2024年高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典專題12讀后續(xù)寫構(gòu)造“動(dòng)作鏈”兩大句式仿寫20例及高考真題片段運(yùn)用原卷版

專題12讀后續(xù)寫構(gòu)造“動(dòng)作鏈”兩大句式仿寫20例及高考真題片段運(yùn)用原卷版構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式一：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A+動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式二：Havingdone…,主謂賓【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用一】(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用二】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用三】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用四】(2022年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用五】(2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編一】河北省金科大聯(lián)考20232024學(xué)年高三10月聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編二】2024屆山東省濱州市新高考大聯(lián)考高三10月月考讀后續(xù)寫【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編三】江蘇省常州市聯(lián)盟學(xué)校2024屆高三10月學(xué)情調(diào)研讀后續(xù)寫構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式一：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)作A+動(dòng)作Band動(dòng)作C（三個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ)，動(dòng)作依次發(fā)生）【示例】歌手瞥一眼觀眾，深呼吸一下，就開始唱起來(lái)。Thesingerglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbegantosing.仿寫1：Hetookataxitothepolicestation.翻譯：他攔下一輛的士，拿著手提箱跳進(jìn)去沖著司機(jī)說(shuō)，“去”改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫2：Theboysjumpedintothelaketoplay.翻譯：男孩們興奮地跑到湖邊，脫下衣服，跳入湖中玩耍。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫3：Shehuggedhersontightly.翻譯：她沖上前，跪下，把兒子抱在懷里。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫4：Irushedhometogetthecottoncat.翻譯：我沖回家，翻遍我收集的帽子，拿起那頂棉質(zhì)的。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫5：ShelookedatthetrophyandthankedTUNTUN.翻譯：她先看一下獎(jiǎng)杯，深吸一口氣，說(shuō)道：“謝謝吞吞！”改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫6：Macjumpedoffthebicycletoshutthedoor.翻譯：麥克毫不猶豫跳下自行車，沖向車的后門，猛然地關(guān)上車門。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫7：Iwenttoschoolinahurrythismorning.翻譯：我早上匆忙穿上大衣，抓起書包，騎著自行車匆忙去上學(xué)了。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫8：Mymumgavefiftydollarstothepooroldman.翻譯：媽媽打開錢包，拿出五十元錢，遞給那個(gè)貧困的老人。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫9：Shepickedupthephotoandplaceditintothealbum.翻譯：她拿起照片，盯著看一會(huì)兒，仔細(xì)放進(jìn)相冊(cè)里。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫10：Jimmyquicklythrewthemeatatthefiercewolf.翻譯：吉米快速拿出肉，瞄準(zhǔn)，徑直朝兇猛的狼扔過(guò)去。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈句式二：Havingdone…,主謂賓（表示先做了某事，再發(fā)生核心動(dòng)作）【示例】在銀行排隊(duì)等了一個(gè)小時(shí)后，這個(gè)女人變得不耐煩，然后離開了。Havingwaitedinlineforanhouratthebank,thewomangrewimpatientandleft.仿寫1：Afterhavingqueuedfor3hours,hewastoldthattheticketshadbeensoldout.翻譯：排了三個(gè)小時(shí)隊(duì)后，他被告知票賣完了。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫2：Shewanderedaimlesslyinthestreetforhours,thenshefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.翻譯：她在街上漫無(wú)目的地逛了好幾個(gè)小時(shí)，感到有點(diǎn)餓，想吃點(diǎn)東西。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫3：Afterhetoldthetruth,hefeltateaseinhismindandreturnedhomewithalighterheart.翻譯：說(shuō)出真相后、他心里輕松了很多、心情放松地回家了。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫4：Aftergettingmypromiseoftendingtomymother,myfatherfeltassuredandloadedhisluggageintothecar.翻譯：得到了我會(huì)好好照顧母親的承諾后，爸爸放心地把行李放進(jìn)車?yán)铩８膶懀篲_________________________________________________________________________________仿寫5：Afterfightinginthewarforyears,thesoliderreturnedtohishome,onlytofindhisfamilieshadmovedaway.翻譯：征戰(zhàn)多年后，戰(zhàn)士回到家中，發(fā)現(xiàn)家人已經(jīng)搬走了。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫6：翻譯：因?yàn)槌兄Z了五點(diǎn)之前我們一定到那兒，所以當(dāng)車拋錨的時(shí)候，我非常慌張。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫7：Aftershemadefullpreparations,shestoodbythewindowandexpectedthearrivalofherdaughter.翻譯：做好充分的準(zhǔn)備后，她站在窗邊，期待著女兒的到來(lái)。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫8：AfterreceivingtheNimbus2000,HarryPotterwassohappythathedidn’tknowwhattodo.翻譯：哈利波特收到光輪2000后高興得不知所措。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫9：Afterwaitingforalongtime,Iwalkedtoschoolthroughthesnowbymyself.翻譯：等了很久之后，我獨(dú)自在雪地里跋涉到學(xué)校。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________仿寫10：Afterexperiencingsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.翻譯：她接連經(jīng)歷了那么多次失敗后，終于振作起來(lái)了。改寫：__________________________________________________________________________________【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用一】(2023年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Afewweekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontestwhenthenewscame.Tomysurprise,Iwasinformedthatmyessayhadrankedfirstinthecontest.Amixofexcitementanddoubtwashedoverme.____________________________________________________________________________（再三仔細(xì)檢查后，我再也無(wú)法控制自己，立即與我的英語(yǔ)老師分享了這個(gè)消息。）Withoutherhelp,Iwouldneverhavehadthechancetoobtainthehonor.MyfacelitupwithjoyasIacceptedtheaward,mysmilefilledwithpride.Ifeltaburstofgratitudewellingupinmyheartandsurgingthoughme【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用二】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Passingthedesertedhouse,Ispottedthebrokenglass,whichhadbeenfixedperfectly.Itremindedmeofthehummingbird,thetinycutecreature.____________________________________________________________________________（在和主人聊了一會(huì)兒之后，我被告知她從那天起就再也沒有回來(lái)過(guò)。）“Perhapssheisenjoyingthevaluablefreedomatthismoment,”Isaidtomyself.Hourslater,thesunbegantosink.【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用三】(2023年1月浙江卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

Istillrememberedmyfriends'promisesoIwentpasttheabandonedmilkinghousetoseeiftheyhadfixedthebrokenwindow.To

mysatisfaction,noothertinycreatureswouldmeetthistroubleanymore.AsIapproachedthefarm,Iwasgreetedbyaspicysmellofthebarbecue,urgingmetowalkfaster.Weweretotallyimmersedinthepeacefulatmosphere,____________________________________________________________________________（享受著精致的美食，談?wù)撝覀兊挠腥そ?jīng)歷，唱著歌直到日落。）enjoyingthedelicatecuisines,talkingaboutourinterestingexperiencesandsingingsongstillthesunset.Itwastimeforustosaygoodbyesowewenttotheparkinglottogether.【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用四】(2022年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Tappinghimgentlyontheshoulder,IaskedDavidwhathadcausedhimtodecidetogiveuptheopportunity.1__________________________________________________________________________（猶豫了一下，他低聲回答：“你知道，我跑得很慢，而且我的跑步姿勢(shì)很難看，這會(huì)讓別人嘲笑我?！保?（我笑了笑，搖搖頭說(shuō)：“事實(shí)上，所有的人都尊重和欽佩那些克服自己的困難，勇敢地實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的人?！保癛eally?”Heseemedtobeindoubtaboutmywords.Seeingmenodfirmly,heworehisbigtoothysmileagain,hiseyessparklingwithexcitementandcuriosity.【高考實(shí)戰(zhàn)運(yùn)用五】(2021年新高考I卷讀后續(xù)寫片段)運(yùn)用讀后續(xù)寫“動(dòng)作鏈”技巧，把下面的語(yǔ)篇補(bǔ)充完整。Inthemorning,asscheduled,1（雙胞胎早早起床，踮著腳走進(jìn)廚房，從袋子里舀出面粉）Oncetheysetaboutmakingbread，theyfeltconfused.Atthattime，2，（他們的爸爸溜進(jìn)廚房，輕拍雙胞胎的肩膀，柔聲安慰道）“Don’tquit.Youcanoverethechallenge.”Thetwinsmadethebreadsmoothly.Then，3（他們端著早餐，向樓上走去，喊醒他們的媽媽）.Withhereyesglitteringwithexcitement,themotherwassocontentthatshegatheredherchildrenintoherarms.【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編一】河北省金科大聯(lián)考20232024學(xué)年高三10月聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneday,Samwasonhiswaytoanearbytownwhenhiscarbrokedowninthemiddleofnowhere.Hetriedtofixitbutcouldn'tfigureoutwhatwaswrong.Justthen,amiddleagedwomanpassingbysawhimstrugglingandapproachedhim.Sheaskedifheneededhelp,andSamfeltrelieved.Thewomaninspectedthecarandfoundoutthattheenginehadblownup.ShetoldSamthatsheknewamechanicinthenearbytownwhocouldrepairthecar.ThewomantookSamtothemechanic,andhegothiscarrepaired.WhenSamaskedforthebill,hefoundthathelefthiswalletathomeanddidn'tknowwhattodo.Themechanictoldhimthatthemiddleagedwomanhadalreadypaidforit.Samwassurprisedanddidn'tknowhowtorepayher.However,thewomanrefusedtoacceptanypaymentfromhim,simplysmilingandsaying,“Youdon'thavetopaymeback.Justpromisemethatyou'llpayitforwardtosomeoneelseinneedwhenyoucan.”Samwastouchedbyherkindnessandacceptedherhelp.Feelinggratefulandinspired,Samcontinuedhistriptothetown.Goingthroughallthesethings,hefeltabittiredandstoppedatanearbycafétohavearest.Whenhewasabouttoleave,henoticedthatthewaitresswaspregnant(懷孕的)andstrugglingtocarryatrayoffoodtoatable.Hesympathizedwithherverymuchandwenttohelphercarrythefoodwithouthesitation.ThewaitresswassurprisedandthankedSamforhisfriendliness.Sheaskedhimwhyhewasbeingsokindtoher,andhetoldheraboutthemiddleagedwomanwhohadhelpedhimearlierandhowhewantedtopayitforward.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whenhearrivedhome,hiswifeaskedhimhowhistripwent._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Samfeltproudofthechainoflovethathehadstarted,whichhadspreadfarandwide._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編二】2024屆山東省濱州市新高考大聯(lián)考高三10月月考讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面文章，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整短文。Onceuponatimetherewasagreatmanwhomarriedthewomanofhisdreams.Withtheirlove,theycreatedalittlegirl.Shewasabrightandcheerfullittlegirlandthegreatmanlovedherverymuch.Whenshewasverylittle,hewouldpickherup,humatuneanddancewithheraroundtheroom,andhewouldtellher,“Iloveyou,littlegirl.”Whenthelittlegirlwasgrowingup,thegreatmanwouldhugherandtellher,“Iloveyou,littlegirl.”Thelittlegirlwouldpoutandsay,“I'mnotalittlegirlanymore."Thenthemanwouldlaughandsay,“Buttome,you'llalwaysbemylittlegirl.”Thelittle,girlwhowasnotlittleanymoreleftherhomeandwentintotheworld.Asshelearnedmore.aboutherself,shelearnedmoreabouttheman.Shesawthathetrulywasgreatandstrong,fornowsherecognizedhisstrengths.Oneofhisstrengthswashisabilitytoexpresshislovetohisfamily.Itdidn'tmatterwhereshewentintheworld.Themanwouldcallherandsay,“Iloveyou,littlegirl.”Thedaycamewhenthelittlegirlwhowasnotlittleanymorereceivedaphonecall.Thegreatmanwasdamaged.“Hehadhadastroke.Hewasaphasic,"theyexplainedtothegirl.Hecouldn'ttalkanymoreandtheyweren'tsurethathecouldunderstandthewordsspokentohim.Hecouldnolongersmile,laugh,walk,hug,danceortellthelittlegirlwhowasnotlittleanymorethathelovedher.Andsoshewenttothesideofthegreatman.Whenshewalkedintotheroomandsawhim,helookedsmallandnotstrongatall.Helookedatherandtriedtospeak,buthecouldnot.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thelittlegirldidwhatshehadbeenlongingto,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Andthensheheardfromwithintheman,thebeatofhisheart._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【讀后續(xù)寫好題匯編三】江蘇省常州市聯(lián)盟學(xué)校2024屆高三10月學(xué)情調(diào)研讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Yearsago,notlongaftergraduatingfromschoolandstartingmycareerinDenver,Isetoffonanexcitingsolotriptoreunitewithanoldfriend.AsIpackedmycar,littledidIknowthatthisadventurewouldunveiltheremarkablebondsthatcanformbetweenstrangers,allsparkedbythesimpleexchangeof"thankyou."MyjourneymencedwithathrillingflighttoAlbuquerque,avibrantcityinNewMexico.MyultimatedestinationwasOklahomaCity,whereIlookedforwardtovisitingadearfriend.Thetripwasrelativelysmooth,treatingmetobeautifulsightsalongtheway.Whilewaitinginlinetopayforgas,Istruckupafriendlychatwith

anoldercouplewhowerealsorefuelingtheirvehicle.Continuingmyjoureywithjoyinmyheart,dark,ominoussmokesuddenlybillowedfrommycar'srear.PanicgrippedmeasIhastilypulledovertothesideoftheroad,unsureofournextsteps.Inanincredibletwistof

fate,thesamefriendlycouplefromthegasstationpulledupbehindmycar.Withwarmsmilesandopenhearts,theygenerouslyofferedtodrivemetomyfriend'splaceinOklahomaCity.Duringtheride,weengagedinlivelyconversations,sharingstoriesandlaughterasthemilespassedby.Up