高中英語短文改錯易錯題匯編-文檔

上蔡一高2016年高考高三英語易錯題匯編專題（二）短文改錯2016年4月11日Withthesummervacationcamearound,manyschoolleaversfeelagreatchancetoenjoythemselves.Hopeful,Icandosomethinginreturnformyparents’loveandcare.Besides,lyinginthefrontofmyschool,thewonderfulplaygroundmakesthecampusmoresurprisingbeautiful.Sohecameoutwiththeideatoplantbananascontainingaddednutritions.Headdedagenetothefruit,thusmadeitrichofvitaminA.TheThirdRoadrunsthroughthecenteroftheuniversitycampus,makestransportationveryconvenient.Wehavebeenplayingtogetherbeforewewereyoung.Onthatverymoment,Lilycame.Hurriedly,Itookitbacktothestoreandexplainedtheshopassistanttheproblem.Whilewegottoabigstore,wesawdownjacketsofvarycolorsstyles.IwishparticipateinoneafterIgraduatefromhighschoolonnextsummer.Thedeepblueisalwaystheirdreamplace,whereIbelieveisnowunderthethreatofglobalclimatechange.IbelievethatIcanmakeadifferentinkeepingit’sbio-diversitybyworkingwiththeconservationprogram.Butforthepoor,theyranacross,takingtheirwivesandchildren.Poorthing!SheshouldadmireXishi’sfrown,butdidnotknowwhyshewasbeautiful.LatFridayafterlunchbellrang,myclassmateswentforlunch,butIremained,askMr.Lisomequestions.Onedayacrowstoodonabranchnearherhomeandfeltveryhappyforapieceofmeatinhismouth.NowIrealizethattheprocessoflearningismuchmoreimportantandmyEnglishismorebetterthanbefore.IwillprobablyliveawayhomeduringthistimeandIwillpromoteindependence.Imaynothavesomanyhomeworktofinisheveryday,andIwillspendmuchmoretimedowhatIloveSomestudentsthinkthathikingduringvacationscanmakepeoplefeelhealthier,fresherormoreharmoniouswiththenature.Somehikersevenlosttheirlife.Inmyopinion,attitudeissomething.Nomatterwhatyoudoit,youshouldtakeitseriousandtryyourbestevenifyoumayfailmanytimes.Soonerorlater,youwillberewardedwithyourpositiveattitude.Wehopethathecanmeetfollowingrequirements.First,heiswillingtobedevotesomeofthesparetimetoservetheothers.Itcanneithermakeyourdinnermoredeliciousortospoilthewholetable.Scientistshavefoundthatbluemustmakepeopleloseappetite.Youneedtothinkitoverafterhelpingyourmumwithdinnertomakeabetterdecision.Therewasalotofnewbooks.Ididn’tknowwhatonetobuybecausethesebookswereallusefultome.That’sareallywonderfulfilm,Itisveryworthseeing.Idon’tthinkthattheproblemcanbesolvedbanningallcomputergames.Recently,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurveyaboutifstudentswilldosomepart-timeworkduringthewinterholiday.Thechildren,thoughsuffersuchgreatpains,weresofriendlythatitwasmucheasiertointeractwiththemthanwehadexpected.Shetaughtusgreatpatience,explainingeachstepslowlyandclearly.Thisfertilizerenhancesthesoilandsothevegetablesandfruitsarehealthyandbetter.Iunderstoodthathemissedusjustasmanyaswemissedhim.Thedayswespentatthecenterinspiredusboysreflectonmanythings.Losinginthought,Islippedonabananaskin.Afterherecovered,hewasgratitudetotheteachersandclassmates.AsfarasI‘mconcerned,it’stheloveandcarefromtheteachersandclassmateswhohaschangedhimentirely.Upontheirarrival,wegaveawarmwelcometothem,amongthemaboynamedTimwastostaywithmyfamilyfortheweekend.Thetimetosaygoodbyecamewhenwerealizedit.Timgreetedmeandexpressedthathowexcitinghefelt.Itisthegreatpressurethatoftengettheirchildrenveryanxiously.Onlyinthiswaycantheytrytheirbestandsuccessatlast.WewouldhavetoputoffthevisittotheWaterCube,coulditraintomorrow.Youmustn’ttookphotosinsidethemuseum,ifitisforbidden.----Wheredidyougetthisbook?----Ipickeditupfromasecond–handbookshopifyoucanknow.Canyouimaginethatawell-behavedgentlemanshouldsorudetoalady?Itisveryimportanttoreadthemaloudtoourselvesorsomeoneelsefrombeginstoend.I‘mquitenervouslyaboutwearingglassestoschool,becauseitwillbefirsttimeformyfriendstoseemewearingglasses.Somanyhelpwasgiventothegirl.Comparedwiththeescapingdriver,IwasproudofwhatIdid.OntheSundaymorning,shewasabouttodoherlessonswhileherfathercameupandadvisedhertotakeabreak.Thinkingitwasnowayout,Maryputtheshirtbackinherbagandlookedatitcareful.Afterschool,IwasabouttoenterintomyapartmentwhenIsawalittledirtydogliebesidethedustbin,Afterthebath,helookedenergyandrefreshed.Whatisknowntoall,someparentswouldrathertheirchildrenrenthousesoutsidetheschoolinsteadoflivinginadorm.Adormismorelikeasociety,whichenablesthemlearntoadapttoeachother,thusmakesthempreparedforthesociallifelater.Likemanysmalltownsinthesouthernarea,whichhasalotofsmallbridgesgoingthroughcleanstreams62.Theyaskedmetotakeatouraroundthecitynextmorning.63.IrememberedtolockdoorsbeforeIlefttheoffice,butIforgottoturnonthelight.64.---Hasn’thefinishedhishomework?---No,butheoughtto.65..IdesiretogetajobthatIcanusemyEnglish.66.IbeggedhimcometoBeijing,butherefused.67.Weknowthatmanyastudenthavejoinedtheclub.68.Everythingwasplacedexactlywhenhewanteditforthegraduationceremony.I’mtiredandcoveredindust.I’vebeendiggingalldayandI’llbedoingthesametomorrow.Soundawful,doesn’tit?ButI’veneverhadsomanyfuninmylife.Asanarchaeologystudent,IhavealreadyknewsomethingabouttheQinTombandtheterracottawarriors.MostChinesechildrencantellyouQinShihuangwastheemperorfirstunifiedChina.Hewasabrilliantruler,andhewasalsoacruelmanwhokilledthousandsofpeople.Whenhebecamethekingofthestate,heimmediatelyorderedworkerstoconstructanundergroundtombforhim,whichissaidtocontaingreattreasures.But,theactualentrancetothetombhaseverbeenfound,norhasthetombbeenopened.Thereareancientdescriptionsofcrossbowshidingatthetomb’sentrance.It’ssaidthatifeveryonestepsacrosstheentrance,thecrossbowswillfire.參考答案came改為coming;feel后加it2.hopeful改為hopefully3.surprising改surprisinglyout改為up;nutritions改為nutrition5.made改為making;of改為in6.makes改為makingbefore改為since8.On改為At9.explained后加to10.While改為Whenvary改為variouswish后加to；on刪去12.where改為which13.different改為difference;it’s改為itsBut改為As;across改為away15.should改為could;she改為it16.after后加the;ask改為asking17her改為his;for改為with18.better前more改為much19away后加from20many改為muchdo改為doing21.or改為and;the刪去22.life改為lives23.something改為everything;do后it刪去serious改為seriously24.with改為for25.meet后加the26.be刪去;serve改serving27.neither改為either；to刪去28must改為can29after改為before30was改為were;what改為which31.very改為well32.solved后加by33.if改為whether34.suffer改為suffering35.us后加with36healthy改為healthier37many改為much38boys后加to39Losing改Lost40gratitude改為gratefu41.who改為that42.them改為whom43.when改為before44.that刪去exciting改為excitedget改為gets;anxiously改為anxious46.success改為succeed47.could改為should48.took改為takecan改為must50.should后加be51.begins改為beginning52.nervously改為nervous;first前加the53.many改為much54.escaping改為escaped55.on后the刪去;while改為when56.Thinkingitit改為there;careful改為carefully57.into刪去;lie改為llying58.energy改為energetic59.What改為As;rent改為rented60.enablesthem后加to;makes改為making61.which改為it;through改為over/across62.next前加the63.on改為off64.to后加have65.that改為where66.come前加to67.have改為has68.when改為w