearsoldandstillonhisfather’sfarm.Helovedhisfather.HehadnotknownituntilonedayafewdaysbeforeChristmas,whenhehadoverheardwhathisfatherwassayingtohismother.

“Mary,IhatetocallRobinthemorning.He’sgrowingsofastandheneedshissleep.IfyoucouldseehowhesleepswhenIgointowakehimup!IwishIcouldmanagealone.”

“Well,youcan’tdothe

milking

alone,Adam.”

His

mother’svoicewasbrisk.

“Besides,heisn’tachildanymore.It’stimehetookhisturn.”

“Yes.”

hisfather

saidslowly.

“ButIsuredohatetowakehim.”

Whenheheardthesewords,somethinginhim

woke:hisfather

loved

him!Hehadneverthoughtofitbefore,takingforgrantedthetieoftheirblood.Neitherhisfathernorhismothertalkedaboutlovingtheirchildren-theyhadnotimeforsuchthings.Therewasalwayssomuchtodoonafarm.

Hewished,this

Christmas

hewasfifteen,hehadabetterpresentforhisfather.Asusualhehadgonetotheten-centstoreandboughtatie.IthadseemedniceenoughuntilhelaythinkingthenightbeforeChristmas.Suddenlyathoughtstruckhimlikeasilverdagger.Whyshouldhenotgivehisfatheraspecial

gift,outthereinthe

barn?

Helaughedtohimselfashegazedatthe

stars.Itwaswhathewoulddo,andhemustn’tsleeptoosound.

Hemusthavewokentwentytimes,scratchingamatcheachtimetolookathisoldwatch-midnight,andhalfpastone,andthentwoo’clock.Paragraph1:Ataquartertothreehegotupandputonhisclothes.______________Paragraph2:Backinhisroomhehadonlyoneminutetojumpintobed.___________

2.

假扮圣誕老人送禮物（浙江省寧波市九校2019-2020學(xué)年高一上期期末英語試題）高一第一次讀后續(xù)寫講評(píng)課件：AnunexpectedChristmasgiftMyfamilymovedfromTaiwantoasmalltownincentralGeorgia,wheremydadgotavisaforhisfamilyandajob.IhadjustlearnedEnglish,andfromwhatlittleIcouldgatherfrommyfriends,

SantaClaus

wouldcomedownone’schimneyandputtoysinone’sstockingonChristmasEve!Whatagreatcountry,Ithought.AfterIlookedup“stocking”inmyChinese-Englishdictionary,IknewwhatIhadtodoandalways

expected

thatday.Finally,thebigdaycame.Onthatwonderful

night,aftereveryonewenttobed,Isneakedoutofbed,

tookmylongest,cleanestkneesockandattachedittoanailalreadyonthemantel（壁爐）.Obviously,thepreviousownersofthishousewerenostrangerstothisSantacharacter.Gazingatthesockandimaginingthedelicately-packed

gift

init,Icouldn’thelpgiggling（咯咯笑）.Forthefirsttime,Ifoundithardtofallasleep.Andforthefirsttime,Iwokeupbeforeeveryoneelseintheearlymorning.ThenIheadedstraighttothefireplaceandwasevenreadyforwhattosayafterseeingthegift.However,whathappenednextwastheleastthingIwantedtomention.Onthenailwastheemptyandlonelysock.Iwashitwiththerealityofthe

emptysock

andthebiggest

lie

evertold.Itriedmybesttoholdbackmy

tears

butfailed.Burstingintotears,Iquicklytookdownthesockandstuffeditinthebackofadrawer.EveryDecembersincethen,thetopicof

Christmasmemories

wouldunavoidablycomeup,andIwouldamusemy

friends

withmypoor-little-mestory.Ihadtomakeitasfunnyaspossible,orelseIwouldcryonceagain.Ididn’tknowwhetheranyofmy

audience

evernoticedthesparklingtearshiddeninmyeyes.HowcouldIknowthatSantawasjustlate?Nineyearsago,onChristmasEve,IheardaknockonthedoorwhenIwaswatchingTV.Unwillingly,Idraggedmyfeetandopenedthedoor.Paragraph1：Outsidethedoorstoodanoldmanwithawhitebeardandaredcap,holdingawell-packedbox.

Paragraph2：Throughtear-blurredeyes,Irecognizedthehandwritingonthecard.

參考范文Paragraph1:Outsidethedoorstoodanoldmanwithawhitebeardandaredcap,holdingawell-packedbox.

Wearingaradiantsmile,themanreachedouthishands,passedtheboxtomeandgrinned“Christmas

gift

foryou”.Shockedattheunexpectedguestandgift,Iwasatalosswhattosay.Themomentheblendedintothedarkness,Iuntiedtheribbonwithheartthumpingwildly.InsidetheboxlayateddybearIhadlongedforwithanattachedcard.Onceagain,Icouldn’tcontainmy

tears.Paragraph2:Throughtear-blurredeyes,Irecognizedthehandwritingonthecard.

Itwasa

friend

ofmineandIlaterdiscoveredthatthemanwasherfather.Shewasoneofthe

audience

ofmysadstory.Thecardread:“Sorry,I’mlate.MerryChristmas.”Iwipedawaytears,heldtheboxtightlyandfeltasurgeofwarmth.

Christmasmemories

ofthisyearwouldn’tbeabitterjoke.Instead,itwasamiraclewhichwitnessedahealedheart.SonowIbelieve

Santa

isreal.ThisSantadoesn’tcomedownourchimneys,butlivesinsidegoodandthoughtfulpeoplewhoreallylistentofriends,andthenplandeliberateactsofkindness.3.

一份媽媽給的額外禮物（浙江省2018屆高三4月稽陽聯(lián)考）Amotherisapersonwho,seeingthereareonlyfourpiecesofpieforfivepeople,promptlyannouncessheneverdidcareforpie.—TennevaJordanIknewIwasnotsupposedtobequitesoexcited.Iwastoooldforthat.Atageeleven,theoldestandmymom’s“grownup”

girl,Ihadtokeepmycool.Iwasinmiddleschoolafterall.ButeverychanceIgot,whenIwasalone,Icheckedeach

present

underthetree.Ireadeverytagandfelteverypackage,guessingatthecontentswithin.IhadexaminedeachgiftsooftenthatIcouldtellwhichpresentwenttowhichpersonwithoutevenlookingatthetags.Ithadbeenatoughyearformy

family.Whenevermymomlookedoveratthetreeandscattered(撒)presents,shewouldsighandwarnus,“Therewon’tbeasmuchforChristmasthisyear.Trynottobe

disappointed.”Christmashadtraditionallybeenatimeformyparentstospoilus.Inyearspast,thepresentswouldpileupandspilloutfromunderthetree,takingoverthelivingroom.Ihadheardthephrase“giving

isbetterthanreceiving,”butthoughtthatwhoeverhadsaidthatmusthavebeenoutoftheirmind.Gettingpresentswasthewholepoint!ItwasthereasonIcouldn’tgettosleeponChristmasEve.OnChristmasmorning,we

eagerly

waitedinthehallwayuntilDadtolduseverythingwasready.Werushedintothelivingroomandletthewrappingpaperfly.Wemadeweakattemptstowaitandwatchwhileotherfamilymembers

opened

theirpresents,butasthetimepassedwelostourself-control.“Here’sanotheroneforyou,”saidMomasshe

handed

meapackage.Ilookedatit,confused.Havingspentsomuchtimeexaminingthepresentsbefore

Christmas.Irecognizedthisone.Butithadnotbeenmine.Itwasmymom’s.Anewlabelhadbeenputonit,withmynamewritteninmymother’shandwriting.“Mom,Ican’t…”注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.

續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Iwasstoppedbymymother’seager,joyfullook.

Paragraph2:IhavealwaysrememberedthatChristmasfondly.

參考范文Paragraph1:Iwasstoppedbymymother’seager,joyfullook.“Let’sseewhatitis,honey.Hurryandopenit.”Itwasablowdryer.Thoughthismayseembutasimplegift,tomeitwassomuchmore.Beinganeleven-year-oldgirl,Iwasstunned.Inmyworld,wherereceivinglatelyoutweighedgiving,mymom’sactofselflessnesswasincomprehensible.ItwasahugeactTearsfilledmyeyesandIthoughtindisbeliefabouthowmuchmymommustlovemetogiveupherChristmasso-couldhaveafewmorepresents.Paragraph2:IhavealwaysrememberedthatChristmasfondly:Ithadsuchanimpactonme.AsanadultwithchildreninmylifewhomIadore,Icannowunderstandmymom’sactions.Iseeactually,shewasnot“givingupherChristmas”asIhadthought,butwasfindinganevengreaterjoyinherChristmasbecausegivingtrulyisbetterthanreceiving.Mymom’ssimpleactmeanttheworldtome.WheneverIlookbackonmymom’sgiving,Iwillchoosetogiveinmylife.4.

GiftsforJace（Z20名校聯(lián)盟2022屆高三第二次聯(lián)考）I’llneverforgetthedaythatoneofmy

students

shylyraisedhishandandsaidthathehadneverreceiveda

gift.Myshockedfifth-graderswerediscussingareadingstoryaboutaboywhowasnotgoingtobegettinganythingforhisbirthdaybecausemoneywastightthatyear.Eventhoughthisclasswasverypenduringreadingdiscussions,Tace'shonesty

surprised

evenme.Whatwasevenmoreeye-openingwasthefactthatthissweet,fifth-gradeboyhadgonetenyearsandneverexperiencedthe

joy

andsurpriseofreceivingapresent.Isearchedmymindforareasonthathemightbesayingthis.Didhewantattentionfromhispeers?No,thatwasdefinitelynothisstyle.Washeexaggerating(夸大）？Again,hewasnotthetype.ThenIrememberedhisstory.Hismotherwasoutofthepictureandhelivedalonewithhisdad.Hisfatherhadahardtimeholdingdownajob,andcomingtothinkofit,Ididn'tseehisfatheratregistrationorparent-teacherconferences.Eventhoughontheoutside

Jace

wasabituntidy,healwayscametoschoolwitha

smile

andsincereenthusiasmforlearning.AcoupleofweeksafterJace'scomment,hewasabsentfromschoolduetothefactthathehadmovedaway.ThishappenedtobethedayIwassending

home

theannualnoteabouttheclassroomChristmasgiftexchange.Traditionally,eachboywasto

bring

agiftforaboyinthethree-dollarrangeandthesamewastrueforeachgirl.Aswewerediscussingthespecifics,agirlraisedherhandandsincerelysuggestedthatwedoawaywithourtraditionalpolicy,andeach

buy

agiftforJaceinstead.TheenthusiasmgrewasthestudentsdiscussedthekindsofthingstheyknewJacewouldlike.Wetookaquickvoteandconsistentlyagreedtogoaheadwiththiswonderfulidea.

Paragraph1:DaysbeforeourChristmasvacation,thegiftsbegantopourin.Paragraph2:AsIdrovedownhisroad,Isawalightflashing,signalingwhichhomewashis.參考范文Paragraph1:DaysbeforeourChristmasvacation.thegiftsbegantopourin.

Students

withbrighteyeswouldeagerlytellmehowtheyfoundthe“perfect

gift”.Onestudent

bought

acompleteartset.knowing

Jace

lovedtodraw.Anotherfoundtoyaliens,rememberingapaperJacehadwrittenaboutaliens.IwasamazedbytheirthoughtfulnessandknewIcouldn’tletthemorJacedown.Ifoundmyinformationsheetandcalledthenumberlisted.Therewasnoresponsedespitemycontinuousefforts.OnChristmasEve,Idecidedtotryonelasttime.Amazingly,Jaceansweredthephone!Thenextthingwastodrivetohis

home.Paragraph2:As

Idrove

downhisroad,Isawalightflashing,signalingwhichhome

was

his.

Ittookseveraltripsbackandforthtomycartogetthegiftsinside.Eyesfixedonthepilesofcarefullywrappedgifts,

joy

mingledwithgratitudewaswrittenonhisface.UnforgettablewasJace’sjoyful

smile

thatlituptheskylikeastringoftwinklelights.ThinkingaboutmythoughtfulstudentsandhowexcitedIwastotellthemaboutfindingJace,Ihadasmileofmyown,andwasthankfultobeapartofoneofthemostimportant“l(fā)essons”oftheirlives.5.

不一樣的圣誕老人In1967,whenIwas6yearsold,myfamilymovedtothesmalltownofOanaca,Nevada.Myparentsworkedhardtofeedusfivegirls.Thoughthecommunitywassmall,everyonewelcomedusandwesoonmademanyfriends.OnefamilywegrewtoadmirewastheWadsworths.Thefirsttwoyearswerefilledwithfriendshipandjoy.Butthendisasterstruck:Mrs.Wadsworthdied,leavingherhusbandwitheightchildrenthathadn’tgrownup.Oneyearlater,Mr.Wadsworthalsopassedaway.Theentiretownwasheartbroken.Preparationsweremadetosendthekidstotheirrelatives,buttheWadsworthchildrenhaddifferentplans.Theoldestson,Brent,gatheredallhisbrothersandsistersandheldafamilymeeting.“Ourparentstaughtustoberesponsibleforeachother.Theywouldn’twantustobeseparatedandunabletoseeeachotherfrequentlyfromnowon,”hesaidseriouslyandfirmly.Thechildrenallagreedanddecidedtomakeitontheirown.Withtheirowneffortsandthecommunity’scareandhelp,theWadsworthchildrengrewhealthilyandhappily.Gratefulforthelovefromthecommunityduringtheirhardships,theywerealwaysreadytoserveothersandreturnthefavortheyhadreceived.OnesuchtimewastheChristmasof1972.Typically,onChristmasEveallthechildrenfromthecommunitywouldgatherinthechurchbuildingtoattendtheChristmasparty,thehighlightofwhichwasavisitfromSantaClaus.Ourbishop(主教)heightenedtheexperiencebyleavingthehallfromtimetotimetocheckontheprogressofSantaClaus.Hewassoconvincingthatallofuskidswereclosetoexplodingwithexcitement.Afewmomentslater,SantaClauswouldburstintothehall,shouting“Ho,ho,ho!”Thenhe’dsitinfrontofthestage,takeeachchildonhislaptolistentotheirChristmaswishes,andgiveeachapaperbagfilledwithpeanuts,anorangeandalargecandycane.Itwasaneventweeagerlylookedforwardtoallyearlong.

Para1:ButthisChristmaswouldbedifferent

withthefluspreadingthroughthetown.

Para2:Unexpectedly,onChristmasEve,aknockcameatourfrontdoor.

參考范文ButthisChristmaswouldbedifferentwiththefluspreadingthroughthetown.

ThefluoccurredabouttendaysbeforeChristmas(此句對(duì)應(yīng)different)Unfortunately,allfiveofusgirlswereinfectedwith/beaffectedbythevirus.WithChristmasDaydrawingnear,wejustdidn'tshowanysignofrecovery.SoourparentswarnedusnottoattendtheChristmaspartyincasewewouldspreadtheflutomorepeople(此處描寫flu的影響)Wehadnochoicebuttostayathomefeelingupsetanddepressed.(情感描寫)Wewereawfullyafraidthatwe'dhavetogowithoutSantaClausandthelong-expectedeventthisChristmas.(afraid和第二段的unexpectedly建立了銜接)Unexpectedly,onChristmasEve,aknockcameatourfrontdoor.

lopenedthedoor,onlytofindaSantaClausstandingrightbeforemewithseveralbigpaperbagsinhisarms!“Ho,ho,ho!”Heshoutedmerrilywithshiningeyes.(外貌細(xì)節(jié)描寫)Lookingcloser,wewereshockedtodiscoverthatourpersonalSantawasBrentWadsworth!(情感+情節(jié)交代)Awarmcurrentwelledupourheart,withtearsrollingdownmycheeks.Thankstohisspecialvisit,wehadthemostmemorableChristmasever.

6.

溫情圣誕樹Itwas1939,andtheGreatDepressionhadmadeallourlivesmuchharder.Butwedidn’tknowhowpoorwewereuntilourfathersatmybrotherandmedownonthecouchinourlivingroomtohaveatalk.IwillalwaysrememberthesadlookinFather’seyesashestareddownathishands,rubbingthembackandforth,whilehesearchedforthewordstotellusthatourfamilywasn’tgoingtobecelebratingChristmasthisyear.（主要沖突）Amonthlater,onChristmasEve,Ilayawakeinbedlateintothenight,tryingtotalkmyselfoutofsneakingintoourlivingroomtoseeifSantahadcome.Igatheredmycourage,thentiptoeddownthehallway,hopingIwouldseethebrightsparklinglightsofourChristmastreestandingproudlyinthecornerofourlivingroom,likeitdideveryyear.Instead,Iwasgreetedbymyseventeen-year-oldbrother,Frank,whosleptonourlivingroomcouch.“Hey,littleone,whatareyoudoingup?”hewhispered.Istartedtocry.“There’snoChristmastree.”Therewouldbenopresents,nosinging,noChristmasdinner.Itfeltlikewewerethesaddestfamilyintheworld.Mydisappointmentoverwhelmedme.IlookedforwardtoChristmaseachyear.Itwasn’tonlythepresents.ItwasthatspecialfeelingIgotfromseeingmyfamilyhappy.Wehadn’tbeenhappyinsuchalongtime.OnChristmasmorning,thesunshoneintoourchillybedroom,wakingmeup.“MaybeSantacame!Maybehecame!”Isuddenlyinsisted.Myeyessearchedthelivingroom,buttherewasnoChristmastree.Ibrokeintouncontrollabletears.IrantoFatherintearsandthrewmyarmsaroundhim.“Wearen’tgoingtohaveChristmasthisyear.”“Now,now,now,calmdown.Gooninandseeyourmother.Shewillcomfortyou.”Dadslowlypushedthebedroomdooropen,leadingmeintotheroom.

Para1:Outofthecornerofmyeye,Inoticedsomethingdifferentinthebedroom.Para2:TohavethisChristmas,theyalldidmuchwithoutsayingaword.

參考范文Outofthecornerofmyeye,Inoticedsomethingdifferentinthebedroom.

InthesmallspacewasthebrightestandmostbeautifulChristmastreeIhadeverseen.Ourfamily’sChristmasdecorationsswungfromitsbranchesshininginthemorninglight.GreatexcitementandsurprisewashedovermeIzoomedtothetreeIstoodstaringatit,tearsrollingdownmyface.ItwassoincrediblethatIcouldn'tbelievemyeyesButitsuddenlyoccurredtomethatourfamilycouldn'tafforditinthetoughtime.Everythingdawnedonmewhenmybrothercameovertomeandexplainedwhathadhappened.(突然想到誰做了這一切建立銜接點(diǎn))TohavethisChristmas,theyalldidmuchwithoutsayingaword.

Momhadsoldthreesmallpiecesofjewelryshehadtoalocalshop.Mybrotherhadworkedextrahoursatthegrocerystoreinthelasttwoweeks,andDadhadsoldsomeofhistools.Withallthat,wecouldhavetheChristmastree.Tearsfloweddown,sodidmycontinuingwarmthandgratitude.OurChristmastreelookedthesame,butthisyear,itseemedbrighter.Christmasof1939wasthemostmagicalChristmasthatremindedmeofwhatwasessentialinlaterlife-lovefromafamily7.

圣誕精神LastyearatChristmastime,mywife,threechildrenandIwereonourwayfromParistoNice.Somehoweverythingwentwrong.Ourhotelswere“touristtraps”andourrentedcarbrokedown.OnChristmasEve,whenwecheckedintoadirtyhotelinNice,therewasnoChristmasspiritinourhearts.Itwasrainingandcoldwhenwewentouttoeat.Wefoundasmallrestaurantpoorlydecoratedfortheholiday.Onlyfivetablesintherestaurantweretaken.ThereweretwoGermancouples,twoFrenchfamilies,andanAmericansailor,byhimself.Theywereeatinginstonysilenceexceptthesailor.Hewaswritingaletter,andahalf-smilelightedhisface.Inthecornerapianoplayerwaslistlessly(無精打采地)playingChristmasmusic.AllofuswereinterruptedbyanoldFrenchflowerwomanthroughthefrontdoor.Shehadawornovercoatandheroldshoeswerewet.Carryingherbasketofflowers,shewentfromonetabletoanother.Nooneboughtany.Exhaustedandfrustrated,shesatdownatatable.Thesailorfinishedhismealandgotuptoleave.Puttingonhiscoat,hewalkedovertotheflowerwoman’stable.“MerryChristmas,”hesaid,smilingandpickingoutahandfulofflowers.“Howmucharethey?”“Twofrancs,sir.”Thesailorputatwentyfrancnoteinthewoman’shand.“Idon’thavechange,sir,”shesaid.“I’llgetsomefromthewaiter.”“No,ma’am,”saidthesailor,leaningoverandkissingtheancientcheek.“ThisismyChristmaspresentforyou.”

Para1:Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.Para2:Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.

參考范文Thenthesailorheadedforourtablewiththeflowersinhishand.

Hepickedoutaredflowerandplaceditonourtable“MerryChristmas!"hegreetedusinacheerfulvoice.Beforewecouldsay“Thankyou",hewenttoothertables.Inaninstant,everyoneintheroomwaspresentedwithflowers,includingthewaiterandthepianoplayer.Inthebrightlight,theflowerswereglowinginfullbloom.Thesemagicalflowersmeltedourfrustratedheartsandblewawayalltheunpleasantmoods.Thepianoplayercamealiveandpleasantmusicfilledthewholeroom.

Afestivalatmospheredrownedallofus.Wemerrilydancedtothejoyfulmusic,singing,laughingandwishingeachothergoodluck.Theoldflowerwomanalsojoinedus,unabletoconcealherexcitementandgratitude.ThespiritofChristmascamebacktousagain.Itbroughtallofustogetherinthissmallrestaurantonaforeignland.AllthiswasduetoayoungAmericansailor,who,throughhiskindnessandgenerosity,brightenedourpaths.8.

ChristmasScarfIwasaproudmotherofthreechildren,mylastlittleonebeingdeliveredinthemiddleofthispandemic.ShewasborninAugustandhernameisAida.ShortlyafterhavingAida,mymother-in-lawshowedmesomethingshelearnedfromherfriend'smotherinanartclasssheattendedweekly.Shehadshownmehowtoknitascarf.Sheshowedmestitchesandgavemeherhalfdoneproject.Ispentalotoftimebreastfeedingmysweetlittlegirl,soIhadsomeextratimetodosomethingwithmyhandsthroughouttheday.IenjoyedmakingthescarfsoIpurchasedtonsofyarnsinceitwaswinter.IwantedtomakescarvesformythreechildrenasChristmasgifts.Therewasanewfamilythatmovedindownthestreet.TheonlydaughterofthefamilywasJane,ashygirl,aged14,thesameageofmyoldestsonDavid.It