讀后續(xù)寫飛機落地課件高三英語一輪復習

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Iamadoctorandoftenattendimportantacademicconferencesaroundtheworld,butI'mscaredtoflyinanairplane.

Asisknowntoall,travelingonanairplanecanbeaverytiringtaskeveninthebestofcircumstances.

Especiallywhentheplanearrivesabovethedestinationandencounterssomespecialreasonsthatpreventitfromlandingsafely,thefeeling

cannotbedescribedinwords.

Inthissituation,ifyouseeapatientwithDownsyndrome(唐氏綜合征)introuble,areyouwillingtohelphim?Lastweek,ItookanearlyflighttoParis,anditwasduringthisflightthatIexperiencedalifelongandtouchingexperience.Finally,thecrewsoughtprofessionalassistancefromthepassengers.AlthoughIamadoctor,Iwashelplessinthatsituation.Subsequently,Murphy,42—whohadbeenateacherforabout20years—glancedattheboy,stoodupandquicklyheadedtothebackoftheplane.Shefoundtheboyinthepassagebetweenrowsofseats,lyingonhisbelly.Soshealsolaydownonherstomachtofacehim.Shebeganchattingcalmlywithhim,askinghisname,hisfavoritebooksandhisfavoritecharacters.Asshehelpedhimcleanup,

sherepeatedlytoldhimeverythingwouldbeokayandthatthey'dgetthroughittogether.當她幫他打掃衛(wèi)生時，她反復告訴他一切都會好起來的，他們會一起度過難關的。Thankstohertimelyassistance,theboyslowlycalmeddown.Theplanewasfinallyabletolandsafelyontheground.多虧了她的及時幫助，男孩慢慢平靜下來。飛機終于能夠安全降落在地面上。Aftertheplanelandedsafely,

noonewasimpatienttostepoffit.

飛機安全降落后，沒有人迫不及待地下車。Instead,calmedpassengers—obviouslyfollowingMurphy’samazingexample—allowedtheboyandhisfamilytodepartfirst,smilingatthemastheypassed.

相反，冷靜下來的乘客——顯然是效仿Murphy的良好榜樣——允許男孩和他的家人先離開，在他們經過時對他們微笑。Hisparentssaidtheycouldn’tthankMurphyenoughforwhatshehaddone,andIletherknowIhadeventakennotesonherexpertwayofhavingthesituationhandled.他的父母說，他們非常感謝Murphy所做的一切，我也讓她知道，我甚至記下了她處理這種情況的專業(yè)方法。Isaid,“Youmusthavedealtwithsuchkindofcasebefore,haven'tyou?Yourgooddeeds

havemadeanimpressiononus.Iwantto

expressmydeepgratitudetoyou.

”我說：“你以前一定處理過這樣的案件，不是嗎？你的善舉給我們留下了深刻的印象。我想對你深表感謝。”閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmy

dad

wantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.

UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthe

farmhouse

listeningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdownthe

river

nearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTina

feed

thechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethe

sheep

outtograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothe

track

sothatyoudon’t

getlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutof

sight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(編織的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.注意：1.

所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.

至少使用5個短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.

續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.____________________________

Paragraph2:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

—————————————————————————前文提要:父親帶兒子去――“西部荒野”，喂雞牧羊，體驗農場生活；見父親和叔叔騎馬很是瀟灑，兒子心生向往，于是親身上馬體驗……Who---UnclePaul,Dad,IWhen---OnesummerdayWhere---OnthefarmWhat---MydadtreatedmeavacationonUnclePaul’sfarm.

續(xù)寫線索:第一段所給首句:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉折點，可從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來的結果入手擴展開去，可以寫馬受到驚嚇狂奔而去，也可以寫人的反應，無論從何角度拓展，需注意與續(xù)寫第二段首句呼應。第二段所給首句:Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.這一句呼應前文UnclePaul的囑托——不要誤了晚飯，可從如何尋路返回入手去寫續(xù)文。續(xù)寫詞匯已給提示詞匯:

dad，UnclePaul，farmhouse，river，feed，，track，getlost，sight話題激活詞匯:情感:panic，relief,

nervous，worried動作:

run，cry，thinktooneself環(huán)境:scenery，mountain，range，valley，river,

lake，forest，sunset,

wind句子翻譯及潤色1.

它毛茸茸的，有一身漂亮的棕色頭發(fā)Itwasfurryandithadbrownhair.

(With結構替換)Itwasfurry

withacoatofgorgeousbrownhair.2.

它用它的一對紅眼睛看著我，然后開始在前面疾馳Itlookedatmewithitsredeyes,andtherunquickly.

(句式詞匯升級）Afterlookingupatmewithitspairofredbulbs,itbeganto

scurry

ahead.

3.

受到驚嚇，馬突然跑了起來，跑的如此之快，以至于我什么也看不見只能聽見風在耳邊呼嘯。Frightenedbytherabbit,

thehorsebegantorace.Itransofastthat

hardlycouldI

seeanythingbutheardthewind.4.

烏云似乎在天空聚集。Anddarkcloudsseemedto

begathering

inthesky.

5.

我嚇壞了，盯著爸爸，試圖從他那里尋求解決問題的辦法。Iamscared,andIstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.Frightened,IstaredatDad,tryingtoseekasolutionforthetroublefromhim.6.時間一點點過去，夜幕開始降臨，天空開始出現(xiàn)一閃閃的星星，同情地看著我們。Astimewentby,thenightbegantofallandthestarsappearedinthesky,

twinklingtheireyeatuswithsympathy.范文賞析Possibleversion1Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.“Whatalovelyrabbit!”Ishouted

witheyesglitteringwithterrificexcitement.ItwasquitedifferentfromthoseIsawinourcity,

thusimmediatelystimulatingmyinterest.

Dad

wasalsostunnedbythisspecialrabbit,

gawkingatitmotionlessly.“Dad,let’scatchitasourpet!”Isuggested,

unexpectedlyreceivinghispromptagreement.

Entirelyforgettingwhat

UnclePaul

hadtoldus,wechasedafterthatprettyrabbit,

franticwithrapture.Unfortunately,

socleverandswiftwasitthat

itdisappearedintheforestbeforelong.

Notuntilthendidwerealizethat

thelastrayoftwilightwasquicklydisappearingamongthenumeroustrees

andwecouldn’tfindour

track

atall!Wedid

getlost.

Paragraph2

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

Thebone-chillingwindhowledfiercelylikeawolf,makingthedarknessevenmoresuffocating.

“Dad,whatcanwedo?”I

threwmyarmsaroundhimtightly,quiveringandseizedbystarkhorror.“Allisgoingwell!”Dadansweredinagentlevoice,

calmandmollified.Wewanderedinthescaryforestanddidn’tknowwhathorriblethingswouldhappentous,

hopingtofindthewayback.Suddenly,weheardthesoundofwaterrollingdownthe

river.Wewereoverthemoonanddecidedtofollowtheriver.Afterawhile,weheardthefamiliarsoundof

sheep

andthencaught

sight

ofthe

farmhouse.Thefamilywerewaitingforusinthedistance.Seeingthis,aradiantsmilelitupbothofourfaces.評點：光線的消退暗示了時間的流逝和黑夜的到來，推動了故事情節(jié)的發(fā)展，與下文的gettingdark銜接；bone-chilling,scary,horrible詞的運用以及比喻修辭的運用，渲染了陰森恐怖的氣氛，也烘托了主人公內心的害怕、恐懼；同時，河流和羊的聲音也為故事的結局提供了線索和出路，給故事畫上了圓滿的句號。Possibleversion

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Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorsewassoafraidthatitbeganrunningferociously.

Icouldfeeltheairhittingmyfaceheavilyandhearmy

dad’s

hystericalcryfromadistance.

Myheartwaspumpingwildlyandmybloodwaspulsingthroughmyveins.

Ipulledbackthereins,distractedthehorseandtriedeverymeanstostopthehorsebutinvain.Afterwhatseemedaneternity,mydadcaughtupwithmebreathlesslyandmanagedtostopmyhorse.Butwefoundthatwewereindistress,

withno

trackbesideus.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.

Theriverbesideuswasstillandsereneunderthelastrayofsunshine

butwedidn’thavethemoodtoenjoyit.Suddenly,

itoccurredtousthat

therewasalsoarivernearbythe

farmhouse.Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback,

ourspiritssoared

andwebegantotrotbrisklyalongtheriver.Justafewminuteslater,

catching

sight

ofthesilhouetteofthehouse,

Ifeltafeelingofreliefandrelaxationsurgedthroughme.Icouldpicture

UnclePaul’s

smilingfaceandourdelicioussupperandIthoughttomyselfthatourbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.評點：這篇文章的環(huán)境描寫較少，但是出現(xiàn)的幾句卻在文章里起到了畫龍點睛的作用。比如空氣擊打著臉充分表現(xiàn)了馬跑之快和當時情況的緊急。河流的平靜和作者內心的不平靜形成對比，凸顯了主人公迷路后的焦慮不安，后來農場房子的出現(xiàn)又讓主人公頓時柳暗花明。因此，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)這些環(huán)境描寫看似漫不經心，其實在推動故事情節(jié)的展開，并和主人公的言行和心理息息相關。Possibleversion

3

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

SostartledwasmyhorsethatitranfasterthanIcouldimagine.IwasholdingonashardasIcouldandmydadwastryingtokeepupwithme.Myhorsegotoffthetrack,keptrunning,andstoppedwhenitreachedtheriver,abeautifulspot.Mydadsaidthesunwassettingandthatwehadtoleavebecausehedidnotwantustogetlost.Weturnedaroundtostartbackbutthetrackwasnowhereinsight.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

Mydadhadagreatideatofollowthestarsbacktothefarmhouse.IrememberedthattheNorthStarwasrightaboveUnclePaul’sfarmhouse.Wesetoffonthelongjourneyhome.Withdoubtfulthoughtsgoingthroughmyhead,Ihopedthatwewouldn’tseehungrywolves.Werodealongthedirt.Werodelikethewind.Atlastwewereatthefarmhouse.Ihuggedmyuncletightly.Afterdinner,Iwasrelievedtobesafeinmybed.

讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。MynameisJohnandImustsharewithyouaneventwhichtookplaceonFlight1553outofDCA.MywifeandIweretravelingtoMiamitocelebrateanachievementforherandasyoucanimagine,wewerelookingforwardtofun,sunandlaughter.Weboardedtheaircraft,withoutacareintheworld.ItwascoldinWashingtonandwewerereadyforFlorida.Shortlyaftertakingmyseat,Ibegantofeelsick.Iknewsomethingwasn'trightbutjustcouldn'tfindoutwhatwashappening.Beingadoctorandastubbornman,Iresistedeffortsbymywifetocallforassistance.Astheaircraftbeganitsdepartureroll,Ilostconsciousnessforashortamountoftime.AsIcamearound,Iquicklyrealizedafewthings.Firstly,somethingverybadhadhappenedtome.Secondly,theaircraftwastooheavywiththefueltogobackhome.Thirdly,mylossofconsciousnesshadbeensodeepthatIfoundmyselfoutofcontrol.SonotonlydidIhaveamedicalissuetodealwith,butIalsohadtofigureouthowtodealwithanembarrassingexperience.MywifegatheredthecrewassoonasitwassafetomoveaboutandImademywaytothewashroomtoattemptto