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閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。MyfamilymovedinasmallhouseinBrighton,Coloradoonmyseventhbirthday.MyfirstmemoryisourneighborBill,anoldman,handingmestrawberriesfromhisgardenthroughaholeinthechainlink(鐵絲網(wǎng))fence.“Weneedtomaketheholebigger,”hesaidjokingly.

LaterIknewthathelivedalone.Billspentmuchtimeworkinginthegarden,andIwasalwaystalkingtohimfromouryard.Iwasachatterbox.IthinkwhatdrewmetoBillisthathenevergottiredoflisteningtome.IalsothinkBillsawalotofhimselfinmewewerebothlonelyandanxiousandthatmaybewhyhealwaystookthetimetolistentome.

Itwasawonderfulconnection.Thereweren'tanykidsofmyageintheneighborhood,andmyparentswereverybusy,soImostlyplayedintheyardwithmydog.

Ihadalotofimaginaryfriendsawholefamily,actuallywithawife,children,abestfriend...nojoke.Weirdkid.Oneday,myparentsaskedBillwhetherhe'dwatchmewhiletheywereawayonbusiness.Thisworkedwellforeveryone,soitbecameasomewhatmonthlyoccurrence.Billhadaspareroominhishouse,whichbecame“my"room.Billpromisedtoteachmetodrivethelawntractor(割草機(jī))somedayandIwasalwayslookingforwardtoit.Inwinter,Billwouldattachasnowplow(鏟雪機(jī))tothefrontofthelawntractor.IseriouslytoldhimthatIwouldinventabettersnowplowwhenIgrewup."Sureyouwill.You'llgetapatentcertificate.Ittakesacertificatetoproveanimportantthing,"Billsaidwithasmile.Onesnowymorning,anideasuddenlyhitme.MyparentswerewatchingTVwhenIspititout."WhatifIadoptedBillasmygrandpa?"

MyparentssaidIcouldgooverandaskhim.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150

左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.文本分析:Divideparagraphstoanalyzetextinformationwhilepayingattentiontocharactercharacteristicsandthedevelopmentofcharacterrelationships:第一段:Attheageofseven,ImovedandmetmyneighborBill,whohandedmestrawberriesthroughawirefence.第二段:Billalwaysworksinthegarden,andIoftentalktohimintheyard.ButBillwon'tgetboredbecause"I"isachatterbox.第三段:Ihavenopeerstoplaywith,andmyparentsarealsoverybusyanddon'thavetimetoacpanyme.Ihavemanyimaginaryfamilymembers.第四段:Whenmyparentswereonabusinesstrip,theyentrusted"me"toBill,whichbecameamonthlyactivityforus.Bill'sfamilyhasadedicatedroomfor"me".第五段:Billpromisestoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower,andhislawnmowerwillbeequippedwithasnowplowinwinter.IpromisedhimthatIwoulddesignabettersnowplowforhiminthefuture.HethinksIwilldefinitelysucceedandobtainapatentinthefuture.續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展:Firstparagraph:"I"proposedtobeadoptedBillwasshocked,buthappilyagreed"I"toldmyparentstovisitthemhaveareuniondinner,takeafamilyphotoBillfeltitwastimetoteachmehowtooperatealawnmower.Secondparagraph:IfeelafraidofcausingtroubleBillhelpsmeresolveitwithhumorIstartstudyingmoreseriouslyandfinallylearnBillexpresseshisappreciationformewithahugIembracehimbackandbelievethatIhavethebestfriend.官方范文,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billstoodfrozenforalittlewhilebeforeabroadsmilecameacrosshisface.ThenIsawtearsinhiseyes.Hewrappedmehisarmsandburiedhisfaceinmycoattohidehistears,hisvoicetrembling,“Ofcourse,sweetheart!I'msohappytobeyourgrandpa!”Soonafter,Billprintedoutanadoptioncertificateandhungitonthewallof“my”room,Gazingatthesnowoutside,Billsaidtomeexcitedly,“It'stimetolearnhowtodrivealawntractor.Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwasalmostfrightenedtotears,butBilljustchuckledinhislaidbackwayandfortedme,“Don'tworry,Grandson.Ihavealreadyplannedtochangeafence.”Weeventuallyreplaceditwithanice,tallwoodenfence.MydadandBillinstalledittogether.Whatimpressedmemostwasthattherewasadooronthefence,whichdefinitelystrengthenedourconnection.Underneath,Iknewthatwewereatruefamilynow.參考范文一,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Thequestioncaughthimoffguard.Thenwearinganawkwardyetpleasantsmile,hesaidearnestly,“Thankyouforsayingthat.Butit’sOKthatwejustkeepourrelationshipwherewearenow.I’mreallyhappythatwecanplaytogether.”Puzzled,Iproceededtoaskwhy,buthejustdeviatedtoanothertopic.Laterthatnight,ItoldmyparentsBill’sresponse,andtheysmiled,too,sayingthatallIcoulddowastovisithimmoretorepayhiskindness.Inodded,vaguelyknowingtoletitpass.

Thenextmorning,whilelearningtodrivethelawntractorwithasnowplow,Iaccidentallyploweddownourchainlinkfence.

Iwaspanicked,“Ohmygod,Ijustmadeaterriblemistake.”Hearingthepiercingcrack,BillranoutbutsoonwasrelievedtoseeIwasfine.Hejustfortedmegently,“it’sOK.Let’sfixit!”Withthebrokenfencegone,

Billcouldn’tfixitimmediately,sohehadtolethiscourtyardexposedtoeveryone.However,everyone,includingmyparents,wouldgreetedhimwhenevertheysawhim.Gradually,Billsmiledmoreandneversetupthefenceagain.Asforme,occupiedwithoperatingthosemachines,Igraduallysaidgoodbyetomyimaginaryfriendsandimpressedotherkidswithmyskills.Itwasluckythatwemeteachother.

參考范文二,Iknockedonhisdoor,satdowninhislivingroom,andasked,“CanIadoptyouasmygrandpa?”

Billlookedsurprisedforamoment,thenawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.“Well,that'safirstforme!”hechuckled.Myparents,whowerestandingatadistance,exchangedamusedglances.Fromthatdayon,Billofficially

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