人教版（2019）必修 第三冊Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations Writing課件

WritingafestivalexperienceUnit1FestivalsandCelebrationsHowtowriteanarrativeessayThinking:該類作文以敘述事件為主，要通過完整的故事情節(jié)和生動(dòng)形象的語言，使讀者在享受故事情節(jié)的同時(shí)有所感悟。寫作時(shí)要注意把記敘文的六要素：時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件、原因和結(jié)果等交代清楚。其基本框架結(jié)構(gòu)為：1.開頭——交代清楚事件的背景。2.主體——主要敘述事件的發(fā)生、經(jīng)過及結(jié)果。3.結(jié)尾——呼應(yīng)標(biāo)題，發(fā)表感想、愿望等。Step1Leadin假如你是李華，請根據(jù)下面五幅圖畫寫一篇100詞左右的短文介紹慶祝春節(jié)的經(jīng)過。Step2Practise一、審題1.確定文體：本文為敘事類記敘文2.確定人稱：本文的主要人稱為第一人稱3.時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主二、構(gòu)思第一段：總評(píng)活動(dòng)的感受；第二段：介紹具體的節(jié)日活動(dòng)；第三段：表達(dá)自己的希望或愿望。步驟一：審題構(gòu)思——分析透徹是關(guān)鍵1.充滿樂趣_______________2.沉浸在……_______________3.欣賞___________4.燃放；引爆__________5.慶祝___________6.盼望_____________fulloffunbedrownedinadmiresetoffcelebratelookforwardto步驟二：精挑細(xì)選——核心詞匯想周全根據(jù)要求完成下列練習(xí)1．我們聚集在一起，吃了一頓豐盛的晚餐。(完成句子)Weall_______________andhadabigdinner.2．然后，春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)開始了。(完成句子)Then_____________________began.3．據(jù)報(bào)道春晚相當(dāng)精彩。(一句多譯)①_________________________________________________②_________________________________________________gatheredaroundtheSpringFestivalGalaItwasreportedthattheSpringFestivalGalawaswonderful.TheSpringFestivalGalawasreportedtobewonderful.步驟三：遣詞造句——由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)4．許多明星都在舞臺(tái)上露面，他們給我們帶來了如此多的樂趣以至于我們都沉浸其中，欣賞他們的表演。(完成句子)Manystars___________________,bringingussomuchpleasurethatwewerealldrownedinadmiringtheirperformances.5．午夜時(shí)分，我們?nèi)挤疟夼趹c祝新年的到來。(完成句子)Themidnightsawus____________________tocelebratethebeginningofanewyear.6.黎明時(shí)，我們盛裝打扮，挨家挨戶的拜年。(完成句子)Atdawn,weall__________andpaidavisitdoortodoor.settingoffthefireworksdressedupturneduponthestage7．用現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語改寫句1______________________________________________8．用全部倒裝句改寫句2______________________________________________9．用as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句改寫句3______________________________________________Weallgatheredaroundhavingabigdinner.ThenbegantheSpringFestivalGala.Aswasreported,theSpringFestivalGalawaswonderful.步驟四：斟酌打磨——句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)TheSpringFestivalwasreallyfulloffun.First,weallgatheredaroundhavingabigdinner.ThenbegantheSpringFestivalGala.Justaswasreported,itwaswonderful.Manystarsturneduponthestage,bringingussomuchpleasurethatwewerealldrownedinadmiringtheirperformances.Themidnightsawussettingoffthefireworkstocelebratethebeginningofanewyear.Thenweatedumplings.Atdawn,wealldressedupandpaidavisitdoortodoor.Weallhopewewillhaveagoodluckinthefollowingnewyearandwearealllookingforwardtorealizingouralldreams.步驟五：連句成文——邏輯銜接連成篇Writeanarrativeessay,usingtheabovefivesteps.Step3Exercise(2020?天津市靜海一中高一12月學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)能力調(diào)研)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國朋友John想了解中國的春節(jié)，請你給他寫一封電子郵件介紹這一節(jié)日。DearJohn,MyclassmatesandIreallyenjoyyourexcellentteaching,but___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely，

LiHua【參考答案】ItgivesmegreatpleasuretointroducetoyouthetraditionalChinesefestival—theSpringFestival.TheSpringFestivalisthefirstdayoftheChineselunarcalendar,itmarkedthebeginningoftheNewYear.Asisknowntoall,theSpringFestivalplaysanimportantroleinChinesetraditionalculture.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,peoplebegintorealizethatitisnotonlyafestival,butalsoaprecioustreasure.AstheSpringFestivalapproaches,familiesbegintosweeptheirhouses,preparedeliciousfood,pasteSpringFestivalcoupletsandsoon.OnNewYear’seve,familiesgettogethertohaveafamilyreuniondinnerandsetofffireworks.Whatmakeschildrenexcitedisthattheycangetluckymoneyfromtheirparentsandgrandparents,whichmeansgood