高中英語作文讀后續(xù)寫題型的寫作兵法三招轉(zhuǎn)折,語言,詞庫

高中英語新高考英作文：讀后寫題型的寫作兵法三招：轉(zhuǎn)語詞目前英語卷的題型的改革力度是夠大的說來就來。這不，各種證據(jù)證明，未來作文會(huì)變成文章續(xù)寫，即：給一篇350詞右的記敘文給你，結(jié)尾沒有，讓考生自由發(fā)揮。限制需要用上文章里給定的五個(gè)左右的詞語前浙江已經(jīng)明確在考試說明中說了面高考就要采用這種形式三）這種改革給考生一種恐慌呢？因?yàn)閺奈磳戇^這樣的文章續(xù)聽起來好高大上。但是，我看來，這種作文最好發(fā)揮。我給出的技巧是：內(nèi)容上要注意兩個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折；語言上要注意倒裝和非謂語動(dòng)詞；另外，我給考生們準(zhǔn)備了萬能的九個(gè)小詞庫。一、何為內(nèi)容上的兩個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折寫記敘文，英漢是同理的。故事要有曲折即而考作文150作只能讓你寫頂多兩個(gè)曲折。曲折分：情節(jié)曲折和心理變化的曲折。英語作文畢竟和語文作文有差別，我們的曲折不要一味追求離奇，而是講究邏輯的連貫。二、語言的運(yùn)用記敘文是動(dòng)作和語言的干活，不需要你寫復(fù)雜句是體的需要。常用的是：非謂語動(dòng)詞和倒裝句。為什么呢？因?yàn)橹挥羞@兩種語法結(jié)構(gòu)句子才能表達(dá)動(dòng)作的多樣性。三、關(guān)于九個(gè)小詞庫我認(rèn)為記敘文的心情描寫是伴隨著動(dòng)作一起的有什么樣的心情就有什么樣的動(dòng)作者平時(shí)有摘抄各種文學(xué)作品的佳句和詞塊的習(xí)慣選一小部分略了伴隨心情的手、臉等詞庫進(jìn)粗線條的概括雖然不多，但我認(rèn)為也足夠應(yīng)付高考了。我將它們分為九大類：一、如何表達(dá)決心和注意力的集中：二、如何表達(dá)同情和關(guān)心三、如何表達(dá)輕松四、如何表達(dá)生氣、不耐煩等不愉快的心情五、如何表達(dá)膽小、害怕六、如何表達(dá)害怕、害羞和尷尬七、如何表達(dá)悲傷

八、如何表達(dá)疲勞九、如何表達(dá)疼痛四、實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練（這道題是浙江考試說明上的例子，但沒有給答案）步驟一：第一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折：Theyoungman;suitcasesinthebackseat;loudnoisealarm;bank;robbery;shouts;people;thethief

報(bào)警：群眾攔阻；警察趕到心情：害怕；困惑；疼痛第二個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折：真相：一箱書；趕往學(xué)校報(bào)到心情：生氣；輕松；關(guān)心步驟二：Henotstopdashedtocrowd.HewasstruckwithHisheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainsthisribs.However,hearingtheshouts,severalstrongyoungfronttheblockedandarrestedhim.Now,nerveinAuthur’sbodywarnedhimnottogoanyfurther.doubtthatguythebankthief.”Authur,pointingthemanbehind.[用謂語動(dòng)angerhadreturnedlikealumpatthebackhisthroat.Luckily,justthenupcamethe倒句.Authurbegantocalmdown,hisbreathinggrowing用謂語動(dòng)詞Hecouldfeelthebloodsurginghisreleasingtension.thesuitcasesopened,manybooksinsight.TheyounggaveAuthurlookconcern,sayingreallyhopeyouarehurt.Maybewecanbeofsmiled.(劃部分都是來自九小詞庫）五、九小詞庫【以下均摘自文學(xué)作品，部分詞匯需要你查詞典理解】一、如何表達(dá)決心和注意力的集中：詞語：NounsThoughts,concentration,determinationVerbsFelt,tried,resolved,determinedHeard,remembered詞塊：*inthought*Lostinherownthoughts*Trieddesperatelytoremember*Heardwhatbeingsaidaroundher*Nothingwasgoingstopnow*Feltaballofdeterminationtighteninghisstomach佳句：Shetrieddesperatelytorememberwherehimbefore.Shewasdeepinthoughtandheardofwhatwasbeingsaidaroundher.Heshudderedtensed,asaballdeterminationtightenedhisstomach.

二、如何表達(dá)同情和關(guān)心詞語：NounsFace,mouth,smile,eyebrowsConcern,sympathy,comfort,warmthAdjectivesSoft,warm,sympathetic,comfortingVerbsGave,flashedDrew,turned詞塊：*Faceturnedsoftsympathetic*heralookofconcern*together*turnedatcorners*Flashedacomfortingsmile佳句：Hisfaceturnedsoftandsympatheticandhisvoicetoamurmur.Shedrewhertogetherturnedherlookconcern.三、如何表達(dá)輕松詞語：NounsHeart,pulse,bloodChest,head,scalp,sweatAdjectivesCalm,gratefulVerbsEased,slowed,calmed,releasedached詞塊：*Poundinginchest*Breathing*Rapidbeatofherheartbecamecalmer*Sweatdriedher*surgedher*Releasedthetensionin*Gratefulfornarrow佳句：Shetocalmdownherheartstartedslow,thepanichadleftacheinherandaringinginherSlowly,thepoundingeasedinchestanddriedonShecouldfeelthebloodsurgingroundandreleasingthetension.Herbreathinggrewslower,asanewcalmsettledher.四、如何表達(dá)生氣、不耐煩等不愉快的心情詞語：NounsHeart,pulse,breath,throatAnger,rage,temper,wrath,disgust,contempt,AdjectivesCross,ragingJealous,envious,resentfulIrritating,frustratingBitter,vicious,poisonous

Breathless,sweatingVerbsSwept,pouredPounded,exploded,eruptedShook,trembled,writhedRaced,hammeredClenched,gripped詞塊：*Redmist*Spittingbundleofrage*Viciousflashoftemper*Hardlumpatofthroat*Lefthimbreathless*hisheartrace*hishead*Sweptthroughhimlikeatidalwave*Burningwith*explodedlikevolcano*Pouredherlikeacid*Surroundedlikeafoulstench*Poisonedairaroundhim佳句：Hewassweatingandburningwithrage.Shehisfacethroughnarrowedeyesandafogofrage.Herreplyfuelledangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano.Theangerhadreturnedlikelumpatthebackofthroat.Hisfuryknewnolimitsoneviciousoftemperafteranother.Herragethroughlikeatidalsurroundingafoulstench.五、如何表達(dá)膽小、害怕詞語：NounsFear,dread,panic,terror,horror,turmoilThoughts,instinctHeart,chest,pulse,bloodHead,brain,temples,foreheadBreath,throat,windpipe,cheeks,tongue,bileStomach,gut,crampsSkin,hair,shivers,tingle,prickleAdjectivessick,nervous,uneasyDry,tight,thick,heavyLong,deep,short,shallowUnsteady,shuddering,raspingQuick,painfulCold,tinglingHot,VerbsFelt,thought,urged,warned,paralysed

Rose,grew,swept,surged,seizedBubbled,gripped,clutched,choked,strangledBreathed,blew,hissed,sucked,gulped,gasped,tastedBeat,leapt,raced,banged,throbbed,pounded,hammered,quickenedCrept,crawled,prickled,scuttledRan,tore,pumped,drenchedDropped,fluttered,squeezed,tightened,gripped,stabbed詞塊：*Sickwithfear*Throatdryandtight*Tonguefeltthickinhismouth*Fearwaslikeabitterbileatofhisthroat*Coldsweat*Prickleoffeartheofhisspine*Likeelectricshock*Likealeadballinstomach*paralysedbyfear*Dreadsweptthroughhimliketidalwave*Fearsettledonhimadark*Struckwithterror*Terrorsurgedthroughher*Fearseizedhiminjaws*Thoughtofconsequencesurgedhimon*Instinctsscreamedathimto...*Everyinhishimnotto...*Couldtastefearinthebackhisthroat*Gulpedair*Letoutagasp*outhercheekstostopherselfhowling*Tooklong,shudderingbreaths*Panichischest*Panicbubbledinherthroat*Fearhimwithitshands*Snakedroundhis*Heartpounded*Pulseraced*a*Bangedagainsthisribs*Heartabandonedhischestpoundinhisthroat*Squeezedherheartavice*poundedinhertemples*Drenchedinsweat*Coldsweathisforehead*Skincrawled

*Hairsprickledonofhisneck*Shiversherspinerackedherbody*Likeahundredspidersscuttlingdownherback*Stomachdropped*Likeamothflutteringinside*Doubledoverwith*withanxiety*Likeavolcanoeruptinginside佳句：Everynerveinhiswarnedhimnotgoanyfurther.Allhisinstinctsscreamedathimtoslipawaybeforehespotted.Hewassickwithfear,thethoughtoftheconsequenceshimon.Herthroatwasdry,hertonguethickandheavyinhermouth.Fearhimwithmurderoushands.grippedhisthroatandstrangledhisbreathintoshort,shallowShewasstruckwithterror.Herheartwasbeatingpainfullyfastandbangingagainstribs.Herheartabeat,squeezedlikevicetheshock.Asthebloodpoundedhertemples,brainquickenedandallsenseswerealert.Blowinghercheeks,shedrewlong,shudderingbreathandtriedthesenseofimpendingdoom.Hefeltuneasy.Thehairsonthebackofhisneckprickledwithdreadandhewasdrenchedinsweat.Fearsettledonlikedarkfog,bringingachillcreptoverherthatamountofheatcoulddriveaway.Thefearwaslikeelectricshock,pumpingshiveringtearingthroughhishishairstandonend.Hedoubledoverwithcramps.Itwasasaleadhadbeendroppedinstomachandwasblockinghisgut.Herstomachwasgrippedwithanxiety,likevolcanoeruptinginsideSomethingmakingfeelveryuneasy.wasatandflutteringifsheswallowedabutterfly.六、如何表達(dá)害怕、害羞和尷尬詞語：NounsMind,senses,nerves,confusion,embarrassmentBody,heart,breath,throat,tongue,Hands,palms,AdjectivesThick,fuzzyTense,sharp,Sweaty,breathlessVerbsShook,Pounded,flutteredGulped,swallowedShrunk,shrivelled詞塊：

*Tonguewasthickandfuzzy*Throatdry*Likeanervousrabbitcaughtintheheadlights*Blizzardnervesconfusion*Heartpounded*Heartfluttered*theirbreath*withbreath*likeanervousrabbit*Butterfliesflutteredherstomach*Bodytenseandhersensesalert*Feltifwatching*Insidesshrivelledwithembarrassment*Misthismind佳句：Herhandsshaking.Butterfliesflutteredherheartstomach.Amistdescendedonhermind.Shefeltasshewalkinginblizzardofnervesandconfusion.Shefelthertensehersensessharpen,asshewatchedbreath.Hetriedspeak,buthiswasthickandfuzzypastedtoroofofhismouth.Hefeltasifthewholeworldwatchinghim,hisinsidesshrivelledwithembarrassment.七、如何表達(dá)悲傷詞語：NounsSadness,misery,despair,loneliness,regretHeart,throat,lump,sobsAdjectivesCold,hollowPainful,horribleVerbsFilled,welled,choked,broke詞塊：*Silent,shudderingsobs*Heartwasswollenandbruised*Felthollowandcold*intheofhisthroat*Horriblesenseoflonelinesslikedarkfog*Sadnesseruptedinsidehim*Envelopedlikedarkcloud*Spreadthroughhischestdullache*Wildgriefwasbuildinginsideher*Despairover*Insidescurledandshrivelled*Hopelessnesswashedover*Coldnesssettledinsidehim*Grippinginhisheart

*Sobwelledupinthroat*ofhisgriefwascrushinghiswindpipe*Hisdespairtightenedaroundhischestinavice-likegrip*Allthoughtandreasonhadshutdown佳句：Thepainhisspreadthroughhischestlikeadullache.Ahorribleoflonelinessbledthroughher.Thegrippingpaininherheartwasreflectedherhauntedexpression.Sadnessfilledhischestanderuptedinawailofmisery.Heburiedhisheadinhisandtriedblockoutsadnesseruptinginsidehim.Shefeltrushofanguishsurgeintoherchestthroat,andfloodwithShefeltwildbuildinginsidehertakingoveruntilcouldonlybreakdowninanagonyweeping.八、如何表達(dá)疲勞詞語：NounsSleep,tiredness,exhaustionLegs,head,AdjectivesTired,sleepy,weary,exhaustedHeavy,stiff,corpse-likeDizzy,faint,light-headedVerbsSat,lay,dropped,slumpedDragged,staggered詞塊：*Light-headedwithexhaustion*Legswerelikepieces*Satcorpse-like*swimmingwithtiredness*downirresistibleurgesleep佳句：Hedidn'tthinkcouldgofurther.HislegsfeltlikepiecesofheavyandExhaustionhimlight-headed.Heonthe–draggeddownbyanirresistibleurgetosleep.九、如何表達(dá)疼痛詞語：NounsHead,breath,throat,chestS