中考英語課件 話題寫作指導（一）

話題寫作指導(一）—人物介紹★介紹學校基本情況1．Thereare(be)400studentsinmyschool.[冀教七(下)Unit3P36]2．IhaveChinese，English，math，historyandsomeothers(other)．[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]3．Thenewbuilding(build)isourlibrary.Itlooksmodern.[譯林七(上)Unit3P32]areothersbuilding★介紹學習生活1．這學期我有點忙。Iama

little

busythisterm.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]2．我的父母給了我很大的學習壓力。Myparentsgivemea

lot

of

pressureaboutschool.[人教八(下)Unit4P29]

alittlebusyalotofpressure3.因為格里芬女士，我付出了更多的努力，考試成績翻了一番。BecauseofMs.Griffin，Iput

in

more

effortandmyexamscoresdoubled.[人教九(全)Unit14P106]4．今年我更擅長美術。Iammuch

better

atartthisyear.[冀教八(上)Unit2P18]muchputinmoreeffortbetterat★校紀校規(guī)1．我們必須按時上課。Wemustbeon

timeforclass.[人教七(下)Unit4P21]2．我們不被允許在課堂上使用手機。Wearenot

allowedtousecellphonesinclass.3．我們總是要穿校服。Wealwayshave

to

weartheschooluniform.[人教七(下)Unit4P20]ontimenotallowedhavetowear★介紹課外活動1．Wealwayshaveabigsportsmeettwice(two)ayear.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]2．Swimming(swim)ismyfavoriteoutdooractivity.3．我經(jīng)常參加跳遠。Ioftentake

part

inthelongjump.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]twiceSwimmingtakepartin【句子升格】1．Chineseisinterestinganduseful.Ilikeit.(用“because”和“both”升格)__I_like_Chinese_because_it_is_both_interesting_and_useful.__2．Schoolactivitiescanmakeourschoollifecolorful.Theycanalsoletusrelax.(用“notonly…butalso…”升格)__School_activities_can_not_only_make_our_school_life_colorful_but_also_let_us_relax.__IlikeChinesebecauseitisbothinterestinganduseful.Schoolactivitiescannotonlymakeourschoollifecolorfulbutalsoletusrelax.【俗語諺語】1．Knowledgeispower.知識就是力量。2．Readingistothemindwhileexercisetothebody.讀書健腦，運動健身。3．Anidleyouth，aneedyage.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。Step1審題立意(2020·蘭州)假如你是李明，你的英國朋友Peter得知你即將初中畢業(yè)，來信詢問你的一些情況，請你給他寫一封回信，要點包括：1．感謝關心；2.收獲與感受；3.期待共同努力，實現(xiàn)夢想。要求：1．80詞左右；2.條理清晰，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，內容上可適當增加細節(jié)；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)具體的校名、人名等信息；4.開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語：usedto；makeprogress；develop-habit；growup；makeeffort；beproudofDearPeter，I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.______________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，LiMing體裁：應用文(書信)人稱：第一人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；現(xiàn)在完成時；一般將來時要點：敘述自己的收獲與感受，表明自己對實現(xiàn)夢想的期待。1．引出話題：……謝謝你的關心。我即將從初中畢業(yè)。(thankyoufor，graduatefrom)Thankyouforyourconcern.Iwillsoongraduatefromthejuniorhighschool.tThankyouforyourconcern.Iwillsoongraduatefromthejuniorhighschool.2．主體內容：收獲和感受。(1)收獲：Inthesethreeyears，Ihavelearnedalot.Iusedtogetpoorgrades.Butwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates，Ihavemadegreatprogress.n(inthesethreeyears，alot，usedto，poorgrades，withthehelpof，makegreatprogress)Inthesethreeyears，Ihavelearnedalot.Iusedtogetpoorgrades.Butwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates，Ihavemadegreatprogress.(2)感受：Myparentsareproudofme.Now，Ihavemanygoodlivinghabits.Myparents，teachersandclassmatesallhavehelpedmealot(beproudof，livinghabits，helpmealot)Myparentsareproudofme.Now，Ihavemanygoodlivinghabits.Myparents，teachersandclassmatesallhavehelpedmealot.3．總結收尾：期待共同努力，實現(xiàn)夢想。當我長大了，我想成為一名教師。因為我希望我能幫助那些需要幫助的孩子。我會努力實現(xiàn)我的夢想。我希望我們能在未來合作。(growup，makeeffortstorealizemydream，worktogether)WhenIgrowup，Iwanttobeateacher.BecauseIhopeIcanhelpthosechildrenwhoneedhelp.Iwillmakeeffortstorealizemydream.Ihopewecanworktogetherinthefuture.WhenIgrowup，Iwanttobeateacher.BecauseIhopeIcanhelpthosechildrenwhoneedhelp.Iwillmakeeffortstorealizemydream.Ihopewecanworktogetherinthefuture.Step3組句成篇DearPeter，I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.Thank_you_for_your_concern._I_will_soon_graduate_from_the_junior_high_school.

In_these_three_years，I_have_learned_a_lot.I_used_to_get_poor_grades.But_with_the_help_of_my_teachers_and_classmates，Thankyouforyourconcern.Iwillsoongraduatefromthejuniorhighschool.InthesethreeyearsIhavelearnedalot.Iusedtogetpoorgrades.ButwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmatesIhavemadegreatprogressMy_parents_are_proud_of_me.Now，I_have_many_good_ living_habits.My_parents，teachers_and_classmates_all_have_helped_me_a_lot.When_I_grow_up，I_want_to_be_a_teacher.Because_I_hope_I_can_help_those_children_who_need_help.I_will_make_efforts_to_realize_my_dream.I_hope_we_can_work_together_in_the_future.Yours，LiMingMyparentsareproudofme.NowIhavemanygoodlivinghabits.Myparents，teachersandclassmatesallhavehelpedmealot.WhenIgrowupIwanttobeateacher.BecauseIhopeIcanhelpthosechildrenwhoneedhelp.Iwillmakeeffortstorealizemydream.Ihopewecanworktogetherinthefuture.Yours，LiMing★身份概述1．我是一名教英語的教師。(who)I'm/IamateacherwhoteachesEnglish.2．他是一位幾乎受所有人尊敬的科學家。(respect)Heisascientistrespectedalmostbyallpeople.3．他來自甘肅省一個貧困家庭。(comefrom)HecomesfromapoorfamilyinGansuProvince.I'm/IamateacherwhoteachesEnglish.Heisascientistrespectedalmostbyallpeople.HecomesfromapoorfamilyinGansuProvince.★介紹外貌1．Letmetellyouwhathelooks(look)like.2．Heisn'ttallorshort.He'sofmediumheight(high).[人教七(下)Unit9P50]3．Hehas(have)brownhairandwearsglasses(glass)．[人教七(下)Unit9P50]looksheighthasglasses4．我喜歡那位有著金色長發(fā)的女士。Ilikethatwomanwith

long

blonde

hair.[人教七(下)Unit9P52]5．你穿著一件紅色的夾克衫。Youarein/wearing

a

red

jacket.[冀教八(上)Unit1P4]withlongblondehairin/wearingaredjacket★介紹性格及品質1．我比大多數(shù)孩子更安靜，更嚴肅。I'mquieterandmore

seriousthanmostkids.[人教八(上)Unit3P21]2．我知道她關心我，因為她隨時都能夠聽我傾訴。Iknowshecares

aboutmebecauseshe'salwaystheretolisten.[人教八(上)Unit3P21]moreseriouscaresabout3．她也樂于助人，隨時準備幫助別人。Sheisalsohelpfulandreadytohelppeopleanytime.[譯林八(上)Unit1P8]4．他過去很害羞，很安靜。Heused

tobesoshyandquiet.[人教九(全)Unit4P26]helpfulreadyusedto【句子升格】1．Heisveryhumorous.Hemakesmeveryhappyallthetime.(用“so…that…”升格)He'ssohumorousthathemakesmeveryhappyallthetime.He'ssohumorousthathemakesmeveryhappyallthetime.2．OurEnglishteacherisverypatient.Healwaysexplainsthetexttouscarefully.(用定語從句升格)OurEnglishteacherwhoalwaysexplainsthetexttouscarefullyisverypatient.OurEnglishteacherwhoalwaysexplainsthetexttouscarefullyisverypatient.【俗語諺語】1．Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。2.Friendsarelikebooks—youdon'tneedalotofthemaslongastheyaregood.朋友就像書一樣——在好不在多。Step1審題立意(2017·甘肅省卷)今天是“父親節(jié)”，請根據(jù)以下提示以“MyBestDad”為題寫一篇短文介紹自己的父親。要求：1.文中需包含提示中提到的4條內容；2．可根據(jù)圖片發(fā)揮想象、適量拓展；3．句子及篇章結構準確、連貫、書寫規(guī)范；4．80詞左右；5．文中不得出現(xiàn)父親的真實姓名、工作單位及學生的任何個人信息。體裁：記敘文人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時要點：父親的年齡、性格、品質、愛好，對家人的愛以及“我”對父親的記憶。1．開篇點題：我爸爸是我認識的最好的男人。(know)MydadisthebestmanIknow.MydadisthebestmanIknow.2．主體內容：介紹父親。(1)基本情況：Heis45yearsold.Heissogoodatmakingmywholefamilyhapp.(45yearsold)Heis45yearsold.Heissogoodatmakingmywholefamilyhappy.(2)對家人的愛：①Whenhecomeshomefromwork，helikestotellussomethinginterestinghe'sheardorreadduringtheday.(tellussomethinginteresting)②Hispocketsarefullofchocolatethatalwaysmakesmehappy.(befullofchocolate，makesmehappy)①Whenhecomeshomefromwork，helikestotellussomethinginterestinghe'sheardorreadduringtheday.Hispocketsarefullofchocolatethatalwaysmakesmehappy.(3)關于父親的記憶：Myfavouritememoryofmydadisthathealwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakes.Buthetriestoletmefindmyownway，eventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt.(keepmefrommakingmistakes，findmyownway，gethurt)Myfavouritememoryofmydadisthathealwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakes.Buthetriestoletmefindmyownway，eventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt.3．總結收尾：表達感受和對父親的愛。這是我最好的爸爸。我愛他，我為他感到驕傲。(beproudof)Thisismybestdad.IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim.Thisismybestdad.IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim.Step3組句成篇MyBestDad

My_dad_is_the_best_man_I__know.He_is_45_years_old.He_is_so_good_at_making_my_whole_family_happy.When_he_comes_home_from_workhe_likes_to_tell_us_something_interesting_he's_heard_or_read_during_the_day.And_his_pockets_are_full_of_chocolate_that_always_makes_me_happy.He_likes_eating_noodles_best.My_favourite_memory_of_my_dad_MydadisthebestmanIknow.Heis45yearsold.Heissogoodatmakingmywholefamilyhappy.Whenhecomeshomefromworkhelikestotellussomethinginterestinghe'sheardorreadduringtheday.Andhispocketsarefullofchocolatethatalwaysmakesmehappy.Helikeseatingnoodlesbest.Myfavouritememoryofmydadisthat_he_always_wants_to_keep_me_from_making_mistakes.But_he_tries_to_let_me_find_my_own_wayeven_though_his_heart_breaks_in_silence_when_I_get_hurt.This_is_my_best_dad.I__love_him_and_I'm_so_proud_of_him.healwayswantstokeepmefrommakingmistakes.ButhetriestoletmefindmyownwayeventhoughhisheartbreaksinsilencewhenIgethurt.Thisismybestdad.IlovehimandI'msoproudofhim.校園生活★介紹學?；厩闆r1．Thereare(be)400studentsinmyschool.[冀教七(下)Unit3P36]2．IhaveChinese，English，math，historyandsomeothers(other)．[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]3．Thenewbuilding(build)isourlibrary.Itlooksmodern.[譯林七(上)Unit3P32]areothersbuilding★介紹學習生活1．這學期我有點忙。Iama

little

busythisterm.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]2．我的父母給了我很大的學習壓力。Myparentsgivemea

lot

of

pressureaboutschool.[人教八(下)Unit4P29]

alittlebusyalotofpressure3.因為格里芬女士，我付出了更多的努力，考試成績翻了一番。BecauseofMs.Griffin，Iput

in

more

effortandmyexamscoresdoubled.[人教九(全)Unit14P106]4．今年我更擅長美術。Iammuch

better

atartthisyear.[冀教八(上)Unit2P18]muchputinmoreeffortbetterat★校紀校規(guī)1．我們必須按時上課。Wemustbeon

timeforclass.[人教七(下)Unit4P21]2．我們不被允許在課堂上使用手機。Wearenot

allowedtousecellphonesinclass.3．我們總是要穿校服。Wealwayshave

to

weartheschooluniform.[人教七(下)Unit4P20]ontimenotallowedhavetowear★介紹課外活動1．Wealwayshaveabigsportsmeettwice(two)ayear.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]2．Swimming(swim)ismyfavoriteoutdooractivity.3．我經(jīng)常參加跳遠。Ioftentake

part

inthelongjump.[冀教七(下)Unit3P34]twiceSwimmingtakepartin【句子升格】1．Chineseisinterestinganduseful.Ilikeit.(用“because”和“both”升格)__I_like_Chinese_because_it_is_both_interesting_and_useful.__2．Schoolactivitiescanmakeourschoollifecolorful.Theycanalsoletusrelax.(用“notonly…butalso…”升格)__School_activities_can_not_only_make_our_school_life_colorful_but_also_let_us_relax.__IlikeChinesebecauseitisbothinterestinganduseful.Schoolactivitiescannotonlymakeourschoollifecolorfulbutalsoletusrelax.【俗語諺語】1．Knowledgeispower.知識就是力量。2．Readingistothemindwhileexercisetothebody.讀書健腦，運動健身。3．Anidleyouth，aneedyage.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。Step1審題立意(2020·蘭州)假如你是李明，你的英國朋友Peter得知你即將初中畢業(yè)，來信詢問你的一些情況，請你給他寫一封回信，要點包括：1．感謝關心；2.收獲與感受；3.期待共同努力，實現(xiàn)夢想。要求：1．80詞左右；2.條理清晰，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范，內容上可適當增加細節(jié)；3.信中不得出現(xiàn)具體的校名、人名等信息；4.開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞語：usedto；makeprogress；develop-habit；growup；makeeffort；beproudofDearPeter，I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.______________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，LiMing體裁：應用文(書信)人稱：第一人稱時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；現(xiàn)在完成時；一般將來時要點：敘述自己的收獲與感受，表明自己對實現(xiàn)夢想的期待。1．引出話題：……謝謝你的關心。我即將從初中畢業(yè)。(thankyoufor，graduatefrom)Thankyouforyourconcern.Iwillsoongraduatefromthejuniorhighschool.tThankyouforyourconcern.Iwillsoongraduatefromthejuniorhighschool.2．主體內容：收獲和感受。(1)收獲：Inthesethreeyears，Ihavelearnedalot.Iusedtogetpoorgrades.Butwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates，Ihavemadegreatprogress.n(inthesethreeyears，alot，usedto，poorgrades，withthehelpof，makegreatprogress)Inthesethreeyears，Ihavelearnedalot.Iusedtogetpoorgrades.Butwiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates，Ihavemadegreatprogress.(2)感受：Myparentsareproudofme.Now，Ihavemanygoodlivinghabits.Myparents，teachersandclassmatesallhavehelpedmealot(beproudof，livinghabits，helpmealot)Myparentsareproudofme.Now，Ihavemanygoodlivinghabits.Myparents，teachersandclassmatesallhavehelpedmealot.3．總結收尾：期待共同努力，實現(xiàn)夢想。當我長大了，我想成為一名教師。因為我希望我能幫助那些需要幫助的孩子。我會努力實現(xiàn)我的夢想。我希望我們能在未來合作。(growup，makeeffortstorealizemydream，worktogether)WhenIgrowup，Iwanttobeateacher.BecauseIhopeIcanhelpthosechildren