2023新教材高考英語(yǔ)二輪專(zhuān)題復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)題六讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)先技法再完美策略一妙筆生花在“詞”一舉課件

策略一妙筆生花，

在“詞”一舉在閱卷時(shí)，閱卷老師首要關(guān)注的是續(xù)寫(xiě)的語(yǔ)言，因此續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)言的高低與否直接決定著續(xù)寫(xiě)的成功與否。首先要規(guī)避常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤，確保拿到及格分，再次要盡力提升寫(xiě)作的語(yǔ)言，努力達(dá)到最高檔。5大升級(jí)路徑，詞匯亮人一眼

升級(jí)路徑1：籠統(tǒng)詞→具體詞①[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Hejustduckedhisheadandlookedathisownshoes.→Hejustduckedhisheadandstaredathisownshoes.②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]Atthatmoment,Iwasveryhappy.→Atthatmoment,aflashofjoysweptoverme.

升級(jí)路徑2：簡(jiǎn)單詞→高級(jí)詞①TheadvicetheoldmangaveTomwasveryimportant.→TheadvicetheoldmangaveTomwasverysignificant/vital/critical.②Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.→Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.

升級(jí)路徑3：?jiǎn)卧~→短語(yǔ)①Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandcried.→Theyhuggedeachothertightlyandburstintotears.②Afteraday'swork,wewerealltired.→Afteraday'swork,wewereallwornout.

升級(jí)路徑4：運(yùn)用有表現(xiàn)力的副詞恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂酶挥斜憩F(xiàn)力的副詞，能夠使文章更加豐富多姿，描寫(xiě)地更為準(zhǔn)確，文章更有生機(jī)。使用這些副詞時(shí)，要注意把握這些詞匯的確切內(nèi)涵，并且符合故事發(fā)展的內(nèi)在邏輯。①Thedaywasbitterlycold；themoonwasshiningbrightlyinthesky.②Havingnochoice,Islowlyraisedthebook,hopingtohidemyself.③Iwasquietly,joyfullyandpatientlywatchingasthesunpaintedabrandnewday.④Onourwaybackhome，myfatherheldmetightly，wearingabigfrown.

升級(jí)路徑5：運(yùn)用有表現(xiàn)力的介詞短語(yǔ)介詞with或in后加表示情緒、個(gè)性等的名詞，經(jīng)?？梢耘c相應(yīng)的副詞互換，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂么私Y(jié)構(gòu)可以增加表達(dá)的多樣性。①Shegazedupathim,glowinghappily.→Shegazedupathim,glowingwithhappiness.②Likealamp，themoonshonefromabove.Thestarstwinkledtheireyescuriously.→Likealamp，themoonshonefromabove.Thestarstwinkledtheireyeswithcuriosity.練重點(diǎn)練難點(diǎn)·創(chuàng)新應(yīng)用體驗(yàn)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。[2022·山東省棗莊市高三第三次調(diào)研]AChristmasTreeforMrsMuellerMrsMuellerwasournext-doorneighborwhenmysisterLaurelandIweregrowingup.Shemovedhereafterherhusbanddied.Shehadnochildrenandnorelativesthatweknewof.Shewasgentleandkind,andLaurelandIconsideredherourspecialfriend.OneDecember，MrsMuellerwasillinhospital.LaurelandIwerebusymakingChristmaspresents,andweponderedwhattomakeforMrsMueller.Wecouldn'tbearseeinghercomehomebeforeChristmastoanemptyhousewithnoholidaydecorations.Thenwelitupontheideaofdecoratingasmalltreethatwouldgreetherwithlightsandcheer.Wewerewonderinghowtocarryoutourplanwhentheanswerappeared.IwasinMissO'Keefe'ssixthgradeclassthatyear,andwedecoratedasmalltreewithpaper-linkchainsandornamentswe'dmadeinartclass.Itwasbeautiful.Bestofall,ithadtoberemovedfromtheclassroombeforeChristmasvacation.MissO'Keefesaidtherewouldbeadrawingforthetree.We'deachwriteournameonapieceofpaperandputitintheboxshehadprepared.Onthelastdayofschoolbeforevacation,she'ddrawanamefromthebox,andthatstudentcouldtakethetreehome.Great!ThatwasexactlywhatIwaslongingfor!SoIwrotemyname“HelenWheeler”neatlyonapieceofpaperandfoldeditcarefully.AsIputitintothebox,IwhisperedtoMissO'KeefethatIreallyhopedI'dwinthetreebecausemysisterandIwantedtogiveittoourneighbor.Thoughtherewere30childrenintheclassandeachmightwinthetree,IwassomehowcertainthatIwouldgetitbecauseourcausewasgood:WewantedtomakeMrsMuellerhappy.Thedaybeforevacationfinallyarrived.LaurelandIusuallywalkedtoandfromschool,butthatdayIpersuadedMomtopickusupinhercarafterschoolincaseIreallygotthetree.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。Beforeschoolwasover,MissO'Keefeannounceditwastimeforthedrawing.

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