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Period4IntegratedskillsUnit2Naturaldisasters細讀文本寫作指導(dǎo)寫作實踐達標(biāo)檢測細讀文本1.Fillinthemindmap.Activity1細節(jié)把握herparentsrainyhousefloodnon-stopsave2.What’sMary’sopinion?Whataboutherparents’?答案
Marythoughttheyshouldleaverightawaywhileherparentsdidn’tagree.Fillinthemindmapwiththefollowingoptions.Activity2文章架構(gòu)Silence;Differentopinions;TrappedPlotline:
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→WhattodoTrappedDifferentopinionsSilenceFindsentencesdescribingscenes.Activity3增分靚句答案
(1)Ithadbeenrainingnon-stopforthreedays.(2)Thewindroaredandtherainbeatontheroofandwindows.(3)Thesuddensilenceinthehouseseemedtomakethewindandrainmorefrighteningoutside.Accordingtotheexercisesabove,wecanlearnwhencontinuingastory,wecanusethefollowingoutline.Activity4寫作模板返回寫作指導(dǎo)本單元的寫作任務(wù)是續(xù)寫被自然災(zāi)害困住的一家人的故事。進行續(xù)寫時要注意下面幾點:1.通讀全文,把握全文的核心內(nèi)容;2.明確故事中的人物關(guān)系;3.明確故事中的主要事件;4.對故事的發(fā)展進行合理推測。常用表達1.Mary’smothercontinuedtocomforther...2.Hearingtheknockonthedoor,Mary’sfather...3.Somepeoplerushedinthehousethemoment...4.Theytriedtheirbesttogetthemoutofthehouse...5.Movedbythefirefighters,thewholefamily...6.Whatyoudidreallymadeadifferencetoothers’life.返回寫作實踐ContinuethestoryaboutMary’sfamilycaughtinaflood.第一步審題謀篇[審題]寫作要求是續(xù)寫被自然災(zāi)害困住的一家人的故事。寫作時應(yīng)注意下面幾點:1.確定文體:這是一個故事。寫作時注意故事的要素和合理性。2.主體時態(tài):文章應(yīng)以一般過去時為主。3.主體人稱:由于是描述一家人的故事,所以人稱應(yīng)該以第三人稱為主。[謀篇]第一段:瑪麗一家人驚慌不已,不知道該怎么辦。一家人互相安慰。第二段:突然有人敲門,瑪麗的父親打開門,看到了一群人和一輛大卡車。第三段:大卡車把瑪麗一家?guī)У搅税踩貛?,有人送來了水和食物。瑪麗一家非常感動。第二步遣詞造句[核心詞匯]1.掩飾自己______________2.過了一會兒______________3.入睡__________4.匆忙地_____________5.裝滿……________________________6.滾落下來___________hideoneselfafterawhilefallasleepinahurrybefilledwith.../befullof...rolldown[連詞成句]1.當(dāng)看到瑪麗那么害怕時,她爸爸開始講故事來安慰她。WhenMary’sfathersawhersoscared,______________________________________.2.瑪麗正要睡著,這時有人在瘋狂地敲門。Marywasabouttofallasleepandatthattime____________________________________.3.在她們家房子外面有一些消防隊員和一輛卡車。Somefirefightersandatruck
.hebegantotellastorytorelievehersomeoneknockedatthedoorwildlywereoutsidetheirhouse4.既驚又喜,瑪麗的爸爸開始喊妻子和女兒。Mary’sfatherwassurprisedandexcited,________________________________________.andhebegantocallhiswifeanddaughter第三步句式升級1.用分詞短語作狀語改寫句1_______________________________________________________________2.用when作并列連詞改寫句2_______________________________________________________________3.用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句3_______________________________________________________________4.用形容詞作狀語改寫句4_______________________________________________________________SeeingMarysoscared,herfatherbegantotellastorytorelieveher.Marywasabouttofallasleepwhensomeoneknockedatthedoorwildly.Outsidetheirhouseweresomefirefightersandatruck.Surprisedandexcited,Mary’sfatherbegantocallhiswifeanddaughter.第四步組句成篇用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞語,把以上詞匯和句式,再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容,組成一篇英語短文。范文賞讀SeeingMarysoscared,herfatherbegantotellastorytorelieveher.Mary’smotherwasalsoworried,butshetriedtohideherself.Afterawhile,Marywasabouttofallasleepwhensomeoneknockedatthedoorwildly.Mary’sfatherwalkedtothedoorandopenedit.Outsidetheirhouseweresomefirefightersandatruck.Surprisedandexcited,Mary’sfatherbegantocallhiswifeanddaughter.Theygotonthetruckinahurry.ThetruckdroveMaryandherparentstoashelternearby.Mary’smotherwastooscaredtotaketheirbagfilledwithsomefoodandothersupplies.Hearingtheirstory,somekindvolunteersgavethemsomefoodandwater.Mary’smotherwassomovedthattearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.返回達標(biāo)檢測閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。AfriendofminewhosenamewasJohnSmithhadabadmemory,whichmadehimfamous.Hewassoforgetfulthathesometimesforgotwhathewastalkingaboutinthemiddleofasentence.Hiswifehadtoconstantlyremindhimofhismeetings,hisclasses—evenhismeals!Onceheforgothehadeatenbreakfasttwice,athomeandatschool.Hiswifelikedtoremindherneighbours,“IfJohndidn’thavehisheadtiedon,hewouldforgetthattoo!”SinceSmithwasaprofessoratawell-knownuniversity,hisforgetfulnesswasoftenanembarrassmenttohim.Hewasnotstupid,assomecriticalpeopletendedtosay,butjustveryveryabsent-minded.Oneahotsummerday,ProfessorSmithdecidedtotakehischildrentoaseasidetownaboutathree-hourtrainrideaway.Tomakethetripmoreinterestingforhisyoungchildren,hekeptthenameofthetownasecret.However,bythetimetheyarrivedatthestation,Smithforgotthenameofthetownhewasplanningtovisit.Luckily,afriendofhishappenedtobeatthestation.HeofferedtotakecareofthechildrenwhileSmithhurriedbackhometofindoutwherehewasgoing.Theprofessor’swifewassurprisedtoseehimagainsosoon.“Oh,mydear,Iforgetthenameofthetown.”“What?Youforgetthename?Maybeonedayyouwillforgetmyname!NowI’llwritethenameofthattownonapieceofpaper,andyouputitinyourpocketandplease,pleasedon’tforgetwhereyouputit.”Satisfiedthatshehadsolvedtheproblem,shesentherhusbandoffagain.Tenminuteslater,shewasamazedtoseehimoutsidethehouseforthesecondtime.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。“Whatisthematternow?”askedhiswife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hearingthecry,outrushedtheirneighbours,tryingtofindoutwhathadhappened.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文“Whatisthematternow?”askedhiswife.“Ijustcan’trememberwhyIcomeback,”repliedtheprofessor.However,therealreasonwasthatheforgotwherehehadlefthischildren.Feelingsomethingwrong,MrsSmithdidn’tbelievehiswords.Sheaskedherhusbandtotellherthe
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