讀后續(xù)寫個人成長類Aoneyearlongtrip講義高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

重慶市第八中學(xué)2024屆高考適應(yīng)性月考卷(二)英語讀后續(xù)寫題目:閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Hermouth

openinbothwonderandhorror,Miastaresatthebushcricketthathaslanded

infrontofheronthepicnictable.Thegirliscampingwithherparentsnear

FishRiverCanyoninNamibia,in

southwestAfrica.DuringthefirstfewmonthsofayearlongtripthroughAfrica,

AsiaandtheMiddleEast,Miaisseeingtheworldwithherparents.Itisa

family'sjourneytoseetheworldbeforeit'stoolatethough.米婭驚訝又恐怖地張大嘴巴，凝視著落在她面前野餐桌上的叢林蟋蟀。這個女孩和她的父母在非洲西南部納米比亞的菲什河峽谷附近露營。在為期一年的非洲、亞洲和中東之旅的頭幾個月，Mia和她的父母一起看世界。這是一個家庭的旅程，去看看世界，但為時已晚。Farfrom

theirhomeinQuebec,thefamilies’experiences,brimmingwithcolour,shape,

touchandsmell,areespeciallyimportanttothem.Becauseunlesssciencemakes

abreakthroughsoon,thelittledaughterMiawillbeeblind,likelyin

adulthood.Shehasbeendiagnosedwithadiseasethathasnoeffective

treatmentasitgraduallyrobsherofsight.遠離魁北克的家，這些家庭的經(jīng)歷，充滿了色彩、形狀、觸覺和氣味，對他們來說尤其重要。因為除非科學(xué)很快取得突破，否則小女兒米婭很可能在成年后失明。她被診斷出患有一種沒有有效治療方法的疾病，因為這種疾病逐漸使她失明。ForMia's

parents,momEdithanddadSebastien,thediagnosecameafterafouryear

searchforthereasontheirdaughtercouldn'tseeatnight.ThenMia,banged

intofurniturethathermomanddad

couldmakeoutoncetheireyesadjustedtothedark.對于Mia的父母，母親Edith和父親Sebastien來說，診斷是在四年來尋找女兒晚上看不見的原因后做出的。然后米婭撞上了家具，她的父母一旦眼睛適應(yīng)黑暗就能辨認(rèn)出來。In2013,when

Miawasthree,thefamilybeganafrustratingseriesofvisitstodoctors,none

ofwhomhadananswerforherlackofnightvision.In2015,asalastresort,

apediatricophthalmologist(兒童眼科醫(yī)生)enrolledthefamilyinaresearch

projectinwhichtheirentiregenewasmappedout.RP,thenameofthedisease

whichhauntedthe

poorgirl,affectedthetissueatthebackoftheeyethat

interpretedimagesinbothblackandwhite,andcolour.Asthedisease

progresses,thecellsinthemiddle,usedforseeingincolourandforeveryday

activitieslikereadingandwriting,dieoff,too.Theparentswerecalledinto

thedoctor'soffice,wherethespecialistgaveittothemstraight:“Sofar,no

cure.”2013年，米婭三歲時，一家人開始了一系列令人沮喪的就診，但沒有一個醫(yī)生能回答她夜視能力不足的問題。2015年，作為最后的手段，一位兒科眼科醫(yī)生(兒童眼科醫(yī)生)讓這個家庭參與了一個研究項目，在這個項目中，他們的整個基因都被繪制出來了。RP，這個困擾著這個可憐女孩的疾病的名字，影響了眼睛后部的組織，這些組織可以解釋黑白和彩色圖像。隨著疾病的發(fā)展，中間用于觀察顏色和日?；顒樱ㄈ玳喿x和寫作）的細胞也會死亡。父母被叫到醫(yī)生辦公室，醫(yī)生直截了當(dāng)?shù)馗嬖V他們：“到目前為止，還沒有治愈的方法?！弊⒁猓?.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Miawaiting

athome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.

Andsothe

ideaofayearlongtripwasborn.文本分析：故事大意：主人公Mia在很小的時候確診了一場大病—她會隨著年歲的增長而慢慢失去視力，直到完全失明。而Mia的父母在無數(shù)次聽到醫(yī)生說“治不了”之后，打算帶女兒出去看看外面的世界，讓女兒能夠在失明之前最后用雙眼捕捉到這個世界的美麗色彩。主旨大意：Mia最后是會通過這樣子的旅途領(lǐng)悟出人生新的哲理：生活的色彩可能會在某一個瞬間消失，瞬間蕩為黑暗，但曾經(jīng)某一刻在心中閃耀過的色彩，能夠一直讓她走完接下來的一生。

所以這樣子繞回來，雖然這篇續(xù)寫的整體基調(diào)是很“悲劇”的，但最后反映出來的主旨仍然是指向“正面”和“積極”的，因此這篇文章在主旨層面上仍然算是一篇很不錯的模擬題。范文:Miawaitingathome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.Awashwithemotion,Edithscootedintothebathroom,criedgasping,heavingsobs.Severalminuteslater,shesplashedcoldwateronherfacetoposeherself.Sebastienwaitingoutside,eyesdrooped,breathedoutseveralwordshoarsely:“Weshallletthekidknow.”Duringdinner,Edithmanagedasmileandbrokethenews,"Sweetie,youmaygoblindinadulthood.”Thecoupleheldtheirbreath."Oh,that'snotfun,"Miasaid.“ButI'llfindthesolution.”Laterthatweek,thecouplewatchedtheyoungsoul,unprompted,tofeelherwayaroundthehousewitheyesclosedtoseewhatitwasliketonavigatewithoutsight,upthestairsanddown,throughthekitchenandlivingroom,memorizingshapeswithherfingertips.Seeingit,thecouplemadeadecision.Andsotheideaofayearlongtripwasborn.Afteranelaboratepreparation,thewholefamilysetout.ImprintingmemoriesbyhorsebackridingacrossthebrightgreensteppesofMongolia,kayakingontheazureseaoffCambodia,campingunderthesoaringbrickredpeaksofNamibiaandhotairballooningoverthebrown,lunarlikelandscapeinTurkey,EdithandSebastienlettheworldunveilitself.Eachday,EdithandSebastienwatchedtheirkidchange,physicallyandemotionally.Miagrewtallerand,onthecuspofadolescence,neededmoreindependence.Besides,shebecamemoreconfidentandoutgoing,unafraidtoengagewithstrangers.Thefamilyitselfgrewmoretightknitandprotectiveofeachother,whichhelpedwhentheyfacedsituationsthatweredifficulttoexplain.下水文：Miawaitingathome,thebadlystrickenparentsstumbledback.Edithranintothebathroomexcitedly,cryingheavilyandsobbing.Afewminuteslater,shepouredcoldwateronherfacetocalmherselfdown.Sebastienwaitedoutside,hiseyeslowered,andhehoarselyutteredafewwords:"We'llletthechildrenknow."Atdinner,Edithreluctantlysmiledandrevealedthenews:"Dear,youmaybeeblindasanadult."Thecoupleheldtheirbreath.Oh,it'snotfun,"Miasaid.ButIwillfindasolution.Laterthatweek,thecouplespontaneouslywatchedastheyoungsoulcloseditseyesandgropedaroundthehousetoseewhatitfeltliketonavigatewithoutseeing.Theywentupanddownthestairs,walkedthroughthekitchenandlivingroom,andrememberedtheshapewiththeirfingertips.Seeingthisscene,thecouplemadeadecision.Andsotheideaofayearlongtripwasborn.Aftercarefulpreparation,thewholefamilysetoff.EdithandSebastianrodeacrossthebrightgreenprairieofMon