讀后續(xù)寫：歸還雨傘學(xué)案-高三英語寫作

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學(xué)生稿

第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段。使之構(gòu)

成一篇完整的短文。

StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10key

words.

1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmy

daughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeour

needsmeet.

Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview,Isatdownin

thestreetcar,andthereagainstthoseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrella

withasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichthere

wasanamecarved.

OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthe

streetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellato

protectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.I

founditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenalady

answered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement."Itwasmy

umbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."

Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shelooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找

回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherreward

wouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icanonlyobtaintemporary

employment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,Ihadjustloslmy

lastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessa

miraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessand

jobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeenno

answerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingand

childrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.Butthereshould

benoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrance

whatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1

managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthe

doorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyand

demandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,frozen

overwhelmedbymisery.

注意

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

2請按如下格式在谷題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

StepII原文好詞好句積累

StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoinclude

thekeywordsyoulist.

StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothe

givensentences:(WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishor

Chinese.

StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.ThenIhearda

man's(heart)voicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewas

a(deliver)manwithhisarmsfullparcels."This

isamistake^^,Isaid,buthereadthenametheparcelsand

theywereme.Whenhehadgone,Ididn't

knowtodo.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthe

floor,(look)ateach

other(unbelievable).asurprise!Isearchedfor

thenameofthe(send).

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipicked

upthenote,read“Thanksforyour(return)the

umbrella.MerryChristmas!”Itwastheladysentusthese

parcels.(hold)thenotetightly,Iwastheverge

oftears,astreamofwarmthspreadingacrossmy

body.thechillyChristmas,IforgotIhadno

moneytherentandonlyfifteendollarsinmypocket.We

justsatinoursmallapartment(unwrap)thegifts

oneoneinhappiness.Asweetpeacefloodedintomelike

a(bless),whichmademe(hope)again.

StepVIFinishyourwriting.

StepVII檢測

A.“添枝加葉”(擴(kuò)寫句子)

1.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandopened

theumbrellatoprotectmyself.

2.“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withexcitement.

3.Shetooktheumbrellawitheyes,explaining

withvoicethattheumbrellawasgivenbyherparents,

nowdead.

4.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,

dreaminganddemandingforher

Christmasgift.

5.ThenIheardaman'svoicecomingandwenttothe

door.

6.Subsequently,Peggyand1satonthefloor,lookingateach

other.

7.Holdingthenote,Iwasonthevergeof

tears,acrossmybody.

8.Apeacefloodedintomelikea,

whichmademehopefulagain.

B.綜合填空

1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andtheretheseatwasa

beautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandle

(decorate)withgoldscrolls(卷軸)amongtherewasa

name(carve).

2.Soappealingwasherpleasure1forgotIwaslooking

forajobandwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.

3.There1stood,(freeze),overwhelmedbymisery.

教師稿

第二節(jié):讀后續(xù)寫(滿分25分)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段。使之構(gòu)

成一篇完整的短文。

StepIReadthefollowingpassageandunderline5to10keywords.

1wasasinglemotherinmy30swholiveddownandoutwithmy

daughterPeggyinasmallapartmentstrugglinghardtomakeour

needsmeet.

Oneday,1headedtothedowntownforaninterview.Isatdownin

thestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasabeautifulsilkumbrella

withasilverhandledecoratedwithgoldscrollsamongwhichthere

wasanamecarved.

OnimpulseIdeterminedtofindtheownermyself.Igotoffthe

streetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedtheumbrellato

protectmyself.ThenIsearchedatelephonebookforthename.I

founditimmediatelyandcalledit,waitingpatiently,andthenalady

answered.

“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement."Itwasmy

umbrellawhichhadbeenstolenayearago."

Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.Herhappinessatretrieving（找

回）thisspecialpossessionwassuchthattohaveacceptedherreward

wouldhavespoiledsomething.So1refusedherofferandleft.

Thefollowingmonthswerehard.Icouldonlyobtaintemporary

employment,forasmallsalary.Whatwasworse,Ihadjustlostmy

lastjobbeforeChristmas,withonlyfifteendollarsleft.Unlessa

miraclehappened,IwouldbehomelessinJanuary,foodlessand

jobless.1hadprayedsteadilyforweeks,andtherehadbeenno

answerbutthiscoldnessanddarkness.

TheairwasfullofChristmasmerriment,withthebellsringingand

childrenshoutinginthebitterduskoftheevening.Butthereshould

benoChristmasforme,Iknew,nogiftsnoremembrance

whatsoever.

Thinkingofthis,Icouldn'tcontrolmytearsonmywayhome,but1

managedasmilesoIcouldgreetmylittledaughter.Sheopenedthe

doorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,dreamingjoyouslyand

demandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.There1stood,

frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.

注意

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

2請按如下格式在谷題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustbeSantaClaus.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.

StepII原文好詞好句積累

1.inmy30s

2.downandout

3.makeourneedsmeet

4.onimpulse

5.obtaintemporaryemployment

6.Whatwasworse

7.manageasmile

8.throwherselfinmyarms

1.在我30多歲的時候

2.窮困潦倒

3.滿足我們的需求

4.沖動

5.臨時就業(yè)

6.更糟的是

7.勉強一笑

8.撲到我懷里

1.1satdowninthestreetcar,andthereagainsttheseatwasa

beautifulsilkumbrellawithasilverhandledecoratedwithgold

scrolls（卷軸）amongwhichtherewasanamecarved.

2.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandthankfullyopenedthe

umbrellatoprotectmyself.

3.“Yes,"shesaidinsurprise,withextremeexcitement.

4.Soappealingwasherpleasurethat1forgotIwaslookingforajob

andwentdirectlytohersmallhouse.Shetooktheumbrellawith

tearyeyes,explainingwithchokingvoicethattheumbrellawas

givenbyherparents,nowdead.

5.Sheopenedthedoorformeandthrowherselfinmyarms,

dreamingjoyouslyanddemandingdesirablyforherChristmasgift.

6.There1stood,frozen,overwhelmedbymisery.

L我坐在有軌電車上，靠著座位有一把漂亮的絲綢傘，銀柄上裝

飾著金色卷軸，其中刻著一個名字。

2.我在大雨中下車，感激地打開雨傘保護(hù)自己。

3.“是的，”她驚訝地說，極度興奮。

4.她的快樂如此吸引人，以至于我忘了我在找工作，直接去了她

的小房子。她含淚拿起雨傘，用哽咽的聲音解釋說，雨傘是她父

母給她的，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)死了。

5.她為我打開門，撲到我的懷里，快樂地夢想著，渴望得到她的

圣誕禮物。

6.我站在那里，凍僵了，痛苦不堪。

StepIIISummarizethepassagewithin60words.Trytoincludethe

keywordsyoulist.

Oneday,XwasheadingtothedowntownforaninterviewwhenI

pickedupabeautifulumbrellaandmanagedtofindtheowner,

alady,whohaditstolenayearbeforeandwasmorethangladto

recoverit.Thefollowingmonthssawmestrugglingtosupport

myselfandmydaughterPeggy.BeforeChristmasIwasjoblesswith

only15dollarsleft,whichmadememiserable.

StepIVDrawtheoutlineofthetwoparagraphsaccordingtothe

givensentences:（WritedownthekeywordseitherinEnglishor

Chinese.

（略）

StepVReadthesample,andfillintheblanks.

Suddenly,thedoorbellrangandPeggyranfleetlytoanswerit,

callingthatitmustheSantaClaus.ThenIhearda

man'sheartyvoicecomingandwenttothedoor.Hewas

adeliverymanwithhisarmsfullofparcels."'Thisisamistake^^,I

said,buthereadthenameontheparcelsandtheywereforme.

Whenhehadgone,Ididn'tknowwhattodo.Subsequently,Peggy

and1satonthefloor,lookingateachotherunbelievably.Whata

surprise!Isearchedforthenameofthesender.

Abruptly,anoteattachedtoonepackagecaughtmyeyes.Ipicked

upthenote,whichread“Thanksforyourreturningtheumbrella.

MerryChristmas!”Itwastheladywhosentusthese

parcels.Holdingthenotetightly,Iwasonthevergeoftears,witha

streamofwarmthspreadingacrossmybody.Onthechilly

Christmas,IforgotIhadnomoneyfortherentandonlyfifteen

dollarsinmypocket.Wejustsatinoursmall

apartmentunwrappingthegiftsonebyoneinhappiness.Asweet

peacefloodedintomelikeablessing,whichmademehopefulagain.

StepVIFinishyourwriting.

StepVII檢測

A.“添枝加葉”（擴(kuò)寫句子）

1.1gotoffthestreetcarintheheavyrainandopened

theumbrellatoprotectmyself