建議信的寫作

建議信是針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告的一種文體。

第一部分NO.1NO.2NO.3第八周1．寫作攻略(1)建議信是向收信人對某事提出寫信人的建議和忠告；(2)建議信有可能是寫給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告；(3)建議信要寫明寫信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要和緩。因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。2．高分制造技巧(1)寫作步驟首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后再寫需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況提出具體建議或忠告。千萬注意不要讓別人以為你是在投訴，而不是提建議。結(jié)尾段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)，要注意有禮貌，使讀者容易接受。(2)時(shí)態(tài)：一般為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；(3)人稱：常為第一人稱和第二人稱。一、句式積累[好開頭]1．I'msorryyou'rehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadviceintoconsideration.Herearesometipstohelpyou.2．Iamgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtoentercollegeanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestionsofchoosingyourmajor.3．Concerningyourrequest,Iwouldliketooffermyadviceonhowtokeepfit.中間段：Firstofall/Inthefirstplace/Tobeginwith

Secondly/Inthesecondplace/Besides=What'smore=AdditionallyLastbutnottheleast/Finallyandmostimportantly

[好結(jié)尾]Idohopeyouwillfindmysuggestionsuseful.2．Idohopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount.3.Onlyifyou...canyou...1.Ifinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.2.Whynottakeregularexercise,stopsmokingandeatmorefruitandvegetables?3.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyou...4.Bydoingthis,...5.Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.二、范文觀摩你(王偉)的好友(李磊)最近經(jīng)常和一些朋友去網(wǎng)吧、游戲廳玩，有時(shí)甚至?xí)缯n。請你根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫一封信，對他進(jìn)行勸誡。詞數(shù)：120左右。1．朋友在人的一生中起著重要作用；2．真正的朋友不會讓你去做壞事；3．所以我們要明辨是非，慎重交友。[經(jīng)典范文]DearLiLei，IamwritingtoyoubecauseIthinkIhavesomethingreallyserioustocommunicatewithyou.InoticedthatrecentlyyouoftenwenttotheInternetBarandtheGameCentertogetherwithseveralfriends.Sometimes,youevendidn'thaveclassesinordertoplaywithyourfriends.Beingoneofyourbestfriends,I'mveryworriedaboutyou.Friendsplayanimportantpartinone'slife.Wehavetochooseourfriendscarefully.Realfriendswillneveraskustodosomethingwrong.Idon'tthinkthefriendsaroundyouareyourrealfriends.It'stimeforyoutothinkabouttheproblemImentionedabove.AndIdohopeyouwillmakeawisedecisionsoon.Yours，WangWei精彩再現(xiàn)1．具有一定的修辭意識：reallyserious;recently;carefully；above等。2．非謂語動(dòng)詞的準(zhǔn)確使用：Beingoneofyourbestfriends;todosomethingwrong;tothinkabouttheproblem等。三、跟蹤演練假設(shè)你是李華，你在美國的筆友Jack最近為被朋友誤解所苦惱。請你根據(jù)所給提示，給他發(fā)一封120～150詞的英語電子郵件對他進(jìn)行開解。郵件內(nèi)容包括：1．安慰Jack；2．你的建議。參考范文：DearJack，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarebeingmisunderstoodbyyourfriendsthesedays.Icantotallyunderstandthepainyouareundergoing,whichmustbeabigchallengeforyou.Iknowyouarealwaysagoodfriend.Itisconsiderateofyoutohelpyourfriendsinmanyways.Iamsuretheremustbesomemisunderstandingbetweenyouandyourfriends.Youmustbeveryupsetnow.Annoyingasitis,Istillthinkyoushouldfacethesituationbravely.First,Isuggestyoutakesomemeasurestoreleaseyourpressure,forexample,youcandosomesportsandenjoysomenicemovies.Second,youneedtotalkwiththemfranklyandsincerelytoknowwhytheymisunderstoodyou.Therefore,youcanexplaintothemandmakeupyourfriendship.Ihopeeverythinggoessmoothlyandyoucanbegoodfriendsagain.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yourssincerely，LiHua一、表達(dá)高級PK1．Hemadebrilliantremarksonthefamousfilm.→Theremarksthathemadeonthefamousfilmwasbrilliant.2．Hethoughtofanimportantwaytodealwithit.→Thewayhethoughtoftodealwithitwasofgreatimportance.

(“高級”變中來：使用定語從句突出了brilliant和importance)二、提分句型：常用倒裝句型(Ⅱ)1．“notonly...butalso”引導(dǎo)并列分句，notonly位于句首時(shí)用倒裝NotonlydoesthelittleboyspeakEnglishwell,butalsohespeaksFrenchfluently.這個(gè)小男孩不但英語講得