高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)情人節(jié)的驚喜（人與社會(huì)幫助）課件

情人節(jié)的意外金華十校續(xù)寫(xiě)《》whowhenwherewhatMainidea1.I:Roberta2.Otherpatients3.thenurseValentine’sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipOutsidethedoctor’sofficeMycaraswellasmyphonewasdead,aftermycheckup.Ineedhelp.1.主題語(yǔ)境：人與社會(huì)2.主題：社會(huì)服務(wù)與人際溝通-良好的人際關(guān)系與社會(huì)交往3.主題意義：在遇到緊急情況，即使看似形同陌路的陌生人也會(huì)伸手相助，體現(xiàn)互幫互助，人間關(guān)愛(ài)！4.話題：日常生活、社會(huì)互助。Whatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?

ReadforconflictWhatistheproblemtobesolvedinthestory?1.Mycarwasdead,likemyphone2.Ihadtousethephoneinside,butthereceptionistwasnotthere.3.Ihadtoturnbacktothepeopleforhelp.1.Everyonewasintheirownlittleworld,lackinginconnectionwitheachother.2.ItwasValentine'sDay,adayofloveandfriendshipWilltheyrespondtomyrequestandofferhelp?VSPara1:Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.銜接句1：Whydotheyfollowme?情節(jié)推進(jìn)（心理）：HowdoIfeel?情節(jié)推進(jìn)（動(dòng)作）：Howwillthenurseandotherpatientscooperatewitheachothertohelpmycarstart?銜接句2：Howtochecktheresult?Para2:Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.銜接句3：Whatistheresult?情節(jié)推進(jìn)（心理\動(dòng)作）：Whatispeople’sresponsetotheresult?結(jié)尾：Whatismyreflectionontheincident?主題升華：Howtoechowiththeformerpart?主題升華：Whatisthethemeofthestory?THREE優(yōu)秀學(xué)生作文及下水作文伏筆：Icouldn'tjudgethembyit.

照應(yīng)伏筆Actuallytheywerewarmandkind.照應(yīng)伏筆：Theytriedtogetmycarstarted.照應(yīng)伏筆：Theirhelpreallysavedmyday伏筆：adayofloveandfriendship照應(yīng)伏筆：ThemeChatGPT作品：Iturnedtoseealltheotherpatientsfollowingme.Thenursewalkedahead,leadingustomycar.Ifeltaknotinmystomach,embarrassedtohavesomanypeoplewatchingmeasItriedtostartmycar.Whatifitdidn'tstartatall?Whatifitmadealoudnoiseandeveryonelaughed?IfelttheircuriouseyesonmeasIreachedformykeys,feelingtheweightoftheirexpectation.Thenursebentdowntotakealookunderthehood,andItriedtokeepmyhandsfromshakingasIinsertedthekeyintotheignition.Isaidaquickprayerandturnedthekey.Theengineroaredtolife,andIfeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.Thenursegavemeathumbsupandwalkedbackinside,leavingmealonewiththecarandtheotherpatientsstillwatching.Ibackedoutoftheparkingspaceslowly,feelingtheireyesonmeasIdroveaway.ButasIturnedontothestreet,Irealizedthattheirstaresdidn'tmatter.Ihadconqueredmyfearandfixedmycar,andthatwasallthatmattered.小情節(jié)構(gòu)建及可讀性細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)3.

虛擬語(yǔ)氣、非謂語(yǔ)與對(duì)比修辭Iwouldprobablybeburiedinmycellphonetoo-ifIhadn’tforgottentochargeitbeforeIlefthome.Itwouldhavebeennicetostrikeupaconversationtopassthetimeonthisday.如果我沒(méi)忘記在離家前給手機(jī)充電，我也可能會(huì)沉浸于其中。在這個(gè)日子里，和人聊聊天以消磨時(shí)間會(huì)很不錯(cuò)。Havingfetchedthetoolfromhiscar,hebegantotwistit.他從車(chē)?yán)锶〕龉ぞ撸_(kāi)始轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)。Itwasdead,likemycar.就像我的汽車(chē)一樣，手機(jī)也不工作了。4.動(dòng)作IbreezedoutoftheofficetomylittleHonda.

我輕松地走出辦公室到我的小本田車(chē)旁。Thenursepoppedherheadintotheroom.護(hù)士把頭探進(jìn)房間。Severalothersbentforward,mostprobablyleaningintochecktheengine.3.幾個(gè)人向前彎腰，很可能是為了檢查引擎。Itwasnotlongbeforehestraighteneduptorest,rubbinghisback.他不久后挺直身子放松了一下，揉著背部Acheerwentup.歡呼聲響起。5.心理

Abitpuzzled,Iwenttomycarandslidintothedriver’sseat.

感到有點(diǎn)困惑，我走向我的車(chē)，鉆進(jìn)駕駛座。FOUR相似“救助”類(lèi)續(xù)寫(xiě)考題對(duì)比參考范文：IwasstandingbymycarwhenamanwithbrokenEnglishsuddenlyappeared.Hesaidifhecouldhewouldhelpme.IsaidIthoughttherewasagasleakbecauseIsmelledit.Hegotunderthecar,and2minuteslater,heslidoutandsaiditwasallfixed.Heaskedmetostartitupandseeifitworkedwell.Actually,atfirst,Iwasalittleskeptical.ButIdidashesaid.Tomydelightandrelief,mycardidindeedroartolifeandhadpower.IthankedmyrescuerandaskedhimifIcouldpayhimforhishelp.Heshookhisheadinstantlyandpolitelyrefusedmyoffer.Ithankedthenicemanagainandgavehimabighug.Myheartwasfullandsaidhewasablessinginmylife.Hisfacelitupandhadabeautifulsmile.MysisterandIwerebothtearyeyedandextremelygrateful.TherearesomanystoriesofrudenessandunkindnesstoothersbutIhavebeenblessedmanytimesbykindandhelpfulpeople.2021八省聯(lián)考Duringthispastyear,I'vehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethingshappened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,IwasonthesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsignsthatsaidNEEDAJACK(千斤頂),andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,aMexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.HeconveyedthroughherthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep.sowewouldneedsomethingtosupportit.Thenhegotasaw(鋸子)fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglogonthesideoftheroad.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanewtireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruckandgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.Thentheywouldgohome.

WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.參考范文：WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifI'dhadlunch.Shakingmyheadwithmyhandsstretchingintheair,Ihadnomoodtoeatanythingbeforemycarwasrepaired.Withsmilesheledmeintotheircar,treatingmetoavarietyoffoods.Ithankedthemamillionwith.Iwassohungryasifahungrytigerwereswallowinganelephant.IbetitwasthemostdeliciousfoodthatIhadhad.Watchingmywolfingthemdown,thefamilygrinnedfromeartoear,sodidI.Wechattedfreelyasifwewerefriendsformanyyears.Afterexchangingtelephonenumbers,expandingmythanksagain,Igotoffthecar,whenthegirlpassedapaperbagtome.Aftertheyleft,IgotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.Atthesightofth