專題25讀后續(xù)寫常用細(xì)節(jié)描寫解密（2）(人物描寫環(huán)境描寫)（講義）（新高考專用）

專題25讀后續(xù)寫常用細(xì)節(jié)描寫解密(人物描寫+環(huán)境描寫)(2)01專題網(wǎng)絡(luò)·思維腦圖02考情分析·解密高考03高頻考點(diǎn)·以考定法考點(diǎn)讀后續(xù)寫常用細(xì)節(jié)描寫解密(2)考點(diǎn)讀后續(xù)寫常用細(xì)節(jié)描寫解密(2)【高考解密】命題點(diǎn)03人物描寫命題點(diǎn)04環(huán)境描寫【技巧解密】【考向預(yù)測(cè)】04核心素養(yǎng)·微專題微專題讀后續(xù)寫實(shí)用的4大修辭手法05創(chuàng)新好題·分層練卷別來(lái)源體裁原文字?jǐn)?shù)話題主題2023年新高考全國(guó)I卷記敘文324邀請(qǐng)參加寫作比賽人與自我浙江卷1月記敘文349救助蜂鳥人與自然2022年全新高考全國(guó)I卷記敘文317患病男孩的奔跑人與自我浙江卷6月記敘文330社區(qū)志愿者活動(dòng)人與社會(huì)浙江卷1月記敘文345我和學(xué)霸的搭檔人與社會(huì)2021年全新高考全國(guó)I卷記敘文306母親節(jié)的禮物人與社會(huì)浙江卷6月記敘文315暑假打工薪水人與自我浙江卷1月記敘文348萬(wàn)圣節(jié)南瓜趣事人與自我2020年全新高考全國(guó)I卷記敘文325幫助弱者脫困人與社會(huì)浙江卷7月記敘文330與熊對(duì)抗脫險(xiǎn)人與自然浙江卷1月記敘文350撫慰狗狗心傷人與自然考點(diǎn)一冠詞命題點(diǎn)03人物描寫典例01【2021年1月浙江卷（圣誕節(jié)的尷尬）】Pumpkin(南瓜）carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition.WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.Inthepumpkinfield,Ipetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage—Icarriedan85pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14yearoldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner.Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedtoprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木塞)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshortlived.Thepumpkinwasheavy.“I’mgoingtosetitdown,now,”Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【理清故事脈絡(luò)】萬(wàn)圣節(jié)傳統(tǒng)：pumpkincarvingInapumpkinfield,wepetetoseekoutthebiggestone.確定獲勝者：Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhowasthewinner.Weforgottoweighourpumpkinsbeforetakingouttheirinsides.我的想法：Toprovemypoint,Idecidedtoforcemyheadinsidethepumpkin.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardhangettingin.【理解具體細(xì)節(jié)的描述】ForcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinIbentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Imanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit.Igotjammedabovemyeyes.Mynosebrieflypreventedentry.ToremovemyheadoutofthepumpkinImovedmyheadaroundtofindtherightangle.IgotintopanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetable.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.【真題分析】研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Para.1:Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Q1:HowdidIfeelwhilestuckinthepumpkinforsuchalongtime?Whatwasonmymind?Q2:Whatwasgoingonaroundme?Howdidmyfamilyreacttomysituation?Q3:HowdidIfinallygetmyheadoutofthepumpkin?WhatkindofsituationwasIinorwhatdidIlooklikeaftertherescue?Q4:Howcan“Thatvideo”inPara.2beintroducedinPara.1?Whowasfilmingtheincident?Icannotbreath. Mymothercametohelpme.Sheundomyrubberbandtomakemoreroomforbreath.EventuallyIwasrescued.根據(jù)下面的推斷，本段應(yīng)該是我的頭被拔出來(lái)的過(guò)程。Para.2:ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Q5:Whatwaspeople’sresponsetothevideo?HowdidIfeelaboutthevideo?Q6:Whathappenedtomylifeafterthevideowaspostedonline?Q7:WhatdidIlearnfromtheincident?Thepostgaintoomuchsharesandlikes.Iwasembarrassed.Helearnalesson.lookbeforeyouleap表明上一段落我的頭被卡在南瓜中的的過(guò)程被拍下了視頻。側(cè)面反映上一段我的頭應(yīng)該是從南瓜里弄出來(lái)了。最后一句的主旨升華?！緦?shí)用表達(dá)詞句】舒服地呆在……上restfortablyon伸入reachin松開橡皮筋undotherubberband設(shè)法把我的頭拔出來(lái)managetopullmyheadout自拍takeselfies【語(yǔ)料庫(kù)1】1.Towardstheendofthedaymylungspantedastheystruggledforoxygen.2.WhenIreturnedfrommyshiftIgaspedforbreathandmyheadwasdizzywithpain.3.ButIlaysuffocatingslowly.Myfacewaspurpleandmylipsturnedblue.Icouldn'tthink.Idriftedforafewmomentsandtheneverythingwentblank.Arushofairrevivedme.4.AgaintheNautilusattackedtheicesheetlikeahugebatteringram,onlythistimefrombeneath.Therewasashattering,crunchingsound,asitbrokethrough,shootingforwardsandupwardsandthencrushingtheicebeneathitasitlanded.Oxygenflowedintoeveryone'slungs.Weweresaved.【語(yǔ)料庫(kù)2】1.Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.

2.Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.3.Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.4.Thismademefeelsickandshivery.5.Afloodoffearwelledupinme./Fearfloodedoverme.6.Jennywasworriedsick.Herthroatwasdryandherfacewasburningup.【高分句型】DadwascalledandhegotmetopushmyheadfartherintothepumpkinsoJasoncouldreachinandundotherubberbandroundmyponytail.(Para.1)【譯文】爸爸被叫了過(guò)來(lái)，他讓我把頭伸向南瓜深處，這樣杰森就可以把手伸進(jìn)去，解開我馬尾辮上的橡皮筋。【分析】本句中and連接并列句，so引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。Dadwascalled、hegotmetopush…和Jasoncouldreachinandundo…三個(gè)句子結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，一氣呵成?！军c(diǎn)睛】Imanagedtopullmyheadoutandemergedwithmessyhairandmynosepluggedwithpulp.(Para.1)本句將“我”把頭拔出來(lái)后的窘樣進(jìn)行了細(xì)致的刻畫：withmessyhair（頭發(fā)凌亂）和mynosepluggedwithpulp（鼻子被南瓜瓤堵?。?。該描寫巧妙地將“我”的糗事與萬(wàn)圣節(jié)的主題“惡作劇”結(jié)合在一起，從而為下文文章主題的升華做好了鋪墊。【實(shí)用例句】Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofextremeregret.Icouldn’thelpthinkingaboutwhyIcameupwithsuchastupididea.Jasonsuggestedcallingthefiredepartment.Uponhearingit,Dadrushed…OnlywhenMommadeenoughspaceformedidImanageto…Mymomwasengagedinfilmingmyembarrassingandawkwardsituation…Surprisingly,itbecameahitgaininghundredsofthousandsofviews.Itcreatedhugeinterestandreceivedlikesandments…Constantstreamsofcuriouspeopleevencamebytotakephotoswithmyprizedpumpkin.DuringHalloween,afestivaloftrickortreat,Itrickedmyselfinstead.Undoubtedly,itwasthemostunforgettableHalloweenthoughIstillhavenoideawhosepumpkinwasbiggeryet.【參考答案1】Itwasfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.

Theairinsidethehollowvegetablewasfullofmyanxiousbreath.Icouldhearmysister’slaughterand

Jason’smuffledvoicetalkingaboutcuttingthegiantthingopen.“No!Notmyprecious

pumpkin!”Iprotested.Eventually,

Dad

helpedmeadjustmybodytoamorerelaxedposition,and

pulled

thepumpkingentlyoffmy

head.Hairinknots,

nose

andchaincoveredinpumpkinflesh,Iletoutasighofrelief.That’swhenIrealizedthecamerahadbeenrollingthewholetime!

ThevideowaspostedonlinetheMondaybeforeHalloween.Ilookedjustlikeapumpkinheadinit.Embarrassedandalittleannoyed,Ifledtomyroom,but

Mom

stoppedme.“Youhaven’treadthementsyet.”IscrolleddownthescreenandmarveledatthestoriestheviewerssharedaboutHalloween.Onegirlrecalledcelebratingitwithherbrothersandsisters,andthankedusfor“bringingherhome”.Thewordsbroughtwarmthtomyheartandtearstomyeyes.Ifeltluckytobeapartofthismischievousyetlovingfamily.【參考答案2】Paragraph1Iwasstuckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Growingmorepanic,Ibegantocry.Fortunately,hearingmecrying,dadcameandhelpedmelaymyheadonthetable,somyneckcouldrestforawhile.Thenhesaidtome“Listen,honey.Ihavetocutthispumpkininhalf.”Ihadnochoicebuttokeepstillwithmyeyestightlyclosedandlisteningtotheknifemovingonthepumpkin.Momentslater,myheadwasfinallyreleasedfromthishorriblepumpkincage.Thenmomtoldmeshehadjustfilmedmemanagingtopullmyheadoutofthepumpkin.我被困了五六分鐘，雖然感覺要長(zhǎng)得多了。我越來(lái)越恐慌，我開始哭了起來(lái)。幸運(yùn)的是，聽到我哭了，爸爸命題點(diǎn)04環(huán)境描寫典例01【2020年7月浙江卷（拍照北極熊遇險(xiǎn)）】Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【語(yǔ)篇導(dǎo)讀】本文是記敘文,文章以事件為線索展開。作者和妻子前往被稱為“北極熊之都”的加拿大丘吉爾鎮(zhèn)拍攝北極熊。夫妻二人做飯之時(shí),一頭饑餓的雄性幼熊聞著面包的蒜香味,靠近了營(yíng)地,猛烈撞擊營(yíng)地邊上的木質(zhì)柵欄。作者和妻子使出渾身解數(shù),想嚇退這頭熊,不料它“不破柵欄誓不歸”。無(wú)奈之下,作者求助營(yíng)地管理員,被告知救援直升機(jī)要30分鐘后才能趕到,只得先嘗試用胡椒噴霧噴灑北極熊的眼睛,不料這使熊變得更加暴躁,在千鈞一發(fā)之際直升機(jī)及時(shí)趕到,他們得救了的故事。【續(xù)寫思路】1.段落續(xù)寫:①根據(jù)第一段首句內(nèi)容“幾分鐘后,熊返回了我們的營(yíng)地。”可知,第一段可描寫作者夫妻二人如何再次對(duì)付熊及兩人在此過(guò)程中的緊張害怕。本部分可注重描寫夫妻兩人的動(dòng)作及恐懼心理。②根據(jù)第二段首句內(nèi)容“就在那時(shí),直升機(jī)趕到了。”可知,第二段可描寫作者夫妻二人獲救時(shí)的心情。2.續(xù)寫線索:熊返回營(yíng)地——緊張害怕——用面包攻擊——直升機(jī)趕到——快速登上飛機(jī)——熊把柵欄推倒——拍下熊“打劫”的畫面【精彩語(yǔ)句】1.精美詞匯withhorror恐懼地;drawonesattention吸引……注意;atonesrequest應(yīng)某人的請(qǐng)求takephotographsof給……照相2.出彩結(jié)構(gòu)①Probablyangeredbythespray,thebearstartedattackingthefenceevenmoreviolently.(動(dòng)詞ed形式短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ))②Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichimmediatelydrewthebearsattention.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)【參考答案1】Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad.Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.幾分鐘后，這只熊回到了我們的營(yíng)地。然后我們意識(shí)到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因?yàn)檫@次他似乎更兇狠了，而且像瘋了一樣猛烈地推了推籬笆。我的心狂狂，不知道該怎么辦。在這個(gè)關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻，埃利抓起幾塊蒜蓉面包，扔過(guò)了柵欄。它已經(jīng)成功了！熊阻止了進(jìn)攻，跑到面包邊。但沒(méi)過(guò)多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回來(lái)了。Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene—wewererobbedbyapolarbear!就在那一刻，直升機(jī)來(lái)了。“謝天謝地，我們得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升機(jī)一降落，我們很快就上了飛機(jī)，興奮而松了一口氣。當(dāng)我們安全地坐在直升機(jī)上時(shí)，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這只熊終于撕掉了柵欄，向我們留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相機(jī)，拍攝了這個(gè)罕見的場(chǎng)景，我們被一只北極熊搶劫了！【參考答案2】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Probablyangeredbythespray,thebearstartedattackingthefenceevenmoreviolently.Notknowingwhattodo,Ijuststoodtherefrozenwithterror.Apparently,Ellikeptamuchmoreclearheadfacingthiscriticalsituation.Shegrabbedabigpieceofgarlicbreadfromtheplateandthrewitacrossthefence,whichimmediatelydrewthebearsattention.Thebearstoppedpoundingthefenceandwalkedtowardsthebread,buthewentbackagaininaminutewhenhefinishedthebread.

Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.Thenoisesofthehelicopterfrightenedthebearaway,leapingclumsilyintothebush.Althoughhedisappearedtemporarily,wedarednotremainthereanymore.Climbingquicklyintothehelicopter,Islowlyrecollectedmyself!Atourrequest,thehelicoptercircledthesnowyareatofollowthebear,sothatwecouldtakemorephotographsofthebearrunningthroughthebush.Thedaywasreallyanadventure,butIthoughtitwasworthwhile.Thepicturestakenthatdaywereverybeautiful.Ifeltthecloseupsnapswetookwereworththedangerweexperienced.

人物描寫1.描述身材tall,small,short,ofmediumheight…awellbuiltman一個(gè)身材魁梧的人haveagoodfigure體型好wearshoulderlengthhair留著齊肩發(fā)agirlinherearlytwenties一個(gè)20歲出頭的姑娘tieinaponytail扎了個(gè)馬尾辮描述體型fat,thin,slim,big,small,ofmediumbuild,strong等.描述相貌beautiful,pretty,goodlooking,charming,sweet,handsome,funny,ugly,peculiar奇怪的,rough粗獷的,illlooking丑陋的，其貌不揚(yáng)的體格（build）:fat肥胖的;thin瘦的;slim苗條的;overweight超重;slight瘦小的;wellbuilt身材魁梧身高（height）mediumheight中等身材;averageheight一般身材;belowaverage低于平均身高;tall高的;short矮的;tallish有些高的;middlesized身高中等的;ofmediumheight中等身材;1.78meters身高1.78米。aweatherwornface一張飽經(jīng)風(fēng)霜的臉aquietgraciouslady一位嫻靜有禮的淑女a(chǎn)nacplishedyounglady一位年輕的才女4.臉型（face）:round圓的;thin瘦的;long長(zhǎng)的;square方的。Sheeatstoomuchthesedays,soherfaceisgettinground.她最近吃得太多了，所以她的臉變圓了。5.頭發(fā)（hair）:(1)發(fā)型（hairstyle）:straight直的;curly卷發(fā)的;pigtails辮子;crewcut平頭;bald禿頭的。Herhairisbrownandcurly.她有著一頭棕色而卷曲的頭發(fā)。發(fā)色(haircolor):jetblack烏黑的;fair金色的;blonde淡黃色的;golden金黃色的;dyed染色的;brunette淺黑色的;mousey灰褐色的;chestnut栗色的.五官:眼睛（eye）:deepset深陷的;sunken凹陷的;bulging/protruding凸出的;eyelashes睫毛;eyebrows眉毛.Hiseyesaredeepsetbecausehehasworkedtillmidnightforalongtime.他的眼睛深陷，因?yàn)樗@段時(shí)間經(jīng)常工作到深夜。HehadthemostbeautifulblueeyesIhadeverseen.她有一雙我從未見過(guò)的漂亮藍(lán)眼睛。鼻子(nose):long長(zhǎng)的;straight挺直的;big大的;small小的;flat扁平的;hooked鉤狀的.Hewasbornahookednose.他天生是鷹鉤鼻。Hisnoseisverybig,sohedoesn'tlikeit.他的鼻子很大，所以他不喜歡它。嘴部(mouth):tooth牙齒;even整齊的;uneven不整齊的;chin下巴。Whenhelaughs,weseehiseventeeth.當(dāng)他笑的時(shí)候，我們看見他有一口整齊的牙齒。Shehasadoublechin.她有雙下巴。14.Buthewaskindandconsiderate.但是他善良體貼。15.Herlovelyfacelookedpale.她可愛的面龐看上去蒼白。16.Heiswithhighcheekbonesandasunkennose.他顴骨高聳,鼻梁塌陷。17.OnceIsetagoal,Iwillmakegreateffortstorealizeit.一旦設(shè)定了目標(biāo),我就會(huì)竭盡全力去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。18.Hesatinfrontofthem,hisdustyfacemaskinghisage.他坐在他們前面,滿面塵埃掩蓋了他的年齡。19.Heisamanwithgreatdetermination,ofwhomtheperseveranceisoccasionallyunimaginable.他是一個(gè)意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的人,有些時(shí)候他的毅力是你沒(méi)法想象的。20.Herhusbandwassuchakindheartedandconsideratemanthathehidthetruthforhiswholelife.她丈夫是一個(gè)這么善良且體貼的人,以至于把真相隱瞞了一生。環(huán)境描寫（一）陽(yáng)光明媚，生命美好，心情愉悅的景色描寫1.

Thebeachtoyourrightstretchesoff(延伸)

tothehorizon,slowlynarrowingto

nothingness（虛無(wú)）,onlytoreemerge（重新出現(xiàn)）

againonyourleft.2.

WhenIwasbathedin

thesunlight,itfeltlike

theamberlikesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.3.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)下山，溫和的光線落在肩頭。4.

WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.陽(yáng)光傾斜而入5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天氣晴朗，碧空里星星點(diǎn)點(diǎn)的云雀在翩翩起舞。6.Iwasimmediatelystunnedbytheazureskywiththicksilverliningcloudsdriftingaround.我立刻被湛藍(lán)色的天空和成群飄動(dòng)的金色云朵所吸引了。

7.

Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.8.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一陣風(fēng)吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像那卷起的窗簾。9.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkled（撒、點(diǎn)綴）theslope.風(fēng)，輕柔而清冷，輕點(diǎn)這樹枝，攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的零星灌木叢。10.

Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn,Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!11.

ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.（二）暴風(fēng)驟雨、心情抑郁的景色描寫12.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，(烏云密布、黑云壓頂)andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.整個(gè)世界仿佛都被一塊巨大的灰色棉被籠罩。13.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon(蒼白昏暗的月亮).14.Thefrostyair（寒冷的空氣）blewin,cuttinglikeknife.15.Thefrigidgustsofwindstungtheirfaces.一陣陣寒風(fēng)刺痛他們的臉頰。Stung的原形為sting“叮咬”16.Thesummerbreezegentlymovedthroughtheleaveswithasighingsound.嘆息的聲音17.Therewasadeathlystillnessinthehouse.死寂18.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheradded

whatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來(lái)),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,which

thewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),

andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuch

cruelsightsthelongervisible.（白晝的延長(zhǎng)可以讓人多瞧一瞧這凄冷的景象）（三）煩悶焦躁的景色描寫19.It’shotenoughtomelthell.天熱得能融化地獄。20.Theairthathasbeenhotalldaybeesheavy.Ithangsoverthetrees,pressestheheadsoftheflowerstotheground,andsitsonmyshoulders.整日悶熱的空氣變得格外呆滯。它籠罩著樹木，逼得花朵垂向地面，也壓得我的肩頭沉甸甸的。（四）凄風(fēng)苦雨、狂風(fēng)暴雨、恐懼陰冷害怕的景色描寫21.Onthedarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashing

andthewindswerehowling(嚎叫).22.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.大雨傾盆，洪流暴漲，狂風(fēng)肆意沖擊房屋。23.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthe

lightcontinuedtoeandgointhesky(閃電在空中持續(xù)亂舞).24.Therewasnowafine,colddrizzlefalling(寒冷的細(xì)雨),andthewindhadrisenfromitsuncertain（模糊的）

puffs（一陣陣小風(fēng)）intoasteadyblow.Thefewfootpassengersastir（活動(dòng)的）inthatquarterhurrieddismally（沉悶地）

andsilentlyalongwithcoatcollarsturnedhighandpocketedhands（踹口袋里的手）.

早上：1.Thesweetnessofthesunfillsmylungs.陽(yáng)光的甜蜜充滿我的肺。2.Thefirstrayofsunlightistoofragiletotouch.第一縷陽(yáng)光太脆弱，無(wú)法觸摸。3.Springbreezedrawsthecurtainofcloudsandthesunshinefloodsintotheclassrooms.春風(fēng)拉開云簾，陽(yáng)光灑進(jìn)教室。4.Thewholeworldblossomswithonebreathofthesunshine.一縷陽(yáng)光，全世界綻放。5.Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆蓋了每一個(gè)屋頂，壓在老樹的樹枝上。6.Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatI'mthere.被雨露親吻，腳下濕漉漉的地面冰涼。鳥兒在我身邊忙碌著，根本不在乎我在那里。7.Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.一股濃濃的泥土香從地底升起，將一切都籠罩在它柔軟的懷抱中。8.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.拉開窗簾，陽(yáng)光灑進(jìn)來(lái)。9.Goldensunshine,fragilegreensandaseaoffragrantflowerscrowdintomyeyes.Walkingintothepainting,Iamtotallydrunkwiththetwittering(吱喳)ofbirds.Soonthedelicate纖弱的,精致的airandsoftraindropsmeltmyheart.金色的陽(yáng)光，嬌嫩的綠色，一片芬芳的花海涌入我的眼簾。步入畫中，鳥鳴啾啾，令我醉醺醺。很快，纖弱的細(xì)膩的空氣和柔軟的雨滴融化了我的心。10.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.CardiffHill,beyondthevillageandaboveit,wasgreenwithtreesandlookedbeautiful.那是星期六的早晨，整個(gè)夏天的世界都明亮清新，充滿生機(jī)。每個(gè)人心中都有一首歌。每一張臉上都洋溢著歡呼，每一步都充滿了春天?？諝庵袕浡巳说幕ㄏ恪４逋馍戏降目ǖ戏蛏剑–ardiffHill）綠樹成蔭，看上去很美。黃昏：1.Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,hequickenedhissteps.隨著天色漸漸暗了下來(lái)，光線也漸漸暗了下來(lái)，他加快了腳步。2.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.太陽(yáng)躲在山后，漆黑一片，什么也看不見。3.Fallingleavesfluttereddowninthecoolmidautumnair,biddingfarewelltosweetsummerandbeckoningtheautumnin.中秋的涼風(fēng)中，落葉飄落，告別甜美的夏天，迎接秋天的到來(lái)。4.It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingmindlesslydown,theairmoist,thesidewalkmushyunderfoot.天已經(jīng)黑了，雪還在下，一團(tuán)團(tuán)潮濕的雪花漫不經(jīng)心地飄落下來(lái)，空氣潮濕，人行道在腳下變得糊狀。5.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨水打在窗戶上，告別了最后一縷陽(yáng)光。6.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight，resemblingapitchblackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.余暉被急速落下的夜幕抹去，猶如漆黑的帷幕籠罩在天際。7.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.Occasionally,onewouldfallpastme,lightlyswayingastheairgentlycarriedittotheground.走在街上，樹葉在我腳下嘎吱作響。偶爾，一個(gè)人會(huì)從我身邊掉下來(lái)，隨著空氣輕輕地將它帶到地面，輕輕搖晃。8.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueandshimmering.湖水映照著頭頂?shù)奶炜眨瑑扇硕际菬o(wú)可指摘的藍(lán)色，閃爍著微光。9.Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像藍(lán)色畫布上的橙色顏料。10.ThestrongsunonmyblackhairwouldburnmeinminutesifIcouldn’tfindshelter.如果我找不到庇護(hù)所，我黑發(fā)上的強(qiáng)烈陽(yáng)光會(huì)在幾分鐘內(nèi)灼傷我。11.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太陽(yáng)落下，落在他的頭和肩膀上。晚上：1.Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight(昏暗的燈光)inthevillage.從遠(yuǎn)處，他看到村子里有些昏暗的燈光。2.Silencebetweendadandmemadememorenervousandscared.Atthatmoment,itwaspletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.爸爸和我之間的沉默讓我更加緊張和害怕。那一刻，除了天空中幾顆星星發(fā)出的微弱光芒外，天已經(jīng)完全黑了。3.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，風(fēng)，雷鳴般的烏云，讓我完全掌握在它們的力量中。4.Thesky,midnightblue,gavethesceneafairytalequality,andthestarsthatdottedtheskylitupthenight.天空，午夜藍(lán)，賦予場(chǎng)景一種童話般的質(zhì)感，點(diǎn)綴天空的星星點(diǎn)亮了夜晚。5.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.湛藍(lán)的天空點(diǎn)綴著飛舞的百靈鳥。6.Thewindwashowlingdreadfullyandtherainwaspouringfromtheheaven,whippingagainstthebranchesoflinedtrees.Theworldwasburdenedwithaseaofdarkness.Iwasseizedwiththeroaringpowerofnature,asenseofhorrorcreepinguponme.Iimmediatelyturnedaroundtoslideintothebedandcurledup.狂風(fēng)呼嘯，雨從天上傾瀉而下，拍打著成排的樹枝。世界籠罩在一片黑暗的海洋中。我被大自然的咆哮力量所吸引，一種恐怖感在我身上蔓延。我立即轉(zhuǎn)身滑進(jìn)床上，蜷縮起來(lái)。7.Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，風(fēng)，雷鳴般的烏云，讓我完全掌握在它們的力量中。8.Theeveningofthisdaywasverylong,andmelancholy(陰郁的),atHartfield.Theweatheraddedwhatitcouldofgloom.Acoldstormyrainsetin(陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來(lái)),andnothingofJulyappearedbutinthetreesandshrubs（灌木叢）,whichthewindwasdespoiling(摧殘),andthelengthoftheday,whichonlymadesuchcruelsightsthelongervisible.這一天的晚上很長(zhǎng)，很憂郁，在哈特菲爾德。天氣增添了它可能的陰霾。一場(chǎng)陰冷的暴風(fēng)雨襲來(lái)，七月的任何東西都沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)，只出現(xiàn)在被風(fēng)掠走（殘）的樹叢中殘酷的景象越久可見。9.Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds，andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.天陰沉沉的，烏云密布，整個(gè)世界仿佛都籠罩在一張巨大的灰色被子里。10.Thethintreeswereblowingwildly,anduntidygraycloudsweresailingpastapale,sickymoon.Thefrostyairblewin,cuttinglikeknife.稀疏的樹木在狂風(fēng)吹拂，凌亂的灰色云彩掠過(guò)蒼白病態(tài)的月亮。寒氣襲來(lái)，如刀割一般。微專題實(shí)用的4大修辭手法在續(xù)寫中若能適當(dāng)運(yùn)用比喻、擬人、夸張、排比等修辭手法進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)描寫，能加強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力和感染力。在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中，掌握積累修辭手法并學(xué)會(huì)靈活運(yùn)用是提高讀后續(xù)寫的關(guān)鍵。本文詳細(xì)解讀高中階段常用的英語(yǔ)修辭手法的使用，為了讓大家更好地理解并使用各種修辭手法，我們同樣為大家整理了一些優(yōu)美句子。修辭一：比喻比喻是最常見的修辭手法，是以兩種具有共同特征的事物或現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行對(duì)比，從而更生動(dòng)、更深刻地說(shuō)明道理，增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言的表現(xiàn)力。比喻分為明喻和和暗喻。例如：Sheisanangel.是暗喻；而Sheisasinnocentasanangel.是明喻。（1）明喻直接表明本體和喻體的相似之處，常用的明喻標(biāo)志詞有l(wèi)ike,as,seem,as...as,asif,asthough,similarto等?；靖袷绞牵罕倔w+比喻詞+喻體。例如：TheUSAislikeabigmeltingpotwhereimmigrantsofdifferentculturesorracesformanintegratedsociety.TheUSA是本體，喻體是meltingpot,比喻詞是like,喻體和本體的相似之處都是擁有“包容”的特點(diǎn)。①Loveislikethewind.Youcan'tseeitbutyoucanfeelit.