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淺談英文論文寫作與投稿

幾點(diǎn)經(jīng)驗(yàn)匯報(bào)人：1/17匯報(bào)內(nèi)容1.論文寫作中易犯幾個錯誤2.投稿過程中幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)3.關(guān)于審稿信回復(fù)2/171.論文寫作中易犯錯誤

“刪繁就簡三秋樹，標(biāo)新立異二月花”論文中數(shù)據(jù)并非越多越好；要以最精煉語言和最精簡圖片把問題說清楚；突出重點(diǎn)，突出新意；自己都解釋不清楚公式、定理等等最好不要寫上去，以免給審稿人留下把柄。以最近MaterialsLetters接收文章為例…3/17最初時(shí)：Title：“BiomimeticFabricationofHydroxyapatiteAssistedwithBambooMembrane”（無新意，不能吸引眼球）8figures,19equations,26pages修改后：Title：“FabricationofFlower-likeHydroxyapatiteAgglomerateswiththeAssistantofBambooMembrane”5figures,noequations,8pages.RejectAccept4/17“提要法”非常有用能夠找?guī)灼c自己想要撰寫文章相近文件（最好是大牛寫），看看人家是怎么組織內(nèi)容，分別總結(jié)他們寫作提要；在此基礎(chǔ)上理清思緒，列出自己提要；開始動手寫作?！罢驹诰奕思绨蛏稀眮順?gòu)思我們論文。關(guān)于文章結(jié)構(gòu)組織：5/17Theflower-likehydroxyapatiteagglomeratesformedontheuppersideandlowersideofanegg-shellmembranewereinvestigatedintensivelythroughauniquedesignedcrystallizer.Firstlytheiondrivingforcewascalculatedintheory,andalsotheinfluencesofvariousfactorsonthemorphologyandcrystallineoftheagglomeratessuchastemperature,pHvalue,andholdingtimewerefurthermoreexploredindetail.ViatheSEM,FESEM,FETEMandXRD,itwasclearthat

withhighertemperature,largerpHvalue,andlongerholdingtimetheformationofflower-likehydroxyapatiteagglomerates

areproducedwithbettercrystalline,whichiscertainsignificanceoftheformationprocessofbone.例子（Colloids&SurfacesB）：**注意：上文中藍(lán)色標(biāo)出地方都是有問題關(guān)于英文寫作：6/17Theflower-likehydroxyapatiteagglomeratesformedontheuppersideandlowersideofanegg-shellmembranewereintensivelyinvestigatedthroughauniquedesignedcrystallizer.Firstlytheiondrivingforcewascalculatedintheory.Inadditiontheinfluencesofvariousfactors,suchastemperature,pHvalue,andholdingtime,onthemorphologyandcrystallinityoftheagglomerates,werestudiedindetailbymeansofFESEM,TEMandXRD.Itwasfoundthat

flower-likehydroxyapatiteagglomerateswithhighcrystallinity

canbeproducedunderhighertemperature,largerpHvalue,andmoderatedholdingtime,whichissignificanttotheformationprocessofbone.主編Dr.Brush（英國人）將其修改為：7/17多讀歐美人寫文件，學(xué)習(xí)其寫作方法，將好句子統(tǒng)計(jì)下來，自己寫文章時(shí)就能夠用到；多積累，培養(yǎng)語感；寫作時(shí)盡可能使用短簡單句，長難句往往讓人看得很費(fèi)勁，并輕易留下把柄；多跟寫作經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富老師和同學(xué)交流，請他們幫忙修改。排版盡可能清楚、整齊：字體普通為TimesNewRoman，字號普通為小四，2倍行距；為了便于審稿，最好加上行號；Tips：8/172.投稿過程中幾點(diǎn)注意事項(xiàng)投稿前一定要先看清楚目標(biāo)期刊AuthorGuideline，普通會相關(guān)于稿件類型、字?jǐn)?shù)、圖片、排版要求說明?？稍谄诳黜撝姓业健１热缤ㄓ嶎愓撐钠胀ㄒ蟛怀?000單詞，圖片不超出5幅，有要求更少。有期刊會要求使用給定模板。比如Wiley數(shù)據(jù)庫Advancedmaterials,Small等；英國皇家化學(xué)會(RSC)期刊ChemicalCommunications,JournalofMaterialsChemistry等都要求使用指定模板。一定要先看清楚期刊Scope，這一點(diǎn)很總要以最近ChemicalCommunications接收文章為例…9/17最初：Small(IF~6),AdvancedMaterials(IF~8)Title：“SeaCucumber-LikeHydroxyapatite:Cation-ExchangeMembraneAssistedSynthesisandApplicationforSimultaneousDeterminationofLead(II)andCadmium(II)”拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，內(nèi)容偏重于電化學(xué)分析，過于專業(yè)化改投1：Biosensors&Bioelectrics(IF~5)拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，內(nèi)容不是生物傳感器改投2：ElectrochemicalCommunications(IF~4)拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，提議改投分析化學(xué)類期刊改投3：Talanta(IF~3)拒稿理由：不符合投稿范圍，提議另投它刊Giveup？？？？10/17最終：Title:“SeaCucumber-LikeHydroxyapatite:Cation-ExchangeMembraneAssistedSynthesisandApplicationforUltra-sensitiveHeavyMetal”ChemicalCommunications(IF~5)25/1投出，14/2收到主編信：DearDrZhang:IampleasedtoinformyouthatyourmanuscripthasbeenrecommendedforpublicationinChemCommsubjecttorevisioninlinewiththeattachedreports…….11/17要多跟老師和有經(jīng)驗(yàn)學(xué)長們交流；不輕易放棄，在對數(shù)據(jù)結(jié)果有把握基礎(chǔ)上要勇于挑戰(zhàn)影響因子高期刊。Tips:12/173.關(guān)于審稿信回復(fù)“謙虛誠懇、巧妙避重就輕”例子(CC)：Theauthorsarguethatthe“l(fā)argesurfacearea”ofthecucumber-likehydroxyapatitenano-structure(usedtopreparetheelectrode)isoneofthe(main)factorsconferringanadvantagetotheelectrode.Iwouldgoalongwiththat,butitwouldbegoodtoquantifywhatisthemagnitudeofthatsurfacearea.13/17Answer:Thanktherefereeforthecomments.Adefinitivesurfaceareavalueinnotveryinformativeinthiscaseas

thesurfacecoveragewillalterthesurfaceareaandthusavalueisnotveryusefulbutratherthemagnituderelativetothecarbonpasteelectrodeismoreinformativeandcanbeascertainedbycomparingthesizeofthepeakheightsfortheSW-voltammetryofthecucumber-likehydroxyapatitetotheCPEelectrodewhichindicatesthecurrentobservedfromHApismuchhigherincomparisonwithnearlyneglectedcurrentfromCPEelectrode.14/17結(jié)果：DearDrZhangThankyouforsubmittingyourrevisedmanuscript.Iamsatisfiedwiththechangesyouhavemade,andIamthereforepleasedtoinformyouthatyourpaperhasbeenacceptedforpublicationinChemComm.Pro