2023年高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練-文章續(xù)寫(xiě)-廣州三模

高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練

5月27日廣州三模文章續(xù)寫(xiě)

Peopleusetheproverb“seeingisbelieving”to

describesituationswhereit'shardtobelieve

somethingispossibleifyouhaven'tseenithappen.I

amheretodaytotellyouthattheproverbistrueand

tosharewithyouhowagirlandhergrandmother

madeapositivetransformationinacommunity.總

人物：agirlandhergrandmother

情節(jié):apositivetransformationinacommunity

中心：seeingisbelieving首尾呼應(yīng)

ItwasayearagowhenIwasstudyinglifecyclesin

myscienceclass.Iwroteapaperaboutthelifecycle

ofthemonarchbutterfly（帝王蝶）andreceiveda

perfectscore.Iwassothrilled;Icalledmy

grandmotherNanaandtoldhertheexcitingnews.My

talkrecalledmemoriesfromNana'schildhood."I

rememberwhenIwasagirl,"shesaid,“thoseorange

andblackbutterflieswereacommonsight.Comelate

summer,therewouldsuddenlybehundredsofthem,

andbeforelongthereweresomanyitfeltlikeyou

werestandinginanorangecloud/5

“Itsoundslikeyouwitnessedamigration（遷徙）,

butwhathappenedtothem?551asked.uTobehonest,

Pveneverknown/5Nanaadmitted."Buttheredo

seemtobefewermonarchsaroundthe

neighborhood.NanaandIdecidedtoinvestigate.

Thatweekend,wemetatthepubliclibrary.Our

researchproducedplentyofinformation:some

fascinatingandsomeconcerning.Apparently,the

numberofmonarchshasbeenindeclineforthelast

severaldecades.Housingdevelopmentshave

destroyedmuchoftheirhabitat（棲息地）.Some

informationwashopeful,though,likehow

conservationistsareworkingtosavethem.

Thebestwasthis-itdoesn'ttakelotsofmoneyor

equipmenttodoso.Ittakesonlyalittlebitofland,

someseeds,anddedicatedpeopletocreatewhafs

calledaMonarchWaystation（驛站）.

“WhatifwesetupourownMonarchWaystation?55

Isuggested."We'llneedpeopletohelp/5Nana

respondedimmediatelyanddidn'twastetimetoget

started.

Thenextday,Nanapresentedtheideatoher

gardenclubandItalkedtomyfriends.

Toourdelight,theyallagreedtomakededicated

worktowelcomethemonarchsback.贊同

Someneighborsofferedasmallsectionoftheir

gardensforspecialplantsandflowers,whilemy

friendsandIhostedanexhibitiononbutterfliesand

ournaturalenvironmentintheschoollibrarytoraise

students9awareness.兩方+動(dòng)作+目的二分工

Tooursurprise,thelocalnewspaperevenwrotean

articleonourdeedsandencouragedeveryoneto

participate.擴(kuò)大影響

Asspringturnedintosummer,ourcommunitywas

gorgeousandfragrant,withbutterfliesvisitingour

waystationhereandthere.結(jié)果

NanaandIcreatedablogandfrequentlyupdated

aboutthecommunity^efforts.

Butterflyenthusiastsfromacrossthecountry

contactedusandsharedtheirobservation

experience.志同道合的人一貢獻(xiàn)力量、建議經(jīng)驗(yàn)

ThenithappenedonedayIwouldrememberfor

alifetime.過(guò)渡句一重要的事情發(fā)生

Afeworangewingssoonbecamehundredsof

soaringbutterflies.高潮最終成果回報(bào)

Asmonarchssailedaboveandaroundus,Nanacried

tearsofhappinessandgavemeabighug.心、理（夕卜）

Whataspectacularexperience!心理（內(nèi)）

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