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讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Catherinehadstayedathomeallherlifetolookafterherthreechildren,butnow,she,wholostherhusbandinacaraccident,hadtostepoutandearnmoneytomakeendsmeet.Withzeroworkexperienceandnoprofessionaldegree,herchancesofgettinghiredforawell-paidjobwerenexttozero.Oneday,afterdroppingherchildrenatschool,Catherinespottedaconstructionsite."IthinkIcanworkhere,"shethoughtandapproachedthemanager."Hi,areyouhiring?"sheasked."Yes,weare,"themanagerlookedatCatherinefromheadtotoe."Areyousureyoucanworkhere?Thisjobrequiresalotofhardwork.""I'mreadyforit,"shetoldthemanagerandsignedacontracttoworka12-hourshift.However,Catherinekepthernewjobasecretfromherchildren.Shethoughttheywouldfeelembarrassedafterlearningtheirmotherworkedataconstructionsite.Everymorning,afterdroppingherchildrentoschool,shewouldgototheconstructionsiteandworkuntilhershiftended.Shewouldpickupheavybricksonhershouldertotransportthemfromonepartofthesitetotheother.Oneevening,Catherine'sson,Peter,toldheraboutanupcomingcontestinschoolthatrequiredmotherstoparticipate.Inthecompetition,studentswillwearblindfoldsandhavetorecognizetheirmotherswithoutlookingatthem."Thatsoundslikesuchacoolevent,Peter!"Catherinesaidexcitedly."Ican'twaitforit!""Iwon'tgotherewithyou,mom,"Peterreplied."Butwhy?"WhathersonsaidnextwassomethingCatherinewasn'tpreparedtohear."Mom,Iwouldhavetotouchyourhandstorecognizeyou,andeveryonewouldlookatthem,"Peterexplained."Yourhandsaresougly.They'resohardandrough,"headded."Iwillfeelsoembarrassedwhenmyclassmateslookatyourhands,"theboysaid."Iwon'tattendtheevent."Catherinefeltterriblebutcouldn'tsayanythinginherdefense.讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原文注意：續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右Para.1Afewweekslater,Peterwaswalkinghomewhensomethingunexpectedcaughthisattention.Para.2Onhiswaybackhome,hekeptthinkingabouthowhewouldapologizetohismother.Para.1銜接句：WhatdidPetersee？1.他看到一群建筑工人正在休息，其中一位婦女堅(jiān)定地扛著沉重的磚塊。（定從）走近一看，彼得才發(fā)現(xiàn)那是自己的母親凱瑟琳。微場(chǎng)景-看到媽媽Hesawagroupofconstructionworkerstakingabreak,amongwhomawomanwascarryingheavybrickswithdetermination.Afteracloserlook,Peterrecognizedthatthewomanishismom.2.他的目光盯到一個(gè)正在一個(gè)建筑工地上辛苦勞作的熟悉身影。(非謂)“是媽媽！”他驚呼道。Hisgazewasfixedonafamiliarfigurelaboringattheconstructionsite.“It’smymom!”Heexclaimedinshock.Para.1過(guò)渡句：Whatdidhismotherdointheconstructionsite？1.凱瑟琳滿身汗水和灰塵，用飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的雙手搬起沉重的磚塊。（非謂語(yǔ)）在灼熱的陽(yáng)光下，她的臉漲的通紅，顯得疲憊不堪，發(fā)出一聲聲沉重的嘆息。（獨(dú)立主格，非謂語(yǔ)）微場(chǎng)景-媽媽辛苦搬磚1Catherin,coveredinsweatanddust,liftedheavybrickswithherweatheredhands.Inthescorchingsun,sheseemedverywearywithherfaceflushingred,breathingheavysighs.Para.1過(guò)渡句：Whatdidhismotherdointheconstructionsite？2.他的媽媽很努力地將磚抬起來(lái)，把它們扛到肩上，跌跌撞撞地艱難前行。汗水浸濕了她的衣服，但她來(lái)不及擦拭，仍然來(lái)回奔跑著。微場(chǎng)景-媽媽辛苦搬磚2Hismumstruggledtoliftthebricks,carriedthemonhershouldersandstaggeredforwardpainstakingly.Shekeptrushingbackandforth,ignoringthesweatswhichhadsoakedherdirtyshirtBeadsofsweatweredrippingdownherface.Para.1銜接句：HowdidPeterfeel？Peter震驚地站在那里，一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)。與此同時(shí)，一股內(nèi)疚和悔恨涌上心頭。他懊悔自己不該說(shuō)出那些傷人的話。微場(chǎng)景-愧疚、懊悔情緒描寫(xiě)Peterstoodrootedtothespotinsuprise,unabletoutteraword.Meanwhile,awaveofguiltandregretsfloodedoverhim.Hewasremorseful/regretfulaboutsayingthosehurtfulwords.Guiltwashedoverhimasherecalledhisearlierwordsandthesadexpressionflashingacrosshismother’sface.Para.1銜接句：HowdidPeterfeel？看到這個(gè)，Peter留下懊悔的淚水，

他意識(shí)到他之前是多么愚蠢。微場(chǎng)景-愧疚、懊悔情緒描寫(xiě)Seeingthis,Petercan’thelpsheddingtearsofregret.Herealizedhowfoolish/selfish/cruelhehadbeen.Para.2銜接句：Whatdidhethinkabout/do？微場(chǎng)景-下定決心1Aftercarefulconsideration,Peterdecidedtotakeadvantageoftheupcomingcontestinschool,wherehecanexpresshisapologiesofficially.

1.在認(rèn)真思考后，Peter決定利用即將到來(lái)的學(xué)校的比賽來(lái)正式表達(dá)他的道歉。Para.2銜接句：Whatdidhethinkabout/do？微場(chǎng)景-下定決心22.Peter決定等媽媽一回來(lái)他就要當(dāng)面誠(chéng)懇地道歉。Peterdecidedthathewouldmakeapologiesinthepresenceofhismothersincerelyassoonasshecamehome.Para.2過(guò)渡句：HowdidPeterfinallyapologize？微場(chǎng)景-道歉1Inthecompetition,Peterrecognizedhismotherimmediatelytherefereeannouncedthestart.Heheldhismother’shandsintriumph,introducinghismomtohisclassmatesproudly.Then,hewrappedhisarmsaroundhismotherandmurmured,“Sorry,mum.NowIknowthereasonwhyyourhandsarerough.Theyareatestamentofyoursacrifice.Thankyou.”1.在比賽中，Peter在裁判員一宣布比賽開(kāi)始后就認(rèn)出了他的媽媽。Peter得意洋洋地舉起媽媽的手，驕傲地向朋友們介紹自己的媽媽。之后，他摟住媽媽，楠楠地說(shuō)道：“對(duì)不起?，F(xiàn)在我知道你手粗糙的原因了。他們是你為家奉獻(xiàn)的見(jiàn)證。謝謝?！盤(pán)ara.2過(guò)渡句：HowdidPeterfinallyapologize？微場(chǎng)景-道歉2ThemomentCatherinesteppedintothehouse,Peterrusheduptoherandtookherhandsfirmly.“Mom,sorry,”Hemurmured,withtearsrollinginhiseyes,“Ihavewitnessedyourarduousworkattheconstructionsite.NowIknowtheyarethemostbeautifulhandsintheworld,holdingupapieceofskyforus.2.凱瑟琳一踏進(jìn)家門(mén)，彼得就沖上去，緊緊握住她的手。“媽媽，對(duì)不起?！彼卣f(shuō)。淚水在眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)?！拔铱吹侥阍诠さ厣细苫盍恕，F(xiàn)在我知道您的雙手是世界上最美麗的雙手,給我們撐起一片天.Para.2結(jié)尾句和主題“There’snowalkingonsunshineexceptsomeonemanagingtocrackasilverliningintheclouds.”P(pán)eterfeltitdeepinhisheart,makingasilentvowtosupporthismotherineverywayhecould./ineverywaypossible.1.“哪有什么歲月靜好，只不過(guò)有人在負(fù)重前行?！盤(pán)eter深刻地感悟到這一點(diǎn)，默默地決定以后要