BEC高級(jí)寫作實(shí)用技巧以及真題模擬范文

BEC高級(jí)寫作實(shí)用技巧以及真題范文資料僅供參考圖表作文寫作要領(lǐng)（1）注意總-分結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。中心句概括總趨勢?？傇鲩L：典型數(shù)據(jù)/區(qū)間：therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneraltrend;Withinthisgeneraltrend,therearesomefluctuations,forexample…（2）注意分水嶺的描寫,即把整個(gè)圖表的變化趨勢分成兩個(gè)或三個(gè)變化階段來整體描寫。（3）注意語言的多樣化，多用同義詞替代，避免重復(fù)用詞。（4）注意數(shù)據(jù)的內(nèi)部邏輯關(guān)系，確定描寫線索。即確定以某個(gè)數(shù)據(jù)的變化來貫徹全文。圖表作文句型總結(jié)：基本功:敘述表格/圖表(重點(diǎn))(1)組成：consistof..,bemadeupof..,becomposedof..,(2)比例：accountfor%,represent%,make/takeup%..,或者直接說%of….(3)上升(by..to…)，增加，提高：a.普通：increase,grow,rise,expandb.漸漸上升：climb,edgeup,ascend,trendup.c.猛增，激增：jump,surge,soar,proliferate(數(shù)量),leap,shotupd.詞組：achieveanincreasein….by…to…Continueitsupwardstrend;trendupOntherise,ontheincrease.Onconsecutiverise:保持連續(xù)增長n.名詞：increase,rise,growth,expansion,ascendance漸漸增加,slightincrease,rise,growthin..bump-up(突然增加),proliferation(激增),jump,leap,surge,boom(4)減少，下降，減緩a.普通：decrease,fall,drop,reduce,shrink,(shrinkage)b.逐漸變少：slide,dwindle,decline,edgedownc.驟減：collapse,slump,plummet,plunged.經(jīng)濟(jì)衰退，停頓：slump,collapse,stagnate,stagnant,stagnation,sluggish,sluggishness,slack,crisis,recession,slowdown,downturn,e.詞組：falloff,dropoff,godown,continueitsdownwardtrend,trenddown,onthedecline,onthedownturn.(5)保持平穩(wěn)，不變：Remainstable,/steady,/unchangedLeveloffvi上升，或減退至平穩(wěn)水平Subsidevi減退至平穩(wěn)水平standstilln/adj停滯不前(6)起伏波動(dòng)：Riseandfall,fluctuateslightly/dramatically,fluctuatebetween….and…,aminorfluctuation,smallrisesandfalls/fluctuations.(7)形容趨勢程度a.劇烈，顯著，明顯Dramatically,sharply,considerably,rapidly,suddenly,greatly,alarmingly,significantly,enormously,steeply,massively,incredibly,hugely,amazingly,substantially;atanalarmingrate;byawidemargin.b.緩慢/逐漸Gradually,steadily,slightly,gently,marginally,slowly,moderately,inamoderateway,bytheleastamount.(8)表示倍數(shù)：a.(使)增幾倍于：double,triple,quadruple【'kw?drupl】，b.adv.adj幾倍的，幾倍地：fivefold,sixfold,sevenfold….c.ad.幾倍：twice,three/four/fivetimes….e.幾分之幾：2/3：two-thirds,etc.(atafractionof…)(9)比較數(shù)據(jù)as…as…a.three/fourtimesasmany.做主語或定語成分Eg.approx.20%morepeoplepreferredthedietcherryversionandnearlythreetimesasmanypreferredthedietstrawberryversion.b.“A+be+XXtimes+as+adj+as+B”。eg.Thistreeisthreetimesastallasthatone.Eg.Hisfatheristwiceasoldashe.c.“A+be+XXtimes+計(jì)量形容詞比較級(jí)+than+B”eg.TheYangtzeRiverisalmosttwicelongerthanthePearlRiver.=TheYangtzeRiverisalmostthreetimesaslongasPearlRiver.Eg.Thedictionaryisexactlyfivetimesmoreexpensivethanthatone.d..“A+be+倍數(shù)+the+計(jì)量名詞+of+B”eg.Thenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthesizeofthepreviousone.新擴(kuò)建的廣場是未擴(kuò)建時(shí)的四倍大。e.“The+計(jì)量名詞+of+A+be+倍數(shù)+that+of+B”eg.Thesizeofthenewlybroadenedsquareisfourtimesthatofthepreviousone.(10)從不同方面分析數(shù)據(jù);inviewoftheturnover….,Intermsofgrowth,…就營業(yè)額方面來說。。。，就增長方面來說；描述時(shí)間點(diǎn)或時(shí)間段（1）時(shí)期泛指:overtheperiodXXXtoXXX,overtheyearsXXXtoXXX,fromXXtoxx;over/duringthepastXXyears;inthelastXXyears(最近X年)，henextXXyears,duringaXX-year/month/weekperiod,throughout..,allthewaythrough,fortheyear..XXX.(2)時(shí)期特指：duringthesameperiod,overtheperiodinquestion,over/duringtheperiodstudied,fortherestoftheperiodsstudied,inthetwosubsequentperiods,inthefollowingperiod,allthewaythrough,(3)連續(xù)下降/上升的某個(gè)時(shí)期：itisthesecond/third/fourthconsecutivequarter/year/month/weekthatXXXhasfallen(4)時(shí)間點(diǎn):until,bytheyearXXX,since,fromtheyearXXX,uptonow,atagivenmoment,overtheperiodendedonxx/endedinXX(5)年代：duringthe1980s;duringthe70sand80s.,開頭：thisgraph/reportdescribes/outlines/shows/compare…with…/suggests,總趨勢句型(1)Ifwelookatthegrowthin…,wecanseethereisasteadyincreaseinXXfrom..to…/ariseinXXofXXX…(2)fromthegraph,wecanseethereis…./ifwetakingtheXXfirst,wecanseethatthereis…(3)XXwasonconsecutivegrowthonthewholeovertheperiodinquestion(except…)(4)XXshowsarelativelysteady/upward/downwardtrendinthelastXXyears.(5)XXshowsatrajectoryofgrowth/fall….(6)xx,ontheotherhand,showsadifferenttrend.(7)XXXhasbeengrowingconsistentlywithXXinthepastXXyears.(8)XXXwitnessed/sawsomeriseandfall/fluctuationsovertheperiod…(9)duringthesameperiod,XXalsorose,butfluctuatedgreatly.(10)XXdidn’tvarymuchandremainedjustover/belowxxOrbetween..and..(11)XXshowsthesameperformance/trendalthoughatlevel4bnhigherthanimports.5.增長幅度、增長額(1)..,thereisariseinXXofXX/byxx%/from..to…(2)ThefigureshowsariseofXXwithinthewholeperiodandnofluctuationsaretoberemarked.(3)XXrosefrom…to…,sufferingminorfluctuationsallthewaythrough.(4)XXincreasedslightly/rosesteadily.etc,endingtheperiodaroundXXovertheirstartinglevel.6.最大漲/跌幅，最高點(diǎn)，最低點(diǎn)(1)XXXwiththebiggestincrease/decreasecomingbetween…and…,(2)Itwentuptothe(7-yearetc.)peakat….in…./(3)TheXXXpeakedat..in…./reached/hitapeakin…./peakingat…(4)TheXXrosetothehighest,climbedtoaseven-monthhigh,(priceetc.)advancedtoarecord$1000on….,(5)theXXrose/surge/climbtoXXX,thehighestsince….(6)驟升shot-up,surge,rocket,upsurge,uplift,proliferationsoar,boom驟降：slump,plunge,plummet(vi),nose-divevi5.起始點(diǎn)(1)startingoffat…./from,saleswillincreaseto..during…,andremainstableatduring…,onlytodecreaseto…during.(2)DuringXXX,itstartedaroundXXinthefirstquarter…6.典型數(shù)據(jù)/區(qū)間(1)Profitswillshopupdramaticallyto2,000in,fromwhichitwillgoupsteadilyfromyeartoyear…(2)Itwillgodowntothelowestat…in…whereitwillbegintopickup/rebound/(3)From1985to1997,XXXwerebetweenXXandXXX.(4)After…theXXincreased/decreasedsignificantly.(5)thexxxroseupsteadilyuntil….(6)however,therearesomefluctuationstothisgeneral/withinthisgeneraltrend,forexample….7.描寫fluctuations(1)from/startingoffat…,XXXincreasedto..during..andremainstableat..during..,onlytodecreaseto..during…(2)XXXincreased/soaredfromxxtoXXXin…followedbyasharpdropto…in…(3)soaragain,fallbackto,dropbackto…andthenmaintainedthispositionthroughout….(4)itstartedaroundXXinxx,increasedslowlytoXXin..,andthenfelltoXXattheendoftheyear.(5)ItstayedstableataroundXXduringxxxandxxx,thendecreasedtoXXXin…,beforerecoveringat/toXXXattheendof…8.對(duì)比，比例的描寫(1)倍數(shù)關(guān)系描寫（見1）;(2)分?jǐn)?shù)關(guān)系：one/afifthof,8outof10,atafractionof…(3)組成：consistof,bemadeupof…,becomposedof…(4)比例：accountfor..,represent,takeup..,(5)對(duì)比：comparedto,incomparisonwith…,relativeto…,theratiois….Eg.Femaleexecutivesdominateintheagegroupbetween24and39,wheretheratiois42to10.(Thefirstrepresentingthenumberofwomenandlatter,men).Eg.Itdecreaseshalfingroup60to69where10womenholdtoppositionincomparisonto/with21men.Eg.Thegraphsshowsthenumberofcarsper100peopleovertheperiod1980to2020relativetothegrowthoftheworld’spopulation.9.大小的比較(1)差：spread(差價(jià)),margin,split,difference,差額為正/負(fù)：xxxremainedpositive/negative(2)占多數(shù)，a.XXXdominateintheXXgroup/amongst….b.Intheagerangeabove…,XXXarein/sliding/majority.(3)超過:a.XXXexceeded/outstrippedXXXbutnotbythesamemargin,b.XXXexceededXXbyXXpercent,outnumberxxxbyXXX.c.exceedXX-level.WiththeearningsexceedingXXX.(4)比例相等：a.anequalnumberofboth…and…b.XXXtakeanequalproportionin….(5)從小到大描述數(shù)據(jù)：followedbyEg.44%ofoursalesincomecamefromUS,followedbyEurope(26%),andsouthAmerica(19%)(6)排序的描寫：rankedNo.1/2;Thesecond/thirdlargest…;beinthefirst/second/thirdplace.10.表示預(yù)測的句子;belikelyto…/isexpectedto…./issupposedto…/isestimatedto../isprojectedto…/will/willbe11.敘述受訪者態(tài)度(1)XXXreceivedXXpositiveresponsesandXXnegativeresponses..(2)XXpeoplegaveapositiveresponse/commenton..(3)Askedabout….,XXpeoplerespondedpositively/negativelywhereasXXpeoplesaysthnegativeaboutit.(4)XXofxxrespondentscomplainedabout….whileXXthoughitpositively,/thoughtittobesatisfactory12.Distribution(1)xx%,morethanhalfXX,XXoutofXX…(2)therespondentsarealmostequallydividedbetweenXXXandXX(differentstances)(3)XXandxxxtakeasimilarproportioninXXgroup/range13.dataandcompare的中心句(1)Thecompanyemploysalmostanequalnumberofexecutivesofbothsexes.However,thereareremarkabledifferencesdependingontheagerangeconsidered.(2)TheoverallresultofthisinternationalsurveyonplannedITexpenditureforthenextyearshowssignificantdifferencesbetweenEuropeandAisa.(3)ThesituationinXX,however,isquitedifferent.(4)however,theXXvarygreatlyontheXX…IDataandChange此類報(bào)告有兩個(gè)目的，呈現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)，描寫變化趨勢，自己的主觀發(fā)揮較少或者沒有發(fā)揮。不要發(fā)揮圖表里不存在的內(nèi)容。一般會(huì)要求呈現(xiàn)多個(gè)item的變化情況，能夠用小標(biāo)題分段。重點(diǎn)如下：首先把握?qǐng)D表的大趨勢；描述重要變化點(diǎn)，例如suddengrowth,abruptdrop,drasticshrinkage…,proliferationetc.起始點(diǎn)和銜接點(diǎn)的描述【turningpoint】需重點(diǎn)掌握的有：描寫變化的句型，及以上一、二、三。條形圖和線性圖都一般都涉及到這種類型。Samples1.銷售預(yù)測：BarChart,趨勢，最大值，最小值，變化值ReportonSalesForecastfornextyearIntroductionThisreportsetsouttooutlineandcomparethesalesforecastsforfridges,TVs,andcookersofTollerElectricalLtdfornextyear.FindingsTheunitsalesoffridgesis/AREexpectedtostay/remainsteadilyat5,000throughoutthefourquartersofnextyear.ThesalesofTVs,ontheotherhand,willbeonconsecutiverise,startingoffat5,000in【改為during比較好，下同】thefirstquarter,jumpingto15,000duringthesecondandthirdquarter,andendingupwith20,000inthefourthquarter.待商榷Thesalesofcookers,however,is【因呈現(xiàn)的是四個(gè)季度的sales，因此此處應(yīng)用are】likelytofluctuateabitnextyear.Theunitsaleswillreach5000inthefirstquarter,andrisesharply/significantlyto10,000inthesecondandthirdquarter,thendeclineto5,000againinthefourthquarter.ConclusionTheTVisexpectedtobethebestsellerofTollerElectricalLtdnextyear.參考范文；ReportonSalesForecastsforTollerElectricalLtdTheaimofthisreportistocomparethesalesforecastsforthreeproductareasfornextyear.Unitsalesoffridgesarelikelytoremainat5,000duringallfourquartersofnextyear.TVsales,ontheotherhand,willsignificantlyincreaseduringthesecondquarterfrom10,000to15,000.Unitsaleswillremainat15,000duringthethirdquarterandsoaronceagainto20,000duringthefourthquarter.Unitsalesofcookers,however,arelikelytofluctuate,startingoffat5,000,saleswillincreaseto10,000duringthesecondandthirdquarterofnextyear,onlytodecreaseto5,000unitsalesduringthefourthquarter.ItwasconcludedthatTVswillbeTollerElectricalLtd’sstrongestproductareainthefollowingyear.NOTE;注意表示預(yù)測的句型2.產(chǎn)量與價(jià)格變化關(guān)聯(lián)性數(shù)據(jù)重點(diǎn)：changesinproductionandprices.ReportOnWheatProductionandPricesThisreportsummarizesthechangesinproductionandpricesoveraten-yearperiodfrom1990to.Fromthechartwecanseetherewasasteadygrowthinwheatproductionoverthegivenperiod.Startingoffataround0.8milliontonesin1990,theyearlyoutputrosetoalmost1.5milliontonesfiveyearslater,andexceeded2-million-tonnelevelin.Theaveragepriceofwheat,ontheotherhand,fluctuatedabitoverthesameperiod.Fromaround1300pertonein1990,itshotupquicklyin1995,peakingataround3000pertone.Howeveritdroppedbacktoaroundpertonein.Toconclude,itshowsthatthetotaloutputofwheatisnotthesolefactordecidingthetrendofprice.特點(diǎn)：柱狀圖，趨勢明顯，數(shù)據(jù)少。比較簡單。3.客戶投訴與列車準(zhǔn)時(shí)率與可靠性關(guān)聯(lián)數(shù)據(jù)準(zhǔn)時(shí)率、可靠性與顧客投訴。數(shù)據(jù)不多，可考慮逐年描寫。Report;XXtrainoperatorThisreportsummarizesthechangesthattookplaceinreliability,punctualityandthenumberofcomplaintsreceivedduringa12-weekperiod,whichwasdividedfurtherintothreesub-periods.Fromthegraphwecanseeabout97%ofthetimetabledtrainswererunningduringthefirstfourweeks.Thepercentageroseto100%fromthefifthweekonwardsandremainedstablefortherestoftheperiodsstudied.Conversely,thepunctualitypercentagewasdecliningconsecutivelyoverthegivenperiod.From95%attheoutset,itedgeddowninthetwosubsequentperiodsandhitthelowestataround90%inthelastthreeweeks.Thenumberofcomplaintsper100,000passengerjourneysremainedstableat200inthefirstfourweeksandevendroppedslightlyinthefollowingperiod,probablyowingtotheriseofreliability.However,duringthelast4weeks,itwentupagaintoanalltimehighataround225.Toconclude,itisclearthepunctualityhassignificantinfluenceonthenumberofcomplaintsreceived.NOTE;注意描寫區(qū)間的詞Fortherestoftheperiodsstudied/inquestionInthetwosubsequentperiodsInthefollowingperiod.4.乘客收益與準(zhǔn)時(shí)率關(guān)聯(lián)性數(shù)據(jù)典型數(shù)據(jù)：revenuepeak:2nof,on-time驟降：2-3quartersReportonpassengerrevenueandon-timerateoftrainsofCruiselineThisgraphdescribeschangesofthepassengerrevenueandtheon-timepercentageoftrainsofCuiselineovertheperiodto.Fromthegraphwecanseetheon-timepercentageoftrainsremainedrelativelystalebetween85%and90%beforethesecondquarterof.Overthesameperiod,thepassengerrevenuewasonconsecutiveriseonthewholeexceptaslightdropinthelastquarterof.Startingoffatabout280m,itclimbedtoapeakat330millionbythesecondquarterof.However,astheon-timeratenose-divedprecipitatelytoaround70%inthethirdquarterin,therevenuedroppedconsistentlyfrom330mto65m,thelargestdecreaseovertheperiodinquestion.Althoughthepunctualityratereboundedgraduallyto75%later,therevenuestillkeptdecliningandreacheditstwo-yearlowestat65mattheendof.Itisconcludedthatthepunctualityoftrainshasasignificanteffectonthepassengerrevenue.Band4sampleReport:CruselinetraincompanyThegraphshowsthepassengerrevenueandthepercentageoftrainsarrivingontimeduringtheyearsandofCruselinetraincompany.Regardingthepassengerrevenue,duringitstartedaround280millioninthefirstquarter,increasedslowlyto300millioninthe3rdquarterandthenfelltoaround290millionattheendoftheyear.In,therevenueincreasedsteadilyto330duringthe2ndquarterfollowedbyasharpfalltoaround225attheendof.Thepercentageoftrainsarrivingontimestayedstableataround88%duringthe1stand2ndquarterin,thendecreasedto85%inthe3rdquarterbeforerecoveringatround87%attheendof.Tillthe2ndquarterinthepercentagedecreasedsteadilyto85%beforefallingrapidlyto68%andrecoveringto75%attheendof.5.供求關(guān)系-barchartandlinechart關(guān)聯(lián)性數(shù)據(jù)Mainpoint—relationshipofsupplyanddemand橫坐標(biāo)—year豎坐標(biāo)，demand,andstock…ReportOnsupplyanddemandforpalmoilovertheperiod1985to.Thisgraphcomparestheamountofpalmoilheldinworldstockovertheyears1985towiththedemand.Fromthegraphwecanseethetotaldemandforpalmoilwasonconsecutiveriseonthewholeovertheperiodinquestionexceptamarginalfallduring98/99.Startingfrom7.5milliontonsin1985,itgrewsignificantlyto33milliontonsduring05/06period.Theendingstocks,ontheotherhand,witnessedanumberoffluctuationsoverthepasttwentyyearswhenthesupplyoutstrippedthedemandatalltimeswiththelargestmargincomingbetweentoat3,000tons.Thenthedifferencekeptdecreasingyearbyyearuntilthesupplyanddemandgrowthcurvefinallyoverlappedfrom.Itcanbeconcludedthatthepalmoilsupplyoutstrippedthesupplythroughouttheperiodinquestionbutshowedatendencytogrowconsistentlywitheachotheraftersomeriseandfallinbetween..NOTE:endingstock,即每一年的年終庫存結(jié)余。由此可知，整體來說是供大于求的，因?yàn)槊磕甑膃ndingstock高于supply，供求差異與00/間達(dá)到最高峰，之后逐年縮小，從開始達(dá)到供求平衡。參考范文；NOTE：注意找出圖表變化的分水嶺，對(duì)于endingstock，85—99是一個(gè)階段，endingstock一直相對(duì)穩(wěn)定，在1700以下，可是99年以后開始大幅增長，到01/間增至頂峰，之后逐年下落，最終于demand重合。6.車輛保有量與人口增長barchartandlinechartintroductionThegraphshowsthatthenumberofcarsper100peopleovertheperiod1980to2020,relativeto/相對(duì)于/thegrowthoftheworld’spopulation.GrowthinpopulationIfwelookatthegrowthinpopulation,wecanseethereisasteadyincreasefrom4.2billionpeoplen1980to7.7billionin2020,withthemostsignificantincreasecomingbetweento2020./總漲幅，最大增幅年/Numberofvehiclesper100peopleThenumberofvehiclesper100peoplefollowsasimilartrend,risingsteadilyoverthesameperiod.Fromtencarsper100peoplein1980,itisprojectedtoincreasetosixteenin2020./總趨勢，起始數(shù)據(jù)/ConclusionThedramaticconsequenceofthesetwodevelopmentswhencombinedisthatthetotalnumberofvehiclesalmostdoublesin40years,afactwhichiscertaintohaveimplicationsforenergyresourcesandpollutioninthefuture.7.溫度與二氧化碳排放NOTE:范文中描寫的數(shù)據(jù)總增長，therewasasteadyriseinglobaltemperatureof0.8DegreeFover…典型浮動(dòng)：withthisgeneraltrend,thereweremanyfluctuations.Forexample,between…and…,/thereweresomevariationstothisgeneraltrend.典型區(qū)間：from1950to1990(最大變化區(qū)間)/leveloffafter1970(分水嶺)8.農(nóng)業(yè)與制造業(yè)進(jìn)出口及貿(mào)易平衡Band4SampleThisreportdescribesthemovementsofthebalanceoftradebetween1991and,foraparticularcountry,concerningmanufacturingandagriculture.Manufacturing:Importsincreasedconstantlyduringtheperiodstudied.Thefigureshowsariseof4billionwithinthewholeperiodandnofluctuationsaretoberemarked.Exportsrosefromnearly3billionin1991toapprox.$7bnin,sufferingminorfluctuationsallthewaythrough.Ingeneral,thebalanceoftraderemainedslightlypositivethroughtheperiodconsidered.AgricultureImportsincreasedslightly,endingtheperiodaround$1bnovertheirstartinglevel（表總增長額的黃金句）.Theysufferedatemporaryfallbetween1992and1994,followedbyasteadyrecovery.Afterpeakingataround2.5bnin1999,importsfellslightlytotheirfinalvalue.Exportsfigureshowsthesameperformancealthoughatlevel4bnhigherthanimports.超級(jí)有用句?？墒多字。Consequently,thebalanceoftrendremainedmarkedlypositivethroughouttheperiod.NOTE:注意范文的描寫重點(diǎn)，和行文結(jié)構(gòu)。注意描寫趨勢的手法：見黑體部分。注意流暢性和主語的統(tǒng)一。自己寫的對(duì)趨勢的描寫太籠統(tǒng)，應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)范文對(duì)movement變化的把握。不見得非要用總-分結(jié)構(gòu)。內(nèi)容太多時(shí)，可用小標(biāo)題使結(jié)構(gòu)更清晰。行文結(jié)構(gòu)：M：import,export,balanceimport,export,balance//Conclude.9.工業(yè)與林業(yè)進(jìn)出口量ReportonImpartsofIndustryandForestryforanEuropeanCountryThisreportdescribesthegeneralsituationinimportsofindustryandforestryforanEuropeancountryinthetwoyearsand.IndustryImportsofindustrydidnotvarymuchin,fluctuatingbetween29and31milliontonsthroughoutthefourquarterswhilein,theysawaconsecutiverisefrom30milliontonsinthefirstquarterto80milliontonsattheendoftheyear.ForestryBycomparison,importsofforestryweremuchhigherthanthatofindustryduringthebothofthetwoyears.In,therewasasteadyriseinforestryimportsfrom50milliontonsto70milliontonswithaslightfallinthesecondquarter.In,theimportswereevenhigher.Startingataround70milliontons,theyhitapeakat80milliontonsinthesecondquarter,followedbyasteadyfallto60milliontonsfortherestoftheyear.Inconclusion,importsofboththetwohaveincreasedsignificantlyduringto.按年份寫Importsofindustrydidnotvarymuchin,fluctuatingbetween29to31milliontons.Overthesameyear,importsofforestryweremuchhigher,risingfrom50milliontonsto70milliontonswithaslightfallinthesecondquarter.In,importsofboththetworosesignificantly.Industrysawaconsecutiveriseinimportsfrom30milliontonsinthefirstquarterto80milliontonsattheendof.Importsofforestry,ontheotherhand,sawsomeupsanddowns.Startingat70milliontons,theyrosetoapeakat80milliontonsinthesecondquarterfollowedbyasteadyfallto60milliontonsfortherestoftheyear.10.產(chǎn)品采購量ReportonpurchasequantitiesofRiceThistablechartshowsthepurchasequantitiesofriceforeachquarterofandofanEuropeancompany.Thepurchasequantitiesofriceinshowedatrendofsteadyrise.Startingoffat100milliontons,theygrewsteadilyforthethreesubsequentquarters,hittingayearlypeakat130milliontonsattheendoftheyear.In,thepurchasequantitiescontinuedtheupwardtrend,peakingat160milliontonsinthesecondquarter.Inspiteofaslightdeclineto150milliontonsinthethirdquarter,theyregainedthemomentumquicklyandsoaredagainto160milliontonsattheendoftheyear.Thefindingsaboveindicatethatthecompanyisadvancingduringthegivenperiod.II.DataandCompare1.DataandCompare的報(bào)告目的在于compare,會(huì)呈現(xiàn)一部分?jǐn)?shù)據(jù)，可是都是以對(duì)比為目的。2.此類報(bào)告的寫作重點(diǎn)為：split，difference,ratio,proportion等。常常需要用到表示對(duì)比的語言：3.對(duì)比的數(shù)據(jù)包括：不同產(chǎn)品/商店/公司盈利能力，年度表現(xiàn)環(huán)比、進(jìn)出口量、產(chǎn)量等環(huán)比等。1.年度表現(xiàn)對(duì)比：包括不同指標(biāo)（營業(yè)額等）對(duì)比，與年度環(huán)比i.公司年度表現(xiàn)ReportOnPerformanceofXXCompanyThisreportdescribestheperformanceofXXcompanyovertheperiod-byanalyzingtheturnover,unitsalesandoperatingprofit.Fromthegraphwecanseetherewasaconsecutivedecreaseinoperatingprofitovertheperiodstudied.Startingoffat500millionin,itplummetedby20%to400inthefollowingyear,andthenkeptdecliningtoaround350millionin.Theturnover,ontheotherhand,remainedrelativelystablebetween6100-6200millionduringthesameperiod.From6200million,itdecreasedslightlyto6100in,andrecoveredto6200againin.Theunitsalesshowedasimilartrendasturnoverinthethreeyears.In,10millionunitsweresoldwhileinthefollowingyear,thisnumberwentdownslightlytoaround8.5.Toourdelight,itsoaredtoarecordhighof11millionin,Fromthesefigureswecansee,therewasabuoyantdemandforthecompany’sproductfromto.However,theoperatingprofitfailedtogrowconsistently.Therefore,Irecommendthecompanycutdownonitscoststoimprovetheprofitability.NOTE:可逐年寫，也可逐指標(biāo)寫。ii.公司股票與現(xiàn)金收益bar+line:Maintask;describechanges按年份寫：ReportOnStockandEarningsofXXPlcThisgraphdescribesthechangesinthestockvalueandearningsofXXplc.overtheyearto.Takingthestockfirst,wecanseetherewasasteadyrisefrom55millionto80millionduringtheyearwiththelargestincreasecomingbetweenthe2ndandthe3rdquarter./總趨勢，最大增幅區(qū)間/Overthesameperiod,theearningsofthecompanyfluctuatedgreatly.Startingaround20millioninthefirstquarter,theyrocketedto90millioninthethirdquarterfollowedbyasharpfalltothestartinglevelattheendoftheyear./總趨勢，細(xì)述/Thestockperformedverysteadilyin,stayingaround80millionthroughouttheyear.Thetotalprofitswereslightlyhigherthanthatof.However,thequarterlyprofitsshowedamuchsteadiertrend,remainingstablearound40millionwithinthewholeperiod./總趨勢/對(duì)比總趨勢/Thetrendofstockandearningsshowsthatthecompanywasrunningwellduringthegivenperiod.按指標(biāo)寫：年度對(duì)比性較強(qiáng)。ThegraphshowsthetrendofthestockandearningsofanEuropeancompanyforeachquarterofthetwoyearperiod,to.Earnings:In,thecompanyhadalowstartwithaearningofjust20millioninthefirstquarter.However,thefigurerosesteadilyinthesecondquarterandshotuptoatwo-yearpeakat90millioninthethird.Inthefourthquarter,itfellbackagaintoitsstartinglevel.Bycomparison,thecompanyachievedaslightlyhighertotalprofitinwiththequarterlyearningsstayingstablebetween40and50millionthroughouttheyear.StockThestockfollowedasimilartrendtoearnings.Startingataround55millioninthefirstquarterin,thefigurerosesteadily,peakingataround85millionattheendoftheyear.Thenitdroppedslightlytoaround80millionatthebeginningof,andmaintainedthispositionfortheresttheperiod.Thetrendofstockandearningsindicatedthatthecompanyisrunningwelloverthegivenperiod.iii.年度收益ReportonearningsofPLCduringtoThischartshowsthegeneralchangesintheearningsofXXplcovertheyearsto.Fromthegraphwecanseethecompanydidnothaveaverygoodstartin,withaearningofonly35milliondollarsforthefirstquarter.Althoughtheprofitsrosetoapeakat40milliondollarsinthesecondquarter,theydroppedbacktothestartinglevelagainaftertwoconsecutivedecliningquarters.Bycomparison,wasafantasticyearwithbothmuchhigherquarterlyearningsandconstantprofitgrowththroughouttheyear.Inthefirstquarter,thecompanyachievedaprofitof40milliondollars,rising11%yearonyear.Thenthefigurerosesteadilyinthefollowingquarters,reachingarecordof60milliondollarsattheendoftheyear.Fromthechangesofearningsofthetwoyears,wecanseethecompanyisadvancingduringthegivenperiod.iv.銷售量所占比例環(huán)比ReportonchangesinpercentageofsalesmadebyretailersinBritainThisreportsummarizesthechangesinpercentageofsalesmadebyretailersinBritainbetween1996andbyanalyzingthedataofatypicalweek.Theweekin1996.FromthegraphwecanseetherewasasteadyriseinthedailysalesofretailersfromMondaytoFriday,withthepercentagesgrowingfromaround8%toapeakat25%.ThenthepercentagedeclinedslightlyonSaturdaybeforeplummetingtoalowbelow5%attheendoftheweek.TheweekinThepercentageinshowedasimilartrend,althoughatalevel1%to3%lowercomparedto1996.However,MondayandSundaywereexceptionstothisgeneraltrend,withthepercentagesexceedingthatof1996byabout3%inthetwodays.Fromthedatawecanconcludethatthepercentageofsalesmadebyretailersdidnotfluctuatemuchbetween1996and.2.不同產(chǎn)品/公司的銷售額/盈利能力對(duì)比i.Linechart:對(duì)比兩個(gè)公司的年度表現(xiàn)；要求既有公司對(duì)比又有年份對(duì)比。寫作重點(diǎn)：對(duì)比利潤。趨勢，呈現(xiàn)，對(duì)比ReportOnProfitsoftwoseasubsidiariesinandThelinechartsshowsthetrendsofprofitsoftwoseafoodsubsidiariesinEuropeandAustraliainand.TheAustraliansubsidiarydidnothaveaverygoodstartinwiththefirst-quarterprofitbeingslightlyabove30million.Althoughthefigurerosegraduallytoaround38millioninthe2ndquarter,itdeclinedsteadilytothestartinglevelinthetwosubsequentquarters.Overthesameperiod,theEuropeansubsidiaryperformedmuchbetter,wi