讀后續(xù)寫-My+New+Brother 高三英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專題+

讀后續(xù)寫故事解讀

MyNewBrotherVocabulary1.copy[?k?pi]

n.復(fù)印件,副本,復(fù)制品;(書的)一本,一冊,一份2.onstage[??n?ste?d?]

adj.舞臺上的;表演的;adv.上臺,上場3.bathtub[?bɑ?θt?b]

n.浴盆;浴缸4.raindrops[?re?ndr?ps]

n. 雨點;雨滴5.complicated[?k?mpl?ke?t?d]

adj.復(fù)雜的;難懂的6.farfrom遠(yuǎn)非；遠(yuǎn)離7.involved[?n?v?lvd]

adj.卷入的；參與的8.drawstring[?dr??str??]

n. (穿在袋口/褲腰上的)拉繩,束帶9.burstintoflames

[fle?m](突然猛烈地)燃燒起來10.ifonly要是...多好Iwasinmyroom,feelingunwillingtoheadtothecommunitytheatrewith“mybrother”Henry.HehadrecentlybeenadoptedbymyparentsandIwasnotinthemoodforbeingonstagewithhim.Iwasinmyroom,feelingunwillingtoheadtothecommunitytheatrewith“mybrother”Henry.HehadrecentlybeenadoptedbymyparentsandIwasnotinthemoodforbeingonstagewithhim.Translation前往；朝...走去v.采?。皇震B(yǎng)

“Kirstie,comehere,”mymomcalled.Followinghervoice,Ifoundheroutsidethebathroom,holdingawetbook.Shegavethebookashake.“Henry’sbookwasinthebathtub.Didyouputitthere?”Sheglaredatme,somethingshehadneverdonebeforeHenrycametoourhome.Ihadn’twethisbookonpurpose.Raindropsfellfrommyeyes.Tomakemattersworse,shepromisedtobuyhimanewcopy.Myheartached.Henrywasstealingmymother’slove.Hewasruiningmylife.Translation怒目而視故意毀壞；毀滅

Sheglaredatme,somethingshehadneverdonebeforeHenrycametoourhome.Sentence1主句謂語從句謂語從句謂語定語從句時間狀語從句

Meanwhile,Henrywasnearby,absorbedinworkingonacomplicatedropeknot(繩結(jié)),somethinghelikedtodo.Whydidaboylikehimlikedoinggirlywork?Itseemedfarfrommanly(男子漢氣概).Translationbeabsorbedin全神貫注于繼續(xù)工作；從事于Meanwhile,Henrywasnearby,abosorbedinworkingonacomplicatedropeknot,somethinghelikedtodo.Sentence2定語從句分詞短語作狀語主句謂語從句謂語

Soon,itwastimetosetofftothecommunitytheatre.AsHenrywalkedaheadofustothecar,mymomtookmeasideandsaidinalowvoice,“ItwillbeHenry’sfirsttimeonstage.Bekindtohim,honey.Inoddedbutsighed(嘆氣).Ihadn’talwaysfounditthisdifficulttobekind.ButsinceHenryhadmovedin,everythingfeltdifferent.Thetheatreusedtobeaspecialplaceformyparentsandme.WithHenryinvolved,itdidn’tseemsospecialanymore.Translation發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事是...的

Finally,itwasourstagetime.Myheartbeatwildly.IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.Aswekidslinedup,readytoactoutourshortplay,IrealizedhowlooselyIhadtiedthedrawstringonmyskirt.Sureenough,myskirtbegantodrop.Icouldheartheaudiencelaughing.EventhoughIwaswearingshortsundermyskirt,Icouldfeelmyfaceburstintoflames.However,myhandswerefull.Ifonlysomeonecouldhelpmeout.Translation煩惱，氣惱how+adv.+主+謂hearsb.doingsth.聽到某人正在做某事helpsb.out幫助某人擺脫困境Aswekidslinedup,readytoactoutourshortplay,IrealizedhowlooselyIhadtiedthedrawstringsonmyskirts.sentence3從句謂語從句謂語主句謂語時間狀語從句賓語從句重點詞匯（2mins）：1.headto前往；朝...走去2.adopt采??；收養(yǎng)3.glareat怒目而視 4.onpurpose故意 5.ruin毀壞；毀滅 6.beabsorbedin全神貫注于7.workon繼續(xù)工作；從事于8.find+it+adj.todosth.發(fā)現(xiàn)做某事是...的9.annoyance煩惱，氣惱10.how+adv.+主+謂11.hearsb.doingsth.聽到某人正在做某事 12.helpsb.out幫助某人擺脫困境

GroupDiscussionStructurePlotsFeelingsBeginning(開端)

Developments(發(fā)展)

Climax(高潮)

Iwasunwillingtobewithmynewbrother,Henry,adoptedbymyparents.upsetMomthoughtIwetHenry’sbookonpurpose.sadMompromisedtobuyHenryanewcopy.heart-achedMeanwhile,Henrywasabsorbedinsthgirly.MomaskedmetobekindtoHenry.reluctantMydrawstringgotloosenandbegantodrop.embarrassedconfused

GroupDiscussion情節(jié)沖突：伏筆與呼應(yīng):我和Henry之間產(chǎn)生隔閡Henry喜歡并擅長打結(jié)→裙子上的細(xì)繩脫落GroupDiscussion人物主要人物次要人物正面描寫側(cè)面描寫正面描寫側(cè)面描寫次要人物(Mom)烘托/環(huán)境(book)次要人物(Mom)烘托/環(huán)境(ropeknot)MeHenry心理、動作動作人物形象：人物形象：乖巧卻抵觸Henry認(rèn)真、細(xì)心、沉默寡言表達意圖(主題)FamilyLoveUnderstanding

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.Withoutasecondthought,heapproachedmequickly,droppedtoacrouch,andtiedabeautifulfirmbowknot.“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.Shockedbywhathehaddone,lfeltsomethingdeepinmymindbegantochange.Itseemedasifhiskinddeedshadmeltedmyheart.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,Ifeltashamedofmyself.WhileIwaslostinthought,themusictookmebacktoreality,Weedgedtothestageandstartedourperformance.Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesatus,astormofthunderousapplauseechoingaroundthehall.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully."Thank...you,Henry."Myvoicetrembledwithmyfaceburning.Ihadtoadmitthat.butforhistimelyhelp,Iwouldn'thavepluckedupmycouragetostandonthestage.Withouthiswonderfulknottingskills,theperformancewouldhavebeenquitedifferent.Henrypattedmegentlyontheshoulder,anenormousgrinflashinga