讀后續(xù)寫遇險類-92歲獵人在森林里迷路 講義 高考英語專題復(fù)習(xí)

A92-year-oldhuntergettinglostinthewoodsBillMcDonnellwasgoinghunting.Deerseasonhadbegun,butitwascolderthanusual.

Up

untilhislate80s,

Billhadn’tmindedhuntinginsub-zerotemperatures,buthehadslowedinthepast

fewyears.Thesnow-dustedmountainsoftheShenandoahValleywerenoplacefora92-year-old.

Heknewit.Buthehadmadeuphismindtogetoutside.Hiswife,JoannaMcDonnell,

knewwhat

hewasupto.Butthisparticularday,Joannadidn’teventrytotalksenseintoherhusband.Thenextmorning,Billwokeupatfour,grabbedhisgun,anddrovehisJeeptoward

ShenandoahMountain,aplacewherehehadn’thuntedforalongtime.AttheendoftheoldLaurel

Runloggingroad,hehitthetrailonfoot.Itwasabout7:30a.m.

whenthesunpeeked

(微微露出)

throughthetrees.Billhadstrict

instructionsfromJoannatobeoutofthewoodsby2p.m.andhomeby3p.m.

—

plentyoftime

beforesunset,incasehemissedthedeadline,

whichheoftendid.Notlongintothehike,

hecame

uponapathhedidn’tremember.Maybethiswasasecretroute.

Hetookit.Then,

around11a.m.,heemergedintoaclearingalongavalley.Itseemedthathispathupthe

mountainhadmeandered(蜿蜒)

quiteabit.Whenthoughtsofshort-cutscametomind,Billcouldn’t

helphimself.

“I’lljustbeextracareful,”

hereasoned,andbegancuttinghisownpath.Beforelong,

thecanyon

(峽谷)

narrowedtoadeadend.Thenextthingheknewwasthathewaslost.Hepulledouthisphone,onlytofindithaddied.HedugintohispantsfortheGPSdevicehe

alwaysbroughtincaseofemergencyandpushedthe

“on”button.Nothing.Hehadforgottento

chargeit.Hehadn’tbroughtaflashlighteither.Duringthisperiod,hecouldhearthesoundofa

helicopterflyingoverhishead.Heyelledandwaved,butinvain.Hecouldn’tmakehimselfheard.

Para.1:

Itwasabout9:45p.m.andthesoundofthehelicoptergraduallysoftenedinthedistance.

Para.2:

Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

場景設(shè)置：Para.1:It

was

about

9:45

p.m

and

the

sound

of

the

helicopter

gradually

softened

in

the

distance.

場景一：從他多年的捕獵經(jīng)驗來說，直升機夜里不會再來了。一陣涼風(fēng)吹來，他似乎想到了什么。場景二：很幸運的是，他從口袋里找到了火柴，他竭盡全力地找來干小的樹枝，找了一小山洞，點著小樹枝來取暖。場景三：想到老婆的提醒和自己的小聰明，非常后悔，由于白天太累，歲數(shù)太大，很快他就睡著了。Para.2:

Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.場景一:

覺得又餓又渴，他環(huán)顧四周，發(fā)現(xiàn)不遠(yuǎn)處有幾顆果樹，慢慢走過去，摘了一些充饑。場景二：繼續(xù)向前走，他在考慮怎么找到原來的路，突然他發(fā)現(xiàn)前面有一條小溪，沿著小溪往上走，就可以找到出口或者求助。場景三：雪路太滑，走了好長時間，終于到了，但是他并沒有找到回去的路，這時他找了一塊空曠的地方，點燃樹枝，來引起直升機的注意，他很耐心的等待，大概在下午，他被直升機救回。下水作文:It

was

about

9:45

p.m

and

the

sound

of

the

helicopter

gradually

softened

in

the

distance.

Fromhishuntingexperience,heknewthatthehelicopterwouldnevercomebackhereatnight.Agustofchilledwindblewonhisface,whichmadehimrealizethathemustdosomething.Fortunatelyforhim,hefoundaboxofmatcheswhenhereachedintohispocket.Helittheleavesandwiththelighthefoundsomedrybranchesthatwereusedtowarmhimself.Hefoundacleanplace,heldherarmstightlyaroundherbody,andleanedagainstarock.Thinkingofthereminderfromhiswifeandhiswrongdecision,hefeltasenseofregret.Buthequicklyfellasleepduetoexhaustionandhisoldage.Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

Everythinghiddeninthedarkseemedtobesoundasleep.Afterawhile,thesunrosefromtheeast.Thirstyandstarved,helookedaroundandwaspleasedtofindsomefruittreesnearby.Havinghadsomefruit,heproceededtowalkforwardtosearchforthepathleadingtotheroad.Allofasudden,abrookappearedwihtinhissight,leavinghimrelievedbecausehewasabletogotothetopalongit.Soslipperywasthesnowyroadthathewalkedextremelyslowly.Afterwhatseemedlikeacentury,hereachedthetopatlastwherehelitafiretodrawthehelicopter’sattention.Finallyhewasrescuedafterwaitingtilllateintheafternoon.參考范文：Itwasabout9:45p.m.andthesoundofthehelicoptergraduallysoftenedinthedistance.

Bill

guessedtheywouldn’tbebackuntilmorning,sohedecidedtomakealittlesleepingmatfrom

branches.

Hetriedtogotosleepbutcouldn’tfallasleepsoon.Hewasveryregretfulbecause

he’dtaken

toomanyshort-cuts.Joanna,hiswife,wasprobablyterrified.Hewantedtoget

upandpowerthroughthedarkness,butheknewhe’donlyendupinmoretrouble.Thenextmorning,Billhadwokenbeforedawn.

Hestartedtopushhiswaythroughthewoods.

Afterawhile,

Billcametoaspot.

Onlyafewhundredmetersawayfromtherewasthelineof

treeshehadbeenhopingtoreachthenightbefore.Heknewtherescuerscouldn’tbetoofar

away.

Atthesametime,teamsofrescuersweresearchingalongt