高考英語二輪專題練習(xí)（五）改錯專項-人教版高三英語試題

【二輪專題練】（五）改錯專項假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。AHowdoesthediseasepresent?Well,fromwhatisknownsofar,therecanbethenumberofsymptomsrangefrommildtosevere.Therecanbefeverandrespiratorysymptomssuchascoughandshortofbreath.Inmoreseverecase,there’sbeenpneumonia(肺炎),kidneyfailure(腎衰竭),anddeath.Themortalityrate(死亡率)wasnotknownyet.Howcanwetellifsomeoneisinfectedornot?Theinfectioncanbediagnosed(診斷)byatestcallingPCRorPolymeraseChainReaction(聚合酶鏈反應(yīng)).Thistestidentifiesthevirusbasingonitsgeneticfingerprint.Thereiscurrentnospecificmedicationforthevirusandtreatmentissupportivecare.There’snovaccine(疫苗)toprotectthevirus.Treatmentandvaccinesareindevelopment.BStickingtoavegandietmightsounddifficult,especialwithmanypopulardishescontainingmeatorotheranimalproducts.Yetinrecentyears,veganismhasbecomeoneofthefastest-growinglifestyletrendintheworld.AccordingtoHuffPost,morethan3millionpeopleintheUnitedStatesarevegans.IntheUK,about542,000peoplechooseveganismoverthepastdecade.Whatisdrivingthisgrowthinveganism?Onereasonmaybethatpeoplewanttoprotecttheenvironment.Producemeatanddairyproductsisknowntobestressfulfortheenvironment.Accordingtoa2013studybytheUNFoodandAgricultureOrganization,globalmeatmanufacturingcausesabout18percentoftheworld’sgreenhousegasemissions.Thisfigureishighthanalltheworld’scars,trainsandplanescombined.AccordingtoBBCNews,anotherreasoniswhymanyoftoday’syoungpeoplebelieveit’swrongtokillanimalsforfood.Formanypeople,veganismsimplymeanseatingnomeat,cheeseoreggs,andgoinganimal-freealsoappliestofashionandmanufacturing.Forexample,leatherisusedtomakeshoesandclothing.Everyyearmorethanabillionanimals,fromcowstosnakes,killedtomakeleatherproductsfromtheirskins.Now,manybrandsarelookingothermaterials.So,ifyou’reinterestedinprotectinganimalsandtosavingtheenvironment,youmightwanttogiveveganismatry.CWhenIwasyoung,Ididn’tknowwhatfriendship.WhenIstayedwithmyfriends,awarmfeelingcameoutofthebottomfrommyheart.NowIhavegrownupandgotmanyfriend.AndIhavebeentastedthepleasantfeelingoffriendship.WhenIamhappy,theyarealsohappyandsharedthehappinesswithme.WhenImakeprogress,theywillbeveryexciting.Instead,whenI’minadifficultsituation,theywillofferhelptome.Sofriendshipisneveranone-wayticket.Ifwewanttogetthem,wemusttreatotherswellatfirst.Weshouldalwaysbereadytohelpothers,especiallythattheyareindifficultsituations.DIcan’tswimbecauseIhaveastrongfearofwater.Lookbackmychildhoodexperiences,Ithinkthatthreereasonsmightexplainthefear.ThefirstreasonisthatIwasnotallowtogonearthewaterwhenIwasachild,formymotherhadaunreasonablefearofit.So,evenasachildthatIwastaughttoseethewaterassomethingdanger.Second,myeyesbecamebadwhenIwasfive.IfItookoffmyglassinthewater,Icouldn’tseeanything,orthisincreasedmyfear.TheworstpartofmyexperienceisthatasachildIsawaneighbordrowning.AfterthenIhavebeenmorefrightened.EGetagoodeducationismoreimportanttodaythaneverbefore.InCanadamostlychildrenattendpublicschools.Publicschoolsaremainlyfoundbygovernmentsthroughtaxincome.StudentsinCanadataughtinEnglishandinFrench.TherestofCanadianchildrenattendprivateschools,thataresupportedmainlybyfeespayingbyparents.Inlaw,thechildrenmustattendtheschoolfrom5to16.ThereisseveraldifferentlevelsintheCanadianeducationsystem.ThefirstwascalledElementarySchools,whichincludekindergartensthroughgrade7or8.FAfewmonthsafterreturningtheUSfromGermany,Itook partatacollegecourseinFrench.SinceIcanspeakGermanwellinGermany,Ithoughtthatitmightbeinterestedtobeginstudyinganotherlanguage.Inthefirstclass,theteacheraskedustodoapronunciationexercise,inwhichhewouldsayonewordortwoinFrench,andeachstudentwoulddotheirbesttocopy.Whenhegottome,hekepthavingmetosaymorewords,andIfinallyaskedhimwhat.“Ifinditgreatfuns.It’sthefirsttimeI’veheardanAmericanspeakFrenchwithaGermanaccent,”heexplainedit.GDearLinda,Iamverysorrytohearthatyouarebadillinhospital.Areyougettingbetternow?Pleasedon’tworryaboutmyillness.Allyoushoulddonowistohavegoodrestandfollowthedoctor’sadvices.Atpresent,wearelearningsomenewlessons.Theyaren’tverydifficult,butyoudon’tneedtoworryaboutyourstudy.Whenyougotbacktoschool,weareallwillinglytohelpyouwiththosemissinglessonsattheweekend.Youwillnotmissonthefinalexam.Ourheadteacher,togetherwithourclass,aregoingtothehospitaltoseeingyounextWednesday.Ihopeyouwillrecoversoon.Bestregards.Yours,LiHuaHIliveinatypicalChinesefamilyoffourgenerationslivedtogetherundersameroof.Everyonehasfunswitheachotherhere.Everynight,wewillhavedinnertogether,talkingorlaughingaroundthedinnertablesothatalltheworriesofthedaywillbesweptaway.Atweekends,DadwilltakeGrandpa,thatlikesoutdooractivitiesalot,tothecountrysidetofish.MomandGrandmawillcookdeliciousfoodforourselves.Whentheweatherisfine,Iwillpushmy95-year-oldgreatgrandmotherinawheelchairtosunbatheintheyard.MyfamilyissuchharmoniousthatIhavebeengrownupintoapersonwithloveandresponsibility.IwilldefiniteteachwhatIhadalreadylearnedtomyfuturechildren.

參考答案A1.第一段第2句：the改為a2.第一段第2句：range改為ranging3.第一段第3句：short改為shortness4.第一段第4句：case改為cases5.第一段第5句：was改為is6.第二段第1句：if改為whether7.第二段第2句：calling改為called8.第二段第3句：basing改為based9.第二段第4句：current改為currently10.第二段第5句：protect后面加againstB1.第一段第1句：especial改為especially2.第一段第2句：trend改為trends3.第一段第4句：choose改為havechosen4.第二段第3句：Produce改為Producing5.第二段第5句：high改為higher6.第二段第6句：why改為that7.第三段第1句：第一個and改為but8.第三段第3句：killed改為arekilled9.第三段第4句：在arelooking后增添for10.第三段第5句：刪掉tosavingtheenvironment中的toC1.第一句：在friendship后加was2.第二句：from改為of3.第三句：friend改為friends4.第四句：刪去been5.第五句：shared改為share6.第六句：exciting改為excited7.第八句：So改為But8.第八句：an改為a9.第九句：them改為it10.第十句：that改為whenD1.第二句：Look改為Looking2.第二句：my前面加on/upon3.第三句：allow改為allowed4.第三句：第二個a改為an5.第四句：刪掉that6.第四句：danger改為dangerous7.第六句：glass改為glasses8.第六句：or改為so9.第七句：drowning改為drowned10.第八句：After改為SinceE1.第一句：Get改為Getting2.第二句：mostly改為most3.第三句：found改為founded4.第四句：在taught之前加are5.第五句：that改為which6.第五句：paying改為paid7.第六句：In改為By8.第六句：刪掉school前面的the9