2023年山東省萊蕪市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)真題(含答案)

2023年山東省萊蕪市大學(xué)英語(yǔ)6級(jí)大學(xué)英

語(yǔ)六級(jí)真題（含答案）

學(xué)校:班級(jí):姓名:考號(hào):

一、l.Writing(10題)

1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledDoesIntensiveTrainingCoursesReallyHelp?Youshouldwriteat

least150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.現(xiàn)如今各種考試的輔導(dǎo)班越來(lái)越多

2.人們對(duì)此看法不一

3.你的觀點(diǎn)

DoesIntensiveTrainingCoursesReallyHelp

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledisaDiplomaEverything.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

accordingtotheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前社會(huì)上存在著迷信文憑的現(xiàn)象

2.造成這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3.我對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopic"ProblemsaboutReducingStudents'HeavyBurden".Youshould

writeatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(givenin

Chinese)below.

1.目前學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重的現(xiàn)狀；

2.導(dǎo)致學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重的原因；

3.減輕學(xué)生負(fù)擔(dān)過(guò)重的措施。

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacomposition

onthetopicToCurbSpending.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccording

totheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.現(xiàn)在許多大學(xué)生普遍花錢(qián)大手大腳，消費(fèi)水平高

2.有人認(rèn)為社會(huì)整體生活水平提高了，大學(xué)生花錢(qián)多一些無(wú)可厚非

3.你的看法

ToCurbSpending

5.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledRaisingDogsintheCity.Youshouldwriteatleast150words

followingtheoutlinesgivenbelow:

1.現(xiàn)在養(yǎng)狗的人越來(lái)越多；

2.不文明養(yǎng)狗給社會(huì)造成了危害；

3.我的看法。

RaisingDogsintheCity

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledForeignTravelersinChinaWillIncreaseafterBeijingOlympic

Games.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)的成功舉辦對(duì)中國(guó)的影響

2.奧運(yùn)會(huì)后中國(guó)的發(fā)展尤其是外國(guó)人來(lái)華旅游熱的發(fā)展

3.分析來(lái)華旅游熱發(fā)展的原因

ForeignTravelersinChinaWillIncreaseafterBeijingOlympicGames

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowritea

compositiononthetopicShouldEuthanasiabelegalized?Youshouldwrite

atleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese.

1.有不少絕癥病人和病人的家屬認(rèn)為安樂(lè)死應(yīng)該合法化。

2.但是也有不少人不同意把安樂(lè)死合法化。

3.我的看法。

8.1.目前社會(huì)上有不少依賴父母生活的“啃老族”(“NEET”即Not

CurrentlyEngagedinEducation,EmploymentorTraining)

2.分析觀眾喜歡看體育節(jié)目的原因

WhyDotheViewersLikeWatchingSportPrograms?

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay

entitledLeft-behindChildrenintheCountryside.Youshouldwriteatleast

150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時(shí)處理這些問(wèn)題

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)

11.

Acountrywillbecomericherifit,thoughpainful,fulfils.

12.

TheRomanEmpiredidnotallowtreecuttinginEuropeduringitsreign.

A.YB.NC.NG

13.

Everyyear,adomeownermayspend30%lessinenergyexpenditurethana

normalrectilinearhomeone.

A.YB.NC.NG

14.

Dr.PeterDiotbelievesthatitmaybeeffectivetouseARVsto.

15.

Becausepeoplehavenotconvincinglyfoundanyalienlifeforms,suchforms

arejustour.

16.Usingwhatyouknowinotherfieldsoffersyouthechancenotonlytotest

theknowledgebutalsotodevelop.

17.

AccordingtoWinston,themethodsof"leveraging"canhelppeople.

18.

Thegovernmenthastodecidehowtoarrangepeople'sassetsifthey.

19.

After2016,theBBCtelevisionserviceismostlikelytoobtainitsentire,or

partof,fundingthrough.

20.ObesityEpidemic

Askanyonewhythereisanobesityepidemicandtheywillsaythatit'sall

downtoeatingtoomuchandburningtoofewcalories.Thatisundoubtedly

true.Butit'salsotruethatweliveinan"obesogenic（肥胖基因的）

environment":calorificfoodisplentifulandcheapandourlifestylesare

increasinglysedentary.

Now,obesityresearchersareincreasinglydissatisfiedwithsuchexplanations.

Theybelievethatsomethingelsemusthavechangedinourenvironmentto

causesuchdramaticrisesinobesityoverthepast40yearsorso.Nobodyis

sayingthatthe"bigtwo"-reducedphysicalactivityandincreased

availabilityoffood—arenotimportantcontributorstotheepidemic.Butthey

cannotexplainitall.

Earlierthisyearareviewpaperby20obesityexpertssetoutthe9most

plausiblealternativeexplanationsfortheepidemic.Heretheyare.

NotEnoughSleep

Itiswidelybelievedthatsleepisforthebrain,notthebody.Couldashortage

ofshut-eyealsobehelpingtomakeusfat?

Severallargeepidemiologicalstudiessuggesttheremaybealink.Peoplewho

sleeplessthan7hoursanighttendtohaveahigherbodymassindex（BMI）

thanpeoplewhosleepmore,accordingtodatagatheredbytheUSNational

HealthandNutritionExaminationSurvey.Similarly,theUSNursesHealth

Studyfoundthatthosewhosleptanaverageof5hoursanightgainedmore

weightduringthestudyperiodthanthosewhoslept6hours,whointurn

gainedmorethanthosewhoslept7.

It'swellknownthatobesityimpairssleep,soperhapspeoplegetfatfirstand

sleeplessafterwards.Butthenurses'studysuggeststhatitcanworkinthe

otherdirectiontoo:sleeplossmaycauseweightgain.Onefactorthatcould

beatworkhereisthewaysleepdeprivationaltersmetabolism（新陳代源寸）.

Leptin,thehormonethatsignalssatiety（過(guò)飽），fallswhileghrelin,which

signalshunger,rises—andthisboostsappetite.

ClimateControl

Wehumans,likeallwarm-bloodedanimals,cankeepourcorebody

temperaturesprettymuchconstantregardlessofwhat'sgoingonintheworld

aroundus.Wedothisbyalteringourmetabolicrate,shiveringorsweating.

Keepingwarmandstayingcooltakeenergy.

There'snodenyingthatsurroundingtemperatureshavechangedinthepast

fewdecades.IntheUS,thechangeshavebeenattheotherendofthe

thermometerastheproportionofhomeswithairconditioningrosefrom23to

47percentbetween1978and1997.Inthesouthernstates—whereobesity

ratestendtobehighest-thenumberofhouseswithairconhasshotupto70

percentfrom37percentin1978.

Couldairconditioninginsummerandheatinginwinterreallymakea

differencetoourweight?Sadly,thereissomeevidencethatitdoes—atleast

withregardtoheating.

LessSmoking

Badnews:smokersreallydotendtobethinnerthantherestofus,andquitting

reallydoespackonthepounds,thoughnooneissurewhy.Itprobablyhas

somethingtodowiththefactthatnicotineisanappetitesuppressantand

appearstoupyourmetabolicrate.

KatherineFlegalandcolleaguesattheUSNationalCenterforHealth

StatisticsinHyattsville,Maryland,havecalculatedthatpeoplekickingthe

habithavebeenresponsibleforasmallbutsignificantportionoftheUS

epidemicoffatness.Fromdatacollectedaround1991bytheUSNational

HealthandNutritionExaminationSurvey,theyworkedoutthatpeoplewho

hadquitinthepreviousdecadewere-muchmorelikelytobeoverweightthan

smokersandpeoplewhohadneversmoked.Amongmen,forexample,nearly

halfofquitterswereOverweightcomparedwith37percentofnonsmokers

andonly28percentofsmokers.

PrenatalEffects

Yourchancesofbecomingfatmaybeset,atleastinpart,beforeyouareeven

born.Childrenof

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三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)

21.聽(tīng)力原文：W:Dad,Dad,Dad!

M:Uh,what?

W:Themovieisover.Yousleptthroughthebestpart.

M:Ah,ah,Imusthavedozedoffduringthelastfewminutes.

W:Right.Youweregoneforsolongyoushouldhavebroughtyourpillow

andblanket.So,whatdidyouthinkaboutit?

M:Well,overall,(19)I'mquitedisappointedwiththemovie.Imean,thestory

wastooweird;it'swhatyouhavetoadmit.Imeanit,really.Howbelievable

isaplotaboutacaptainwhosteershisspaceshiptothefarreachesofthe

galaxyandencountersaraceoffrogpeople.Imean,comeon.

W:Well,Ithoughtitwasfantastic.Imean,youhavetoadmitthatthespecial

effectswereawesome,andtheactingwasn'tbad,either.

M:Ah,comeon.Whatabouttheship'scommunicationsofficer?Imean,what

didyouthinkabouthim?Wasn'thealittleweirdtoyou?Hewasalways

talkingtohimself,andhehadthatfunnyhair.

W:Well,Ithinkthat'scool;youarejustoutoffashion.(20)Don'tyouthink

thedoctorwasamazing?Hewassocoolwhenhebroughtthecaptainbackto

lifeduringoneofthebattles.

M:Oh,(20)thedoctorwastheonlyhighlightofthewholemovie,butfrom

theveryscenethatyoumentioned,itjustwentfrombadtoworse.Andthe

photographywassofake!

W:Howdoyouknow?(21)Youweresnoringsoloudtheneighborsprobably

hadtoclosetheirwindows.Itwasthatbad.

M:Ah,well,it'sbedtimenow.

(20)

A.Heisn'tinterestedinthemovie.

B.Hesleptthroughthewholemovie.

C.Hedidn'tmissthebestpartofthemovie.

D.Hebroughtpillowwithhim.

22.聽(tīng)力原文：W:Johnthinksthatyoushouldnotfixyourcaryourself.

M:Whyshouldhecare?It'snothiscar.

Q:Whatdoesthemanimply?

(18)

A.ItdoesnotconcernJohn.

B.Johndoesnotcareabouthiscar.

C.Johnwillhelphimfixthecar.

D.tiewantsJohntofixthecar.

23.(40)

24.聽(tīng)力原文：M:IwassorrytohearaboutBill'sbeingfired.Iknowhewas

sickalotandthatheusually,gottoworklate.

W:Oh,itwasn'tthat.Billmadeabigerrorinlastmonth'saccounting.Even

thoughitwasn'thisfault,hisbosswasveryangry.

Q:WhydidBilllosehisjob?

(17)~

A.Hegotangrywithhisboss.

B.Healwaysgottoworklate.

C.Hewasfrequentlysickandabsentfromwork.

D.Hepreparedafinancialreportincorrectly.

25.(38)

26.SectionC

Directions:Inthissection,youwillhearapassagethreetimes.Whenthe

passageisreadforthefirsttime,youshouldlistencarefullyforitsgeneral

idea.Whenthepassageisreadforthesecondtime,youarerequiredtofillin

theblanksnumberedfrom36to43withtheexactwordsyouhavejustheard.

Forblanksnumberedfrom44to46youarerequiredtofillinthemissing

information.Fortheseblanks,youcaneitherusetheexactwordsyouhave

justheardorwritedownthe

TheAmericaneducationsystemrequiresthatstudentscomplete12yearsof

primaryandsecondaryeducationpriortoattendinguniversityorcollege.This

maybe(36)eitheratpublicorgovernment-operatedschools,orat

privateschools.These12yearsofschoolingortheir(37)mayalsobe

completedoutsidetheUSA,thusgivingforeignstudentstheopportunityto

(38)thebenefitsoftheAmericaneducationsystemand(39)a

qualityAmericaneducation.Perhapsoneofthemost(40)factsisthe

largenumberofpresidents,primeministersandleadersfromothercountries

whohave(41)theAmericaneducationsystemandgraduatedfroma

universityorschoolintheUSA.Thatiswhygraduatingfromanofficially

(42)Americanschoolandbeingexposedtothe(43)ofthe

Americaneducationsystemisaninvestmentinyourfuture.

TheAmericaneducationsystemoffersinternationalstudentsthemostdiverse

setofeducationoptionsintheworld.Infact,(44).American

educationpossibilitiesarealmostendless!Whetheryouwanttostudyatatop

USAuniversity,orhighschool,athoroughunderstandingofhowthe

Americaneducationsystemworksisessential.(45).The

informationabouttopuniversities,colleges,communitycolleges,graduate

schools,andboardingschoolsintheAmericaneducationsystemwillhelpyou

developthatunderstanding.Itisnosurprisethat(46)!

27.

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28.(22)

A.ItisconvenienttotravelinLondonbyunderground.

B.BanksareopenforthewholeweekexceptonSaturday.

C.Englishfoodisverydelicious.

D.Britishpeoplearefriendlytostrangers.

29.(25)

A.Manager.B.Teacher.C.Engineer.D.Joumalist.

30.

[BIO]

四、4.ReadingComprehension（ReadinginDepth）（3題）

31.

Thepurposeofthefederalneedsanalysisistodetermine.

A.whetherafamilyisonfinancialaid

B.howmuchofafamily'sincomeisdiscretionary

C.whetherornotafamilyisbelowthepovertyline

D.howmuchfamiliesshouldpayinstateandlocaltaxes

32.Themediacanimpactcurrentevents.AsagraduatestudentatBerkeleyin

the1960s,IrememberexperiencingtheeventsrelatedtothePeople'sPark

thatwereoccurringoncampus.Someoftheseeventsweregivennational

mediacoverageinthepressandonTV.Ifounditinterestingtocomparemy

impressionsofwhatwasgoingonwithperceptionsobtainedfromthenews

media.Icouldbegintoseeeventsofthattimefeedonnewscoverage.This

alsoprovidedmewithsomehealthyinsightsintothedistinctionsbetween

theserealities.

Electronicmediaarehavingagreaterimpactonthepeople'sliveseveryday.

Peoplegathermoreandmoreoftheirimpressionsfromrepresentations.

Televisionandtelephonecommunicationsarelinkingpeopletoaglobal

village,orwhatonewritercallstheelectroniccity.Considertheinformation

thattelevisionbringsintoyourhomeeveryday.Consideralsothecontactyou

havewithotherssimplybyusingtelephone.Thesemediaextendyour

consciousnessandyourcontact.Forexample,thevideocoverageofthe1989

SanFranciscoearthquakefocusedon"liveaction",suchasthefiresorthe

rescueefforts.Thisgavetheviewertheimpressionoftotaldisaster.Television

coverageoftheIraqiWaralsodevelopedanimmediacy.CNNreportedevents

astheyhappened.Thiscoveragewasdistributedworldwide.Althoughmost

peoplewerefarawayfromtheseevents,theydevelopedsomeperceptionof

theserealities.

In1992,manypeoplewatchedinhorrorasriotsbrokeoutonasadWednesday

eveninginLosAngeles,seeminglyfedbyvideocoveragefromhelicopters.

Thiseventwastriggeredbytheverdict（裁定）intheRodneyKingbeating.

Wearenowinanagewherethepubliccanhaveaccesstoinformationthat

enablesittomakeitsownjudgments,andmostpeople,whohadseenthe

videoofthisbeating,couldnotunderstandhowthejury（陪審團(tuán)）wasableto

acquit（宣布無(wú)罪）thepolicemeninvolved.Mediacoverageofeventsasthey

occuralsoprovidespowerfulfeedbackthatinfluencesevents.Thiscanhave

harmfulresults,asitseemedonthatWednesdaynightinLosAngeles.By

FridaynightthepublicgottoseeRodneyKingontelevisionpleading."Can

weallgetalong?"BySaturday,televisionseemedtoprovidepositive

feedbackastheLosAngelesriotturnedoutintoarallyforpeace.The

televisionshowedthousandsofpeoplemarchingwithbannersandcleaning

tools.Becauseofthat,manymorepeopleturnedouttojointhepeacefulevent

theysawunfoldingontelevision.Therealhealing,ofcoursewilltakemuch

longer,butelectronicmediawillcontinuetobeapart,ofthatprocess.

WhichofthefollowingstatementsisTRUEaccordingtoPara.1?

A.PartoftheeventsoccurringontheuniversitycampusatBerkeleywere

givennationalmediacoverage.

B.The1989SanFranciscoearthquakehasn'tbeencoveredbythevideo

programme.

C.Electronicmediacanlimitone'scontactwiththeworld.

D.Thoselivingfarawayfromacertaineventcannothaveperceptionof

realities.

33.SectionA

Directions:Inthissection,thereisashortpassagewith5questionsor

incompletestatements.Readthepassagecarefully.Thenanswerthequestions

orcompletethestatementsinthefewestpossiblewords.

Theconceptofpersonalchoiceinrelationtohealthbehaviorsisanimportant

one.Anestimated90percentofallillnessesmaybepreventableifindividuals

wouldmakesoundpersonalhealthchoicesbaseduponcurrentmedical

knowledge.Weallenjoyourfreedomofchoiceanddonotliketoseeit

restrictedwhenitiswithinthelegalandmoralboundariesofsociety.The

structureofAmericansocietyallowsustomakealmostallourownpersonal

decisionsthatmayconcernourhealth.Ifwesodesire,wecansmoke,drink

excessively,refusetowearseatbelts,eatwhateverfoodswewant,andlivea

completelysedentarylife-style,withoutanyexercise.Thefreedomtomake

suchpersonaldecisionsisafundamentalaspectofoursociety,althoughthe

wisdomofthesedecisionscanbequestioned.Personalchoicesrelativeto

healthoftencauseadifficulty.Asoneexample,ateenagermayknowthefacts

relativetosmokingcigarettesandhealthbutmaybepressuredbyfriendsinto

believingitisthesociallyacceptedthingtodo.

Amultitudeoffactors,bothinheritedandenvironmental,influencethe

developmentofhealth-relatedbehaviors,anditisbeyondthescopeofthis

texttodiscussallthesefactorsastheymayaffectanygivenindividual.

However,thedecisiontoadoptaparticularhealth-relatedbehavior,isusually

oneofpersonalchoices.Therearehealthychoicesandthereareunhealthy

choices.Indiscussingthemoralsofpersonalchoice,FriesandCrapodrewa

comparison.Theysuggestthattoknowinglygiveoneselfovertoabehavior,

thathasastatisticalprobabilityofshorteninglifeissimilartoattempting

suicide.Thus,forthoseindividualswhoareinterestedinpreservingboththe

qualityandquantityoflife,personalhealthchoicesshouldreflectthose

behaviorsthatareassociatedwithastatisticalprobabilityofincreasedvitality

andlongevity.

Theconceptofpersonalchoiceconcerninghealthisimportantbecause

五、5.ErrorCorrection?題）

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六、6.ErrorCorrection?題）

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參考答案

l.DoesIntensiveTrainingCoursesReallyHelp?"Takeourcourseyouwill

findexamisjustapieceofcake!"Everywhereonthecampuswecanfind

suchadvertisementswhich(1)attracttheeyeballsandtouchthedeepheartof

thDoesIntensiveTrainingCoursesReallyHelp?"Takeourcourse,youwill

findexamisjustapieceofcake!"Everywhereonthecampuswecanfind

suchadvertisementswhich(1)attracttheeyeballsandtouchthedeepheartof

th解析：本文是一篇六級(jí)考試中常見(jiàn)的議論文，要求考生就“強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

課程是否有用”這個(gè)話題展開(kāi)論述。根據(jù)題目要求，考生應(yīng)首先描述大學(xué)

校園存在很多的強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練課程廣告。然后提出支持或反對(duì)強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練的原

因.最后闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，做出總結(jié)。

一、大學(xué)校園有很多強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練班的廣告(advertisements,intensivetraining,

attracttheeyeballs)

二、支持者支持的原因

1.可以系統(tǒng)學(xué)習(xí)(learnsystematically)

2.跟風(fēng)，擔(dān)心落后于他人(followthetrends,fallbehind)

反對(duì)者反對(duì)的原因?qū)W習(xí)需要積累，參加培訓(xùn)班只是浪費(fèi)錢(qián)財(cái)(lasting

learning,money-consuming)

三、作者觀點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)需要積累，培訓(xùn)班不是捷徑只是增補(bǔ)(accumulated

learning,complement)

(l)attracttheeyeballs”抓人眼球,吸引人注意”。

(2)followthetrends"隨大流

(3)fallbehind“落后”。

(4)yield“產(chǎn)生收益”，此處yieldlittle意為“產(chǎn)生很少的成果”。

(5)money-consuming“費(fèi)錢(qián)的”。注意這種組詞結(jié)構(gòu)的使用。

(6)counton”指望，依靠“。

(7)serveascomplements”作為增補(bǔ)”。

2.1saDiplomaEverything?Nowadays①thereisawidelyheldbeliefthat

diplomaiseverything.Somepeoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts

andothersforcetheirchildrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncan

beexplainedbyatleast③tworeasons.④Ontheonehandpeoplebelieve

ahigherdiplomacan?guaranteeaprosperousfuturesuchassuccessful

careersandrespectablepositions.@Ontheotherhandthediplomapeople

hold⑦isattachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisa

preconditionforpeopletodoalmosteverythingforexampletofindajobto

haveadatewithagirl.⑧Inmyopinion⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomais

importantbecauseitshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.Howevera

diplomacannotproveeverything⑩nomatterhowhighadiplomais.A

higherdiplomacanonlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindof

education.Asforwhetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherhe

orsheisvirtuousthesestillremainasquestions.IsaDiplomaEverything?

Nowadays?thereisawidelyheldbeliefthatdiplomaiseverything.Some

peoplewillgainahigherdiploma②atallcosts,andothersforcetheir

childrentogetahigherdiploma.Thisphenomenoncanbeexplainedbyat

least③tworeasons.④Ontheonehand,peoplebelieveahigherdiploma

can⑤guaranteeaprosperousfuture,suchassuccessfulcareersand

respectablepositions.(6)Ontheotherhand,thediplomapeoplehold⑦is

attachedtotoomuchimportance.Havingadiplomaisapreconditionfor

peopletodoalmosteverything,forexample,tofindajob,tohaveadatewith

agirl.⑧Inmyopinion,⑨itisnodoubtthatdiplomaisimportant,because

itshowsaperson'sacademiclevelandability.However,adiplomacannot

proveeverything,?nomatterhowhighadiplomais.Ahigherdiplomacan

onlytellothersthattheholderhasreceivedthiskindofeducation.Asfor

whetherheorsheiscompetentinworkingandwhetherheorsheisvirtuous,

thesestillremainasquestions.解析：［寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥］①由題目可知這是一

篇分析型作文，需要運(yùn)用“描述現(xiàn)象一解釋原因一提出解決辦法”的模式。

本文按照要求可分成二部分。第一段簡(jiǎn)單介紹目前社會(huì)存在的現(xiàn)象，?第

二段分析造成這一現(xiàn)象的具體原因；第三段闡述自己對(duì)該問(wèn)題的看法。

②在每段的論述中請(qǐng)注意句式的變化，如定語(yǔ)從句、讓步狀語(yǔ)從句等；

注意銜接手段的使用，如however,asfor等。

3.ProblemsaboutReducingStudents'HeavyBurdenNowadaysstudents'

heavyburdenmakesthemsonervousthatitdoesharmtotheirhealth.Itis

notdifficulttofindouttoomanyproblemsappearinginoursociety;some

studentsgiveupstudyingevenkillthemselves.Someotherstudentsgotokill

theirparentsortheirteachersbecausetheycan'tbearanymore.Thefactors

thatleadtostudents'heavyburdenarethefollowingthree:firstlyitisbecause

ofeducationalsystem.Suchsystemforcesstudentstolearntoomuchcomplex

butuselessinformation.Secondlyschoolsonlyquestforhigherrateof

enteringschools.Inordertogethigherrateschoolstrytheirbesttodomore

trainingsothatstudentscan'thavetheirsparetime.Thirdlyparentshavegood

wishes.Parentsdonotwanttheirchildrentofailinthefuturecompetition.

Theyhavenootherwaybuttosendtheirchildrentoattendmoretraining.It

becomesurgenttoreducestudents'heavyburdennow.Inmyownopinionit

isimportanttochangetheeducationalsystemintohighqualityeducation

systemtoreducethecontentofthetrainingtochangethewayofevaluating

educationqualitytochangeparentsandsociety'sattitudetowardstalents.All

thesearethebasicwaysthathelpreducestudents'heavyburden.Problems

aboutReducingStudents'HeavyBurdenNowadays,students'heavyburden

makesthemsonervousthatitdoesharmtotheirhealth.Itisnotdifficultto

findouttoomanyproblemsappearinginoursociety;somestudentsgiveup

studying,evenkillthemselves.Someotherstudentsgotokilltheirparentsor

theirteachersbecausetheycan'tbearanymore.Thefactorsthatleadto

students'heavyburdenarethefollowingthree:firstly,itisbecauseof

educationalsystem.Suchsystemforcesstudentstolearntoomuchcomplex

butuselessinformation.Secondly,schoolsonlyquestforhigherrateof

enteringschools.Inordertogethigherrate,schoolstrytheirbesttodomore

trainingsothatstudentscan'thavetheirsparetime.Thirdly,parentshavegood

wishes.Parentsdonotwanttheirchildrentofailinthefuturecompetition.

Theyhavenootherwaybuttosendtheirchildrentoattendmoretraining.It

becomesurgenttoreducestudents'heavyburdennow.Inmyownopinion,it

isimportanttochangetheeducationalsystemintohighqualityeducation

system,toreducethecontentofthetraining,tochangethewayofevaluating

educationquality,tochangeparentsandsociety'sattitudetowardstalents.All

thesearethebasicwaysthathelpreducestudents'heavyburden.

4.ToCurbSpendingThemonthlyexpendituresofcollegestudentshavebeen

ontheriseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethatifthestudentsearnthe

moneythemselveshowtheyspenditisnoneofotherpeople'sbusinessand

afterallthegenerallivingstandardkeepsrising.Howeverthefactisthatmost

studentsliveonthemoneytheirparentsgivethem.Thelureofamore

comfortableandfashionablelifestyle—onewithnamebrandclothingmobile

phonesMP3anddiningoutorgoingtobarswithagirlfriend—makesmanyto

befrequentborrowers.Inmyopinionyoungstudentsaresensitivetofashions

andnewtrendsthustheyeasilyfoundit'simpossibletomakeendsmeetand

runintodebt.Whenastudent'sspendingstepsbeyondtheboundariesofdaily

necessitiesitbecomesakindofwaste.Furthermorewidespreadextravagant

spendingoncampuscouldhaveabadinfluenceonpeople'svalues.Butmany

studentsseeitasacommonpracticeandnotafault.Thougheveryonehasthe

righttoenjoyacomfortablelifecampusisaplaceforstudy.Sojustthink

twicebeforeyousignabill.ToCurbSpendingThemonthlyexpendituresof

collegestudentshavebeenontheriseinthepastfewyears.Somearguethat

ifthestudentsearnthemoneythemselves,howtheyspenditisnoneofother

people'sbusiness,andafterall,thegenerallivingstandardkeepsrising.

However,thefactisthatmoststudentsliveonthemoneytheirparentsgive

them.Thelureofamorecomfortableandfashionablelifestyle—onewith

namebrandclothing,mobilephones,MP3,anddiningoutorgoingtobars

withagirlfriend—makesmanytobefrequentborrowers.Inmyopinion,

youngstudentsaresensitivetofashionsandnewtrends,thustheyeasilyfound

it'simpossibletomakeendsmeetandrunintodebt.Whenastudent's

spendingstepsbeyondtheboundariesofdailynecessities,itbecomesakind

ofwaste.Furthermore,widespreadextravagantspendingoncampuscould

haveabadinfluenceonpeople'svalues.Butmanystudentsseeitasacommon

practiceandnotafault.Thougheveryonehastherighttoenjoyacomfortable

life,campusisaplaceforstudy.Sojustthinktwicebeforeyousignabill.解

析:［審題］

本文是議論文，結(jié)構(gòu)很清晰，就是描述現(xiàn)象，提出部分人對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的某

種觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。

［寫(xiě)作思路］

第一段：描述大學(xué)生花錢(qián)大手大腳的現(xiàn)象，可采用舉例子的方法，也可

以引用數(shù)據(jù)說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象。

第二段：指出部分人認(rèn)為社會(huì)快速發(fā)展的情況下大學(xué)生可以花錢(qián)大手大

腳，應(yīng)該解釋為什么這些人持有這種觀點(diǎn)。

第三段：提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，同意或者反對(duì)第二段中的觀點(diǎn)，講明原因。

5.RaisingDogsintheCityRecentlymoreandmorepeoplebegintoraisedogs

inthecity.Youmayfinddogshereandthereinpublicplacesorevenonbuses.

Ithasmoreorlessbecomeoneofthelatestfashions.Yetthenegativeeffects

ofraisingdogsinthecityareobvious.Tobeginwithitmaypollutethe

environment.We'canoftenseedogsdroppingtheirwastearoundthecity

whentheyarewalkedoutdoors.Fewoftheirownerswouldpickitupafter

thedogs.Inthesecondplacewithtoomanydogsinpublicplacescasesof

dogsattackingpeoplearenotrarenow.Finallythebarkingofdogsmayalso

disturbthequietneighborhood.Inmyviewraisingdogsinthecitymustbe

putunderstrictcontrol.Thosewhoraisedogsinthecitymustobserve

respectiveregulationsandruleswhichmaykeepthedogsfrompollutingthe

environmentandthreateningthesafetyofthepeople.Andifsomeonewants

tokeepadoginthecityheisrequiredtogetapprovalfromtheneighbors.

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