第全國創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽優(yōu)勝作文選登7

第全國創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽優(yōu)勝作文選登7WhatComputersBringtoUs

李瀟然

遼寧省大連市遼師大附中高三2班

Withtheadventofcomputers,theworidischangingrapidlyandprofoundly.Theinfluencetheybringtousisobviousandfar-reaehing.Hence,peoplevoicegrowingconcernoverwhatcomputersbuingtous.

Thevitalflavourthatcomputersalothesoicetycan”tbeignored.Inthefinstplace,forstudents,they”rebeneficialtoourstudying.BysurfingortheInternet,wecangainsomeknowledgewhichcan”tbegraspedfromtextbooks.Inthesecondplace,asanapproachofmeelia,theyplayanoticeableroleinspreadingthecultoralinformation.Inthethirdplace,theycansimplifypleatyofwork,whichintensifiesthecapacityintheworkofscientificdevelopment.Lastbutbynomeansleast,computers,inmyview,boosttheprosperityofglobaleconomy.Asisknowntoau,theyconverttheworldintoavillage.It”sjustthiscausethatpromotestheeconomicalimprovement.

Nevertheless,everycoinhasitstwosieles.Inspiteoftheconvinience,weshouldalsofasteaourattentionuponthedrawbacks.Foronething,somepeopleareaddicteeltothenotrealworldtheycreate.Theylosetherselvesinitandforsure,theylosetheirdreamsandamlitions.Buttheworidisjustliksenchentingbubble,it”ssofragilethatcan”tstandagentletouch.Forauother,someonemakesutmostofthesignificantinfluencetheybringtoposeathreattotheindisidual,thesoicetyandeventhenation.What”sworse,someonecalledlocherbyproducingvimsdestysmillionsofcomputertever.

Weighingprosandcons,frommyperspective,wecansafelycometothecondusionthatcomputerscontributemuchtoourhumanbeingtosomeextent,however,weoughttobeconfrontedwiththechanllengesofthemoralbehavionstheyleadto.Inmyeyes,onlybyrealizingthestuffofthemcanweelevatetheprotentialvalusofthemandcreateashiningtomorrowforouselues.

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