新教材高中英語UNIT5MUSICSectionⅣ寫作指導學案新人教版

SectionⅣ寫作指導寫作方法指導寫一篇與音樂有關的演講稿寫作儲備閱讀教材P56演講稿，提煉演講稿的寫作特點。Ⅰ.演講稿的特點演講稿屬于特殊的說明文或議論文的范疇。Ⅱ.演講稿的架構Ⅲ.演講稿的語言特點1．時態(tài)上多用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時；2．語言符合口語的特點，要有說服力，真實、可信，能夠引起聽眾的共鳴。Ⅳ.演講稿的常用詞匯1．deliveraspeech發(fā)表演講4．makeadifferencetoone'slife對某人的生活產生影響5．what'smore此外，另外Ⅴ.演講稿的常用句型1．Goodafternoon!I'mverygladtostandhereandgiveyouashortspeech.下午好！我很高興站在這里給你們作簡短的演講。2．Helloeveryone,It'sagreathonourtobeheretosharesomethingwithyou.大家好，很榮幸能在這里和你們分享一些東西。3．Today,mytopicismusic.今天我(演講)的主題是音樂。4．Ihopemyspeechtodaywillgiveyousomethinginyourfuturelife.我希望我今天的演講能給你未來的生活帶來一些啟示。5．Thankyouforyourpresent/attention!感謝你的到來/傾聽！典例剖析假設你是李華，學校邀請你本周三下午在全校大會上給同學們發(fā)表演講。演講的內容是音樂如何改變你的生活。請你根據自身的經歷寫一篇演講稿。注意：詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。審題謀篇Ⅰ.定框架→好的開始，成功的一半體裁演講稿人稱第一人稱時態(tài)一般過去時框架首段：稱呼、自我介紹、點題中段：音樂改變你的生活的具體內容尾段：希望、祝愿Ⅱ.定要點、關鍵詞及動詞時態(tài)→打造一篇要點全面；用詞準確得體；時態(tài)多樣的極優(yōu)作文要點一：很榮幸被邀請到這里發(fā)表一篇關于音樂如何改變了我的生活的演講。It's_a_great_honour_to_be_invited_here_to_deliver_a_speech_about_how_music_changed_my_life.要點二：每次我被要求在課堂上回答問題時，我都感到非常緊張，不能流利地說話。Every_time_I_was_asked_to_answer_questions_in_class,_I_felt_very_nervous_and_couldn't_speak_fluently.要點三：我很沮喪，不知道該如何處理這種情況。I_was_discouraged_and_didn't_know_how_I_could_deal_with_the_situation.要點四：音樂激發(fā)了我的自信。Music_inspired_me_with_confidence.要點五：我心想“我有音樂天賦，為什么不勇敢地在公眾面前唱呢？”I_thought_to_myself_“I_had_a_talent_for_music._Why_not_sing_it_in_public_bravely？”要點六：我經常在教室里或其他數百名同學面前唱歌。I_often_sang_songs_in_my_classroom_or_in_front_of_hundreds_of_other_schoolmates.要點七：上學期我參加了學校的音樂會，并因精彩的表演而獲獎。Last_term_I_took_part_in_a_school_concert_and_was_awarded_a_prize_for_my_wonderful_performances.要點八：音樂給了我信心和成就感。Music_gave_me_confidence_and_a_sense_of_achievement.要點九：我認為我應該把成功歸功于音樂。I_think_I_should_owe_my_success_to_music.要點十：我希望我們都能把音樂當成朋友。它能治愈你的弱點。I_hope_all_of_us_will_make_music_our_friend._It_can_cure_you_of_your_weaknesses.Ⅲ.詞匯、句式升級→創(chuàng)造極優(yōu)作文的倩詞靚句升級句式一：用so...that...改寫要點二Every_time_I_was_asked_to_answer_questions_in_class,_I_felt_so_nervous_that_I_couldn't_speak_fluently.升級句式二：用疑問詞＋todo形式改寫要點三I_was_discouraged_and_didn't_know_how_to_deal_with_the_situation.升級句式三：用強調結構改寫要點四It_was_music_that_inspired_me_with_confidence.升級句式四：用適當的連詞把要點五中引號里的內容改寫成一句話I_thought_to_myself_“Now_that_I_had_a_talent_for_music,_why_not_sing_it_in_public_bravely？”升級句式五：把要點十改寫成定語從句I_hope_all_of_us_will_make_music_our_friend_who_can_cure_you_of_your_weaknesses.Ⅳ.組建極優(yōu)作文→水到渠成的成就感：動力的源泉Goodmorningeveryone，______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!參考范文：Good_morning_everyone,_IamLiHua.It'sagreathonourtobeinvitedheretodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedmylife.OnceIwasashygirl.EverytimeIwasaskedtoanswerquestionsinclass,IfeltsonervousthatIcouldn'tspeakfluently.SoIwasdiscouragedanddidn'tknowhowtodealwiththesituation.Itwasmusicthatinspiredmewithconfidence.Ithoughttomyself“NowthatIhadatalentformusic,whynotsingitinpublicbravely？”ThereforeIencouragedmyselftoexpresswithmusic.Ioftensangsongsinmyclassroomorinfrontofhundredsofotherschoolmates.LasttermItookpartinaschoolconcertandwasawardedaprizeformywonderfulperformances.Musicgavemeconfidenceandasenseofachievement.Inaddition,musicgavemestrengthandhelpedmegothroughhardtimes.Gradually,Iovercamemyshyness.IthinkIshouldowemysuccesstomusic.Ihopeallofuswillmakemusicourfriendwhocancureyouofyourweaknesses.Ihopeeveryoneliveahappyandfulllife.Thank_you!eq\o(\s\up7(),\s\do5(J))即學即練假設你是“大衣哥”朱之文的好朋友李華，請你作一個有關音樂改變朱之文命運的演講報告。要點：1．朱之文1969年出生于山東菏澤單縣的一個貧困家庭；2．受到的教育很少，但是從小就對唱歌感興趣，從沒有放棄成為歌唱家的夢想；3．經常在樹林、河邊或田地里練習唱歌；4．2011年參加《我是大明星》榮獲冠軍，從此出名。2012年參加中央電視臺春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會。注意：詞數80左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：Ladiesandgentlemen,IamLiHua,afriendof“BrotherCoat”—ZhuZhiwen.Iammorethangladtodeliveraspeechabouthowmusicchangedhislife.Borninapoorfamilyin1969,ZhuZhiwenhardlyreceivedanyformalschooleducation.However,heisverycrazyaboutmusicandnevergivesuphisdreamofbecomingasinger.Heisalwayspracticingsinginginthelocalwoods,onthebankofriversorinthefields.Believeitornot,hensandgeeseinhisyardbecomehisfaithfulfans.Hisdeterminationandloveformus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