高三英語二輪復習讀后續(xù)寫助人類+難忘的父親節(jié)+講義

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。ItwasDale'sthirdSundayvolunteeringattheretirementhome(養(yǎng)老院).Hehadthoughtitwouldbeagoodwaytogiveback.Buttodayhejustfelttired.Whileonashortbreak,Daletookawalkthroughthegarden,Therewerepeoplesittingonbenches,chattingtogether.Awomansatknitting,lookingverypleasedwithherself.Thestrandsofbrightly-coloredyarn(紗線)disappearedquicklythroughherhands.Acrossthecourtyardtherewasamansittingaloneatatablewithachessboard(棋)infrontofhim.Dalewatchedwithcuriosityasthemanstaredatthepieces(子),movedthemanddidthesamefromtheothersideoftheboard.Onhiswayhomeafterthedayhadended,Dalefoundhimselfthinkingabouttheman:Howhewashunched(背的)overindeepthought,playingagameagainsthimself.Howodd,hethought.EachSunday,Dalewouldseethemandoingthesamething.Whileeveryoneelsetalkedwithoneanotherorhappilycarriedon,themanwouldsit,slightlyhunchedover,andscratchhischin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffthechessboard.這是戴爾第三個星期天在養(yǎng)老院做志愿者(養(yǎng)老院).他認為這將是一個很好的回報方式。但今天他只是覺得累了。在一次短暫的休息中，戴爾在花園里散步。有人坐在長椅上，一起聊天。一個女人坐在那里編織，看起來很得意。幾股色彩鮮艷的紗線(紗線)很快就從她的手中消失了。在院子的另一邊，有一個人獨自坐在一張擺著棋盤的桌子旁(棋)在他面前。戴爾好奇地看著那人盯著碎片看(子),移動它們，并從板的另一側(cè)進行同樣的操作。一天結(jié)束后，在回家的路上，戴爾發(fā)現(xiàn)自己在想這個男人：他是怎么駝背的(背的)陷入沉思，和自己玩游戲。真奇怪，他想。每個星期天，戴爾都會看到那個人做同樣的事情。當其他人互相交談或愉快地繼續(xù)交談時，這個男人會坐著，微微彎腰，撓他的下巴。他的目光很少離開棋盤。OneSunday,Dalewenttothegardenonhisbreak,expectingtoseethemanathisnormalspot.Buthewasn'tthere.ItwasFather'sDay,andthereweremanyvisitorsattheretirementhome.Theyhadjoyfulgatherings,enjoyingeachother'scompany.Daleshruggedandthoughtthemanmustbebusywithhisfamily.Thatafternoon,Dalewasmoppingthehallwayswhenhehappenedtopassbytheman'sroom.Thedoorwasslightlyopen,andhecouldseethemansittinginachairnexttothewindow,peeringoutatthecourtyard.Daleknockedlightlyandaskedtocomein.Themannodded.Dalesawacollectionofframed(放在框中的)photographsonthebedsidetable.“Arethoseyourchildren?"heasked.“Yes,they'reallgrownandlivefaraway.Theyhavetheirownkidsnow,"hereplied.Dale,notwantingthemantobealoneonFather'sDay,hadanidea.一個星期天，戴爾在休息時去了花園，希望能在他正常的地方看到那個男人。但他不在那里。那天是父親節(jié)，養(yǎng)老院有很多訪客。他們歡聚在一起，享受彼此的陪伴。戴爾聳聳肩，心想這個男人一定是在忙于他的家庭。那天下午，戴爾正在打掃走廊時，碰巧路過那個男人的房間。門微微開著，他可以看到那個人坐在窗戶旁邊的椅子上，凝視著外面的院子。戴爾輕輕地敲了敲門，要求進來。那人點了點頭。戴爾看到了一組鑲框的(放在框中的)床頭柜上的照片?！斑@些是你的孩子嗎？”他問道。“是的，他們都長大了，住在很遠的地方。他們現(xiàn)在有了自己的孩子，”他回答。戴爾不想讓這個男人在父親節(jié)獨自一人，他有了一個主意。續(xù)寫部分:Paragraph1:Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfromthetable.Paragraph2:Dalewasgladthathevolunteered要求:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。五要素分析：I.1.Thestorytookplaceinaretirementhome.2.AnoldmanandDale,avolunteer.原文中其他人和這個人進行了對比：Peoplesatonbenches,.chattingtogether.Awomansatknitting,lookingverypleased.Thestrandsofbrightly-coloredyarndisappearedquicklythroughherhands.Amansatalonewithachessboard.Hewashunchedoverindeepthoughtplayingagameagainsthimself.2.Everyoneelsetalkedwithoneanotherorhappilycarriedon.Themanwouldsit.slightlyhunchedover,andscratchhischin.Hiseyesrarelycameoffthechessboard.3.Thereweremanyvisitors.Theyhadjoyfulgatherings,enjoyingeachother'scompany.Themansatnexttothewindowinhisroom，peeringoutatthecourtyardwithacollectionofframedphoto-graphsonthebedsidetable.養(yǎng)老院里其他人都是開心快樂的而這位老人卻是傷心孤獨的。老人不開心孤獨的原因：Maybethethoughtofhisfamilymadehimhomesick,andthelivelyatmosphereoutsidemadehimfeelevenlonelier.故事線的發(fā)展：1.Daleinvitedthemantoplayagameofchess.2.Themanfeltsurprisedandhesitantatfirst.3.Daleplayedchesswiththemansometimes,duringwhichDaletalkedwiththemanandlearnedchessskills.4.ThemanfeltgratefulforDale'scompany,whileDalefeltinspiredbysuchaspecialexperience.Resolution:Dalelearnedthemeaningofhelpingothers.情緒描寫高分積累：驚訝：1.Hiseyeswidened,surprisewrittenalloverhisface.2.Histhroattightenedandwordsseemedtofreezeonhistongue.猶豫：Hestaredatthephotographsblanklyinsilence.Hehesitated,hiseyelidsdrooping,andanawkwardsilencefell.感動：Hisvoicevibratedwithexcitement,andhiseyesshone.Hislipstrembled,andtearswelledupinhiseyes.感激：Awarmsmilespreadacrosshisface,hiseyesradiantwithjoywhenhewon.Hiswrinkledfacelitupwithasmile.參考范文Hewentoutsideandgotthechessboardfromthetable.Inacheerfulvoice,Daleinvitedtheoldmantoplayagameofchess.Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedup,eyeswidenedandsurprisewrittenalloverhisface.Yet,insteadofresponding,hejustturnedhiseyesbacktothephotographsinsilence.ThenDaleaskedagainsoftly.Thistime,theoldmanacceptedreluctantlyandbegantomovethepiecesonthechessboard.Daletookhistimewitheverymovetospendmoretimewiththeoldman.Whenthelastmovewasmade,theoldmanwassopleasedthathistime-wrinkledfacelitupwithaglimmerofasmileinhiseyes.“ThankyouforgivingmeaFather'sDay.”Dalewasgladthathevolunteered.Forhim,theexperienceattheretirementhomewasunforgettable.Beforehemettheoldman,hehadonlyconsideredvolunteeringachancetoenrichhislife.Butitwasthatchessgamewiththeoldmanthattouchedhimdeeplyandtaughthimthemeaningofhappiness:Truehappinessliesinone'swhole-hearteddev