讀后續(xù)寫：撒謊的小男孩 講義-高三英語寫作專項

2021年3月廣州一模

英語讀后續(xù)寫再研究【原題再現(xiàn)】Ittookplaceinateachersfamily.Oneday,Benwasplayingbasketballinthelivingroomafterschool,whenheaccidentallythrewtheballatavasesittingontheshelf.Thevasedroppedtothefloorandalargepiecebrokeoff.WhatmadeBenmoreupsetwasthatthevasewasnotacommondecorationbutanantique,whichwashandeddownthroughgenerationsfromthe18thcentury.Itwasalsohismother'sfavouritepossession.Tocoverhisterribleaction,theterrifiedboygluedthepiecestogetherhastilyandputthevasebacktoitsplace.Asthemotherherselfdustedthevaseeveryday,shenaturallynoticedthecracks（裂紋）thatevening.Tohersurprise,therepairworkwasactuallyverygood.Atdinnertime,sheaskedherboyifhebrokethevase.Fearingpunishment,thesuddenlyinspiredboysaidthataneighbour'scatjumpedinfromthewindowandhecouldn'tdriveitawaynomatterhowhardhetried.Itracedaroundthelivingroomandfinallyknockedthevaseoffitsshelf.Hismotherwasquiteclearthathersonwaslying,forallthewindowswereclosedbeforesheleftforworkeachmorningandopenedaftershereturned.However,inthefaceofherson'snervouseyesandthesuspiciouslooksoftheotherfamilymembers.Ben'smotherremainedcalm.Sherealizedsheshouldn'tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.Beforegoingtobedztheboyfoundanotefromhismotherinhisroom,askinghimtogotothestudyatonce.Theboythoughthewouldnowbepunishedbut,ashehadalreadylied,hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.Inthestudy,calmlybathedinthelight,hismothersfaceshowednosignofanger.Onseeinghersonpushopenthedoorandcautiouslyenter,shetookachocolateboxoutofadrawerandgavehimone..續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:acat!cat!11cat!11window-openingcat!11【再研究及寫作指導(dǎo)】一.提煉文中主要線索inateacher'sfamily(indicatinguniquewaysofeducatingchildren)notacommondecorationbutanantique(thevaseisvaluable)hismother'sfavouritepossession(thevaseisallthemorevaluable)Fearpunishment(thesignificanceofthevasementionedabovemadehimmorefearfulofpunishment,possiblyseverepunishmerit)providesareason/backgroundfortellingalietellalie-aneighbour'scatbrokethevaseHismotherwasquiteclearHowever,sherealizedsheshouldn'tjustsimplyblameandpunishhersonforlying.Shecameupwithanotheridea.(sotheplotinthecontinuationwritingshouldbedesignedaccordingly‘a(chǎn)notherideashouldalsobepresented)hewasdeterminedtodenyeverythingtotheend,nomatterhowangryhismumbecame.(thisdetailcanbeincludedinthe1stparagraphforcoherence)achocolateboxoutofadrawer(achocolateboxactsasamediabetweenthemotherandherson,asabonusorpunishment)二,續(xù)寫內(nèi)容構(gòu)思Para1:Thegivensentenceimpliesthatmotherisquitesuspiciousofherson'sexplanation.Thefollowingshouldcovertheboy'sastonishmentatbeingsuspected,insistenceofhisliesaswellashisbadattitudeincoherencewiththefirstsentenceinparagraph2.Meanwhilemumshouldthinkofabrilliantideatoguidehersontoconfesshismistake.Finally,somechocolatesshouldbelaidintheson'shandtofitinwith"Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared".Para2:Torturedbyhisconscienceandmovedbywhathismumdid,theboyconfessedhismistakeandlearnedtheimportanceofhonesty.三、參考答案Themothersaid,"Thischocolateisarewardforyourimagination:awindow-openingcat!"Alarmed,hequiveredabit.Herealizedperhapsinallhasteandterrorwhathemadeupdidn'tholdmuchwater."Believeitornot7heyelled,holdinghisheadhigh,andinsistedthathewastellingthetruth.Glancingatthechocolateoutofthecornerofhiseyes,hefelthimselfbeingtorturedbyhisburningdesireforit.Abruptly,hismotherapproachedhimandpressedanother2chocolatesintohissweatyhands."Thesearerewardsforyourpresenceinthestudyandtherestorationrespectively//(87words)Nowwithsomechocolatesinhand,theboy'sbadattitudedisappeared.Hisheartwaspoundingwildlyandnolongercouldheholdout."Mom,ThecatwaswrongedandIlied...hisvoicewaschoked.InaserioustoneMumstated"Icertainlyknowthetruth.ButIwaswaitingforyoutospititoutyourself."Benfeltaheavyloa