英語必修一Unit1-Teenage-Life-Reading-for-Writing寫作課件

Unit1

TeenageLife

ReadingforWritingAletterofadviceUnit1TeenageLife

Readingfo1Bytheendoftheclass,youwillbeableto…1.writealetterofadviceproperlyusingsomewritingskillsinthisperiod.2.mastersomewords,phrasesandsentencesrelatedtowritingaproperletterofadvice.learningobjectivesBytheendoftheclass,youw2文本重點分析文本重點分析1.Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend,ChenLei.你寫信說你很擔(dān)心你的朋友陳雷。that引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句，且在句中不作成分，無任何意義。beworriedabout...為...而擔(dān)心ChenLei是yourfriend的同位語1.Youwrotethatyouarevery2.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.我完全理解你的焦慮和糟糕的感覺。

that引導(dǎo)賓語從句從句主語：you,并列謂語：areandfeelterribleadj.可怕的，糟糕的，令人討厭的2.Iunderstandquitewellthat3.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.你認(rèn)為你的朋友玩電腦游戲過于頻繁而且上網(wǎng)太長的時間。that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句從句中plays和spends為并列謂語toomuch修飾不可數(shù)名詞sb.spendsometimedoingsth.Hespendstwohoursdoingthehomework.3.Youthinkthatyourfriendp4.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.我建議你跟你的朋友聊聊他的行為。

that引導(dǎo)賓語從句recommendvt.建議--賓語從句使用虛擬語氣recommendthatsb.(should)dosth.Herecommendthathe(should)paymoreattentiontohishomework.4.Irecommendthatyoutalkto5.Itisnotunusual

forteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.對于你們這一代的青少年來說，被電腦游戲和網(wǎng)絡(luò)時間吸引沒有什么不正常的。Itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.，it為形式主語，todosth.為真正的主語Itiscommonforustoplaygames.beattractedto...喜歡5.Itisnotunusualforteenag6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusontheotherthingsinlife.但是花費太多時間上網(wǎng)有損健康，也會讓人難集中精力在生活中的其他事情上。Spending...online,動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)。Smokingisbadforourhealth.and作并列謂語6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeo6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusontheotherthingsinlife.make+形式賓語(it)+賓語補足語(adj.)+todo/that...，todo/that是真正的主語。Weshouldmakeitpossible________(finish)theworkinaweek.IrememberImade____cleartoyouthatIwasnotcoming.tofinishit6.Butspendingtoomuchtimeo7.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.有些學(xué)生甚至?xí)撩杂谝蛱鼐W(wǎng)，無法把精力集中在學(xué)校和家庭生活上。

主語：somestudents謂語：become...andcannotconcentrateaddictedadj.有癮的，上癮的，入迷的beaddictedto(doing)sth.對作某事很入迷7.Somestudentsevenbecomead7.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.beaddictedto(doing)sth.對作某事很入迷Heisaddictedto______(watch)TV.concentratevt.集中，濃縮concentrateon集中精力watching7.Somestudentsevenbecomead8.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.

我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該鼓勵你的朋友嘗試新的愛好。

you...hobbies為賓語從句，省略引導(dǎo)詞thatencouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人作某事Theteachersencouragetheirstudents_________(study)hard.encouragementn.鼓勵tostudy8.Ithinkyoushouldencourage9.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?為什么不和他一起討論這個問題呢？whynot+dosth?用來提建議的句型Whynot_______(go)campingnow?go9.Whynotdiscusstheproblem10.Iamnotsurehewilllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.我確信他會聽你的話，因為你是他的好朋友。

since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句hewilllistentoyou作賓語從句，省略引導(dǎo)詞thatlistento聽10.IamnotsurehewilllisteReadaletterofferingsomeadviceonpage18andthensolvethequestionsbelow.1)WhatisWorriedFriend’sproblem?

Heisworriedabouthisfriend.WhatisSusan’sadvice?①Talktohisfriendabouthisbehaviour.②Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies.③Discusstheproblemtogetherwithhisfriend.2.WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Writethemdown.Irecommendthat...Ithinkyoushould...Whynot...

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Readaletterofferingsomead16Words: 1.焦急的，擔(dān)憂的adj._____________2.在網(wǎng)上prep._____________3.推薦,建議v.______________4.行為n.___________→v._____________表現(xiàn)5.青少年n.______________6.一代人n._____________7.吸引v.___________n.___________adj.____________有吸引力的Phrases:1.對……擔(dān)心_____________________2.喜愛_____________________3.集中注意力于__________________________________4.沉溺于，對……上癮____________________5.鼓勵某人做某事________________________6.祝一切順利______________________________anxiousonlinerecommendbehaviourbehaveteenagerattractattractionattractivegenerationbeworriedaboutbeattractedtofocusonconcentrateonbeaddictedto

encouragesb.todosth.bestwishesWords: anxiousonlinerecommendb17Sentences：1.Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehavior.__________________________________________________2.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.__________________________________________________3.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?__________________________________________________我建議你和你的朋友聊聊他的行為。我認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該鼓勵你的朋友嘗試新的愛好。為什么不和他一起討論一下這個問題呢？Sentences：我建議你和你的朋友聊聊他的行為。我認(rèn)為你18英語必修一Unit1-Teenage-Life-Reading-for-Writing寫作課件19

在寫建議信時，應(yīng)具體點明寫信的目的、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由和根據(jù)，理由要合情合理，語氣一定要禮貌。建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”：首段(Topicsentence—yourpointofview)：一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對自己的立場作一些解釋。

中段(Body—youradvice)：圍繞問題，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、科學(xué)委婉地提出有針對性的建議。注意充分考慮對方的實際情況，選擇得體用語。切忌用語生硬強(qiáng)制，泛泛而談。

尾段(Conclusion—yourwishes)：簡單予以希望。希望自己的建議能對對方有所幫助，同時闡明你所提供的建議僅供對方參考。 在寫建議信時，應(yīng)具體點明寫信的目的、建議的內(nèi)容、建議信的正201.I'msorrytoknowthatyouarenowhavingtrouble(in)doingsth….知道你現(xiàn)在在……方面有些麻煩,我很抱歉。2.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。3.Myadvice/suggestionsareasfollows./Thefollowingismyadvice./Herearesometipstohelpyou.我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。第一部分：交代背景+寫信目的1.I'msorrytoknowthatyou21First/Firstofall，whynot...？Ifyoudothis，youcan….Secondly/What'smore,youshould/hadbetterdo...Then/Thatway,...Itisalsohelpful/usefultodo...,whichwill…Thirdly/Inaddition/Besides,itwouldbeagoodideaifBydoingthis,AsfarasI'mconcerned/Lastbutnotleast,doing...isabetterchoice.Whenitcomestothisproblem,Isuggestthatyoushould第二部分：介紹詳情、提出建議First/Firstofall，whynot...22Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你會發(fā)現(xiàn)這些辦法有用。2.Ibelieve/amsurethatifyoufollowmyadvice，you’ll….我相信，如果你聽從我的建議，你會……。Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermyadvice.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadiceintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議我將不勝感激。3.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.盼望你的早日回復(fù)。第三部分：提出希望采納建議+感謝+盼望回復(fù)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseide23While-writing假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據(jù)下面提示給她寫一封建議信。1.要交朋友首先要做一個朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友誼需要時間和投入(effort)。While-writing假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友24【審題要素】寫作時應(yīng)注意下面幾點：1.確定文體：這是一篇應(yīng)用文，是學(xué)生熟悉的書信，寫作中應(yīng)注意書信的常規(guī)格式。2.主體時態(tài)：文章應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。3.主體人稱：由于是給別人提出建議，所以人稱應(yīng)該以第二人稱為主。4.內(nèi)容要點：①問題介紹；②建議一；③建議二；④建議三；⑤我的愿望。5.注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個要點之間邏輯連貫，行文通順。【審題要素】25【思路引導(dǎo)】

本題要求寫一封回信，謀篇布局時應(yīng)注意以下幾個步驟：首先，回應(yīng)來信中提出的問題，并分析原因。其次，針對該問題，提出2-3條合理的建議并說明理由。最后，寫一兩句結(jié)束語，如：希望我的建議對你有幫助等等。【思路引導(dǎo)】26Step1

Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshopeStep1Listtheoutlineofthe27Step2

Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①

_____________________________n.建議②_____________________________n.情況③_____________________________交朋友④____________________________________做……有困難⑤_____________________________接受某人的建議⑥______________________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_(dá)____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartintoStep2Listthewords，phrases282.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(havetrouble/difficultyin...)Iamsorrytoknow_____________________________________________②如果你采納我的建議，改變這種情況是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)Thesituation___________________________________________________③要交朋友為什么不先做一個朋友呢？(whynot)___________________________，ifyouwanttomakefriends?④我認(rèn)為一個朋友應(yīng)該友好、誠實、負(fù)責(zé)任的。(Ithink)Ithinkafriendshould____________________________________⑤你和朋友同甘共苦難道不是一個好主意嗎？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)Wouldn’titbeagoodidea____________________________________________________thatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.iseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirstifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?befriendly,honestandresponsible.2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻煩，我很抱歉。(29⑥正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)Justasasayinggoes,____________________________________⑦我建議你全心全意地交朋友。(recommendthat…)Irecommendthat___________________________________________⑧眾所周知，友誼需要時間和投入。(Itiswellknownthat/Asweallknow)Itiswellknownthat__________________________________.afriendinneedisafriendindeed.you(should)putyourheartintomakingfriends.friendshipcallsfortimeandeffort⑥正如一句諺語說的，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asa30Step3

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleastStep3Draftthearticlebyus31DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Ithinkafriendshouldbefriendly,honestandresponsible.Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagood