Unit1作文練習(xí)一家鄉(xiāng)變化類課件牛津譯林版八年級(jí)英語下冊(cè)

家鄉(xiāng)變化類寫作TopicManychangeshavetakenplaceinXuzhouinthepastfewyears.Pleasewriteanessaytoshowusthechangesfromdifferentaspects.smalloldhousesairpollutiongreenhillsandcleanriversnewflatsallkindsofshoppingmallsonlyafewshoppingmallsbyundergroundonfootorbybikehaveowncarswideandcleanstreetsnarrowanddirtyroadsFact1：Environmentpastpresentnarrowanddirtyroads;rubbisheverywhere;airpollution;largeopenspaces;wideandcleanstreets;greentreesonbothsides;cleanwatershopsandtallbuildings;Fact2：Lifepastpresentsmalloldhouses;listentotheradioor

watchTV;onlyafewshopsnewflats;alotofshoppingmallsFact3：Transportpastpresentonfootorbicycle;bybusortaxi;haveowncars；byunderground;Opinion...haschangedovertheyears.manychangeshastakenplacein....peopleenjoya...Lifetherewereonly...inthepast,butnow...peopleusedto...UsefulexpressionsPastPresentEnvironmentnarrowanddirtyroads…Livingconditionssmalloldhouses…Transportonfootorbybicycle…注意:1.短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.短文應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.短文不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。

Changesinmyhometown

MyhometownXuzhouhaschangedalotovertheyears._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Ithinkinsomewayslifeisbetternow.However,

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Samplepassages

Inthepast,peopletravelledaroundthecityonfootorbybicycle,butnowtheycangoaroundbybusorundergroumd.Mostfamilieshavetheirowncars.

Ithinkinsomewayslifeisbetternow.However,toomanycarsleadtoairpollutioninourcity.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecanrealizetheproblemandacttoprotecttheenvironment.Anyway,it'sgoodtoseetheamazingchangesinourhometownSamplepassages1.Inthepast,wehavefreshair,cleanrivesandahugearmyoftrees.2.Inthepast,theairwasfresh,theriverwasclear.3.Howeverbringsomepollution.4.Peopleliveaverymordenlife.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤拼寫錯(cuò)誤大小寫錯(cuò)誤謂語動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤缺少標(biāo)點(diǎn)和主語標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤Correction拼寫錯(cuò)誤1.Youcanalsobyunderground.2.Thereareveryfast.缺少謂語take