讀后續(xù)寫人際關(guān)系類++(寬容諒解a+car+accident)+講義 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫人際關(guān)系類（寬容諒解acaraccident）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ThesummerIturned16,myfathergavemehis’69ChevyMalibuconvertible(敞篷車).BeautifullyrepaintedcherryredwithV-8engine—itwasagiftwastedonmeatthatage.WhatdidIknowaboutclassiccars?TheimportantthingwasthatHannahandIcoulddrivearoundTucsonwiththetopdown.Hannahwasmybestfriend,ayearyoungerbutmuchtaller,almostfivefootten.“Hannah’sabeautifulgirl,”mymotheralwayssaid.Andsureenough,thatsummershesignedwithamodelingagency.Shewasalreadydoingrunwaywork.Amonthaftermybirthday,HannahandIwenttothemovies.Onthewayhome,westoppedattheMcDonald’sdrive-through,puttingthefriesontheseatbetweenustoshare.“Let’sridearoundawhile,”Isaid.Itwasaclearnight,oven-warm,fullmooncastinglowoverthedesert.Makingaturntoofast,Ihitapatchofdirtandthebackofthecarslidtotheotherside.Ithendrovethroughaneighbor’slandscapewallandknockedintoafull-grownpalm.Thefrontwheelscametoresthalfwayupthetreetrunk.TherewereFrenchfriesonthefloor,thedash(儀表盤),andmylap.AnimpossibleamountofbloodwasonHannah’sface,flapsofskinhangingintohereyes.Theytookusinseparateambulances.IntheER,myparentsspokequietly:“Bestplasticsurgeoninthecity…butitismorelikelytobetheendofhermodelingcareer…”We’dbeenwearinglapbelts,butthecardidn’thaveshoulderbands.I’dbrokenmycheekboneonthesteeringwheel;Hannah’sforeheadhadsplitwideopenonthedash.WhatwouldIsaytoher?Whenhermother,Sharon,cameintomyhospitalroom,Istartedtocry,preparingmyselfforheranger.Shesatbesidemeandtookmyhand.“Irear-ended(追尾)mybestfriendwhenIwasyourage,”shesaid.“Idestroyedhercarandmine.”“I’msosorry.”Isaid,knowingSharonwastryingherbesttocomfortmeandhelpingmeoutofmyterriblesenseofguiltandself-blame.Para1:“Themostimportantisthatyou’rebothalive.IforgiveyouandHannahwilltoo.”Shesaid._______Para2:Sharon’sforgivenessallowedHannahandmetoreturntoournormallife._________________一文章大意我16歲那年的夏天，父親把他的69年雪佛蘭邁銳寶敞篷車送給了我。雖然我對老爺車不甚了解，但重要的是我和我的好朋友漢娜可以開著敞篷兜風(fēng)了。不幸的是，在一次出行中，由于我的不當(dāng)駕駛，導(dǎo)致漢娜嚴(yán)重受傷，這可能導(dǎo)致她模特生涯的終結(jié)。在病房里，我陷入深深的內(nèi)疚和自責(zé)中。這時(shí)候，漢娜的母親來了，她盡力安慰我……二續(xù)寫情節(jié)構(gòu)建Para1:仔細(xì)閱讀第一段提供的首句“‘Themostimportantisthatyou’rebothalive.IforgiveyouandHannahwilltoo.’Shesaid.”，結(jié)合前文最后一段作者目前所處的情感狀態(tài)，通過對Hannah和她母親Sharon的動(dòng)作、語言等描寫，體現(xiàn)出她們對主要由于作者不當(dāng)駕駛導(dǎo)致的事故結(jié)果（漢娜毀容并很可能結(jié)束模特生涯）的理性接受以及對作者的寬容和諒解態(tài)度。因此這一段的主要情節(jié)應(yīng)該是我見到了漢娜，和她母親預(yù)料的一樣，她原諒了我（同時(shí)結(jié)合第二段提供的首句）。關(guān)鍵要描寫出在漢娜母親的幫助下，我見到了漢娜，她說了什么或做了什么讓我釋懷，同時(shí)描寫出我的情感變化。續(xù)寫第一段：場景1:“I”Sharon；場景2:“I”Hannah(actionresponse)(actionresponse)Para2：仔細(xì)閱讀第二段提供的首句“Sharon’sforgivenessallowedHannahandmetoreturntoournormallife.”，抓住關(guān)鍵詞forgiveness，Hannahandme和normallife，推斷事故并未對我們的正常生活造成影響。本段應(yīng)該主要描寫漢娜和我出院后的生活的美好畫面以及漢娜和她母親的寬容態(tài)度對我人生的積極影響。比如，描寫我們共同學(xué)習(xí)、玩耍的場景以及我們的友誼經(jīng)過時(shí)間的考驗(yàn)變得不斷深厚等；描寫我偶爾回憶起當(dāng)初那場事故的情形，漢娜和她母親的寬容態(tài)度對我為人處世態(tài)度的積極影響等。應(yīng)該突出畫面和場景以及人物語言、行動(dòng)、心理等的描寫。續(xù)寫第二段： 1)Whatanormallifedidtheyhave? 2)Whatabouttheirfriendship?3)Whatinfluencedoestheexperiencehaveonme?注意：雖然原文描寫的事故很嚴(yán)重，但從續(xù)寫給出的首句推斷，事故并未影響我們，尤其是漢娜的正常生活，所以不應(yīng)在續(xù)寫中再過多的闡述事故和及其傷害，而應(yīng)側(cè)重事故發(fā)生后的積極和諒解態(tài)度和之后的正常美好生活；（2）時(shí)態(tài)整體要用一般過去時(shí)，續(xù)寫第二段的結(jié)尾如果描述現(xiàn)在的生活情形用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)?；谧x后續(xù)寫的協(xié)同效應(yīng)，在本文續(xù)寫中需保持與前文協(xié)同度較高的敘事風(fēng)格，不建議多用對話的形式；（3）主旨升華圍繞“寬容諒解”的主題展開。三官方范文:“Themostimportantisthatyou’rebothalive.IforgiveyouandHannahwilltoo.”Shesaid.Istillcouldn’tforgivemyselffortheharmcausedtoHannah,trappedindeepself-accusationandregret.Awareofmydesperation,Sharontookmeinherarms,pattingmeontheback.Ipluckedupenoughcourageto(鼓起勇氣去做某事)requesthertotakemetoHannah’sward.Seeingmegettingclosetoherbedonthewheelchairpushedbyhermother,Hannahaskedeagerly,“Areyouallright?”Tearsofjoyandreliefpoureddownourcheeks.Sharon’sforgivenessallowedHannahandmetoreturntoournormallife.Wegotbacktobeinthecartogetherthatsummer,tostayfriendsthroughouthighschoolandcollege,tobeineachother’sweddings,andtowatchmyfourteenagersfawnoverherthreeyoungerchildren.IthinkofhergiftofforgivenesseverytimeI’mtemptedtoresentsomeoneforaperceivedwrong.Thescarsaresofadedthatnooneelsewouldnotice,butinthesunlightIcanstillseethefaintshimmerjustbelowherhairline—forme,animprintofgrace.注解：fawnoversb恭維/討好某人temptv.引誘，鼓動(dòng)resentv.怨/憤恨aperceivedwrong一個(gè)顯而易見的錯(cuò)誤fadedadj.褪色的，變淡的faintadj.微弱的shimmerv.發(fā)出微弱的閃光imprintn.印記；痕跡animprintofgrace優(yōu)雅的標(biāo)志四優(yōu)秀習(xí)作：“Themostimportantthingisthatyou’rebothalive.IforgiveyouandHannahwilltoo.”Shesaid.ArippleofgriefandguiltcreptovermeandIcouldhardlycontrolmytears.Sharon’sattitudewasundoubtedlybeyondmyexpectations,whichbreathedgreatcomfortintomymind.(“Everyonemakessomemistakeswhentheyareyoung.Whatmattersistotakelessonsandstepintoyourfuturebravely.”shesaidinagentlevoice.)Holdingbackmytears,IwasovercomewithwavesofgratitudeandmadethefirmresolutiontoapologizetoHannahinperson.WiththehelpofSharon,IwenttoHannah’swardandexpressedmyguiltsincerely.Hannahforgavemewithafriendlysmileonherface.Sharon’sforgivenessallowedHannahandmetoreturntoournormallife.Bothofusrecoveredfromtheterribleaccident,physicallyandmentally.AndHannahlookedasbeautifulassheusedtobe,exceptforthelongscaronherforehead.Westillhungouttogethergoingshopping,havingdatesanddrivingaround.Buttheobviousscarstayedaremindertome,remindingmetoberesponsibleforthesafetyofmyfriendsandmemyself,andtotakelessonsfrommistakes,then,justasSharonsaid,steppingintomyfuturebravely.五語料庫積累：1）Iwasenvelopedbytre