讀后續(xù)寫+喜歡剛出生妹妹 講義 高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse,IwastenanditwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mtheyoungestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayoranother.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonlycenterofattentionanditwasfeelinggood.MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearIknewwhatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopeningabiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydearmothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteranhour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.ButIdidn'twantasister.Iwantedaspaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.EveryonewastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifeisnevergoingtobethesameeveragain.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinaninstant.OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmynewbornsister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskmeanythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare(最夢)andwokeupatthemiddleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.Iranintomyparents’bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejusttoowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhenIsawher.Shewasawakeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答，Suddenly,shestartedcrying.Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.讀后續(xù)寫是接受剛出生的小妹妹。我覺得好多學(xué)生自己還是孩子，要開始想象有個妹妹什么感受，對于二胎家庭的孩子可能來說好些，第一段的意思很明確：1.

我的反應(yīng)-哄妹妹（動作+情緒）2，妹妹被哄好（動作+情緒），第二段很簡潔：1.

我的思想轉(zhuǎn)變

2.

血親的意義

3.妹妹是最好的禮物，呼應(yīng)原文。1.銜接挺好：Theloudwailspiercedthroughthequietnight,echoingthedeeplongingforattention.（尖銳的哭聲刺破寧靜的夜晚，回蕩著對關(guān)注的深切渴望）2.情緒變化：Myinitialannoyanceturnedintoconcern

（我從開始的厭煩變成了擔(dān)心）3.安慰動作：Iheldoutmyhand,pattingheronthebackwiththeother,whisperingmyfavoritesongintoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.

（我伸出手，用另一只手輕拍她的背，輕聲在她耳邊哼唱我最喜歡的歌曲，就像我害怕時媽媽對我做的那樣。）4.心靈相通：

Inthatmoment,Ifeltastrangeconnectionformingbetweenus.Itwasasifhercrieswereapleaforunderstanding,andI,despitemyinitialresentment,foundmyselfempathizingwithhervulnerability.

（在那一刻，我感到我們之間形成了一種奇妙的聯(lián)系。仿佛她的哭聲是一種對理解的乞求，盡管我最初有些憤怒，但我發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對她的脆弱感到共鳴。）Theinnocenceandcuriositythatwasintheeyesofeverynewbornlookedtowardsme,grippingmyheartandmellowingmyheart.Somethingcalledabloodbondwakenedinmybody,swearingtoprotectherwithallmystrengthandshareallIhad.(

每一個新生兒眼中特有的天真和好奇看向我，牢牢抓住了我的心，使我變得溫和。一種被稱為血脈相連的東西在我體內(nèi)蘇醒，發(fā)誓要用我所有的力量保護她，分享我所有的東西。5.呼應(yīng)很好：Eventhoughherarrivalinitiallytookoverthecenterofthewholefamily,shestartedtobecomethecenterofmyattentiontoo.

（盡管她最初成為整個家庭的焦點，但她開始成為我關(guān)注的焦點。）6.一個結(jié)局：Mysister,withherinnocentlaughterandbrighteyes,becamethegreatestgiftofall,transformingChristmasintoatimeofsharedhappinessandlove.（我的妹妹，帶著她無邪的笑聲和明亮的雙眼，成為了最偉大的禮物，將圣誕節(jié)變成了一個共享幸福和愛的時光。）參考范文一，Suddenly,shestartedcrying.

Itwaslikeathunderclapinthedeadsilence.However,soexhaustedweremomanddadthattheysleptsoundly,withoutanysignofwakingup.Thenthecryingturnedbitter,herfistsswingingandherfeetkicking.Herbeddingwaskickedawayandherbodywasexposed.Worriedabouthergettingcold,Iheldherhurriedlyandswungherbackandforth

awkwardly,hummingasongtocomforther.Withmycompanyandsoothingtone,shecalmeddownslowly,staredatmeandthengiggledmerrily..Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

Theinnocenceandcuriositythatwasintheeyesofeverynewbornlookedtowardsme,grippingmyheartandmellowingmyheart.Somethingcalledabloodbondwakenedinmybody,swearingtoprotectherwithallmystrengthandshareallIhad.Then,therewassomestirringbehindmeanditturnedoutthatmomanddadwereawakeaftersomerest.Seeingme,momsaidapologetically,“Thankyou,son.I’msorrythatIhavebeentoobusytoignoreyouandforgottenyourpresent.”

I,nowmatureandhappy,comfortedmymom,“mysisteristhebestChristmasgift

ever.”參考范文二，Suddenly,shestartedcrying.

Panickingatfirst,Ithenrealizeditwasjustapassingcar.However,shefeltuneasy--hermouthwideopen,armswaving,andlegskicking.Thinkingshemightbescaredtoo,Iheldoutmyhand,pattingheronthebackwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whisperingmyfavoritesongintoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoherbigeyes,Ibreathedasighofrelief..Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

Thesenseoflonelinesswasreplacedbytheresponsibilityofbeinganelderbrother.Eventhoughherarrivalinitiallytookoverthecenterofthewholefamily,shestartedtobecomethecenterofmyattentiontoo.Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcare.Ilookedaroundandfoundmyparentsawake,smilingatme.Withtheshadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,IfeltmylittlesisterwasthebestgiftIhadeverreceived.參考范文三，Suddenly,shestartedcrying.

Theloudwailspiercedthroughthequietnight,echoingthedeeplongingforattention.Myinitialannoyanceturnedintoconcern,andIapproachedhercribcautiously.Hertinyfacewasred,andhercriesfilledtheroom.Unsureofwhattodo,Ipickedherup,holdingherclosetocomforther.Inthatmoment,Ifeltastrangeconnectionformingbetweenus.Itwasasifhercrieswereapleaforunderstanding,andI,desp