人教新目標(biāo)九年級(jí)英語(yǔ)同步作文練習(xí)Unit1-11

Unit1Howdoyoustudyforatest?【佳篇欣賞】AMyWaysofLearningEnglishEnglishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheworld.Asastudentinthe21stcentury,learningaforeignlanguagewellisnecessary.Unfortunately,afewofmyclassmatesdon’tlearnEnglishwell,sotheywanttogiveup.Therefore，IthinkIshouldhelpthemwiththeirEnglish.HerearemywaysoflearningEnglish.Firstofall,IusuallylearnEnglishbylisteningtothetapes.Correctpronunciationisthemostimportantthingforbeginners.Ilistentothetapecarefullyeveryeveningandreadeverysentenceafterthetapetoimprovemypronunciation.Inthisway,myEnglishsoundsverynicenow,andIammoreconfidentinlearningEnglish.Second,IthinkreadingisanotherimportantwaytolearnEnglish.IusuallylearnnewwordsbyreadingEnglishmagazines.Byreading,Inotonlylearnalotofwords,butalsogettoknowhowtousethem.Readinghelpsmetounderstandgrammarbetter,itmakesgrammarmoreinteresting.Asforspeaking,IjointheEnglishcubtopracticespokenEnglish.Italkwithdifferentstudentsandforeignteachers.Inmyopinion,thebestwayoflearningEnglishistalkinginEnglishasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakesbecauseeveryonemakesmistakes.BHowtoLearnEnglishWell？Englishisoneofthemostimportantsubjectsinmiddleschool.AlmosteveryoneknowsthatweshouldlearnEnglishwell,butfewofusknowhowtolearnitwell.Whenoneislearningaforeignlanguage,hemustuseit.Infact,mostofuslearnEnglishjustbyreadingthetextbooksandlisteningtothetapes.Butweareafraidtospeak.Don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Asayinggoesthatpracticemakesperfect.WhenwelearnEnglish,weshouldpracticespeakingeverydayinordertolearnitbetter.Themorewespeak,thefewermistakeswemake.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.CMyProblemsinLearningEnglishIhavebeenleaningEnglishformorethansixyears.Ifinditdifficultformetolearnitwell.IhavesomeproblemsinleaningEnglish.Ican’tfollowmyteacherwhenshespeaksEnglishinclass.Iamreallyworried.ItriedmybesttolearnEnglishbymemorizingallthegrammarrulesandnewwords,butIalwaysmakemistakesingrammarandspelling.What’swrong?Ifeelfrustrated.1.假設(shè)你是一名英語(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的初三學(xué)生，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)要總結(jié)自己近幾年學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的成功做法。要求：1.題目自擬。2.合理安排內(nèi)容，盡量介紹英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)各個(gè)方面的做法，避免只介紹某一個(gè)方面的經(jīng)驗(yàn)做法。3.語(yǔ)言通順、語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確。習(xí)作1：HowIstudyEnglishIoftenhearsomestudentssaythatEnglishistoodifficulttolearn,andtheycan’tlearnitwell.ButEnglishiseasytome.Iamgoodatit.IamverygladtosaysomethingabouthowIlearnEnglish.First,Ithink=1\*GB3①havinginterestinEnglishisveryimportant.Interestisthebestteacher.InordertodevelopinterestinEnglish,Ialways=2\*GB3②listenandlearnsomeEnglishsongs.WhenIsingthesesongs,IfeelveryconfidentthatIcanlearnEnglishwell.Second,Englishisaforeignlanguage，it’snotsoeasytolearn.Inclass,Ilistentotheteachercarefully,speakbravely,Iamnotafraidofmakingmistakes.AfterIlistentothetape,readaloudthenewwordsmanytimesandpracticespeakingagainandagain.Ialsohaveagoodhabitaskquestions.WheneverIhaveaquestion,Iwillaskmyteacherforhelpandmakeitclear.Third,IoftenreadEnglishmagazines.Inthisway,Icanlearnlotsofnewwordsandexpressions.Readinghelpsmeunderstandalotofthings.Ithinkitanimportantwaytolearnaforeignlanguage.LearningEnglishtakestimeandenergy.Ifyouarehardworkingandinterestedinit,youwilldowellinit.IhopeeverystudentcanlearnEnglishwell.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)得分點(diǎn)這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生習(xí)作。=1\*GB3①內(nèi)容完整，介紹時(shí)使用了first、second、third等副詞使短文條理清晰，層次分明。=2\*GB3②用詞豐富，使用了多種句式，作文具有較強(qiáng)的可讀性。=3\*GB3③用詞恰當(dāng)，極少出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。對(duì)于初中學(xué)生來(lái)說，有些句型使用的非常精彩，如：Ithinkitanimportantwaytolearnaforeignlanguage和LearningEnglishtakestimeandenergy.存在問題短文中出現(xiàn)了簡(jiǎn)單錯(cuò)誤。=1\*GB3①此兩處分別應(yīng)為haveaninterestin和developaninterest。=2\*GB3②此處應(yīng)為listento。建議=1\*GB3①可根據(jù)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的具體情況介紹如何學(xué)習(xí)詞匯、語(yǔ)法等內(nèi)容。=2\*GB3②如果是考試作文，字?jǐn)?shù)最好控制在100—120左右。習(xí)作2：ThewayIlearnEnglishIlikeEnglishverymuch.MyEnglishisverygood.Usually,IliketolistentoEnglishsongsverymuch.Ilearnedmanywordsby=3\*GB3③rememberingthewordsofsongs.Thiscanhelpmepracticelistening,too.Grammarisveryimportant.Ialwaystrymybesttorememberallthegrammarrulesafterclass.ThenIwillmakesomesentencesaccordingtothegrammar.④Usegrammarhelpsmedowellinexams.Formostofthestudents,speakingisaproblem.Inclass，Iworkwithmypartnerstopracticethedialoguesinthetextbook.Afterclass,Ioftenreadafterthetapeandtrytorememberallthesentences.WhenIspeakwithmyclassmatesorforeignteacher,thesesentencesareveryuseful.Englishitselfisnotdifficult,themostimportantforastudentistobeconfident.Ithinkeveryonecanlearnitwellifyoutryhard.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)得分點(diǎn)這是一篇中檔習(xí)作。=1\*GB3①基本按照題目要求，簡(jiǎn)單介紹了自己在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)幾個(gè)方面的做法。=2\*GB3②語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較少。=3\*GB3③結(jié)尾句很好。失分點(diǎn)=1\*GB3①使用的句型單一、簡(jiǎn)單。=2\*GB3②條理性不強(qiáng)。段落關(guān)系聯(lián)系不緊密。=3\*GB3③語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤：此處選詞不當(dāng)，根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容判斷，此處用memorize的動(dòng)名詞形式memorizing更為恰當(dāng)。④語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)于動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)掌握不熟練，此處應(yīng)為Using?！就卣咕毠P】1、關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)，有人認(rèn)為最重要的是學(xué)好語(yǔ)法，有人認(rèn)為最重要的是盡可能多地記住一些單詞和詞組。而你認(rèn)為這兩種觀點(diǎn)都有片面性。以HowtolearnEnglishwell？為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ānepossibleversion:HowtoLearnEnglishWell？SomepeoplethinkthatifwewanttolearnEnglishwellwemustlearnEnglishgrammarwellfirstofall.Othersbelievewecan'tlearnEnglishwellifwedon’tmemorizeasmanyEnglishwordsandphrasesaspossible.Inmyopinion，grammarrules，newwordsandphrasesarebothveryimportant，buttheyarenotenough.Foxexample，someofmyclassmatesarequitegoodatgrammarandhavelearnedbyheartalotofEnglishwordsandphrases，yettheycan'texpressthemselvesinEnglishwhentheymeetforeignfriends.IthinkthebestwaytolearnEnglishwellistolearnanduseEnglishallthetime.Don'tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.We'dbetterdoalotoflistening,speaking,readingandwriting.IfyoucanformthehabitofthinkingandwritinginEnglishallday,youaresuretograspthespiritofEnglishandwillbeabletoreadworksinEnglishwithinashortperiodoftime.OnlyinthiswaycanwelearnEnglishwell.SoIthinkthisisthebestway.2、你準(zhǔn)備參加一個(gè)關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)方法的討論會(huì)。在會(huì)上，你將用英語(yǔ)介紹自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的具體方法，對(duì)待困難的態(tài)度和解決問題的辦法，并號(hào)召其他同學(xué)一起學(xué)好英語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際情況，寫一篇發(fā)言稿。要求：1.語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)句通順、書寫規(guī)范；2.內(nèi)容全面，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)在100個(gè)左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)Onepossibleversion:Hello，everyone!IamgladtotellyouhowIlearnEnglish.Likemostofyou，IaminterestedinEnglish.Whenyouarewillingtodosomething，youwilldoyourbesttomakeit.Motivationisquiteimportant.Formanystudentsaroundme，it’snotsoeasyforthemtomemorizenewwords.Iseldomrepeatthesamesinglewordagainandagain，insteadImemorizenewwordsbyusingthem.WheneverIlearnsomewords，IwilltrytouseitwhenIspeak.Ifinditeasytorememberthingsinthecontext.Thisisalsotruetogrammar.Themostimportantthingistouseit.Rememberthis，youwilldobetter.Ialwayskeepmyselfbusy，Ireadsomepageseveryday.Whilereading，Inotonlylearnlotsofwordsandphrases，butalsolearntheskillsofspeaking.Readinghelpsmeknowmanytopics，soIalwayshavesomethingtosaywhenIhavetotalk.Ofcourse，Ialsohavealotofproblems.ButIneverfeelfrustrated.ProblemsremindmethatIamnotthebestoneandIneedtodomorewithit.WhenIhaveproblems，Iwilltrytosolvethemwiththehelpofadictionaryfirst.Ifthedictionarydoesn’thelp，Iwillaskmyteacherforhelp.So，everybody，beconfidentandhardworking，youwilldowellinEnglish.3、(2007年福州市初中畢業(yè)會(huì)考、高級(jí)中等學(xué)校招生考試)為了交流學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗(yàn)，提高學(xué)習(xí)效率，《新世紀(jì)英文報(bào)》正在舉辦以“Howtobeagoodlearner?”為題的征文比賽。請(qǐng)你踴躍投稿。內(nèi)容提示：要求：1．必須用上所有的內(nèi)容提示，語(yǔ)句通順，書寫規(guī)范；2．詞數(shù)80左右，已給出的句子不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。Onepossibleversion:Howtobeagoodlearner?Asagoodlearner，weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysinlearning．Weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass．Afterclass，wemustgooverthelessonsandfinishourhomeworkontime．Itisgoodtostudyingroupsandhelpeachother．Asastudent，workinghardisimportant.Butdon’tforgettodosportsandkeephealthy．Weshoulddomorereadinginourfreetime，Ifwehaveanyproblems．we’dbetteraskothersforhelp．Ihopeallthesewillbehelpfultous．Unit2Iusedtobeafraidofthedark【佳篇欣賞】AMyLifeHasChangedDearRobby,Ihaven’tseenyouforages.Howareyou?Doyouplaythepianoeverydaynow?Istudyinajuniormiddleschoolnow，Iamalwaysbusywithmylessons.Iusedtoplaythepianoeveryevening,butnowIcan’t.Ihavetodomyhomework.Asyouknow,Iusedtohavelotsofhobbies,butnowIjusthavenotimeforthem.Igaveupcollectingmodelcars,sentawaymydogandstoppedpainting.Iusedtoenjoymyselfwithmyfriendsatweekend,whileIspendmostofmytimedoingmylessonsnow.Mylifehaschangedalot,Ifeelfrustrated.Whataboutthelifeofmiddleschoolstudentsinyourcountry?Ihopeyoucanenjoyyourself.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,JayBMyMotherHasChangedMymotheris42yearsold.Sheisagoodmother.Recently,myfatherandIfoundthatmymotherhaschangedalittle.Sheusedtobeverykindandgentle,smileswerealwaysonherface.Butnowshegetsangryeasilyandseldomsmiles,sheevengetsupsetifIspeaktooloud.Inthepast,shewouldsmileandsay“Itdoesn’tmatter”ifImademistakes.Now,ifIdosomethingwrong,evenitisaminormistake,shewillshoutatmeandwilltellmealotof“Youshould…”Inthenextfewdays,shewilltalkaboutmymistakesangrily.Iamreallyworriedaboutmymother,issheill？Ireallymissmykindandgentlemother.CMyChildhoodIspentmychildhoodinasmallcity.Therewasasmallriverinthesouthofthecity.Myfatherusedtotakemetheretocatchfishonweekends.Whenweweretired,wealwayssleptforawhileunderthebigtree.Atthattime,weekendswereahappytimeforchildren.MylittlefriendsandIusedtoclimbupthetreestoplayevenitwasdangerous.WhenIwasveryyoung,IwasafraidtosleepalonebecauseIusedtobeafraidofthemouse,Ithoughttheywouldbitemeandtakeawaymytoys.Iwasreallyalittlefoolthen.Ihaveahappyandcolorfulchildhood.Itisthebestpartofmymemory.ChangesinMyHometownOverthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,_________________________________________________________習(xí)作1：Overthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,thehouseswerevery=1\*GB3①old.Theriverusedtobeverydirty.Peopleusedtowalkorridebikestowork.Butnowthingsaredifferent.Manypeopleliveintallbuildings.=2\*GB3②Theriverissocleanthatpeoplecanswiminit.Peopletakebusesordrivetheirown=3\*GB3③cartowork.Iamhappytoseethatmyhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)這是以今昔整體對(duì)比方式寫的一篇習(xí)作。得分點(diǎn)（1）完整地將表格提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了表述，基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。=2\*GB3②處這句話擺脫了簡(jiǎn)單的羅列陳述，使短文顯得比較靈活。（2）在內(nèi)容完整的基礎(chǔ)上，結(jié)尾表達(dá)了個(gè)人情感，為短文增色不少。失分點(diǎn)=3\*GB3③此處應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)形式cars。提示=1\*GB3①此處用此除了選用old外，根據(jù)表格提示，舊房子也指房子的狀況不佳，可選用用poor。習(xí)作2：Overthepast10years,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometown.Inthepast,thehousesinmyhometownwereveryold，=1\*GB3①butnowmanypeoplehavemovedintotallbuildings.Thewaterintheriverusedtobeverydirty，butnowtheriverisveryclean.Peopleusedtowalkorridebikestowork，butnowtheygotoworkbybusorbycar.Thelifeofpeopleinmyhometownismuchbetterthanbefore.Bestwishestomyhometown.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)這是以單項(xiàng)對(duì)比的方式寫的一篇習(xí)作。得分點(diǎn)（1）內(nèi)容完整，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，能正確使用本單元目標(biāo)語(yǔ)言。（2）=1\*GB3①處這句話是短文所要描述的變化動(dòng)了起來(lái)，體現(xiàn)了句式多樣化。（3）表達(dá)了個(gè)人對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的感情與祝愿。提示短文中每處對(duì)比都是用了but,選詞單一。可省略一兩處?！就卣咕毠P】1、Jack以前在學(xué)習(xí)上不愿下功夫，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)也不好。在朋友John的幫助下，他的學(xué)習(xí)有了明顯進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇短文。Jack過去經(jīng)常上學(xué)遲到，不認(rèn)真聽課,不認(rèn)真完成作業(yè)……現(xiàn)在在Jack的幫助下，認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)……John關(guān)心Jack，和他談心；幫助他復(fù)習(xí)功課、解決問題要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括表中所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.簡(jiǎn)單表述自己對(duì)這一問題的看Onepossibleversion:JackisastudentatNo.2School.Heliveswithhisunclebecausehisparentsworkinanothercity.Hedoesreallywellinhissubjects.Butheusedtobea“problemstudent”.Hewasalwayslateforschool.Whatwasworse,hedidn’tlistentotheteacherscarefullyinclassandheneverfinishedhishomeworkontime.Histeachersandclassmateswereveryworriedabouthim.John，atopstudentintheclass,decidedtodosomethingtohelphim.HeusedtotalkwithJackeveryafternoonafterschool.HedidhishomeworkatJack’shomesothathecanhelphiswithhisproblemsandhelphimreviewhislessons.Attheendoftheschoolyear，Jackdidbetterintheexams,hemadegreatprogress.Now,withthehelpofJohn，Jackiscarefulabouthislessons,heistryinghisbesttodoitwell.JohnnowisJack’sbestfriend.IthinkJackisreallylucky,hegottwothingstruefriendshipandgoodgrades.2、馬上就要初中畢業(yè)進(jìn)入高中了,你是否還記得豐富多彩的小學(xué)生活，小學(xué)生活與你現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)生活有什么區(qū)別嗎？請(qǐng)以此為主題寫一篇80字左右的短文。_Onepossibleversion:MylifehaschangedsinceIbecameamiddleschoolstudent.WhenIwasinprimaryschool，Iusedtostudyfewersubjects，butnowIhavenine.Iusedtospendsometimeplayinggameswithmylittlefriendsafterschool，butnowIhavetogohomeanddomyhomework.Iusedtoliketests，butnowIfeelstressedout，Idon’tlikethemsomuch.NowIgetupearlyandstayinschoolallday,Iamtiredoftheschoollifenow.3、假如你叫李海,是光明學(xué)校的學(xué)生，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示向你的筆友Tina寫封信,簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校近年來(lái)的變化。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.三年前，學(xué)校只有一座教學(xué)樓、一個(gè)室外操場(chǎng),沒有圖書館；2.現(xiàn)在，學(xué)校有兩座教學(xué)樓、一座圖書館、一座辦公樓。今年新建了室內(nèi)體育館。要求：1.注意書信格式；2.詞數(shù)在100詞左右Onepossibleversion:DearTina，Howisitgoing?Lasttimeyouaskedaboutthechangesinmyschoolinyouletter.Yes，greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschool.Myschoolisanoldschool.Threeyearsago，therewasonlyoneteachingbuildingandoneplayground.Thereusedtobenolibrary.Nowwehavetwoteachingbuildings，alibraryandanofficebuilding.Thisyear，anindoorgymwasbuilt.Nowourschoolisbiggerandmorebeautiful.Alltheteachersandstudentsareveryhappytoworkandstudyhere.Ifyouhaveachancetocome，Iwillshowyouaround.Bestwishes!Yours，LiHaiUnit3Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes【佳篇欣賞】AOurSchoolRulesIstudyinastrictschool,andtherearemanyruleshere.Iagreetosomeofthem,butdisagreetoothers.Wehavetowearuniformseveryday.Idisagreewithit.Thequalityoftheuniformsisbadandtheymakeusfeeluncomfortable.Ithinkstudentsshouldbeallowedtoweartheirownclothes.Wewanttobedifferent.Atourschool,evengirlsarenotallowedtohavelonghair.Thatisreallystrange.Longhairmakesgirlslookmorebeautiful,andinChineseculturegirlsshouldhavelonghair.Ofcourse,therearesomerulesIagreewith.Youngerstudentsarenotallowedtoridebikes.Itisdangerousforthemtoridebikesduringtherushhours.Wearen'tallowedtoeatsnacksatschool.Ithinkitisgoodforus,mostsnacksarebadforourhealth.BMyfamilyRulesMyparentsarestrictwithme.Therearemanyrulesinmyfamily.Letmetellyousomeofthem.IamnotallowtospendtoomuchtimewatchingTVorsurfingtheInternetonschool,andImustgotobedbefore23:00,becauseIhavetodomyhomeworkandgetupearlythenextmorning.Ihavetocleanmyroomeverymorning.Myparentsthinkitisaverygoodhabittodoso.ButIdon’tagreewiththem,becausemyroomisnotalwaysdirty.EvenIdon’tagreewithsomeoftherules,Iwillobeythem.Ithinkmyparentswon’tdoanythingthatisbadforme.CTheRulesofstudents’LabinOurSchoolInthestudents’labatourschool,therearemanyrulesforthestudents.Heresomeimportantones.Wemustkeepquiteifwedon’thavetospeak.Duringtheclass,wemustbecarefultoprotecttheinstrumentsinthelab.Whilepracticing,weshouldwatchcarefullyandtakesomenotes.Wearenotallowedtolitterthegroundwithpaperortakethingsinthelabaway.Afterclass,wemustcleanthelabanddoitupbeforeweleave.Allofthinkthattheserulesarenecessary,theymakeiteasyfortheteachertoteachhere.假如你是某班的班長(zhǎng)，班主任讓你明天早上在班上講一下有關(guān)的班級(jí)管理制度，請(qǐng)按一下要點(diǎn)寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.上學(xué)要穿校服,服裝整潔；2.不遲到早退；3.保持教室清潔；4.課前要有準(zhǔn)備。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)；習(xí)作1：Goodmorning，class！NowIwilltellyouourclassrules.First，wemustwearschooluniformsatschool.Ourclothesshouldbecleanandtidy.Second，wearenotallowedtobelateforclassorleaveschoolbefore=1\*GB3①schoolisover.Third，it’sourdutytokeepourclassroomclean.Sofromtodayon,wewill=2\*GB3②taketurntocleantheclassroomeveryday.Finally，inordertohavegoodresults，it’snecessaryforustogetthingsreadyforclassbeforeitstarts.Alltherulesarenecessaryforeveryoneifyouwanttostayinagoodclassandlearnsomethinghere.Let’sworktogethertomakeourclassagoodone.Thankyou!教師點(diǎn)評(píng)得分點(diǎn)這是一篇較好的學(xué)生習(xí)作。（1）格式正確，稱呼、正文和結(jié)束語(yǔ)齊全，符合發(fā)言稿（講話稿）的要求。（2）條理清晰。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧薴irst,second,third和finally等詞。（3）適當(dāng)增加了一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容（如劃線部分），使短文更流暢連貫。失分點(diǎn)=1\*GB3①處為避免重復(fù)，school改為it。=2\*GB3②處應(yīng)為taketurnsto,意為輪流做某事。習(xí)作2：NowIwilltellyousomeoftherulesofourclass.Everyoneisaskedtowearschooluniformsatschool，andyoumustkeepyourclothescleanandtidy.Wecan’tbelateforschool,andwearenotallowedto=1\*GB3①leaveschoolearlier.Wemustkeepourclassroomcleanandtidy.Weshouldbereadyforclassbeforeitstarts，orourteachersmaybeangry.Ihopeeverybodycanobeyourclassrules.That’sall.Thankyou!教師點(diǎn)評(píng)這是一篇一般的學(xué)生習(xí)作。得分點(diǎn)內(nèi)容提示的要點(diǎn)完整。講清了班級(jí)管理制度。失分點(diǎn)（1）發(fā)言稿個(gè)是不完整，只有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，沒有稱呼。（2）層次不夠清晰。在陳述班級(jí)規(guī)定時(shí)應(yīng)強(qiáng)調(diào)層次，使用表示先后順序的詞，如first,second等。（3）=1\*GB3①處表達(dá)錯(cuò)誤。早退應(yīng)為leaveschoolbeforeitisover。【拓展練筆】1、明天（星期六）全班同學(xué)將去參觀歷史博物館，由你通知全體同學(xué)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容提示：1.早上8：00整在校門口集合乘校車前往歷史博物館；2.參觀要求：認(rèn)真聽講、做記錄等；3.遵守博物館的規(guī)則：不許拍照、大聲喧嘩。要求：80詞左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出）。Onepossibleversion:Fellowstudents,MayIhaveyouattentionplease?Tomorrowourclasswillvisitthehistorymuseum.Wewillmeetattheschoolgateateighto’clock.Thenwewillgotothemuseumbytheschoolbus.Inmuseum,wemustlistentotheguidecarefullyandtakesomenotes.Everybodywillwriteareportafterthevisit.Everyoneshouldobeytherulesofthemuseum.Wearenotallowedtotakephotosinthemuseum.Rememberdon’tspeakloud,orwemaybothertheothervisitors.Rememberthetime.Don’tbelate!Thankyou!2、(2007年潛江市、仙桃市、江漢油田中考英語(yǔ)試題)俗話說：“國(guó)有國(guó)法，家有家規(guī)。”為了使子女身心健康、順利成長(zhǎng)，使家庭成員之間的關(guān)系更融洽、更和諧，每個(gè)家庭都會(huì)有這樣或那樣的家庭規(guī)矩。比如：必須按時(shí)回家，不準(zhǔn)打電子游戲等。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合家庭的實(shí)際情況，根據(jù)下面的提示和要求，以“MyFamilyRules”為題，寫一篇短文。 提示：1、家里有哪些家規(guī)；2、對(duì)家規(guī)的感受；3、對(duì)父母的建議。 要求：1、必須包括提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2、詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右；3、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名和人名。Onepossibleversion:MyFamilyRulesMyparentsareverystrictwithme,andtheyhavemadesomebasicruleswhichImustobey.Firstly,Imustfinishmyhomeworkintime.Secondly,Icannotplaycomputergames,eveninmyfreetimeoronweekends.Thirdly,Ihavetodosomechores,suchasmakingthebedandtidyingmybedroomandsoon.IfIbreakoneofthem,Iwillbepunished.Butthankstotheserules,Icanliveahealthyandregularlife.Ithinkthesecondruleisunfairtome.IhopesometimesIcouldbeallowedtoplaycomputergamesforawhile,itwillmakemerelaxed.3、(江蘇省徐州市中考題)假如昨天你們班以“ShallWeKeepAnimalsinZoos?”為開展了一次英語(yǔ)討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的報(bào)道，介紹討論會(huì)的大概情況，第一句已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。結(jié)果20人認(rèn)為應(yīng)該把動(dòng)物養(yǎng)在動(dòng)物園里30人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該把動(dòng)物養(yǎng)在動(dòng)物園里理由●人們可以在動(dòng)物園里看到很多種類的動(dòng)物?！駝?dòng)物們?cè)趧?dòng)物園里可以得到很好的照顧?！駝?dòng)物們被關(guān)在籠子里，無(wú)法自由活動(dòng)?！駝?dòng)物喜歡生活在自然環(huán)境中。Onepossibleversion:Yesterdaywehadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldkeepanimalsinzoos.Twentyofusthoughtthatanimalsshouldbekeptinzoos.Thenwecanseedifferentkindsofanimalsthereandalltheanimalswillbetakengoodcareof.Thirtystudentshadadifferentopinion.Theythoughtthatanimalsshouldn’tbekeptinzoos，becauseanimalscomefromthenatureandtheylovetoliveinanaturalenvironment.Iftheyarekeptinthecages,theycan’tmovethereandthere.Keepinganimalsincagesisreallybadforthem.Unit4Whatwouldyoudo?【佳篇欣賞】AIfIHadAMillionYuanWhatwouldyoudoifyouhadamillionyuan?Manypeoplewouldbuyabighouse.Asforme,ifIhadsomuchmoney,Iwouldnottakeallthemoney.IwouldgivehalfofittothepoorschoolsinthewestpartofChina.Ialwayshearthatmanychildrentherecan’taffordtogotoschool.Iwanttohelpthem.Then,IwouldgivesomemoneytotheGreenPeacetohelpprotecttheenvironment.Iwouldalsotravelallovertheworld,anditmustbeexciting.Iwouldsavetherestofthemoneyformyeducation,becauseinthiswaymyparentsdon’thavetoworktoohard.Ofcourse,ifIworkveryhard,Ithinkmydreamwillcometrue.BDearTina,IamhappytohearthatyouwilltakepartintheEnglishspeechcontest.Youtoldthatyoufeltshyandnervous.HereIhavesomeadviceforyou.First,youshouldreadyourspeechmanytimesandmemorizeitbeforethecontest.Thismaymakeyoufeelconfident.IfIwereyou,Iwouldprintthespeechonasmallpieceofpaper.Itmaybeusefulifyouforgetthewords.Second,takeadeepbreathbeforeyoustartspeaking,anditwillmakeyoucalmdown.Remember,takethelistenersasyoufriends,soyouwon’tfeelshy.Ihopemyadviceworkonyou.Iwishyousuccess.Goodluck.Yours,LiuYingCIfIHadABigGardenIliveonthefifthfloor,butIreallywanttohaveagarden.IfIhadabiggarden,Iwouldmakegooduseofit.First,Iwouldplantmanyflowers.Iwouldtrymybesttolookafterthem.Whenfestivalsorbirthdayscome,Iwouldsendmyflowerstomyparents,myteachersandmyfriends.Theycanbevaluablegifts.Second,Iwouldplantsomevegetables.ItissafertoeatthevegetablesIplantbymyself.ThelastthingIwanttodointhegardenistokeeparabbitinthegarden,andIwouldfeedthemwiththevegetables.HowwonderfulitwouldbeifIhadabiggarden.【原創(chuàng)習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】學(xué)校的?？_展了一次“如果有煩惱，你向誰(shuí)訴說”的學(xué)生問卷調(diào)查，要求寫清自己的想法和理由。假設(shè)你參加了這次問卷調(diào)查，請(qǐng)以此為題，寫一篇80字左右的短文。習(xí)作1：IfIhadsometrouble，Iwouldletmyparentsknow.Becausetheyhavealotofexperienceaboutlife，theymayknowhowtosolve=1\*GB3①myproblemand=2\*GB3②whatshouldIdo.Myparentslovemebestintheworld，so=3\*GB3③Ibelievethem.AnotherreasonisthatIandmyparentsaregoodfriends，Idon’tfeelshytotellthemyoungpeople’sproblems.Bytheway，ifItoldmyclassmates，theymaylaughatme.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)這是一篇較好的學(xué)生作文。得分點(diǎn)（1）按照要求寫清了自己的想法和理由。（2）內(nèi)容連貫，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較少。失分點(diǎn)=1\*GB3①此處應(yīng)使用problem的復(fù)數(shù)形式；=2\*GB3②此處語(yǔ)序不正確，應(yīng)為陳述句語(yǔ)序whatIshoulddo；=3\*GB3③根據(jù)上下文判斷，此處是我信任他們,所以最好用Ibelieveinthem.習(xí)作2：Teenagersusuallyhavesome=1\*GB3①troubles，andweneedtotellsomeone.IfIhadsometrouble,Iwouldgotomyclassmatesorfriends.Becauseweareasoldaseachother，itiseasyformetotalkandcommunicatewiththem,andwecanunderstandeachotherveryeasily.Weteenagershaveourwayofliving，andwesolveourproblemsinourownway.IfItoldmytroubletothem，theywouldcomeupwithbetterideastohelpme.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)這是一篇優(yōu)秀的學(xué)生習(xí)作。得分點(diǎn)（1）寫清了自己想法，理由陳述具體明確。（2）語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容連貫。失分點(diǎn)=1\*GB3①此處trouble當(dāng)“煩惱”講是不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)為troubles?！就卣咕毠P】1、吸煙有害健康。然而，有些中學(xué)生卻認(rèn)為吸煙是件很酷的事，如果你的身邊有同學(xué)吸煙，你該怎么辦？請(qǐng)按提示寫一篇短文，題目自擬。內(nèi)容提示：1.吸煙不僅危害自身健康，也損害周圍人的健康；2.有些青少年因無(wú)足夠的錢來(lái)買香煙而引致偷竊犯罪；3.應(yīng)該馬上停止吸煙，多進(jìn)行體育活動(dòng)。要求：1.不要逐字翻譯內(nèi)容提示；2.詞數(shù)不少于100詞。Onepossibleversion:StopSmokingNowadays,someboystudentssmoke,andtheythinkitcooltodothat.ButIdon’tthinkso.Iftheboysaroundmesmoked,Iwoulddosomethingtostopthemfromsmoking.First,Iwouldtellthemthatsmokingisbadforhealthinmanyways.AsfarasIknow,smokingleadstocancerandbadmemory.It’snotonlyharmfultothesmokersbutalsotothepeoplearoundthem.Second,Iwouldtellthemthatsomestudentsstolebecausetheydidn’thavemoneytobuycigarettes.Stepbystep,thebrokethelaw,andwerepunished.Ofcourse,Iwouldalsogivethemsomeadvicetohelpthemstopsmoking.Ithinktheyshouldgiveupsmokingatonce,andtheyshoulddomoreexerciseinstead.Ifthestudentsaroundmesmoked,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemgiveupsmoking.2、網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)成為現(xiàn)代生活中十分重要的一個(gè)方面，它在為我們帶來(lái)便利的同時(shí)也帶來(lái)了很多危害?，F(xiàn)在，全國(guó)有很多中學(xué)生沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)，不能自拔，嚴(yán)重影響了他們的身心健康。假設(shè)你們學(xué)校開展“網(wǎng)友知心一幫一”的活動(dòng)，你要幫助一名沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)的中學(xué)生李兵戒除網(wǎng)癮。這是你第一次給他發(fā)郵件，請(qǐng)你告訴他長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)、沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)的危害，并且告訴他如果你是他你會(huì)怎么辦。你的名字叫王寧。內(nèi)容提示：1.長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)對(duì)眼睛、大腦和心臟有著嚴(yán)重的危害；2.長(zhǎng)時(shí)間上網(wǎng)不僅浪費(fèi)時(shí)間而且極容易耽誤學(xué)業(yè)；3.請(qǐng)父母幫助控制上網(wǎng)時(shí)間；經(jīng)常和朋友們一起進(jìn)行體育鍛煉等。要求：不要逐字翻譯內(nèi)容提示，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。Onepossibleversion:DearLiBing，Howareyou？MynameisWangNing.It’sthefirsttimeIwritetoyou.ItoldthatyoulovesurfingInternetverymuchandalwaysspendtoomuchtimeontheInternet.Ilikethenetwork,butIneverspendtoomuchtimedoingthat.AsfarasIknow,toouryoungstudents,spendingtoomuchtimesurfingtheInternetisreallybadforeyes,brainandheart.IfIwereyou,Iwouldn’tdolikethat,becauseit’snotonlybadforhealthbutalsobadforstudy.Asastudent,weshouldhaveenoughtimetostudyandrest.SosurfingtheInternetissometimeswastingtimetous.Iknowthatisprettydifficulttogiveupdoingthethingyoulike.IfIwereyou,IwouldaskmyparentstohelpcontrolthetimeItake.AndIthinkitagoodideatospendsometimedoingsportsorchattingwithfriends.ItmayhelpyouforgettheInternetforawhile.Wishyouallthebest!Yours,WangNing3、假如你的同學(xué)Lucy是獨(dú)生女，父母對(duì)她的期望很高，只關(guān)心他的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)，不讓她看電視、上網(wǎng)，她覺得有很多煩惱，卻不知向誰(shuí)訴說。請(qǐng)你給她寫封郵件，幫幫她吧。要求：1.注意書信格式；2.不要逐字翻譯內(nèi)容提示。Onepossibleversion:DearLucy,Howareyou?Iamsorrytohearthatyouhavesometrouble.Myparentsusedtobeverystrictwithme.IamnotallowedtowatchTVorsurftheInternet.Ifeltveryunhappy,becauseIthoughtthatIwasnolongerachildandteenagersshouldbeallowedtodothingstheylikeinsteadofstudyingallthetime.ThenItalkedwiththem.IsaidIshouldbegivenmoreopportunitiestodevelopmyself，andIpromisedthatthethingsIdowouldn’tgetinthewayofmyschoolwork.Finally,theyagreedwithme,andofcourseIkeptmyword.Now,IwouldtalkwithmyparentswheneverIhavesometrouble,andtheyarealwayshelpful.SoIthinkyourproblemisthatyouandyourparentsshouldunderstandeachothermore.IfIwereyou,Iwouldtalktoth