讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)微技能指導(dǎo)

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第五檔（21—25）—與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)銜接合理?！獌?nèi)容豐富，應(yīng)用了5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。—所使用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，可能有些許錯(cuò)誤，但完全不會(huì)影響意義表達(dá)?！行У厥褂昧苏Z(yǔ)句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。rich&accurateHecoveredhismouthtohidehisyawnOurmouthsdrosandstaredathimShejumHeedthattherewasasnaetiredsurprisedangryecitedcautiousupset/uneasyfrightenedfeelingsactionsUsingactionstodescribethefeelingsscratchherhead她撓了撓頭，一個(gè)字也聽(tīng)不懂。She________________,notunderstandingawordhang/drop/lowerone’shead他羞愧地低下了頭。He______________________________inshamepuledconfused……ashamedsad……Canwedescribefeelingsmorevividlyscratchedherheadhung/dropped/loweredhishead翻譯練習(xí)1:Tony感到很絕望。概括描述Tonyfelthopeless/desperate1Astheresultofanaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarnessandsanintohopelessness被投入黑暗之中；陷入絕望2Tonyfeltleftoutandwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness感覺(jué)被遺忘、忽視3Tony'sbeliefsinlooingforwardandseeingthe被信念拋棄主語(yǔ)問(wèn)題關(guān)于絕望的描寫(xiě)翻譯練習(xí)2:Sheldon感到非常生氣。概括描述Sheldonfeltveryangry1Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slamming砰地關(guān)上thedoorfuriouslybehindhim沖出房間；狠狠摔門(mén)2Filledwithangre/fury狂怒,Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword充滿憤怒；說(shuō)不出話3Boilingwithrage憤怒,Sheldonshoohisfistatme怒火中燒；揮舞拳頭關(guān)于生氣的描寫(xiě)翻譯練習(xí)3:當(dāng)媽媽親吻他時(shí)，小baby開(kāi)心極了。概括描述Whenhismotherissedhimonthechee,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy1Whenhismotherissedhimonthechee,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld非常開(kāi)心3Whenthemotherissedthebabyonthechee,hedancedwithjoyandsweetness歡欣雀躍2Whenthemotherissedthebabyonthechee,hisfacebeamed堆滿笑容andhisbrightsmilelitu眉開(kāi)眼笑；笑容照亮房間關(guān)于高興的描寫(xiě)Micro-writingore

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