讀后續(xù)寫：個人成長類 我的雀斑 講義-高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項

年高二下學(xué)期期末教學(xué)質(zhì)量監(jiān)測英語試題第二節(jié)(滿分25分)WhenIwasakidabouttwelveyearsold,Ihadalotoffreckles(雀斑).IhadreachedtheagewhenIhadbeguntoreallylookatmyselfinthemirror,andIwasoverwhelmed.Apparentlymymotherwastoo,becausesometimesshe’dlookatmeandshakeherhead.IhadacousinwhosenamewasJanetteElizabeth.Shelookedexactlylikehernamesoundsbecauseshehadaflawlesspeaches-and-creamcomplexion(膚色).Icouldn’thelpcomparingmyselfwithherandthinkingthatmylifewouldbealotdifferentifIhadbeautifulskintoo.Andthen,inthebackpagesofJanetteElizabeth’smagazine,Ifoundtheanswer:anadvertisementforfreckle-removercream.IknewthatIcouldafforditifIsavedmymoney,andIdid.Theadassuredmethattheproductwouldworkwell.ForthreeweeksIwenttothemailboxeverydaypreciselyatthetimethemailwasdelivered.Iknewthatifsomeoneelseinmyfamilygotthemail,Iwouldneverheartheendofit.Therewasnowaythattheywouldletmeopentheboxinprivate.Threeweekslater,mypackagefinallycame.Iwenttomyroomwithit,satontheedgeofmybed,andopenedit.IwassurethatIwaslookingatamiracle.WhenIgotupthenextmorning,Iappliedthecreamallovermybody.ThenItookmyhoe(鋤頭)andwentwithmybrotherandcousinstohoethefield,whereIgotridofsometigerlilies(虎百合),seeminglyuglywithblackandsmallspots.Thesunwassostrongthatevenmyfacestartedtoburn.Bytheendoftheday,whenIcamebacktothehouse,myfamily,knowingnothingaboutthefreckle-removercream,begantosaythingslike“I’veneverseenyouwiththatmanyfrecklesbefore.”WhenIsawmyselfinthemirror,Ifoundmyfrecklesevendarkerandclearer.Idissolvedintotearsandhidinthebathroom.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.

請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.________________________________________________________________Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor.________________________________________________________________文章大意：當(dāng)我12歲的時候，開始關(guān)注自己的外表，喜歡照鏡子。但我很不自信，媽媽也對我的外貌有點失望。我有一個表姐，她皮膚很好，我會不自覺把自己和她比較。知道了她皮膚好的秘密是除斑霜，我偷偷地買了它，并悄悄涂抹了全身，之后便和家人一起去鋤地。結(jié)果回來之后，他們?nèi)⌒ξ艺f：“”“從來沒有見過我臉上有那么多的斑?！蔽胰滩蛔】蘖似饋?。角色：我外貌不自信Mom對我的外貌有點失望表姐皮膚無暇家人取笑我的斑變多了情節(jié)走向：Para1:媽媽讓我出去吃飯我摔門而走沖到自己的房間把自己關(guān)起來意識到祛斑霜的反作用在床上抽泣Para2:眼淚汪汪地去開門媽媽和Janette站在門口手捧鮮花鮮花上有黑色的圓點我不知所措媽媽將我摟入懷里我意識到花有各自的美雀斑讓我獨一無二的自己語言積累：要去某人做某事2.旋風(fēng)般沖出門3.眼淚像小溪一樣流出來4.重重甩上身后的門5.有反作用5.因后悔而抽泣7.猶豫了一會兒8.紅腫的眼睛9.拖著腳步去開門10.門口站著某人（完全倒裝）11.手里拿著一大束虎皮百合12.美的驚人13.非常驚訝地盯著14.把我摟入某人溫暖的懷里15.各種各樣的16.聞著虎皮百合的香味17.某人突然頓悟了18.一想到/一看到19.似乎過了一個世紀(jì)之后20.把頭埋在枕頭之下句子積累：Ilookedintothemirror,tearsofanxietystreamingdownmycheeks.2.Themomentmomopenedthebathroom’sdoor,Istormedintomyownroomandthrewmyselfintothebedwithhandscoveringmycheekstomakesurethatshedidn’tfindanythingstrange.3.Hesitatingforawhile,Iopenedthedoorwithtearfuleyesandfoundthatitwasmymomwhostoodatthedoor.4.Thesewordslitupmywholeworldfromthenon,Ihaveneverfeltinferiorbecauseofmyfreckles.5.Lettingoutafaintsigh,shesatbesidesmeandstrokedmyheadgentlyandsaidinasofttone.答案：浙江省杭州市2021-2022學(xué)年高二下學(xué)期期末教學(xué)質(zhì)量監(jiān)測英語試題Mymothercalledmetothedinnertable,butIignoredher.WhenshecametothebathroomdooranddemandedthatIcomeoutandhaveameal,Iburstoutofthedoor,tearsstreamingdownmycheeks.Beforeshestoppedme,Istormedintomyroomandslammedthedoorshutbehindme.Lookingintothemirror,Isawagirlwithmoreanddarkerfrecklesonthefaceinsteadofpeaches-and-creamcomplexion.OnlythendidIrealizethatthecreamhadareverseeffectwhenwearingitinthesun.Ithrewmyselfdownonthebedandsobbed.Afterwhatseemedacentury,Iheardagentleknockonmybedroom’sdoor.Hesitatingforamoment,withpuffyeyesandstillwetcheeks,Ishuffledacrosstheroomtoopenthedoor.AtthedoorstoodmymotherandJanettewithabigbunchoftigerlilies,whichwerecoveredwithblackspotsbutamazinglybeautiful.Istaredattheminstunnedsurprise,notknowingwhattosay.Mymotherheld