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情人節(jié)的意外金華十校續(xù)寫《》whowhenwherewhatMainidea1.I:Roberta2.Otherpatients3.thenurseValentine’sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipOutsidethedoctor’sofficeMycaraswellasmyphonewasdead,aftermycheckup.Ineedhelp.1.主題語(yǔ)境:人與社會(huì)2.主題:社會(huì)服務(wù)與人際溝通-良好的人際關(guān)系與社會(huì)交往3.主題意義:在遇到緊急情況,即使看似形同陌路的陌生人也會(huì)伸手相助,體現(xiàn)互幫互助,人間關(guān)愛(ài)!4.話題:日常生活、社會(huì)互助。Whatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?
ReadforconflictWhatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?1.Mycarwasdead,likemyphone2.Ihadtousethephoneinside,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.3.Ihadtoturnbacktothepeopleforhelp.1.Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld,lackinginconnectionwitheachother.2.ItwasValentine'sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipWilltheyrespondtomyrequestandofferhelp?VSPara1:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.銜接句1:Whydotheyfollowme?情節(jié)推進(jìn)(心理):HowdoIfeel?情節(jié)推進(jìn)(動(dòng)作):Howwillthenurseandotherpatientscooperatewitheachothertohelpmycarstart?銜接句2:Howtochecktheresult?Para2:Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.銜接句3:Whatistheresult?情節(jié)推進(jìn)(心理\動(dòng)作):Whatispeople’sresponsetotheresult?結(jié)尾:Whatismyreflectionontheincident?主題升華:Howtoechowiththeformerpart?主題升華:Whatisthethemeofthestory?THREE優(yōu)秀學(xué)生作文及下水作文伏筆:Icouldn'tjudgethembyit.
照應(yīng)伏筆Actuallytheywerewarmandkind.照應(yīng)伏筆:Theytriedtogetmycarstarted.照應(yīng)伏筆:Theirhelpreallysavedmyday伏筆:adayofloveandfriendship照應(yīng)伏筆:ThemeChatGPT作品:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Thenursewalkedahead,leadingustomycar.Ifeltaknotinmystomach,embarrassedtohavesomanypeoplewatchingmeasItriedtostartmycar.Whatifitdidn'tstartatall?Whatifitmadealoudnoiseandeveryonelaughed?IfelttheircuriouseyesonmeasIreachedformykeys,feelingtheweightoftheirexpectation.Thenursebentdowntotakealookunderthehood,andItriedtokeepmyhandsfromshakingasIinsertedthekeyintotheignition.Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineroaredtolife,andIfeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.Thenursegavemeathumbsupandwalkedbackinside,leavingmealonewiththecarandtheotherpatientsstillwatching.Ibackedoutoftheparkingspaceslowly,feelingtheireyesonmeasIdroveaway.ButasIturnedontothestreet,Irealizedthattheirstaresdidn'tmatter.Ihadconqueredmyfearandfixedmycar,andthatwasallthatmattered.小情節(jié)構(gòu)建及可讀性細(xì)節(jié)描寫3.
虛擬語(yǔ)氣、非謂語(yǔ)與對(duì)比修辭Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo-ifIhadn’tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday.如果我沒(méi)忘記在離家前給手機(jī)充電,我也可能會(huì)沉浸于其中。在這個(gè)日子里,和人聊聊天以消磨時(shí)間會(huì)很不錯(cuò)。Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.他從車?yán)锶〕龉ぞ?,開始轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。Itwasdead,likemycar.就像我的汽車一樣,手機(jī)也不工作了。4.動(dòng)作IbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHonda.
我輕松地走出辦公室到我的小本田車旁。Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom.護(hù)士把頭探進(jìn)房間。Severalothersbentforward,mostprobablyleaningintochecktheengine.3.幾個(gè)人向前彎腰,很可能是為了檢查引擎。Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.他不久后挺直身子放松了一下,揉著背部Acheerwentup.歡呼聲響起。5.心理
Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver’sseat.
感到有點(diǎn)困惑,我走向我的車,鉆進(jìn)駕駛座。FOUR相似“救助”類續(xù)寫考題對(duì)比參考范文:IwasstandingbymycarwhenamanwithbrokenEnglishsuddenlyappeared.Hesaidifhecouldhewouldhelpme.IsaidIthoughttherewasagasleakbecauseIsmelledit.Hegotunderthecar,and2minuteslater,heslidoutandsaiditwasallfixed.Heaskedmetostartitupandseeifitworkedwell.Actually,atfirst,Iwasalittleskeptical.ButIdidashesaid.Tomydelightandrelief,mycardidindeedroartolifeandhadpower.IthankedmyrescuerandaskedhimifIcouldpayhimforhishelp.Heshookhisheadinstantlyandpolitelyrefusedmyoffer.Ithankedthenicemanagainandgavehimabighug.Myheartwasfullandsaidhewasablessinginmylife.Hisfacelitupandhadabeautifulsmile.MysisterandIwerebothtearyeyedandextremelygrateful.TherearesomanystoriesofrudenessandunkindnesstoothersbutIhavebeenblessedmanytimesbykindandhelpfulpeople.2021八省聯(lián)考Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤頂),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep.sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.
WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.參考范文:WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Shakingmyheadwithmyhandsstretchingintheair,Ihadnomoodtoeatanythingbeforemycarwasrepaired.Withsmilesheledmeintotheircar,treatingmetoavarietyoffoods.Ithankedthemamillionwith.Iwassohungryasifahungrytigerwereswallowinganelephant.IbetitwasthemostdeliciousfoodthatIhadhad.Watchingmywolfingthemdown,thefamilygrinnedfromeartoear,sodidI.Wechattedfreelyasifwewerefriendsformanyyears.Afterexchangingtelephonenumbers,expandingmythanksagain,Igotoffthecar,whenthegirlpassedapaperbagtome.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Atthesightofth
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