2019學(xué)年高二年級(jí)英語(yǔ)北師大版選修6課堂訓(xùn)練：Unit16《Stories》寫作園地寫人記事記敘文

寫作園地對(duì)應(yīng)學(xué)生用書(shū)P32寫人記事記敘文［感悟范文］請(qǐng)以“MyFirstClassintheNewSchool”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。注意：①內(nèi)容只需涉及一個(gè)方面；②詞數(shù)為100左右。［范文］Istillremember①hownervousIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthreeyearsago,②whenIfound③itdifficulttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.TheteacherspokeEnglishthroughouttheclass,④which⑤wastotallydifferentfromthelessonsIhadtakenbefore.Inthemorningclassthenextday,theEnglishteachercametome⑥whileIwasreadingthetextasaloudasotherstudents.Afterlisteningtomeforawhile,shegavemeabigsmileandsaidshelikedmyvoiceverymuch.Thesmileshoneonthewholedayandthefollowingdays.Aweeklater,Ivolunteeredto⑦takechargeofEnglishstudyinmyclass.⑧Thankstothecomfortingsmileinmyfirstmorningclass,Ibegantobeconfident.Sincethen⑨notonlycanIfollowtheteacher,butalsoIhavebeenimprovingmyEnglishgradually.［技法討論］本單元的寫作題材是寫人記事，要求寫出一件事或有關(guān)人物。一、寫人記事屬于記敘文范疇，包括人物介紹、講述故事、撰寫游記、新聞報(bào)道、校園軼事等。二、寫人時(shí)，要交代清楚人物的身份和事跡，大體分為三段。第一段寫出生年月和地點(diǎn)以及家庭背景。第二段要詳細(xì)描述人物的成績(jī)，例如，何時(shí)何地榮獲何種獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)。第三段要寫人物的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)對(duì)他人的影響。三、寫事時(shí)，要交代清楚事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，重點(diǎn)描述事件中感人的場(chǎng)面。黃金表達(dá)1．記事①Onenightaboutnineo'clock,Dr.GeorgereceivedacallfromDr.Jim...②Itwasaftersixo'clockinthemorningwhenhe...③ThismorningIwenttoashopto...④OnMarch23,at10：30,aterribleaccidenthappenedon...⑤LastSpringFestival,myparentsandIwent...⑥Schoolwasover.WangLinaskedWangGangtogohometogether.⑦Onmywaytothepark,Isawagroupofyoungmen...2.記人①M(fèi)rs.Smith,aged55,hasworkedforourschoolfor2years...②WuPing,whoisafamousyoungwriter,wasbornin...③Ihavealittleniece,whoiscalled...④LiuHaiyang,astudentfromChinesetopuniversity,badlyhuntsfor...⑤Oncetherewasamanwhowantedtobuyhimselfapairofshoes.⑥SunShuweiisaboyof14fromGuangdong...⑦OurEnglishteacher,Ms.Yang,cametoourschoolin1998.亮點(diǎn)分析：亮點(diǎn)一：本文第一部分講述了我作為一個(gè)新生在第一天的第一節(jié)英語(yǔ)課上遇到的困難；第二部分講述了老師的微笑幫我解決了困難；第三部分感謝老師給了我自信，且英語(yǔ)成績(jī)逐步提高。層次分明，條理清晰。亮點(diǎn)二：文中多處使用了復(fù)合句：①how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，②④when和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，⑥while引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。為本文增加了得分點(diǎn)。亮點(diǎn)三：精彩詞語(yǔ)⑤bedifferentfrom；⑦takechargeof；⑧thanksto；⑨notonly...butalso以及③形式賓語(yǔ)it的運(yùn)用，使文章內(nèi)容生動(dòng)，豐富。［類文演練］上周末你和你父親及他的朋友所組織的“驢友俱樂(lè)部(LVYOUCLUB)”去神秘大峽谷徒步穿越，由于準(zhǔn)備充分，組織到位，非常成功。你收獲頗多，請(qǐng)你將此次穿越寫成一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文發(fā)表在你的博客中，以便對(duì)此感興趣的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友了解。寫作提示：1.簡(jiǎn)要描述此次活動(dòng)。2.活動(dòng)注意事項(xiàng)。3.感想和收獲。注意：開(kāi)頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。“LVYOU”，whichhasthesamepronunciationastravelinChinesefromtheInternet,isbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourcountry.［聯(lián)想詞匯］給某人留下印象答案：leavesb.animpression取得巨大成功答案：achievegreatsuccess對(duì)……感興趣答案：beinterestedin/takeaninterestin接近自然答案：comeclosetonature參加答案：takepartin/participatein［連詞成句］按要求完成下列句子LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUB.TheLVYOUCLUBwasorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends.Itleftmeadeepimpression.（用分詞結(jié)構(gòu)和定語(yǔ)從句合并句子）答案：LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUBorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends,whichleftmeadeepimpression.Becausewemadegoodpreparationsandhadexcellentorganization,thetripwasagreatsuccess.（同義句轉(zhuǎn)換）goodpreparationsandexcellentorganization,we.答案：Becauseof;achievedgreatsuccessIfso,theycancomeclosetonatureandappreciatethebeautyofnature.Theycanexperiencethegreatnessof廿￡6.（用aswellas合并句子）答案：Ifso,theycancomeclosetonatureandappreciatethebeautyofnatureaswellasexperiencethegreatnessoflife.［連句成章］“LVYOU”，whichhasthesamepronunciationastravelinChinesefromtheInternet,isbecomingmoreandmorepopularinourcountry.LastweekendIwaspleasedtotravelthroughtheSecretValleywithLVYOUCLUBorganizedbymyfatherandhisfriends,whichleftmeadeepimpression.Becauseofgoodpreparationsandexcellentorganization,weachievedgreatsuccess.Inthiskindofactivity,alltheparticipantsshouldbeinterestedinprotectingtheenvironmentandenjoytravelling.Theywillfacelotsofdifficultiesinnature,soeveryoneshouldhavegreatdetermination,takecareofeachotherandob