07 運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康 中考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文賞析

07運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康NO.1（2022·湖北恩施·中考真題）近期，恩施州《幺妹帶你慢慢?！仿毠すらg操比賽掀起了全民健身的熱潮，越來(lái)越多的人認(rèn)識(shí)到了運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性。請(qǐng)你為某網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)一篇文章，談?wù)勀阕钕矚g的運(yùn)動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)提示：1.你最喜歡的一項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2.這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處（至少2點(diǎn)）；3.做這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)（至少2點(diǎn)）；4.建議人們多運(yùn)動(dòng)。寫(xiě)作要求：1.文中必須包含所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，字跡工整；3.詞數(shù)為80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和地名等相關(guān)信息。Nowadays,moreandmorepeopletakepartinsportstokeephealthy._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿(mǎn)分作文賞析】Nowadays,moreandmorepeopletakepartinsportstokeephealthy.Ofallsports,Ilikeswimmingbest.Becauseitcannotonlybegoodformyhealth,butalsomakemerelaxed.However,weshouldpayattentiontothissport.First,wehadbetternotswimtoolong.Becauseitmayletushaveacrampintheleg.Second,wehadbetternotswimintheevening,whichmakesustooexcitedtogotobed.Let’sdosportsfromnowonandenjoyit.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“運(yùn)動(dòng)”寫(xiě)一篇短文。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱(chēng)以第一人稱(chēng)為主。分為三段式：第一段介紹自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么，介紹這種運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處；第二段介紹游泳時(shí)的注意事項(xiàng)；最后一段呼吁人們運(yùn)動(dòng)起來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無(wú)語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。NO.2（2022·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·中考真題）2022北京冬奧會(huì)的成功舉辦，掀起了全民對(duì)冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)的熱愛(ài)。SOS兒童村為了給孩子們進(jìn)行冰雪專(zhuān)項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練，現(xiàn)招聘10名志愿者。請(qǐng)為SOS兒童村寫(xiě)一則招聘廣告。招聘條件：1.擅長(zhǎng)冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)（滑冰，滑雪ski）2.善于和孩子們相處3.周六上午工作聯(lián)系人：丁老師（電話(huà)號(hào)要求：1.字跡工整，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確；2.詞數(shù)：30-50詞。VolunteersWantedforSOSVillage_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿(mǎn)分作文賞析】VolunteersWantedforSOSVillageSOSVillageneeds10volunteersforthechildren.Areyougoodatskatingorskiing?Areyougoodwithchildren?AreyoufreeonSaturdaymorning?PleasecallMr.Dinga【解析】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)招聘廣告，要點(diǎn)要包括題目中提到的所有，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語(yǔ)。2.

寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：寫(xiě)作時(shí)要緊扣主題，本文應(yīng)該用第二人稱(chēng)來(lái)展開(kāi)描述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；在介紹內(nèi)容時(shí)，力求語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確精煉，內(nèi)容完整，保證行文連貫，條理清晰。NO.3（2022·湖北湖北·中考真題）飲食不當(dāng)，可能會(huì)誘發(fā)多種疾病。以下圖片是李華同學(xué)的一次就診經(jīng)歷，請(qǐng)結(jié)合圖片及所給提示詞，發(fā)揮你的想象，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇不少于80詞的短文，講述一下他經(jīng)歷了什么，以后要注意些什么。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。提示詞：attheclinic(診所)；junkfood；stomachache；medicine___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿(mǎn)分作文賞析】PossibleVersionOne:Oneday,LiHuahadastomachache.Hisfathertookhimtoaclinicrightaway.Attheclinic,anurseaskedwhatwaswrongwithLiHua.Heanswered,“Ihadastomachache,maybeIatetoomuchjunkfoodlastnight.”Then,thenursetookhimtoseeadoctor.Thedoctorexaminedhimcarefully.Hetoldhimtotakesomemedicineandrestinbed.Onedaylater,LiHuafeltbetter.Herealizedthathewouldcatmorevegetablesandfruit,lessjunkfoodinthefuture.PossibleVersionTwo:LiHuaisaboywholikeseatingjunkfoodverymuch.Lastnight,afterdinner,hestartedeatingagainasusual.Afewhourslater,astrongfeelingofstomachachestruckhimandhisfaceturnedpaleatonce.Hisfathertookhimtothenearestclinic.Soonanursecameandaskedwhathappened.Thedoctorgavehimsomemedicineandtoldhimtostayinbed.Hedidn’tfeelbetteruntilhetookthepills.Junkfoodisdelicious,butitisnotsohealthy.Weshouldeatregularlyanddosportsoften.Thebetterlivinghabitsare,thehealthierwe’llbe.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇看圖作文。根據(jù)圖片以及圖片上的詞匯展開(kāi)想象寫(xiě)一篇作文，關(guān)于李華的就診經(jīng)歷。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過(guò)去時(shí)行文；人稱(chēng)以第三人稱(chēng)為主。結(jié)合題干內(nèi)容和圖片可知李華應(yīng)該是肚子疼。所以可以圍繞這一點(diǎn)展開(kāi)敘述。寫(xiě)作時(shí)確保語(yǔ)句通順，無(wú)單詞語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。NO.4（2022·湖南郴州·中考真題）近段時(shí)間，某中學(xué)不少學(xué)生因感冒不能正常上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。為此，學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華準(zhǔn)備利用EnglishBroadcast時(shí)間建議學(xué)生養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣和加強(qiáng)體育鍛煉，以提高身體素質(zhì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，為他準(zhǔn)備一份英語(yǔ)，發(fā)言稿?，F(xiàn)象因感冒不能上課，影響了學(xué)習(xí)建議生活習(xí)慣健康飲食……保證睡眠……加強(qiáng)鍛煉參加體育活動(dòng)……其他……期望……參考詞匯：affectvt.影響要求：（1）短文須包含要點(diǎn)提示中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）詞數(shù)：80左右（短文開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall!Thanksforyourlistening!【滿(mǎn)分作文賞析】Boysandgirls,WelcometoourEnglishBroadcast!I’mLiHua,thechairmanofStudents’Union.Recentlyquiteafewstudentsinourschoolcoul