英語導學案B2U5作文課

寫信征求建議WriteanemailtoFreddy.Basedonyourdiscussionabouthowtoformyourownband,tellhimyourideasandaskhimforadviceonhowtomakeyourbandsuccessful.Herearesomehelp.DearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.Vmbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknow...Inpairs,readthebeginningoftheletterandFreddyzsreply.Workoutthequestionsthatmaybeasked.Forexample:Isitbesttoplayonekindofmusicordifferentkindstostartwith?Workoutareasonforeachquestion.Preparetowritethefirstdraft.Usethequestionsyouhaveworkedout,andthenfinishtheletterpolitelybythankingFreddyforhishelp.Swapthewritingwithyourpartnerandimproveeachother'swork.Writetheseconddraft.Freddy'sreplyDearLiHua,rmhonoredthatyouwouldaskmeforadvice.Asyouknow,ourbandwasformedinaveryunusualway.However,wehavelearnedalotaboutbeingabandsincethen.First,youwillneedtoagreeonwhatkindofmusicyouwanttowriteandplay.Youhadbetterplayonekindofmusicifyouwanttobecomefamous.Nextyouwillneedtocomeupwithanameforyourband—somethingthatisdifferent.Then,makeaspecialtimeforpractisingandsticktoit.Youwillalsowanttogiveseveralperformancesforfriendsandfamilytogettheirideasonyourmusicalability.Aboveall,justhavefun!Yourssincerely,Freddy寫作指導：根據(jù)討論的內容和結果給Freddy寫一封信，詢問如何組建一個成功的樂隊。體裁屬于實用性寫作(practicalwriting)中的征求建議(askingforadvice)信。話題組建樂隊與單元話題貼近，有趣味性，可以提供較為真實、具體的語言使用情景。審題要素.確定文體：注意書信寫作的形式特點。.主體時態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。.主體人稱：就自己遇到的問題向對方征求建議，多用第一人稱。.內容要點：說明主旨;提出問題；感謝對方。寫作順序:要求針對組建樂隊一事寫一封信征求建議，任務明確，需要將咨詢內容進一步細化。謀篇布局時應注意：首先，提出具體問題之前應簡要說明寫信的目的及咨詢事宜。其次，有針對性地提出問題，能夠獲得有效的建議和更好的解決方案。應注意表述清晰?條理分明，重點突出。此外，本題以咨詢?yōu)橹?，寫作中應注意疑問的多種表達形式，靈活使用疑問詞、情態(tài)動詞等。恰當使用主從復合句，或以陳述句形式表達疑問，使得篇章語言富于變化，行文自然。常用句式：Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Couldyoutellmehowto...?rmnotsure...Iwouldliketoknow...Iwonder...What'syouropiniononthismatter?Doyouhaveanysuggestionsfordoing...?HowcanIgiveabetterperformance?Whatkindofpreparationcanbemade?Isthereanythingelseweshoulddo?Whatdoyouthinkisthebestwayforus?Doyouthinkit'sagoodideato...?Idon'tknowwhatweshoulddotoachievethisgoal.PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.SampleDearFreddy,MynameisLiHua.Fmbeginningabandwithmyfriends.However,wehaveneverbeeninabandbefore.Couldyoupleasegiveussomeadvice?Iwouldliketoknowwhatweshoulddotomakeourbandsuccessful.Thereareseveralbandsinourschool.Howcanwemakeourbandwell-knownquickly?Doyouthinkaspecialnameforthebandwillbehelpful?Besides,Ymnotquitesurewhatwearesupposedtodointhedailypractice.Whichisthebestwaytoimproveourmusicalability?PleasegivemesomeadviceandIwillappreciateitverymuch.Tmlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHuaWritingTaskUsetheinformationandideasyouhavecollectedtowriteaboutthemusicianyouhavechosen.Therearesomemoreinformationonpage74.SampleTheBeatlesTodayIamgoingtotalkaboutmyfavoriteWesternbandtheBeatles.Therewerefourmembersofthisband:theirnameswereJohn,Paul,GeorgeandRingo.ThesongthattheywrotewhichIreallyloveisYesterday.Ithassuchabeautifultuneandalwaysmakesmefeelalittlesad.IgottoknowtheirmusicwhenIsawthemontelevision.Theyseemedsokindandfriendlytotheirfans.Theyhadsuchagoodsenseofhumortoo.TheirsongsseemtotalkaboutthingsthatIfeelstronglyaboutlikegrowingoldorbeinglonely.Theirmusicisalwayssobeautiful.Itmakesmefeelhappyandsadatthesametime.Ithinkthattheyareanexce