高考英語真題 短文改錯(cuò)題及答案

#假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(A),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2?只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。I9vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuchaslike"TangDynasInthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadiffererrtthemeandanuniquestyle.短文改錯(cuò)2018年Correction12018全國卷I,10分Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountzysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents?Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish?Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.Correction22018全國卷H,10分WhenIwaslitt1?Friday^snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIunwillingtoplaythegameforthemsometimes<Ididn'trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullateEinmylife.Correction32018全國卷HI,10分ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilenwaittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,"Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks>andmistakeaswell."Immediate.Iraisedmyhand*2017年Correction12017全國卷I,10分Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday?Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructorsorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblankIforgotirhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,"Speedup!""Slowdown!""Turningleft!"IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft?Afewminutestheinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.Correction22017全國卷H,10分Mr.andMrs.ZhangallworkinourschooLTheylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInteraet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!Correction32017全國卷HI,10分WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime：carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums*Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.2012—2016年Correction1[2016?乙卷（全國I）]MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourareeuItisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myunclete11smethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead>hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.Correction2[2016?甲卷（全國U）]Thesummerholidayiscoming?MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip?Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittieaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad^wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Itboughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.Correction3[2016?丙卷（全國EDO]Theteenascyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficuIttimeforme?Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.AtthefirsIthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn"tseemtothinksuckTheyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn，tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthenIshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes?NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.Correction4[2016?四川]ItisMother"sDaytoday.Thoughit，sawesternfestiitfspopularinChinanow.Momhasafull"timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks?Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother"sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback>Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedishesfatIcookedwereMom'sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,"HappyMothe*sDay!"Momwasgratefulandmoving.Correction5[2016?浙江]WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we^dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandItboughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.Correction6[2015?新課標(biāo)全國卷I]WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment?Ifwefailtodoso,we^11livetoregretit.Correction?[2015?新課標(biāo)全國卷U]Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenteTwithhisparent.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.Helikeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.Afterlooksatthetoyforsometime,hetumedaroundandfoundwherehisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbeguntocry.Awomansawhimcryingandtellinghimtowaitoutsideashop.Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawparents.Momsaid,"Hownicetoseeyouagain!DadandIwereterribleworried."Tonypromisedherthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.Corrections[2015?陜西]Mysoccercoachretiredinlastweek.Iwantedtodoanythingspecialforhimathisretirementparty.Mymummakesthebetterbiscuitsintheworld,soIdecidetoaskherforhelp.Mumtaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.Iinsistedondoingmostofthebakingmyself.Ithoughtthebiscuitswerereallywell.MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.Ataparty,mycoach,withabiscuitinhismouth,askedsurprisinglywhomadethemandjoked,"ImighthavetoretiTeagainnextyearjustgetsomemoreofthesebiscuits."Myfavoritepictureatthepartyisofmycoachandmeenjoythebiscuitswithhappylaughter!Correction9[2015?四川]Hi,Janice,It"sbeenamonthsinceIcametothisnewschoolandIreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.AsItellyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.Wehangouttogeth"duringlunchandafterschool.We1vebeenspendingalotoftimesinginkaraokebars.It"sbeenthreeSaturdaysnowanditreallycostsmemany.And1startedtoseethisasatime-wastingactivity!Infact，Idon'tliketogoanymore,soI9mafraidI911losetheirfriendship.HowdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Ifyouareme,wouldyoutalktohim?Pleasehelpwithmeandgivemesomeadvice.GraceCorrectionlO[2015?浙江]Myoldclassroomwasinterestingbecausethreesideoftheclassroomweremadefromglass.Ienjoyedsitclosetothewindowsandlookingattheview.Ontheleft-handsideoftheclass,Icouldeasyseethefootballfield.Inthemornings,itwasfullofstudentsexercising.Theviewfromthebackoftheclassroomisalsosplendid.ClosetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthentFartherinthedistangIcouldnotenjoytheviewofsnowymountains.Ontherightsideoftheclasswastheroad.Iwasalwaysinterestedtoseethedriversinhurryinthemorning.ThepositionoftheclassroomwithitsviewmademefeltlikeIwasdreaming.IfIwasonlyachildidienIstudiedinthatclassroomIwillneverforgetit?Correctionll[2014?新課標(biāo)全國卷I]Nearlyfiveyearsbefore,andwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoes（圣女果）inourbackgardenSincethen—foralltheseyear—wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoself-seedwheretheyplease.Asresult?theplantsaregrowingsome^ere.Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.Therearesomuchthatweoftensharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost!Correction^[2014?新課標(biāo)全國卷U]Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.ntandendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn*tneedtodosomanyhomeworLTherefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample*wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.Correctionl3[2014?浙江]IwastakingatraintoLondon"sVictoriaStationIhadnoticedthatthecarriagewasnoiseandfilledwithpeople.Beforelong,atraininspectorcomestocheckourtickets.Apassengerrealizedhecouldn，tfindhistieketbutbecamequiteupseTheneveryoneinthecarriagebegansearchingthetieket,必ichwaseventuallyfoundunderaseatseveralrowsfromhisowner.Thepersonwhofoundatieketsmiledwithpleasureathissuccess.Nooneinthecarriagehadpreviousspokentoorevennoticedthetieket-ownerbefore.Yettheyhadsoquicklyofferedthestrangerstheirhelp.Ifwecouldshowconcerntoothersonneed,theworldwouldbeabetterplacetolivein.Correction^[2014?陜西]MyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset’wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyingoverus.Myunclesimmediatejumpedupandshottheirarrowsonthebird.Neitherofthearrowshitthetarget?Suddenlythearrowswasflyingdownatusfromthesky—theywerelookedlikerain!WerantoescapebutfortunatelynoonewasinjuretLThatdayIdidn'tlearnmuchaboutanimals,insectsortrees,butIlearntaimpressivelessonaboutgravity!Correctionl5[2014?四川]Hello,boysandgirls!Today,Iamgoingtotalkwithi^iatyoushoulddowhenafirealarmgooff.Ifyouhearthealarm,standinlineatthedoorandwaityourteachertoleadyououtside.Stayclosetoyourteacherandclassmate.Doiftpanicorgetoutofline,andtryingtoremainquietandcalmly.Soonthefirefighteirswillcomeandputoutafire.Ifit'safalsealarmandthereisnofire,yourteacherwillleadusbacktotheclassroontIfyounoticethatidiensomeoneismissingandhurt,tellyourteacherimmediately.Correction16[2014?遼寧]DearJeremyandAlice,Althoughwe^vebeendelightedtohaveyouasneighbors,we"rehopingtosettlesomethingthatbotherstous.Inaword,yourdog—Cleo.We*vecalledseveraltimeaboutCleo"searlymorningbarking.ItisdifficuIttounderstandingwhyshebarkseveryminuteshe'soutside.Theearlymorningbarkinghavebeendisturbingusasweareoftenupallnightwiththebaby.Beside,Cleotendstobarkaaverageofsixhoursaday.Thismorningshestartsbarkingevenbefore5o"clock.Thatistoomuchforus,consideringhowcloselythehousesare.Weappreciateourapologiesandgoodwill,butwehopethatyoucanfigureagoodwayofsettlingthematter.Sincerely,JackandRoseCorrectionl7[2013?新課標(biāo)全國卷I]Ihardlyremembermygrandmother.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.Sheisjustadistantmemoryformenow.Iremembermygrandfatherverymuch.Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthattumedfromblacktowardgrayovertheyears.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.Inafact,heevensearedmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.However,hewasthegentlestmanIhaveneverknown.Correctionl8[2013?新課標(biāo)全國卷U]ThebookI，mreadingoftalksaboutafternoonteainBritain.Itissaidtohavestartedintheearly1800,s.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o,clockertnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday.Interesting,ithadaconnectionbytheBeitishporcelain（瓷器）industry.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.Thismadeforthegrowintheporcelainindustry.Correction19[2013?陜西]MygrandfatherandIenjoyfishing.OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.Assoonaswearrived,sowedroppedthelinesintothewater^Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.Iwantedtogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittielonger.Finally,therewereasuddenpullatthepoleandfishwascaughWithinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocau^htafish?Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.Itwasdelicious.Correction20[2013?四川]Todaywehadachemistrytest.Ifoundthetestdifficulty?butItriedhardlytodoit.SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethertocopymyanswers.Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher，soffice.Theteacherwasangrybecausewehadsameanswersinthetests.Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents?Iwasveryupset.Ididn"tcheat.Iwasjusthelpingafriend?Whydoesshepunishme?Correction21[2013?遼寧]Mr.Johnsonisahardworkingteacher.Everyday,hespendstoomuchtimewithhiswork.Withlittlesleepandhardlyanybreak,soheworksfrommorningtillnight.Hardworkhavemadehimveryill."HehasruinedhisheaIthy.Weareworriedabouthint"Thatiswhichotherteacherssay.Yesterdayaftemoon,IpaidvisittoMr.Johnson.Iwaseagertoseehim,butoutsideherroomIstoppeAIhadtocalmmyselfdown.QuietlyIstepintotheroom.Isawhimlyinginbed,lookingatsomeofthepicturewehadtakentogether.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim?Correction22[2013?浙江]DearDiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity”350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,"Hewasluckytofindotherone."HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.TomorrowisfirstdayofschoolsIamawfullytiring,butIknowI"11neverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.Yours,RosemaryCorrection23[2012?新課標(biāo)全國]IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,but必enthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Fotawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys?Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,"That'sit.Nomoretoystoyou."Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,Ifoundoutthatwithmorepati.enceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.Correction24[2012?陜西]MyfatherandIstayedattheSouthLakeHotelforaweekwhenwevisitBeijinglastmonth.Itisinthedowntownarea,butitiseasytogotoanywherefromthehotelbypublictransport.Welivedinacomfortablydouble-roomwithabigbath.WhatIlikedbestwerethefreehigh-speedInternetconnectionintheroontIcheckedmyemailmessageseveryday.IalsosharedformyfriendsmanyphotostakinginBeijing.Thefoodwaswonderfulwithreasonableprices,andweenjoyedseverallocaldish.ItissuchgreetthotelthatIwouldrecommendittoanyfriendofmewhoisgoingtoBeijing.Correction25[2012?遼寧]DearDiana,Thankyouforthelovelydaywehavewithyou.ItwassokindforyoutoletusbringAnne'sfriend,Gina?Unfoirtunate,theonlyproblemwasthejourneyhome.Therehadbeenaterribleaccidentonthehighwayand,foraresu比therewasalonglineoftrafficforatleastsixmile.Intheend,wedrovetoaservicestationandwaitedthereunlesstheroadwasclear.InthecarparkhereGinanearlygotknockedoverascardroveoutfartooquicklyfrombehindalorry.TheyfinallydroppedGinaoffatherparents，andmadeourownwaytohome.Muchlove,

FionaFiona短文改錯(cuò)一、2020年高考真題[2020?全國卷I】【答案】simplyfryingTodayItriedcookingasimple^shmyself.Ilikeeatingfticdtomatoeswitheggs,andIthoughtpreparingitmusthbeeasytocook.Mymomtoldmehowtoprepare社p,rstjcutthetomatoesintobutandbeatthemquicklywiththestove,IwaitedpatientlyApiecesandpUandbeatthemquicklywiththestove,IwaitedpatientlyAchopstickoffchopsticksAfterthat1pouredoilintoapanandturnedonunlessuntil/till(heoilwashot.ThenIputthetomatoesandthebeateneggsintothepantogether."Notusthatway,"mymomtriedtostopmebutfailed?Shewasright.Itdidn'tturnoutasIhadwished.【文章大意】這是一篇記敘文.文章主要講述了作者做西紅柿炒雞蛋的過程。1?考査形容詞。句意：今天我自己嘗試做一道簡單的菜。根據(jù)名詞dish可知，此處應(yīng)用形容詞作定語，故將simply改為simple?？紪朔侵^語動(dòng)詞。句意：我喜歡吃西紅柿炒雞蛋。動(dòng)詞fry與tomatoes之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，所以此處應(yīng)用過去分詞作定語，故將frying改為fried。3?考査情態(tài)動(dòng)詞用法。句意：并且我認(rèn)為它一定很簡單。must是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，后接動(dòng)詞原形，to多余，故將t。去掉?？紪朔侵^語動(dòng)詞。句意：我媽媽告訴我如何準(zhǔn)備這道菜。分析句子可知，“how+不定式”作told的賓語，to是不定式符號，后應(yīng)接動(dòng)詞原形，故將preparing改為prepare.考査連詞。句意:首先我把西紅柿切成塊，并把它們放在一邊。Icutthetomatoesintopieces與putthemaside之間是并列關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用and連接，故將but改為and.考査名詞復(fù)數(shù)。句意：下一步我把雞蛋打到一個(gè)碗里，然后用筷子快速攪拌。chopstick是可數(shù)名詞，意為“筷子”，通常以復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)，故將chopstick改為chopstickso考査介詞。句意：之后我把油倒進(jìn)一個(gè)平底鍋，然后開火。根據(jù)Ipouredoilintoapan及常識可知，把油倒進(jìn)鍋里后應(yīng)是打開爐子，所以此處應(yīng)使用短語turnon,故將off改為n。&考査連詞。句意：我耐心等待，直到油燒熱。此處是指“直到”油燒熱，應(yīng)使用until/till引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，故將unless改為until/till.9?考査冠詞。句意：然后我把西紅柿和打好的雞蛋一起放進(jìn)平底鍋。此處特指上文提到的pan,所以其前應(yīng)加定冠詞the,故在pan前the。10.考査代詞。句意：“不是那樣?！蔽业膵寢尡M力阻止我，但是失敗了。根據(jù)上文可知，是作者一個(gè)人做菜，此處指媽媽盡力阻止“我3應(yīng)使用第一人稱單數(shù)的賓格，故將US改為me。[2020?全國卷H】【答案】Lwhat-^whichcome后加tosurelyfsurestart-^startedforfbut/yetvacationsfvacationsuch—so去掉onyoursfyour/you10?sooner-^soon【文章大意】這是一篇記敘文。文章作者給他的朋友回信。很高興聽說他的朋友在學(xué)功夫，也很期待能和他一起學(xué)習(xí)中國功夫?？紪朔窍拗菩远ㄕZ從句。句意：謝謝你的來信，你的信真正讓我開心。分析句子，逗號后的從句為非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞yourletter,關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指物，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。what改為點(diǎn)ch.考査固定搭配。句意：我很高興知道你來中國在我家鄉(xiāng)的一所學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)功夫。分析句子，此處come為不及物動(dòng)詞，后接賓語是需加相應(yīng)介詞。comet。譯為“來到”是故定短語。故在come和China之間加too考査形容詞。句意：我相信你會(huì)玩得很開心的。分析句子，此處be動(dòng)詞am后面需用形容詞作表語。故將surely改為sure?？紪藭r(shí)態(tài)。句意；事實(shí)上，我七歲時(shí)就開始學(xué)功夫了。分析句子，此處動(dòng)詞start講述的是7歲的時(shí)候，動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用過去時(shí)。故將start改為started。

考査連詞。句意：但我早就不練習(xí)了。分析句子，此處前句提到“我7歲開始學(xué)功夫”，后句提到“很久沒有練習(xí)了”。此處前后應(yīng)是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將for改為but/yeto6?考査不可數(shù)名詞。句意：幸運(yùn)的是，兩周后我就要回家過署假。分析句子，vacation譯為“假期”是個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞，后面不可加s表示復(fù)數(shù)。Suinmervacation譯為“暑期”是固定搭配。故將vacations改為vacation。7.考査副詞。句意：然后我就可以抽出時(shí)間重新學(xué)習(xí)它，這樣我們就可以每天一起練習(xí)。分析句子，此處應(yīng)表示“以便；所以”。故將such改為so.&考査介詞。句意：我們就可以每天一起練習(xí)。介詞s后接的是具體時(shí)間。everyday譯為“每一天”，前不能用有任何介詞修飾。故。n多余，應(yīng)去掉?？紪舜~。句意：祝你在中國學(xué)習(xí)功夫好運(yùn)。分析句子，bestluckofyou譯為“祝你好運(yùn)”是固定短語。故將your改為you。/句中的yours為名詞性物主代詞，不可修飾后面的動(dòng)名詞。故將yours改為your?？紪斯潭ǘ陶Z。句意：希望盡快見到你。Seeyousoon譯為“希望盡快見到你”，是固定短語。此處不需用比較級。故將sooner改為soon。[2020?全國卷HI】【答案】concerningMymomisreallyconcerningMymomisreallyconcernedwiththehealthofeveryoneinourfamilies.Inordertomakesurelysuresurelysureallofusareingoodhealth,

theshemakesspecificplansforus.Forexample,everymorninghaddon'tmydadhastohaveabowlofeggso叩whileIhaveeatanapple.Mydaddoesn'tliketheAsoupandIdon'tenjoyapples?1tellmymomthatifwe'reforcedeatthings,wemaybecomeill.hewhatButsheinsistsonuseatinghealthyfbod.Underslandinghergoodintentions,IeatallthefoodthatisprovidedbyMomwithappreciation.【解析】【分析】這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講了作者的媽媽堅(jiān)持讓全家人吃健康食物，確保每個(gè)人身體好。一開始，家人有些排斥。在母親的堅(jiān)持下，我充滿感激地接受了母親的好意?！驹斀狻康谝惶帲嚎紪斯潭ǘ陶Z。句意：我的媽媽真的關(guān)心我們家庭里每個(gè)人的健康。beconcernedwith關(guān)心，該短語是固定短語，所以concerning改成concerned?第二處：考査名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意同上。family當(dāng)“家庭”講時(shí)，是集合名詞，這里表示“我們一個(gè)家庭"，所以用單數(shù)，families改成family?第三處：考査固定短語。句意：為了確保我們所有人身體好，她為我們制定了特殊的計(jì)劃。makesure確保，該短語是固定短語，所以surely改成sure。第四處：考査簡單句。句意同上。這是一個(gè)簡單句，前面inordert?！髂康臓钫Z，不用連詞and,所以去掉and。第五處：考査冠詞。句意：例如：每天早晨，我的父親不得不喝一碗雞蛋湯，然而，我不得不吃一個(gè)蘋果。泛指“一碗雞蛋湯”，bo“以輔音音素開頭，用不定冠詞a,所以the改成a。第六處：考査時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語everymorning,可知這里表示經(jīng)?；蚍磸?fù)發(fā)生的事情，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語為I,謂語動(dòng)詞要用原形。所以had改成have。第七處：考査主謂一致。句意：我爸爸不喜歡湯，我也不喜歡蘋果。表示經(jīng)?；蚍磸?fù)發(fā)生的事情，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。主語mydad是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，所以don't改成doesn^t。第八處:考査固定句型。句意:我告訴我媽媽，如果我們被迫吃東西,我們可能會(huì)生病。beforcedtodosth.被迫做某事，所以forced后面加to。第九處：考査代詞。句意：但是她堅(jiān)持讓我們吃健康的食物。文中指“我的媽媽”，是女性，所以he改成she。第十處：考査定語從句。句意：出于對媽媽好意的理解，我滿懷感激地吃著媽媽提供的所有食物。這里含有一個(gè)定語從句，先行詞是allthefood,關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指物，可用that或轉(zhuǎn)hich,先行詞被all所修飾，只能使用that,不能使用which,且気at不能引導(dǎo)定語從句，所以what改成that。短文改錯(cuò)一、2019年高考真題[2019?全國卷I]【答案】

interestmg..Ibecameinplayingfootballthankstoasmallacciaent?OneinteiestedwhereafternoonIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.whenSuddenly—footballfellaSuddenly—footballfellajustinfirontofmebutandalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground,Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground,hardToeveryone'surprisingsuipusetheballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayersurprisingsuipusetheballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayer

playersontheplaygroundsavnowcheeredloudly,—thatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromon,Istartedsayingthentoplayfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.【語篇解讀】這是一篇記敘文.作者講述了由于一次偶然的經(jīng)歷，自己喜歡上了踢足球。從此成了一名優(yōu)秀球員。第一處：【解析】考査形容詞用法。?interest（使感興趣；使關(guān)注）”的形容詞有interesting（使人感興趣的）常修飾物；與interested（表現(xiàn)出興趣的）常修飾人。本句的意思為：多虧一個(gè)偶然的事件，我對踢足球產(chǎn)生了興趣。主語是I,故將interesting改為interested。第二處：【解析】考査定語從句。先行詞。neafternoon表示時(shí)間在定語從句中作狀語，所以關(guān)系詞使用when?故將必ere改為when。第三處：【解析】考査冠詞。名詞football為可數(shù)名詞，前邊需要有限定詞。這里football第一次出現(xiàn)，故在football前加a?第四處：【解析】考査連詞。句意：突然一個(gè)足球落在我前邊并且差點(diǎn)打到我。"足球落下來”與“打到我”兩個(gè)動(dòng)作是順承關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。故將but改為and。第五處：【解析】考査副詞?！癶ard（努力地；費(fèi)力地）”與“hardly（幾乎不；幾乎沒有）”都為副詞，但是詞義不同。本句意思為:我擋住足球，并使勁地將它踢回操場。故將hardly改為hard。第六處：【解析】考査固定搭配。"toone's+名詞”在句中表示結(jié)果，"toone^ssurprise"意思為"使某人驚訝的是…故將surprising改為surprise。第七處：【解析】考査名詞的數(shù)。"player（運(yùn)動(dòng)員）”為可數(shù)名詞，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將player改為players.第八處：【解析】考査現(xiàn)在分詞。本句句意：操場上所有的足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員大聲歡呼，說我有足球天賦。句中謂語動(dòng)詞為cheered,say在這里作伴隨狀語。與主語players是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故將say改為saying。第九處：【解析】考査固定搭配。句意：從那時(shí)開始，我放學(xué)后跟同學(xué)一起踢足球。且“fromn”on（從現(xiàn)在開始）”后邊句子應(yīng)該表示從現(xiàn)在開始所發(fā)生動(dòng)作或存在的情況，不能用一般過去時(shí)。此處后面是一般過去時(shí)，表示“從那時(shí)起”是fromthenon,故將now改為then<>第十處：【解析】考査固定搭配?！疤咦闱颉钡挠⒄Z表達(dá)為“playfootball^中間不能加冠詞或者代詞。故將my去掉。[2019?全國卷H】【答案】jobSinceIwasakid,IveconsidereddifferentIwouldliketodo.First,Ijobs..coolly.fivewantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedso?Then,whenIwasinthecoolfifthtoograde,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachermuch.Whenveiy/soIstudiedchemistry■人highschool,IreconsideredmygoaldecidedtobeaiiVatand.They...amazingdoctgweret麗oreasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasattheThereamazedfactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchbetter*afterseeingadoctor.AndtheisotherthatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.was【語篇解讀】這是一篇記敘文。作者講述了從小到大自己的職業(yè)夢想隨著求學(xué)經(jīng)歷不斷改變的過程。第一處：【解析】考査名詞的數(shù)。"job（工作；職業(yè)）”為可數(shù)名詞，用different（不同的）修飾時(shí)意思為不同種類的工作，應(yīng)該用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將job改為jobs。

第二處：【解析】考査形容詞的用法。句中的“l(fā)ooked（看起來…樣）”為系動(dòng)詞，系動(dòng)詞后需用形容詞作表語。故將coolly改為cool.第三處：【解析】考査序數(shù)詞。年級、班級是按數(shù)字順序排列的，所以“在幾年級”中的數(shù)詞需要用序數(shù)詞。故將five改為fiftho第四處：【解析】考査副詞。句意：在五年級的時(shí)候，因?yàn)槲曳浅Ｏ矚g我的英語老師，所以我想變成一名老師?！皊omuch”在句中一般表達(dá)肯定意思，可與that連用表示“如此…以至于”。而atoomuch”表太多，一般與to搭配，表達(dá)否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句話表達(dá)肯定意思，非常somuch或verymuch,故將too改為very/so。第五處：【解析】考査介詞?！霸诟咧小毙枰媒樵~in或者at,故在highschool前加in/at。第六處：【解析】考査連詞。句意：在高中學(xué)化學(xué)的時(shí)候，我重新考慮了自己的目標(biāo)并決定變成一名醫(yī)生?！爸匦驴紤]”與“決定變成一名醫(yī)生”之間是順承關(guān)系，不是選擇關(guān)系。故將or改為and。第七處：【解析】考査therebe句型。句意：有兩個(gè)原因可以解釋這個(gè)決定。句中的they在前邊句中找不到指代關(guān)系，且后邊句子中的one與theother是對這兩個(gè)原因的解釋。故將they改為there<?第八處：【解析】考査形容詞用法?！癮maze（使驚奇；使驚愕〉”形容詞形式有amazed（大為驚奇）與amazing（令人大為驚奇的人本句話中主語為I,句意:病人看完醫(yī)生就會(huì)感覺好很多，對此我感到驚奇，而不是我令別人驚奇。故將amazing改為amazed。第九處：【解析】考査形容詞比較級。句中better為well（健康；身體好）的比較級形式，多音節(jié)的形容詞或副詞構(gòu)成比較級用more加形容詞或副詞，即more不能與berrer連用。故將more去掉。第十處：【解析】考査一般過去時(shí)。本篇文章使用的全是一般過去時(shí)，且與最后一句并列的“onewasthaf??”用的也是一般過去時(shí)，所以最后一句話時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)。講述當(dāng)時(shí)做決定時(shí)的原因。故將is改為砲s。[2019?全國卷HI】【答案】I，openopensopenvehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamisto

xequiredacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itl^qmiesa“tofideasandefforts?WhatIoidmaiilywantisnotjustan01dina1^cafebutaveryspeefforts?WhatIoidmaiilywantisnotjustan01dina1^cafebutaveryspecialone.IwantmycafetohaveaspecialthemesuchasyourselvesInthecafe,customerswillenjoythemselvesinInthecafe,customerswillenjoythemselvesinthehistoricwhatalenvironmentthat/whichalenvironmentthat/whichforthem.IfIsucceedinmanagemanagingone,willopenmore.IwishtohaveachainmanydifferentcitvJcitiesmanagingone,willopenmore.IwishtohaveachainmanydifferentcitvJcitiesEachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeanandauniquestyle.【詳解】第一處：【解析】考査不定式的用法。不定式做表語，t。后用動(dòng)詞原形。故把opens改為openo第二處:【解析】考査動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。短文的主體時(shí)態(tài)都是現(xiàn)代時(shí)。故把required改為requires。第三處：【解析】考査形容詞的用法。修飾名詞cafe,應(yīng)用形容詞。ordinarily是副詞。故把ordinarily改為ordinary?第四處：【解析】考査動(dòng)詞的固定搭配。wantsbt。dosth“想要某人做某期”。故在have前加tOo第五處：【解析】考査介詞的用法。suchas和like都是用來舉例子，重復(fù)了。故把like刪除。第六處:【解析拷査代詞的用法ocustomers是句子的主語，故把yourselves改為themselves?第七處：【解析】考査定語從句。先行詞environment在從句中做主語，指物，關(guān)系代詞用that/^diicho故把what改為that/whicho第八處：【解析】考査動(dòng)詞的固定搭配。succeedindoingsomething"成功的做了某事”。故把manage改為managing。第九處：【解析】考査名詞的用法。manydifferent后跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故把city改為cities<>第十處：【解析】考査冠詞的用法。an用在元音音素前，a用在輔音因素前。unique是以輔音音素開頭的單詞，前用5故把a(bǔ)n改為“短文改錯(cuò)答案2018年Correction1考査冠詞。定冠詞the用于某些固定習(xí)語中，"gotothecountryside*意為"去鄉(xiāng)下"。^査時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前一句中的時(shí)間狀語"Duringmylastwinterholiday*和下文內(nèi)容可知，本文講述作者去年寒假的故事。所以此處應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故把find改為found。考査限定詞。another*又一，再一"后跟可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)前用。thei?"其他的，別的",故把a(bǔ)nother改為other*考査副詞。comehere"來這兒"，gothere*去那兒此處指去那兒，因此應(yīng)用there?？紪嗣~的單復(fù)數(shù)。短語dozensof之后應(yīng)接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，而此處chicken為可數(shù)名詞"雞"，故把chicken改為chickens?鯛査定語從句。本句中定語從句的先行詞是pond,在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語，故應(yīng)在曲ich前加in或把敲lich改為idlere<>【易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)撥】很多考生不能很好地區(qū)分關(guān)系代詞和關(guān)系副詞的用法。先行詞如果在從句中作主語、表語或賓語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系代詞。如果從句中缺少狀語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系副詞。例如：IwillneverforgetthedaysGhich/that)Ispentwithmygrandparentsinmyhometown.Ineverforgetthedaywhenmyunclejoinedthearmy.考査非謂語動(dòng)詞。此處動(dòng)詞位于介詞by后，應(yīng)用其動(dòng)名詞形式作賓語?？紪诵稳菰~。此處felt是系動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)跟形容詞作表語，故把happily改為happy。?^査介詞。慣用語everytwoyears意為"每隔兩年"，其前不用介詞，故介詞多余。⑩考査連詞。根據(jù)句意可知，此處表示順承關(guān)系，故把but改為and。Correction2考査名詞作定語。"星期五晚上"習(xí)慣上說Fridaynight?？紪嗣~的單復(fù)數(shù)。由前面的"1"所有的”可知,sort應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，allsorts意為"各種各樣"。^査冠詞。此處表示"作為一個(gè)孩子”,kid表泛指，且kid的發(fā)音以輔音音素開頭，故用不定冠詞a?考査非謂語動(dòng)詞。asktodosth.表示”要求做某事"，為固定用法?？紪饲閼B(tài)動(dòng)詞。muld是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，表意愿，后需跟動(dòng)詞原形，故t。多余。考査代詞。此處表示"他們會(huì)對我(me)說"?？紪酥^語動(dòng)詞。此句缺謂語動(dòng)詞，beunwillingtodosth?是固定用法，表示"不愿做某事結(jié)合語境和時(shí)態(tài)可知，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故在I后加砲s。^査介詞。表示"和某人玩"習(xí)慣用play...withsb.,故將for改為witho?^査時(shí)態(tài)。描述過去發(fā)生的事應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。⑩考査連詞。此處表示"當(dāng)我還是個(gè)孩子的時(shí)候"，故將必ere改為when(引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)。Correction3^査時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語境可知，此處為過去完成時(shí)，故應(yīng)用過去分詞?？紪朔侵^語動(dòng)詞。此處表示伴隨，且與Everyone為邏輯上的主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞?？紪诉B詞。此處表示選擇而非并列，故將and改為?！翱紪斯潭ù钆?。beeagertodosth.*渴望做某事"為固定搭配，故在eager后加to。考査限定詞。此處特指"我的作業(yè)"，故將myself改為my/the?？紪诉B詞。beafraidt。dosth.*害怕做某事"為固定搭配，故that多余。考査形容詞。此處無比較級含義，故用原級。鱷査主謂一致。該句為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語為that,故謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。鯛査名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)語境可知，此處表示"從課本和錯(cuò)誤中學(xué)習(xí)"，mistake"錯(cuò)誤"為可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式，即mistakes。⑩考査副詞。此處為副詞作狀語,故將Immediate改為Immediately^2017年Correction1^査序數(shù)詞。"我的18歲生日"，應(yīng)用序數(shù)詞eighteenth。由序數(shù)詞first可知，其前應(yīng)加定冠詞the.也可以用形容詞性物主代詞my修飾firstday。査上下文的邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)語境可知，前后兩句之間為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把so改為but或yet?？紪藭r(shí)態(tài)。本文講述作者18歲生日后的那個(gè)暑假發(fā)生的事情，且通篇以過去時(shí)為主。此處應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故把goes改為went。考査名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)下文可知，教練發(fā)出了很多指令，故用加rd的復(fù)數(shù)形式words.考査謂語動(dòng)詞。此處為祈使句，并和上文中的"Speedup"和"Slowdown"并列，故改為動(dòng)詞原形Turn。査固定句型。此處含有"so..?that...?引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，句中的much多余，故刪除?？紪烁痹~。late意為"遲，晚"。"一段時(shí)間+later*表示?一段時(shí)間之后"，故把late改為later?考査形容詞。該句中的名詞stop應(yīng)用形容詞修飾，所以把suddenly改為sudden。考査固定搭配。inthemiddleof意為"在……的中間"，故把。n改為of。Correction2^査代詞。因?yàn)橹髡Z是兩個(gè)人，所以用both表示兩者都，而all則表示三者或三者以上的全部。此處將all去掉也可以?？紪斯谠~。因?yàn)閔our的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，所以其前用ano此處也可用one表示數(shù)量"一”考査形容詞。因?yàn)槭敲枋鲋髡Zthey的心理狀態(tài)，所以使用interested*對??????感興趣的"。鱷査關(guān)系代詞。此處是非限制性定語從句，且關(guān)系代詞在從句中作主語，指代上文的garden,所以用which來引導(dǎo)該定語從句?？紪烁痹~。此處沒有比較的含義，所以用early的原級?？紪私樵~。buy為及物動(dòng)詞，其后直接跟賓語，而buysth.forsb.意為"為某人買某物J考査副詞。beside意為"在??????旁"，而besides意為"此外"?？紪嗣~。information為不可數(shù)名詞，無復(fù)數(shù)形式。鯛査動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。因?yàn)橹骶洳糠譃橐话銓頃r(shí)態(tài)，所以此處的時(shí)間狀語從句應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來意義。⑩考査動(dòng)詞的固定用法。短語invitesb.todosth.意為"邀請某人做某事"。Correction3考査介詞。realize后接賓語從句，介詞。f多余?？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。由時(shí)間狀語"inthepastfewyears"可知，此處強(qiáng)調(diào)的是發(fā)生在過去的動(dòng)作對現(xiàn)在的影響，故應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。考査連詞。notonly...butalso...是固定搭配。#査語態(tài)。photo與take為被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故應(yīng)用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。take的過去分詞是taken。査動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。"我"進(jìn)入高中第二學(xué)年并成為學(xué)校音樂俱樂部的新成員這一系列動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過去，所以謂語動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用became?？紪讼薅ㄔ~/冠詞.picture作?照片"之意講時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞，因?yàn)樯衔囊烟岬竭^這張照片，因此要用定冠詞the表特指，或者用this?？紪硕ㄕZ從句。things是個(gè)名詞，后面接了一個(gè)定語從句，修飾先行詞things,既可以用that也可以用誡lich作關(guān)系代詞?？紪诵稳菰~。名詞kinds前需要形容詞來修飾，因此把名詞difference改為形