作文升級：外刊文章分析對比（9）講義 高三上學(xué)期英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

如今，許多人工智能模型都在大量生成粗制濫造的音樂，有些是免費的。難怪許多人害怕世界將充斥著千篇一律、情感貧瘠的曲調(diào)，音樂家逐漸會被邊緣化。然而，也有更樂觀的跡象表明，AI很可能大大促進(jìn)音樂創(chuàng)造力迸發(fā)。你寫的Today,manyAlmodelsgeneratealargeamountofmusicwithlowquality,someofwhicharefreeofcharge.It'snowondermanypeoplefearaworldfloodedwithrepetitiveandemotionallybarrentunes,andmusicianswillbegraduallymarginalised.However,therearealsomoreoptimisticsignsthatAlcouldgreatlyfacilitateaburstinmusicalcreativity.外刊的Today,numerousAlmodelschurnout,somefreeofcharge,themusicitself.Unsurprisingly,manyfearaworldfloodedwithgenericandemotionallybarrentunes,withhumanmusiciansedgedoutintheprocess.Yettherearebrightersigns,too,thatAlmaywelldriveaboominmusicalcreativity.句型部分1.如今，許多人工智能模型都在大量生成粗制濫造的音樂，有些是免費的。Today,manyAImodelsgeneratealargeamountofmusicwithlowquality,someofwhicharefreeofcharge.→Today,numerousAlmodelschurnout,somefreeofcharge,themusicitself.獨立主格大家都學(xué)過主句+各種從句的復(fù)合句式，獨立主格跟各種從句一樣，也是一種從屬于主句的結(jié)構(gòu)?？聪逻叺睦?(皇帝身后跟著許多官員，當(dāng)中的一些人充滿了自豪感。)Theemperorwasfollowedbyanumberofofficials,someofwhomwerefullofpride.(定語從句)→Theemperorwasfollowedbyanumberofofficials,somefullofpride.(獨立主格)由此可見，從定語從句轉(zhuǎn)換成獨立主格，需要去掉引導(dǎo)詞whom，也去掉謂語動詞were，直接是主語+后面的部分。獨立主格常用于正式語體，特別是文學(xué)體裁。如果說someofwhomwerefullofpride譯作“當(dāng)中的一些人充滿了自豪感”,那么“somefullofpride”就大概是“些人滿身自豪”這種感覺。外刊原文則是把someofwhicharefreeofcharge改成獨立主格somefreeofcharge并插到句子中間。獨立主格的位置很靈活，句首句尾，作為插入語放入句中都可以。上邊的例子是系表結(jié)構(gòu)(即謂語動詞是be等系動詞的結(jié)構(gòu))轉(zhuǎn)換過來的獨立主格。有一種語法結(jié)構(gòu)叫做無動詞分句，其實就是它。下面再來看看謂語是實義動詞的例子：(如果天氣允許，板球比賽將于周三舉行。)Iftheweatherpermits,thecricketmatchwillbeplayedonWednesday.→Weatherpermitting,thecricketmatchwillbeplayedonWednesday.由此可見，謂語動詞在獨立主格中會改為非謂語形式(常見的非謂語形式是ing分詞、ed分詞和todo不定式)。上邊是ing分詞的例子，表示主動。ed分詞用來表被動：(工作完成后，我們回家了。)Aftertheworkhadbeendone,wewenthome.→Theworkdone,wewenthome.todo不定式用來表示還沒做，打算做：(經(jīng)理看起來憂心忡忡，有很多事情要解決。)Themanagerlooksworried,sincetherearemanythingstosettle.→Themanagerlooksworried,manythingstosettle.總之，獨立主格就是這樣一種比較高級的從屬結(jié)構(gòu)。2.難怪許多人害怕世界將充斥著千篇一律、情感貧瘠的曲調(diào)，音樂家逐漸會被邊緣化。It'snowondermanypeoplefearaworldfloodedwithrepetitiveandemotionallybarrentunes,andmusicianswillbegraduallymarginalised.→Unsurprisingly,manyfearaworldfloodedwithgenericandemotionallybarrentunes,withhumanmusiciansedgedoutintheprocess.with引導(dǎo)的介詞詞組外刊作者使用的withhumanmusiciansedgedoutintheprocess同樣是一種從屬結(jié)構(gòu)?？梢园l(fā)現(xiàn)它其實跟獨立主格很像，只是多了with。with詞組和獨立主格可以互換，意思幾乎不變，只有行文風(fēng)格改變。例：Hefellasleepwiththelampburning.(他燃著燈睡著了。)→Hefellasleep,thelampburning.(他已入睡,燈火鬧珊。)Themurdererwasbroughtin,withhishandstiedbehindhisback.(兇手被帶進(jìn)來時,雙手被反綁在背后。)→Themurdererwasbroughtin,handstiedbehindhisback.(兇手被押入,雙手后束。)可以感覺到獨立主格比較詩意，或像文言文般簡潔，with比較通俗。措辭部分1.如今，許多人工智能模型都在大量生成粗制濫造的音樂，有些是免費的。Today,manyAlmodelsgeneratealargeamountofmusicwithlowquality,someofwhicharefreeofcharge.→Today,numerousAlmodelschurnout,somefreeofcharge,themusicitself.大量生成粗制濫造的音樂generatealargeamountofmusicwithlowquality→churnoutthemusicitselfchurnout[t???rn]=toproducelargeamountsofsomethingquickly(usuallysomethingoflowquality)大量生產(chǎn)(通常是貶義，產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量不怎么好)。例：Thefactorychurnsoutthousandsofpairsoftheseshoeseveryweek.(工廠每周生產(chǎn)數(shù)千雙這樣的鞋子。)Shechurnsoutanewbest-sellingnoveleveryyear.(她每年都會推出一本新的暢銷小說。)音樂music→themusicitself這里用反身代詞強(qiáng)調(diào)AI生成的不是什么簡單的旋律，而正是我們平時所聽的編曲完整的音樂。反身代詞通常表示“…本身”,例:Persistenceitselfisasuccess.(堅持本身就是一種成功。)2.難怪許多人害怕世界將充斥著千篇一律、情感貧瘠的曲調(diào)，音樂家逐漸會被邊緣化。It'snowondermanypeoplefearaworldfloodedwithrepetitiveandemotionallybarrentunes,andmusicianswillbegraduallymarginalised.→Unsurprisingly,manyfearaworldfloodedwithgenericandemotionallybarrentunes,withhumanmusiciansedgedoutintheprocess.千篇一律repetitive→genericgeneric[d??'ner?k]adj.大約等于=general例:ParmesanisagenerictermusedtodescribeafamilyofhardItaliancheeses.(巴爾馬干酪是一個用來描述一類堅硬的意大利奶酪的通用名稱。)這里的generic指的是同類,同質(zhì)化的意思。用repetitive也可以，表示一模一樣地重復(fù)；generic則表示在幾乎一樣的基礎(chǔ)上還存在些許不同，更符合實際一些。被邊緣化bemarginalised→beedgedout兩個用法都正確。但有時候使用初階詞匯反而比高階詞匯更生動哦。例：ruinone'sreputation→blackenone'sname(毀掉某人的名聲)optimisticsign→brightersign(樂觀的跡象這個詞組在下一句有)逐漸gradually→intheprocess兩種用法都可以。這里使用intheprocess照應(yīng)了前半句的現(xiàn)象。例：Withthreemonthsofpsychotherapy,shegraduallybuiltanewlife.=Shehadbeeninthreemonthsofpsychotherapyandbuiltanewlifeintheprocess.(通過三個月的心理治療，她逐漸建立起新生活。)3.然而，也有更樂觀的跡象表明，AI很可能大大促進(jìn)音樂創(chuàng)造力迸發(fā)。However,therearealsomoreoptimisticsignsthatAlcouldgreatlyfacilitateaburstinmusicalcreativity.→Yettherearebrightersigns,too,thatAlmaywelldriveaboominmusicalcreativity.然而However→YetYet等于強(qiáng)烈的轉(zhuǎn)折。詳細(xì)用法請在主頁中部右邊的搜索欄搜索Day11或Day17。促進(jìn)……迸發(fā)facilitateaburst→driveaboomfacilitate[f?'s?l?te?t]v.促使burst[b??rst]n.迸發(fā)這里算是直譯過來，雖然不能說錯但不太地道。driveaboom是一個比較新的詞，指產(chǎn)業(yè)中重大的推進(jìn)。例:InflationIshelpingdriveaboominsecondhandshopping.(通貨膨脹助推二手購物熱潮.)詞匯generate['d?εn??re?t]v.生成churnout[t???rna?t]v.大量生產(chǎn)(質(zhì)量不佳)nowond