Unit7Shopping七年級(jí)上冊(cè)英語(yǔ)單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（牛津譯林版）

Unit7shopping單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度購(gòu)物商品促銷廣告本單元的話題是“購(gòu)物”，要求我們能結(jié)合實(shí)際生活，用所學(xué)的詞匯介紹商品的價(jià)格，能對(duì)所購(gòu)買的物品進(jìn)行評(píng)論，還要結(jié)合本單元所學(xué)的服裝類名詞，寫商品促銷廣告。在寫商品促銷廣告時(shí)，可首先說(shuō)明促銷的商品；其次介紹所售商品的價(jià)格、尺寸、顏色等基本信息；最后回扣主題：歡迎顧客來(lái)購(gòu)買。注意要多使用禮貌用語(yǔ)?！驹~匯積累】1.shopping2.bedifferentfrom3.beinterestedin4.changen.零錢,找零5.expensive6.cheap7.sure8.walletn.錢包(wallets)9.maybeadv.或許,可能(放句首)10.costv.值多少錢(主語(yǔ)為物)11.collectv.收集(collects/collecting)12.pooradj.貧窮的,可憐的13.arean.地區(qū)(areas)14.matchv.與…相匹配15.enoughadj./pron足夠【短語(yǔ)積累】aclothesstore一家服裝店2.allcolors所有顏色3.atagreatsale降價(jià)銷售4.atagoodprice以優(yōu)惠的價(jià)格5.atone’sgreatsale大甩賣;大促銷6.atverygoodprices以非常優(yōu)惠的價(jià)格7.apairof一雙8.howmuch多少錢9.trousersinpurple紫色的褲子10.onsale減價(jià)出售11.sportsshoes運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋【句型積累】開(kāi)頭句：1.Comeandbuy…atourgreatsale!來(lái)買……吧,我們的……特價(jià)銷售!2.Welcometo…歡迎來(lái)……中間句：1.Wesell…atverygoodprices.我們以很優(yōu)惠的價(jià)格出售……2.Wehave...in...color(s).我們有……顏色的……3.Forgirls/boys,wehave...foronly...對(duì)于女孩/男孩,我們有……,僅售……4.Youcanbuy…foronly…你只需花費(fèi)……就能買到……結(jié)尾句：Cometo…andbuyclothesnow!現(xiàn)在就來(lái)……買衣服吧!假如你是李華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇30-40詞的英語(yǔ)短文，向你的同學(xué)介紹你的新書包和書包里的物品。開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示：Whatcolorisit?Isitbigorsmall?What’sinit?MynameisLiHua.Thisis_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文MynameisLiHua.Thisismynewschoolbag.Itisbig.It’sorange.What’sintheschoolbag?Aschoolbox,somebooks,andadictionaryareinit.Thereisaruler,apencilandaneraserinthepencilbox.Itisblueandred.Iwanttotaketheschoolbagtoschooleveryday.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給的問(wèn)題提示介紹你的新書包和書包里的物品。注意要點(diǎn)齊全。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開(kāi)頭，直入主題介紹自己的新書包，顏色和書包里的東西；第二步，以表達(dá)“自己的感受”結(jié)尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wanttodo想要做②everyday每天[高分句型]Thereisaruler,apencilandaneraserinthepencilbox.（therebe句型）一、詞形轉(zhuǎn)換寫出下列動(dòng)詞的現(xiàn)在分詞1．doeatsingstudy2．dance

make

give

have3．sit

get

begin

shop4．chat

run

swim

lie【答案】1．doingeatingsingingstudying2．dancingmakinggivinghaving3．sittinggettingbeginningshopping4．chattingrunningswimminglying【解析】1．現(xiàn)在分詞變化規(guī)則一般直接加ing。do—doing；eat—eating；sing—singing；study—studying。故填doing；eating；singing；studying。2．e結(jié)尾的，去掉e，加ing。dance—dancing；make—making；give—giving；have—having。故填dancing；making；giving；having。3．以一個(gè)輔音字母結(jié)尾的重讀閉音節(jié)，雙寫最后一個(gè)輔音字母，再加ing。sit—sitting；get—getting；begin—beginning；shop—shopping。故填sitting；getting；beginning；shopping。4．chat，run和swim都需要雙寫最后一個(gè)輔音字母，再加ing。chat—chatting；run—running；swim—swimming；以ie結(jié)尾的，把ie變成y再加ing。lie—lying。故填chatting；running；swimming；lying。二、單項(xiàng)選擇1．Hurryup!Thetaxi________forusnow.A．willwait B．waited C．waits D．iswaiting2．Whatdoyou________thistoycar?A．thinkof B．thinkabout C．lookafter D．lookfor3．—Youlookreally________inthatblackT-shirt,John.—Thankyou.A．short B．fat C．cool D．old4．Look!BillandBen________atthepool.A．a(chǎn)reswimming B．swim C．swimming D．swims5．Weneeda________inmathclass(數(shù)學(xué)課).A．jacket B．cup C．ruler D．quilt6．Listen!Thebird________inthetree.A．sing B．sings C．issinging D．tosing7．—Look!Who________overthere?—ItmustbeLisa.Sheispracticingfortheunderwaterdance.A．dance B．danced C．dances D．isdancing8．Theycan’tgoouttohaveapicnicbecauseitis_________now.A．rains B．raining C．rain D．rained9．Ourclassis________twentygirlsandtwentyboys.Thenumberofthestudentsinourclass________forty.A．madeof;is B．madeupof;isC．madeof;are D．madeupof;are10．—Ineedtowritedownthephonenumber.Whohasa________?—Hereyouare.A．mask B．note C．bottle D．pen1.【答案】D【詳解】句意：快點(diǎn)！出租車正在等我們?？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)題干“Hurryup!”以及now可知，句子的時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)?，F(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的構(gòu)成是：主語(yǔ)+be+動(dòng)詞ing(現(xiàn)在分詞)形式，thetaxi是主語(yǔ)，為單數(shù)，所以be動(dòng)詞用is，wait的現(xiàn)在分詞為waiting。故選D。2.【答案】A【詳解】句意：你認(rèn)為這個(gè)玩具車怎么樣？考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。thinkof有……想法；thinkabout考慮；lookafter照顧；lookfor尋找。Whatdoyouthinkofsth.?為固定句型，表示“你認(rèn)為……怎么樣？”故選A。3.【答案】C【詳解】句意：——約翰，你穿那件黑色T恤看起來(lái)真的很酷?！x謝。考查形容詞辨析。short短的；fat胖的；cool涼爽的，酷的；old老的。根據(jù)“Thankyou.”可知，此處應(yīng)是夸John很酷，故選C。4.【答案】A【詳解】句意：看！比爾和本正在池子里游泳?？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)“Look!”可知，要用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)為“be+現(xiàn)在分詞”，故選A。5.【答案】C【詳解】句意：數(shù)學(xué)課上我們需要一把尺子。考查名詞辨析。jacket夾克；cup杯子；ruler尺子；quilt被子。根據(jù)“mathclass”可知，數(shù)學(xué)課需要的是尺子。故選C。6.【答案】C【詳解】句意：聽(tīng)！鳥(niǎo)兒在樹(shù)上唱歌。考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)“Listen!”可知，時(shí)態(tài)是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)是：bedoing。故選C。7.【答案】D【詳解】句意：——看！誰(shuí)在那邊跳舞？——一定是麗莎。她正在練習(xí)水下舞蹈?？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)“Look!”可知，時(shí)態(tài)為現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)為bedoing；主語(yǔ)為“Who”，be動(dòng)詞用is。故選D。8.【答案】B【詳解】句意：他們不能出去野餐，因?yàn)楝F(xiàn)在正在下雨?？疾闀r(shí)態(tài)。rains下雨，第三人稱單數(shù)；raining下雨，現(xiàn)在分詞；rain下雨，動(dòng)詞原形；rained下雨，過(guò)去式。根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)詞now，可知時(shí)態(tài)用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)be+doing。故選B。9.【答案】B【詳解】句意：我們班由二十個(gè)女孩和二十個(gè)男孩組成。我們班的學(xué)生有四十人?？疾閯?dòng)詞短語(yǔ)和主謂一致。bemadeof由……制成，可以看出產(chǎn)品的原材料；bemadeupof由……組成。根據(jù)“twentygirlsandtwentyboys.”可知，我們班由二十個(gè)女孩和二十個(gè)男孩組成。Thenumberof…表示“……的數(shù)量”，作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，be動(dòng)詞用is。故選B。10.【答案】D【詳解】句意：——我需要記下電話號(hào)碼。誰(shuí)有鋼筆？——給你?？疾槊~辨析。mask面具；note筆記；bottle瓶子；pen鋼筆。根據(jù)“Ineedtowritedownthephonenumber.”可知，需要用筆記下號(hào)碼，故選D。三、完成句子1．他們正在使用電腦嗎？是的。theythecomputer?Yes,theyare.2．Millie是我的表妹，她聰明而且友好。Millieismycousin,Sheisand.3．杰克正在電視上看籃球比賽。Jackabasketballgame.4．我們每天都在學(xué)校門口等他.Wehimattheschoolgateeveryday.5．那件襯衫是紫色的。Theis.1.【答案】Areusing【詳解】“使用”use，根據(jù)“正在使用”及答句中are可知用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的一般疑問(wèn)句，主語(yǔ)“they”前用be動(dòng)詞Are；其后動(dòng)詞用現(xiàn)在分詞using。故填A(yù)re；using。2.【答案】smart/cleverfriendly【詳解】根據(jù)中英文對(duì)照可知，smart/clever“聰明的”，friendly“友好的”，形容詞，作表語(yǔ)。故填smart/clever；friendly。3.【答案】was/iswatchingonTV【詳解】根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思可知用過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí)或現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)均可，主語(yǔ)Jack后用be動(dòng)詞was或is；“觀看”watch，其現(xiàn)在分詞形式為watching；“在電視上”onTV。故填was/is；watching；on；TV。4.【答案】waitfor【詳解】根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)提示可知此處缺少短語(yǔ)“等待”，譯為“waitfor”，根據(jù)“everyday”可知，句子為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是“We”，因此動(dòng)詞用原形即可。故填wait；for。5.【答案】shirtpurple【詳解】shirt“襯衫”，是名詞，作主語(yǔ)；purple“紫色的”，是形容詞作表語(yǔ)，故填shirt；purple。（一）假如你是烙餅店(HouseofPancakes)的經(jīng)理，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一則廣告，介紹一下你的烙餅店。60詞左右。烙餅店種類價(jià)格特色價(jià)格小號(hào)4yuan卷心菜胡蘿卜烙餅(小號(hào))3yuan中號(hào)6yuan西紅柿雞蛋烙餅(中號(hào))4yuan大號(hào)8yuan洋蔥牛肉烙餅(大號(hào))6yuanHouseofPancakes________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文HouseofPancakesWouldyoulikesomepancakes?PleasecometoHouseofPancakes.Thereareallkindsofpancakeshere,smallones,mediumonesandlargeones.Thesmalloneis4yuan,themediumoneis6yuanandthelargeoneis8yuan.Wehavesomegreatspecials.Thesmallpancakewithcabbagesandcarrotsisjust3yuan.Themediumpancakewithtomatoesandeggsisjust4yuan.Youcanalsotryourlargepancakewithonionsandbeefforjust6yuan.WelcometoHouseofPancakes.Youwilllikethefoodhere.（二）請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面體育用品商店的促銷信息，借助提示詞，幫助店主寫一則60詞左右的廣告。SportsStoreSaleThingsforsaleColorPricepantsblack￥20bagsforsportsblack￥30T-shirtsred,yellow,white￥25sockswhite￥6basketballsblackandwhite￥35提示詞：come,sale,goodprice,only,forgirls,forboysSportsStoreSale___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】SportsStoreSaleComeandhavealookatSportsStore!Wehaveallkindsofthingsforsale.Doyoulikepants?Wehavepantsatverygoodprice—only20!Doyouneedbagsforsports?Wealsohavegreatbagsforonly￥30.Forgirls,wehaveT-shirtsinred,yellowandwhiteforonly￥25.Forboys,youcanbuywhitesocksforonly￥6eachpair!Doyouliketoplaybasketball?Thebasketballsareonsalefor￥35.Andthat’snotall!CometoSportsStorenow!【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文。要求根據(jù)下面體育用品商店的促銷信息，借助提示詞，幫助店主寫一則60詞左右的廣告。要包含所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)可分為兩段來(lái)書寫：第一段介紹店里的體育用品及其價(jià)格；第二段寫歡迎大家到店選購(gòu)。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)該注意符合題意，同時(shí)注意語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性和連貫性，可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)使文章連貫。（三）假如你是李華，圣誕節(jié)快到了，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格信息，為家人選擇合適的禮物。家庭成員愛(ài)好爸爸看足球比賽媽媽去購(gòu)物姐姐聽(tīng)音樂(lè)要求：1.不少于五句話，60個(gè)詞左右。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.書寫工整，要點(diǎn)全面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及個(gè)人姓名。Christmasiscoming.Iamgoingtobuysomepresentsformyfamily._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Christmasiscoming.Iamgoingtobuysomepresentsformyfamily.Myfatherisasportsfan.Helikeswatchingfootballmatches.SoIwanttogivehimsometicketstofootballmatches.Mymotherlikesgoingshoppingverymuch,soIwouldliketogiveapairofshoestoher.Mysisterlikesrockmusic,soIwanttobuyheraCD.IhopetheywillbeveryhappywhentheyseetheseChristmaspresents.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，總體指出圣誕節(jié)要到了，要給家人買禮物；第二步，具體介紹不同的人的喜好，并打算買的禮物；第三步，最后希望禮物家人們能喜歡。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①buysthforsb為某人買某物②footballmatch足球賽③apairof一雙[高分句型]①IhopetheywillbeveryhappywhentheyseetheseChristmaspresents.（賓語(yǔ)從句及when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Mysisterlikesrockmusic,soIwanttobuyheraCD.（so連接的并列句）（四）Writeapassageofatleast50wordsaboutthetopic“Ashoppingexperience(經(jīng)歷)”.(以“我的一次購(gòu)物經(jīng)歷”為題寫一篇不少于50個(gè)詞的短文。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)Usethefollowingpointsasareference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)1.Whendidyougo?2.Whomdidyougowith?3.Wheredidyougoandwhatdidyoubuy?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AshoppingexperienceLastSundayafternoon,mymotherandIwentshoppingtogether.Wewenttoabigshoppingcenter.Isawtwobeautifulpicturesanddecidedtobuythem.It’s200yuaneach.Itriedtomakeabargainwiththeshopkeeper.Herefusedatfirst.Butwhenweweregoingtoleave,hestoppedusandsaid,“OK,youcanhavebothofthemat300yuan.”Iboughtbothofthemhappilyandwewenthomeatlast.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：考生可根據(jù)參考內(nèi)容所給的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，然后結(jié)合自身購(gòu)物經(jīng)歷適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，簡(jiǎn)單介紹時(shí)間和人物。比如：什么時(shí)間、和誰(shuí)一起去購(gòu)物；第二步，介紹地點(diǎn)并描寫具體經(jīng)過(guò)。從“地點(diǎn)、商品、價(jià)格、購(gòu)物過(guò)程”等幾個(gè)方面詳細(xì)描寫購(gòu)物的經(jīng)過(guò)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①goshopping購(gòu)物②makeabargainwith...和……討價(jià)還價(jià)③atlast最后[高分句型]①Butwhenweweregoingtoleave,hestoppedusandsaid,“OK,youcanhavebothofthemat300yuan.”（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②Iboughtbothofthemhappilyandwewenthomeatlast.（and連接兩個(gè)并列句）（五）根據(jù)下面表格信息，寫一篇短文，介紹你自己想要設(shè)計(jì)的服裝，70詞左右。衣服描述T恤衫短裙靴子顏色淺藍(lán)色灰色白色款式看起來(lái)干凈，與其他任何一種顏色都相配不太長(zhǎng)也不太大，看起來(lái)時(shí)髦，穿著舒服輕便并且舒適，在年輕人中很流行材質(zhì)絲綢棉皮革____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IwanttodesignaT-shirt,askirtandapairofboots.I’msuretheywilllookcoolonanyone.TheT-shirtismadeofsilkandtheskirtismadeofcotton.Ithinktheyareverycomfortable.Thebootsaremadeofleather.ThecolouroftheT--shirtislightbluebecauseIthinkthiscolourmakestheT-shirtlookcleananditmatchesanyothercolour.I’mgoingtodesignagreyskirt.Itisnottoolongortoolarge.ItlooksfashionableandIwantittobecomfortabletowear.I’mgoingtodesignapairofwhiteboots.Theymustbelightandcomfortable.Theywillbepopularamongyoungpeople.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文寫作，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中想要設(shè)計(jì)的衣服的相關(guān)要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直入主題來(lái)引出自己想要設(shè)計(jì)哪幾種衣服；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“衣服顏色、款色、材質(zhì)”三個(gè)個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹想要設(shè)計(jì)的衣服的具體情況；并給出自己的期許。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①apairof一雙②bemadeof由……制成③comfortable舒適的④match使相配⑤fashionable時(shí)髦的[高分句型]①ThecolouroftheT--shirtislightbluebecauseIthinkthiscolourmakestheT-shirtlookcleananditmatchesanyothercolour.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)②ItlooksfashionableandIwantittobecomfortabletowear.(動(dòng)詞不定式作補(bǔ)語(yǔ))（一）我想要為我媽媽設(shè)計(jì)一條連衣裙和一雙靴子。連衣裙是粉紅色的，用絲綢制成。靴子是白色的，用皮革制成。我想她穿上會(huì)很好看的。我想為我爸爸設(shè)計(jì)一件T恤衫和一條牛仔褲。T恤衫是藍(lán)黃相間的，牛仔褲是藍(lán)色的。T恤衫和牛仔褲都是棉質(zhì)的。我想它們穿起來(lái)會(huì)很舒服的。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Iwanttodesignadressandapairofbootsformymother.Thedressispinkandmadeofsilk.Thebootsarewhiteandmadeofleather.Ithinkshewilllookprettyinthem.IwanttodesignaT-shirtandapairofjeansformyfather.TheT-shirtisblueandyellowandthejeansareblue.Theyarebothmadeofcotton.Ithinktheyarecomfortabletowear.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生在寫作時(shí)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，注意主謂一致。[寫作步驟]第一步：介紹為媽媽設(shè)計(jì)的衣服，具體包括衣服的顏色、材質(zhì)，以及給出簡(jiǎn)單的評(píng)價(jià)；第二步：介紹為爸爸設(shè)計(jì)的服裝，內(nèi)容包括服裝的顏色、材質(zhì)，并給出相應(yīng)的評(píng)價(jià)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①apairof一雙/對(duì)……②bemadeof由……制成③comfortable舒服的[高分句型]①Iwanttodesignadressandapairofbootsformymother.（wanttodosth.想要做某事）②Ithinktheyarecomfortabletowear.（becomfortabletodosth.做某事很舒適）（二）寫一篇短文，70詞左右，介紹Simon，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1．Simon是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)七年級(jí)四班一名學(xué)生。2．他和他的同學(xué)正為希望工程(ProjectHope)舉行一次時(shí)裝表演。3．他身穿一件黃色襯衫，由棉制成。4．穿一雙黑色的皮鞋和一條白色褲子，與他的襯衫很配。白色與任何一種顏色都相配。他看起來(lái)既酷又摩登。5.他們?yōu)橄Ｍこ棠技撕芏噱X。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________