2023學(xué)年完整公開(kāi)課版八年級(jí)上冊(cè)Unit-1-Where-did-you-go-on-vacatio

Unit1

Wheredidyougoonvacation？

單元主題寫作一話題分析典型例題思路點(diǎn)撥素材積累小試身手話題分析本單元以“介紹某次旅行經(jīng)歷”為話題，以書信或日記的格式描述自己的某次旅行經(jīng)歷，介紹自己旅行經(jīng)歷中的所見(jiàn)、所聞、所感、所想。寫此類作文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1．時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí)。要注意動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式變化。2．文章的開(kāi)頭句和結(jié)尾句要簡(jiǎn)單明了，直接點(diǎn)題，中間段落的細(xì)節(jié)描寫是文章的重點(diǎn)。3．在描述旅行經(jīng)歷時(shí)，按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫，使用一定的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章層次清晰。典型例題假設(shè)今天是十月一日，天氣晴朗，你和家人去北京平谷區(qū)金海湖(JinhaiLake)游玩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格提示，寫一篇70詞左右的短文，記錄本次活動(dòng)并簡(jiǎn)要表達(dá)你的感受。時(shí)間

活動(dòng)感受出發(fā)得比較早，早上九點(diǎn)到達(dá)劃船，玩沙灘排球，游泳，享用海鮮，做游戲，唱歌等疲憊但很開(kāi)心思路點(diǎn)撥1．人稱：第一人稱為主2．時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)(注意動(dòng)詞變形)3．段落間和句子間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞。素材積累常用短語(yǔ)1．去劃船________________2．打沙灘排球________________3．去游泳________________4．玩得愉快________________________5．享用海鮮________________goboatingplaybeachvolleyballgoswimminghaveagoodtime/enjoyoneself

enjoyseafood常用句子1．Iwenttothemountainswithmyfamily.2．AlthoughIwastired,Ihadagoodtime.3．Wewenttothebeachandplayedbeachvolleyball.4．Wedidsomethingspecialandhadgreatfun.5．Wewentsomewhereinterestingandtookalotofphotos.高分模板TodayisNationalDay.Itwasfine.IwenttoJinhaiLakewithmyfamily.Weleftearlyinthemorningandgotthereatnine.Thereweremanypeople.①First,wewentboatingonthelake.Itwasfun.Then,Iplayedbeachvolleyballwithmyfather.Heplayedbetterandtriedhisbesttoteachme.Afterthat,wewentswimminginthelake.②IfeltlikeIwasafish.

Iwasrelaxedandenjoyedmyselfinit.Wehadlunchat12：00.Ihadsomedifferentkindsofseafood.Itwasdelicious.Finally,weplayedgamesandsangsongs.At5：00p．m.,wewentbackhome.③Althoughweweretired,wehadareallygreattime.IhopeIcangothereagain.名師點(diǎn)評(píng)①按照時(shí)間順序描述一天的活動(dòng)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接詞，如：first,then,afterthat,finally，使文章更有邏輯性。②句子“IfeltlikeIwasafish.”的使用使文章更加生動(dòng)形象。③結(jié)尾扣題，總結(jié)感受，表達(dá)愿望。小試身手假設(shè)你叫張寧，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，給你的QQ好友Helen發(fā)一封電子郵件，介紹你暑假期間的游玩情況。70詞左右。提示：1.Theplaceyouwentto.2．Howyouwentthere.3．Howlongyoustayedthere.4．Thethingsyoudid.5．Howyoufeltduringyourvacation.Onepossibleversion：DearHelen，Longtimenosee.How'syoursummervacationgoing?Letmetellyousomethingaboutmysummervacation.Lastmonth,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wewenttherebytrain.Westayedthereforaboutfivedays.Theweatherwasveryhot.Wedidalotofinterestingthingsthere.WewenttoBeihaiParkandtookalotofphotosthere.WevisitedtheSummerPalace.Itwaswonderful.WealsovisitedtheGreatWall.Wewentshoppingandboughtmanythi