第14講英語寫作的8個(gè)閃光句型中考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)培優(yōu)全攻略（上海專用）

第14講英語寫作的8個(gè)閃光句型及劭楠講【知識(shí)梳理1】閃光句型之序詞短語和介詞短語haveagreateffecton.?.（對(duì)有很大的影響）例句：抽煙對(duì)我們的健康有很大的影響。Smokinghasagreateffectonourhealtho.???enables+Object（受詞）/makesitpossibleforsb+to+V（使能夠）例句：聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。Listeningtomusicenableustofeelrelaxedo旅行能豐富人們的生活。Travellingenablesourlifetobeenriched0.By+Ving,xxcanxx（通過能夠）例句：通過做運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們能夠始終保持健康。Bytakingexercise,wecanalwaysstayhealthyo通過閱讀，我們可以獲得更多的知識(shí)。Byreading,wecangetmoreknowledge.?.Thanksto/Dueto/Owingto（因?yàn)?，由于）例句：因?yàn)樗墓膭?lì)，我終于實(shí)現(xiàn)我的夢(mèng)想。Thankstohisencouragement,Ifinallyrealizedmydreamo多虧秦老師的幫助，我通過了考試。ThankstoMissQin'shelp,Ipassedtheexaminationo【例題精講】翻譯以下句子.沒有什么比與朋友分享更快樂。(nothingis比較級(jí)than….than.…).沒有什么比上寄宿學(xué)生更能鍛煉人了。.無論何時(shí)何地我們都可以利用微信同其他人聯(lián)系。(...ever).不論結(jié)果是什么，至少你有努力過。.不論它有多便利，我們都應(yīng)該時(shí)刻警惕自己不要使用過度。.為了美麗，很多韓國(guó)女性都去做整容手術(shù)。.為了豐富我的暑假生活，我決定一個(gè)人去旅行。Nothingishappierthantosharewithfriends.Nothingismoreeffectivethantogoaboardingschooltoexercisehimselforherself.Toexercisehimselforherself,nothingismoreeffectivethangoingaboardingschool.（2）短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。MyTeachersAreVolunteersWhenschoolisovereveryday,【答案】［例文］MyTeachersAreVolunteersWhenschoolisovereveryday,ourteacherswillbetrafficsafetyvolunteersatthecrossingnearourschool.Withflagsintheirhands,theyputonredvesttoensurestudents9safety.Althoughsummerishotandwinteriscold,ourteachersarealwaysonduty.Hardworkpaysoff.Overtheyears,studentshaveneverhadatrafficaccident.Ithinktrafficsafetyisacommontopiceveryonetalksabouteveryday.Butthereisstillsomepeoplewhodon'thavestrongsenseoftrafficsafety.Ourteachershavemadeacontributiontoourschoolandincreasedthestudents,awarenessofsafety.【解析】【詳解】1,題干解讀：本題為材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文，介紹你的老師們做交通志愿者的事情。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)人稱應(yīng)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在時(shí)工寫作時(shí)所有要點(diǎn)都應(yīng)包含在內(nèi)，并且在最后要就這件事談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。文章?yīng)做到要點(diǎn)齊全，條理清晰，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫及語法方面的錯(cuò)誤。三、講稿5.近日，教育部正式印發(fā)《義務(wù)教育課程方案》，將勞動(dòng)從原來的綜合實(shí)踐活動(dòng)課程中完全獨(dú)立出來，并發(fā)布《義務(wù)教育勞動(dòng)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（2022年版）》。今秋開學(xué)，勞動(dòng)課將正式成為中小學(xué)的一門獨(dú)立課程，每個(gè)孩子都要學(xué)習(xí)日常生活勞動(dòng)，生產(chǎn)勞動(dòng)及服務(wù)性勞動(dòng)。作為一名熱愛勞動(dòng)的學(xué)生，你被老師邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诒局艿陌鄷?huì)課上來為同學(xué)們做一次講座，請(qǐng)結(jié)合你目前的勞動(dòng)情況，談?wù)剠⑴c勞動(dòng)的動(dòng)機(jī)及好處，并倡議同學(xué)們一起參與勞動(dòng)。請(qǐng)參考下圖提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。Whatdoyoudo:athome:hecommunity:volunteering???Whyyouwork:DeveloplifeskillsMakeothershappy???Howyoufeel:ProudSenseofachievement???注意事項(xiàng)：.發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容須根據(jù)提示自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫；.圖中所給為非限定性內(nèi)容，僅供參考；.詞數(shù)100左右，發(fā)言稿首尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hi,everyone.Recently,theMinistryofEducationhasenlistedlaboreducationasacompulsorycoursefbrschoolstudentsatalllevels.TodayI'dliketosharesomethingwithyouaboutlaboreducation.Thanksforlistening!【答案】例文Hi,everyone.Recently,theMinistryofEducationhasenlistedlaboreducationasacompulsorycourseforschoolstudentsatalllevels.TodayI'dliketosharesomethingwithyouaboutlaboreducation.Inmysparetime,Ioftendovariouskindsoflabortasks.Athome,Iwillhelpmyparentsdosomehousework,suchascooking,washingclothes,doingthedishesandtakingouttherubbish.What'smore,Ioftenvolunteerinmycommunity.Ioftenhelpcleanthecommunityandhelptheoldpeopleinourcommunity.Doinglabortasksisofgreatbeneficialtous.Itnotonlydevelopsourlifeskillsbydoingthesetasksbutalsocanmakeothershappy.ThemostimportantisthatIfeelveryproudofmyselfandhaveasenseofachievementafterdoinglabortasks.Lefsdomorelabortasksfromnowon.Thanksforlistening.【解析】【詳解】.題干解讀：本文主要圍繞“勞動(dòng)”展開并結(jié)合題干表格中的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱為主。第一段已給出；第二段描述自己目前的勞動(dòng)情況；第三段主要講述為什么做這些勞動(dòng)以及勞動(dòng)后的感受；第四段發(fā)出號(hào)召。寫作時(shí)運(yùn)用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。Wheneverandwhereverweare,wecankeepincontact/touchwithothersbywechatwecancommunicatewithothersbywechat.Whatevertheresultis,atleastyouhavedoneyourbest.Howeverconvenientitis,weshouldalwayswarnourselvesnottooveruseit.Tobecomebeautiful/Tohaveaprettyface,manyKoreanwomenhavecosmeticsurgeon.Toenrichmysummerholiday,Idecide/amdeterminedto/makeupmymindtotravelalone.【鞏固練習(xí)】翻譯以下句子.我的建議是我們應(yīng)當(dāng)理性的使用它，不要讓自己成為它的努力。.這個(gè)活動(dòng)不但有趣，也能擴(kuò)充我們的知識(shí)面.3,是時(shí)候讓自己變得獨(dú)立。.是時(shí)候讓這種情況日益惡化.我贊同舉辦這個(gè)活動(dòng)主要有三個(gè)理由。.重要的是這個(gè)善意的謊言鼓舞了他，而不是我們失去了誠(chéng)信。.最吸引我的是節(jié)目的美食環(huán)節(jié)。.第三，多種樹，這不但可以美化城市也可以讓空氣清新。Myadviceisthatweshoulduseinareasonable/properway.Don'tletyourselfbeitsslave.Notonlyisthisactivityamusing,butalsoitcanenlargeourknowledgebase/expandthebreadthofourknowledge.Notonlyisthisactivityfilledwithfun,butalsoitcanbroaden/widenourknowledge.Itishightimethatwemadeourselvesmoreindependent.Itishightimethatwestoppedthissituationfrombadtoworse/fromgettingworse.aminfavorofthisactivityforthreemainreasons:Whatmattersisthatthewhiteliescheershimupnotthatwelosthonesty.Whatattractsmemostinthisprogramisthefinefoodpart.Third,plantmoretrees,whichcannotonlybeautifythecitybutalsocanmakeairfresher.【知識(shí)梳理2】閃光句型之句型與從句.主語+is+the+最高級(jí)+名詞+(that)+Ihaveeverseen(known/heard/had/read)海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen。張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhado.Nothingismoreimportant+than+todosth.沒什么比做某事更重要的事。例句：沒有比保持健康更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantokeepfito沒有什么比環(huán)保更重要的事。Nothingismoreimportantthantoprotectourenvironmento.The+比較級(jí)+S+V?the+比較級(jí)+S+V（愈……愈……）例句：你愈努力，你愈進(jìn)步。Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyoumake。我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問。Themorebooksweread,themorelearnedwebecomeo.Thereasonwhy+句子isthat+句子（的原因是）例句：我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair?！纠}精講】Writing（作文）：（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"WhenIseeanoldpersonfalldowninthestreet,I....以《當(dāng)我看到老人在街上摔倒，我……》為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。Referencewords（Useatleasttwoofthem）:atraditionalvirtue（美德）；infavorof/against;calm;getalongwith;carefor;（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）?學(xué)生范文一：.Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirbehaviors.I'llsaysomeonetotakesomephotosformybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI'mreallyinnocent.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,Filcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.范文修改：Whetherornottohelpanoldpeoplewhenyouseehimfalldowninthestreethasledtoagreatargument.Asateenager,IthinkIwillcareforhimandhelphiminhissituationbecauseitisatraditionalvirtue.Butknowingthatsomewarm-heartedyoungpeoplehavesufferedagreatlossbecauseoftheirmisunderstood（加一個(gè)詞進(jìn)去意思表達(dá)會(huì)更明確）behaviors.（,）I'llsay（ask）someonetotakesomephotosfbrmybehaviorsorasksomeonetoprovethatI'mreallyinnocent（thehelpernotthetrouble-maker）.Whilehelpingothersisabsolutelyworthpraising,protectingourselvesisalsoimportant.Allinall,I'llcarefullyandbravelygivetheoldpersonahand.（7.5+7+2.5=17）整體評(píng)析：內(nèi)容完整，語意連貫。語法功底比較功底比較不錯(cuò)，非謂語的用法、從句的用法都很熟練。詞匯量也不錯(cuò)，個(gè)別詞匯使用不是很得當(dāng)。好詞好句比較多。學(xué)生范文二：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecomethoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Tnaword,Tminfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.范文修改：Althoughitcanoftenbeheardthatanoldpersonfelldownhimselfandinsistedthatitwasinnocentpasser-bywhohelpedhimthatcausedtheaccident,Iwillhelptheoldpeoplewhofalldowninthestreetwithouthesitation.Itisatraditionalvirtueforteenagerstorespecttheoldandweshouldkeepcalmifwebecome(happentobe意思更準(zhǔn)確)thoseinnocentpassers-by.Weshouldalwaysbelievethatthereareonlyafewdishonestpeopleandourwarmheartswillbepaidoff.Inaword,I'minfavorofhelpingtheoldwhentheyfalldowninthestreet.(8+7.5+4=19.5)整體評(píng)析：這是一篇可以為滿分的作為。尤其是第一句很震撼的表達(dá)，讓步狀語從句，賓語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，定語從句，被動(dòng)語態(tài)一并使用到了，另有較高級(jí)的詞匯insist,passer-by,innocent.文采以下子就可以拉到一個(gè)很高的高度。作者也很聰明，referenceword:infavorof這個(gè)不錯(cuò)的短語用上)文章內(nèi)容完整，句意連貫。無語法錯(cuò)誤，除了稍微更改一個(gè)become為happentobe,become其實(shí)也沒錯(cuò)?！眷柟叹毩?xí)】?Writing（作文）:（共20分）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Alittlemorefreshair,please.”?以“多一點(diǎn)新鮮空氣”為題完成不少于60字作文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。Referencewords（Useatleasttwoofthem）:Planttrees,drivecars,walkmore,pollute,haze（霾）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）寫作小Tip：中考議論文寫作羅列觀點(diǎn)時(shí)最好不過三，用邏輯詞連接，觀點(diǎn)層層遞進(jìn)，詳略得當(dāng)；加上語言流暢,詞匯稍作變化，就是言簡(jiǎn)意賅的好文。80100(120)Sample:SincelastDecember,Shanghaihasbeeninseverepollutionwithheavyhaze,?whichhascausedinconveniencesandhealththreattopeople'sliffe.?①?Facingwithsuchseverehaze,?first?(2)?thegovernmentshouldissuesomeeffectivepolicieslike?puttingdown③?airpollutingactivitiesandextendinggreenb61ts④.？Besides,everyonecan?makecontribution?]nourdailylifelikechoosing?greencommuting④?whengoingoutand?notsettingofffireworks?inthecomingSpringFestivaL?What'sthemostimportant,?wemust?befullyconsciousthat?thehazeisanalarmthatnaturegivesusandtryto?figureout(3)?somelong-termsolutions.?LefstakeactionsatonceandIsincerelyhopefreshairwillcomebacksoon.?(115)?99?????精彩亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：第一段用非限定性定從，一句話霧霾天氣帶來的危害，言簡(jiǎn)意賅，且用完成時(shí)時(shí)態(tài)可以更好強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)現(xiàn)在依然有影響。亮點(diǎn)二：first,besides,what9sthemostimportant?清晰的邏輯詞層層遞進(jìn)道出針對(duì)霧霾的解決方案，政府,個(gè)人，和思想意識(shí)上可以采取的行動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)三：putdown?制止，makecontribution?做貢獻(xiàn)，?befullyconsciousthat充分認(rèn)識(shí)到。。。，?figureout等動(dòng)詞短語的穿插使用，使表達(dá)變化豐富，也更具體準(zhǔn)備寫出可以采取的行動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)三亮點(diǎn)四：，extendinggreenbelts增加城市綠化帶，greencommuting綠色出行，notsettingofffireworks等建議也是近來環(huán)保斗士們提倡的做法，顯得新，準(zhǔn)，穩(wěn)。【知識(shí)梳理3】議論文寫作之三要素和基本題型一、議論文三要素論點(diǎn)，論據(jù)和論詞是議論文的三要素,論點(diǎn)是作者對(duì)所論問題所持的見解和主張；論據(jù)是用來證明論點(diǎn)的事實(shí)和道理的根據(jù)；論證就是用論據(jù)來證明論點(diǎn)的方法和過程。一般來說,議論文每段應(yīng)有|主題句(topicsentence來確定論點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)尾往往重申自己的看法、意見或建議。論證有|立論和駁闋兩種,隹者證明自己的論點(diǎn)正確，是立論；反之，證明別人的論點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤，是駁論。.開頭：背景+觀點(diǎn)(2句)背景句:Thereisnodenyingthat....ThereisnodoubtthatItiswidelyacceptedthat...playsanincreasinglyimportantroleinourdailylifeRecently,theproblemof....hasarousedpeople'sconcern.最近，…問題已引起人們的關(guān)注。With?the?development?of?science?and?technology,more?and?more?people?believe?that...隨著科技的發(fā)展，越來越多的人認(rèn)為…觀點(diǎn)句:Inmyopinion,....AsfarasIamconcerned,....Frommypointofviewthat...Frommyperspective,....中間(6句)Firstofall/Tobeginwith/TostartwithBesides/Inaddition/FurthermoreWhat'smore/Lastbutnotleast句型：(1)Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.It?is?necessary?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that...是必要的？??It?is?important/essential?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that??是重要的Itisofgreatimportanceforsb.todosth.It?is?proper?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?...????是適當(dāng)?shù)?It?is?urgent?(for?sb.)?to?do?/?that?是緊急的Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…不用說…e.g.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatearlytobedandearlytoriseisworthy.早睡早起是值得的。so…that…例J：At?that?moment,?I?was?so?upset?that?I?wanted?to?give?up.???當(dāng)時(shí)，我非常傷心，最后都想放棄了。Wearesupposedtodosth.我們應(yīng)該做…替換shouldApersuasiveessaycanalsotaketheformofasalesletter,ajobapplication,oracollegeapplicationessay.Ineachcase,persuadingthereaderiskey.Apersuasiveessaycanalsotaketheformofasalesletter,ajobapplication,oracollegeapplicationessay.Ineachcase,persuadingthereaderiskey.Apersuasiveessaycanalsotaketheformofasalesletter,ajobapplication,oracollegeapplicationessay.Ineachcase,persuadingthereaderiskey.Hereisthegeneralformatofthepersuasiveessay:LIntroductionandthesis:Howyoufeel/whatyouthinkaboutatopic(e.g.,**Tumblrisanexcellentlearningtool.")Bodyparagraphs(twoorthree):Providedetailedexamplestosupportyourthesis(e.g.,TheYUNiversity,PWNtheSAT,etc.)Conclusion:Apersuasiveessaycanalsotaketheformofasalesletter,ajobapplication,oracollegeapplicationessay.Ineachcase,persuadingthereaderiskey.Hereisthegeneralformatofthepersuasiveessay:LIntroductionandthesis:Howyoufeel/whatyouthinkaboutatopic(e.g.,**Tumblrisanexcellentlearningtool.")Bodyparagraphs(twoorthree):Providedetailedexamplestosupportyourthesis(e.g.,TheYUNiversity,PWNtheSAT,etc.)Conclusion:Wrapupyourargument公andcallthereadertoaction(5)被動(dòng)、定語從句3.結(jié)尾：重申觀點(diǎn)+相信Allinall,Tosumup,Generallyspeaking,Wecandrawaconclusionthat...Istrongly/firmlyholdthebeliefthat...我堅(jiān)信Iamlookingforwardtosth.Onlyinthiswaycanwe...(倒裝句)例如：Onlyinthiswaycanwerealizeourdream.只有這樣我們才能實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的夢(mèng)想。強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Itis+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+句子剩余部分MSupportPWNtheSAT,”etc.)【例題精講】例L_94.Writeatleast60wordswiththetopic“HeavyHaze”.(以“茫茫霧霾”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)提示：去年12月上旬,申城籠罩在茫茫的霧霾(wasshroudedinheavyhaze)中，陷于重度污染(severepollution)o人們戴口罩(wearmasks)出行，霧霾天給人們的健康帶來危害，給生活和工作帶來不便(inconvenience)o請(qǐng)你談?wù)勳F霾的成因及可行的解決方法。BeginningHeavyIHazeMainBodyTopicSentence:Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.BeginningHeavyIHazeMainBodyTSI:Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.TS2:Howcanwecurbhazethen?Conclusion...tryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironment...HeavyHazeThewinterin2013impressedpeoplenotforitsextremecoldnessbuttheheavyhazehangingover25provinces.Itcausedgreatdisturbancetoourdailylife.Obviously,hazecomesfrompollution.Manyfactoriesletthesmokeintotheairwithoutanyfilteringprocess.Daybyday,itisnowonderthatsmoke,dirt,anddustaccumulateintheairandfinallyturnintodensehaze.Howcanwecurbhazethen?Levyingheavypenaltyonthoseirresponsiblefactoriesisdefinitelyamust-do.Beforetheairisonceagainpurified,weshouldalsotakesomeactionstoprotectourselvessuchaswearingamaskandreducingexposureoutdoors.Weshouldalltryourbesttocontributetoacleanerenvironmentformutualsurvivalandeasierlife.（J26words）【鞏固練習(xí)】Howtoprotectmyself（怎樣保護(hù)自己）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Howtoprotectmy§el產(chǎn).（以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）提示：自我保護(hù)是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M(jìn)行自我保護(hù)（可結(jié)合生活中的某一個(gè)情景或具體事例，如：面對(duì)災(zāi)難如何自救,如何預(yù)防受騙或侵害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等）。Phrasesforreference（以下短語僅供參考）：ask...forhelpcalmdownindangerprevent...from（注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）寫作提高Sentencestructure:...sothat......so.??that...Itissaidthat.?.（據(jù)說）Itisafactthat...Itis+adj.+（forsb.）+todosth.Thereisnodoubtthat…（毫無疑問）Ifyoudon't...,youwill...Theharder+主語+謂語，thebetter+主語+謂語Whata/an+adj.+n.+itis!How+2可./@&.+主語+謂語！Itisobvious（明顯的）/truethatbut.??Oneofmyfavourite+n（復(fù)數(shù)）.is…Sb.finds/thinksit+adj.+todoBeginning:Asweallknow,thereismuchdangeraroundus.Ifsnecessaryfbrustoknowhowtoprotectourselves.Protectingoneselfisanimportantskillthateveryteenagershouldhave.Ending:Thatistheusefulwaytoprotectyourself.Asyoucansee,tokeepussafe,weshouldlearnhowtoprotectourselves,orwe'llbeindanger.錦堂檢惻一、話題作文.當(dāng)今社會(huì)，很多家庭對(duì)孩子過分溺愛，導(dǎo)致當(dāng)他們面對(duì)問題時(shí)不知該怎么辦。因此對(duì)孩子們來說，學(xué)會(huì)自立相當(dāng)重要。請(qǐng)以“LearntoBeIndependent”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，首先指出這種不良的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，然后給出你的觀點(diǎn)和建議。參考詞￥匚:makedecisions;dependon;lookafter;ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...注意：.請(qǐng)先在答題卡上填寫表中空格；.須全面反映圖表信息，但不能完全照抄；.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和姓名；.詞數(shù)：100左右。LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas"littleemperors^^athome.【答案】例文LearntoBeIndependentNowadays,manychildrenaretreatedas"littleemperors"athome.Parentsshowsomuchlovetotheirchildrenthatwhentheyfaceproblems,theydon'tknowwhattodo.Soit'simportantfbrchildrentolearntobeindependent.Inmyopinion,parentsshouldtrusttheirchildrenandneverdoeverythingfbrthem.It'snecessarytogivechildrenproperadviceandmorechancestomaketheirowndecisions.Asfbrchildren,theyshouldn'tdependontheirparentstoomuch.Ontheonehand,theyshouldlearntodochores.Ithelpstoimprovetheirabilitytolookafterthemselves.Ontheotherhand,theyoughttofacedifficultiesbravelyandtrytosolvethembythemselves.Inaword,theearlierchildrenlearntobeindependent,thebetteritisfortheirfuture.【解析】【詳解】.題干解讀：本文要求以“LearntoBeIndependent”為題，針對(duì)現(xiàn)在父母過度溺愛自己的孩子的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象，發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)，并提出一些建設(shè)性的意見。.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文以第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主來展開。第一段描述社會(huì)現(xiàn)會(huì)象，第二段針對(duì)這種社會(huì)現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)及建議，第三段進(jìn)行總結(jié)。寫作過程中可使用參考詞匯，增加文章亮點(diǎn)。二、材料作文2.許多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力，為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問題，你們班特意開展了一次“LessPressure,BetteMife”為主題的英語演講比賽，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法，與同學(xué)分享。要點(diǎn)：(1)、同學(xué)們中普遍存在的壓力是什么：(2)我的壓力是什么：(3)我是如何緩解壓力的。要求：.詞數(shù)10。左右；.短文必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，行文連貫通順；.短文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。LessPressure,BetterlifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday'sworld.Thafsall.Thankyou!【答案】例文：LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday'sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan'tgetalongwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabout