“契訶夫法則”看讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)隱藏線(xiàn)索的利用-周萍

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something契訶夫（Chekhov），19世紀(jì)末俄國(guó)偉大的批判現(xiàn)實(shí)主義作家，情趣雋永、文筆犀利的幽默諷刺大師，短篇小說(shuō)之王，著名戲劇作家。他創(chuàng)作態(tài)度嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，重視文學(xué)的寫(xiě)生，筆下一草一木無(wú)不栩栩如生，刻畫(huà)心理亦往往入木三分，是世界短篇小說(shuō)巔峰之一，并成為短篇小說(shuō)的代名詞。

Chekhov1860-1904Chekhov’s

Law契訶夫法則是一種文學(xué)技巧，在故事早期出現(xiàn)的某一元素，直至最后才顯現(xiàn)出它的重要性。

換言之，在故事開(kāi)頭出現(xiàn)過(guò)的物品一定要在后面的故事情節(jié)中用到，否則，它就不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)?！捌踉X夫法則”對(duì)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的啟示1.故事前面隱藏的線(xiàn)索為故事后續(xù)的發(fā)展指明了方向；2.在閱讀故事時(shí)應(yīng)重視隱藏的線(xiàn)索；3.隱藏的線(xiàn)索在后續(xù)的故事發(fā)展中應(yīng)有所交代。課例（讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)講評(píng)課）CookieThief

Itwaslateandrainingheavilyonenight.Ayoungwomanwaswaitingforherflightatanairport.ShewasleavingforLondonbecauseshegotanewjobthere.ItwassaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman—polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.Shewasexcitedaswellasalittlenervousabouthernewlife.Withseverallonghoursbeforeherflight,thewoman

huntedforabookintheairportshops,boughtapacketofcookiesandfoundaplacetosit.Shetookoutabookandstartedtoread.Althoughshewasabsorbedinherbook,shehappenedtoseethatthemansittingbesideher,asboldashecouldbe,grabbedacookieortwofromthebaginbetweenthem.Educatedtobewell-mannered,shetriedtoignoreittoavoidanargument.Buttoshowthatshewastheowner,shestartedtotakecookiesfromthatbagtoo.Unfortunately,themandidn’tgetthathint（暗示）,sincehedidn’tstopgrabbingthecookies.“Howannoying!”Shethought.Asthegreedycookiethiefkepteating,thewomanmunched(用力咀嚼)somecookiesandwatchedtheclock.Shewasgettingangrierastheminuteswentby,thinking,“IfIweren'tsonice,Iwouldblackenhiseyes.”Witheachcookieshetook,hetookone,too;whenonlyonewasleft,shewonderedwhathewoulddo.Withasmileonhisface,andanervouslaugh,hetookthelastcookieandbrokeitinhalf.Heofferedherahalf,andatetheother.Shegrabbeditfromhim,glaredathimandthought,“Oh,brother.Thisguyhassomenerveandheissorude!Whyhedidn'tevenshowanygratefulness?”Shehadneverknownwhenshehadbeensoangry,andsighedinreliefwhenherflightwascalled.Shegatheredherbelongingsandheadedtothegatequickly,refusingtolookbackattherudethief.Sheboardedtheplane,sankinherseat,andlookedforherbook,whichwasalmostcomplete.1.huntforabook:searchforabook2.bold-bolder-boldest:大膽的，敢于冒險(xiǎn)的3.grabvt/vi-bb-抓住，攫取grabsth(fromsb/sth):seizegrabholdofme/myarms：抓住我/我的胳膊grabatsth：抓住，利用（機(jī)會(huì)）4.getthathint=takea/thehint:領(lǐng)會(huì)某人的暗示5.munch/m?nt?/~(on/at)sth大聲咀嚼6.blackenhiseyes：打腫他的眼睛blackensb’sname/reputation:玷污某人的名聲5.break/cut/tearsthinhalf:把某物分成/切成/撕成兩半6.sighinrelief：letoutasighofrelief=breatheinrelief7.headtothegate:走向登機(jī)口=beheaded

〔朝…〕前進(jìn)，〔向…〕去:

[+for/towards/backetc]TheshipwasheadingforCuba.船正駛向古巴。

It'sabouttimewewereheadinghome.我們?cè)撈鹕砘丶伊恕?/p>

headnorth/southetcWeheadedsouthtowardsthecapital.我們朝南向首都進(jìn)發(fā)。

Whereareyouguysheaded?你們要去哪兒？8.sinkinherseat[I]倒下;頹然坐下〔尤因非常疲倦或虛弱〕:

[+into/to/down/backetc]Sheletoutagroanandsankintoachair.她呻吟了一聲，頹然倒進(jìn)椅子里。

gentleman；thewoman;apacketofcookies;theman;cookiethief;anervouslaugh;ate;thought;rude;theplanegentleman;thewoman;theman;cookiethiefapacketofcookie;anervouslaugh;theplaneate;thoughtrudeWhichunderlinedwordswillyouchoose?Why?Dividetheunderlinedwordsinto4groups:TheunderlinedwordsmostlikelytobeusedthewomanthemancookiethiefapacketofcookiestheplaneimportantobjectmaincharactersimportantnameplacewherethestorywouldgoonReadthestoryagainandfind

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hiddencluesinit.Polishyourwriting?It’ssaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman-polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.?Thewomanthoughtthatmanwasacookiethiefandshewasangrywithhim.Thinking：Whenandwherewouldshemeethernewboss?Howwouldshemeethim?Infact,themanwasnotacookiethiefandthewomanmadeamistake.Thatwasamisunderstanding.Thinking：Howwouldthestorygoontobringittolight?Reverse反轉(zhuǎn)ThehiddencluesinthegivenpartShewouldmeethernewboss.Shewouldfindthatnotthemanbutherselfwasacookiethief.Trendsinthestory’sdevelopmentSurprisingly,shefoundthemansittingjustbehindher.Whatmadetheatmospheremoredelicatewasthatthemanapparentlyrecognizedher.Herfacewasmottledredandwhite

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embarrassmentandshemadeanapologytohim.Hegrinnedamiablyather,saying,“I’mgladyoulikeit.”Aftertheplanearrived,thewomanhurriedtoseehernewboss.Whatacoincidence!Hewastheverygentleman.delicate/?delik?t/adj.易碎的，脆弱的，纖細(xì)的，精美的，微妙的，熟練的mottled/?m?tld/adj.斑駁的，雜色的grinatsb-nn-露齒而笑，咧著嘴笑amiablyadv.amiable/?eimi?bl/adj.和藹可親的hasty/?heisti/匆忙的，草率的indulge/in?d?ld?/v~insth;~yourselfwithsth沉湎，沉迷，沉溺于enormous/i?n??m?s/巨大的dumbfounded/d?m?faundid/驚呆了的senseherembarrassmentthepreviouslyassumed“cookiethief”AsampleAsshereachedintoherbaggage,shegaspedwithsurprise.Shefoundapacketofcookieslyinginherhandbag.Ithadbeenonlyafewsecondsbeforesherealizedthatsheherselfwastherealcookiethief.Feelingextremelyashamed,thewomancoveredhermouthwithherhands.Howshewishedthatshehadn'teatentheman'scookiessocarelessly.Shelookedaroundtomakesurethatnobodynoticedherunusualbehaviors.gasp/g?sp/~atsth喘氣

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It’ssaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman-polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.?Thewomanthoughtthatmanwasacookiethiefandshewasangrywithhim.Thinking：Whenandwherewouldshemeethernewboss?Howwouldshemeethim?Infact,themanwasnotacookiethiefandthewomanmadeamistake.Thatwasamisunderstanding.Thinking：Howwouldthestorygoontobringittolight?Reverse反轉(zhuǎn)ThehiddencluesinthegivenpartShewouldmeethernewboss.Shewouldfindthatnotthemanbutherselfwasacookiethief.Trendsinthestory’sdevelopmentParagraph1 Asshereached

inherbaggage,shegasped(喘氣)withsurprise.________________________________________________________Para2：Withseverallonghoursbeforeherflight,thewomanhuntedforabookintheairportshops,boughtapacketofcookiesandfoundaplacetosit.Shetookoutabookandstartedtoread.

NOTcookiesShewouldfindthatthemanwasnotacookiethiefbutherself.Shewouldfeelguiltyandwantedtoapologizetotheman.ThehiddencluesinthegivensentencesParagraph2Surprisingly,she

foundthemansittingjustbehindher.___________________________________________ItwassaidthathernewbosswasatypicalEnglishgentleman—polite,modest,humorousandconsiderate.ThehiddencluesinthegivensentencesSheknewthatthemanwashernewbossbyaccident.Sheapologizedtotheman.Howtodescribethewoman’sfeeling（anger）

#…triedtoignoreittoavoidanargument.#“Howannoying!”Shethought.#…munchedsomecookiesandwatchedtheclock.#…thinking,“IfIweren’tsonice,Iwouldblackenhiseyes.”#Shegrabbeditfromhim,glaredathimandthought,”O(jiān)h,brother…Whyhedidn’tevenshowanygratefulness?”#Shehadneverknownwhenshehadbeensoangry,andsighedinreliefwhen…#…andheadedtothegatequickly,refusingtolookbackattherudethief.

actionandbodylanguagefacialexpressionssubjunctivemood(虛擬語(yǔ)氣)---（wish，guilt，regret）exclamatorysentences(感嘆句)andquestionsPolishyourwritingAsample

Asshereachedintoherbaggage,shegaspedwithsurprise.Shefoundapacketofcookieslyinginherhandbag.Ithadbeenonlyafewsecondsbeforesherealizedthatsheherselfwastherealcookiethief.Feelingextremelyashamed,thewomancoveredhermouthwithherhands.Howshewishedthatshehadn'teatentheman'scookiessocarelessly.Shelookedaroundtomakesurethatnobodynoticedherunusualbe