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學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文范文【篇一:學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文寫作通用模版】學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文寫作通用模版1、利弊分析型作文模板:思路:1、描述現(xiàn)象2、介紹觀點(diǎn)(第二段,利;第三段,弊)3、作者觀點(diǎn)/結(jié)論范例作文:網(wǎng)絡(luò),是新世紀(jì)的科技產(chǎn)物,也是新世紀(jì)的代名詞。我們的前輩不會(huì)上網(wǎng),懂得什么叫“伊妹兒”的人真可謂“鳳毛麟角”。而今,如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡(luò),那你就會(huì)成為新世紀(jì)“盲人”。請(qǐng)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatnetworkplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,networkshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects(havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages).generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesofnetwork.withthedevelopmentoftechnology,alotofinformationisgatheredtogetherthroughnetworks.informationissharedandexchangedquickly.byaccessingnetworksthroughvariousmeans,peopletrulyrealizedtofindtheinformationtheyneedeverywhereonthenetworksfromtimetotime.networksgreatlyfacilitatethepeople’slive,workandentertainment.evenpeoplestayingathome,work,shopping,entertainment,informationretrievalandetc.canbecompletedthroughnetworks.however,justaseverythingshastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueofnetworks.duetotheconvenienceandbroadresourceinformationofnetworks,someinternetusersonthenetworkhadaseveredependence,butignoredthereallife.theemergenceofonlinegames,alsomakessomeyoungpeopleaddictedtoonlinegamesandneglectedinthestudy.theemergenceofhackersmakessomeconfidentialinformationstolenpossibility.weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofnetworks.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofnetworksoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.模版atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesof?(介紹優(yōu)點(diǎn))however,justaseverycoinhastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueof?(介紹缺點(diǎn))weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.思路第一段,結(jié)合圖表,將圖表的信息描述清楚,點(diǎn)出主題第二段,圍繞主題展開討論,分析原因第三段,結(jié)合上段討論,發(fā)表自己針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論,說(shuō)明危害,重申自己觀點(diǎn)作文范例:thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthechangesintheownershipofhouses.thefirstthingwenoticeisthatstate-ownedhouses’ratioisdiminishingandprovitehouses’isincreasing.thismeansthatastimegoesby,theproportionofoccupiedprivatehousesisgrowingwecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhatstate-ownedhouseis75%oftotal,whichratiowasmuchhigherthanprivatehouses’in1990.after1990,theratioonprivatehouseisincreasedastime.thefiguresalsotellsusthattheincreasingrangeonprivatehouseismuchbiggerinsecond5yearsthaninfirst5years.inthesecondcolumnof2000,wecanseethatprivatehouseratioaccountsfor80%oftotal.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthatprivatepurchaseofhousebecomesmoreandmore.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthatpeople’sincomeincreasesmuchmore.itishightimethatweshoulddeveloptheeconomicalhousingconstructiontomeetmoreprivateneeds.模版thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe(圖表主題).thefirstthingwenoticeisthat_increasing(圖表最大特點(diǎn)).thismeansthatas(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明).wecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhat_(圖表細(xì)節(jié)一).after___(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化),the(幅度+時(shí)間,緊跟著的變化).thefiguresalsotellsusthat__(圖表細(xì)節(jié)二).(數(shù)據(jù)位置,如inthesecondcolumn),wecanseethat______(進(jìn)一步描述).judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthat_(結(jié)論).thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthat_(給出原因).itishightimethatwe(發(fā)出倡議).思路:同圖表型作文模版。范例作文,根據(jù)下圖寫一篇160-200個(gè)單詞的文章1.解釋它要表達(dá)的意思2.簡(jiǎn)單描述這幅圖3.給出你的評(píng)論注:火鍋里的文字有:佛、功夫、解構(gòu)、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等作文范例:thepictureshowedusaboilinghotpotofvariousformsofbothdomesticandalienculture.thehodgepodgecouldbecategorizedasliterature,moralvaluesandperformingarts.asfarasiamconcerned,thepicturecharacterizesthestatusquoofchinesesocietyinwhichchineseandwesterncultureconflictwitheachotherbutalsomergeintoauniqueformtoacertaindegree.inthehighly-integratedworldtoday,nocountryisanisolatedisland.everynationisfacedwithmiscellaneousalienculture,roaringtooverwhelmthedomesticcultureandchinaisnoexception.however,itdoesnotmeantheforeigncultureshallbeeliminatedoreradicated.itisuptotheoptionofthetastersofhotpot,orinotherwords,thechinesepeopletoexacttheessenceofthiscombination,beitchineseorwestern,andtotakefulladvantageoftheworldhasinstoreforus.模版thepictureshowedus。(揭示漫畫的主題,再后面跟一句進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明一下)asfarasiamconcerned,thepicturecharacterizes。(全面分析漫畫主題,以及產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因)however,itdoesnotmean(提出你反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn))ithinkthat.(提出你的觀點(diǎn))4、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型作文模版思路第一段:引言(引山討論的主題(x),提出兩種對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)(a和b),有時(shí)還可略提及支持這兩種觀點(diǎn)的理由)第二段:正文(表明自己的看法,闡述自己支持某一觀點(diǎn)的理由,或/和駁斥自己反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn))第三段:結(jié)論(總結(jié)全文,重中自己的觀點(diǎn))這種篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的重點(diǎn)放在表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)上,更能充分地闡述自己的觀點(diǎn),使自己的觀點(diǎn)更充實(shí)、更有說(shuō)服力。作文范例directions:forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicdo“l(fā)uckynumbers”reallybringgoodluck?youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninchinese)below:1.有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)。2.也有些人認(rèn)為數(shù)字與運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān)。3.試說(shuō)明你的看法。①whenaskedaboutluckynumbers,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.somepeoplethinkthat②luckynumberscanbringgoodluck.theyholdthisviewbecause③theybelieveluckynumberswillhelpthemfulfilltheirwishes-toberichorsuccessful.④however,therearestillmanypeoplewhowontagree.theyarguethat⑤suchkindofideaisonlyignorantandsuperstitiousbelief.besides,⑥theythinknumbersarejustnumbersandeachnumberisequalinitsimportance.⑦personally,iamonthesideofthelatterargument.foronething,⑧numbers,includingluckynumbers,arejustatoolforcounting,theydonthavemagicpower.foranother,⑨whetherwewillhavegoodluckornotdependsonourselvesinsteadofluckynumbers,ifweworkhardandmakegoodpreparations,goodluckwillcometous.⑩therefore,luckynumbersdontbringgoodluck.itisourhardworkandgoodpreparationsthatbringusgoodluck.模版⑧therefore/inconclusion,.5、解決問題型模版思路第一段:引言(提出需要解決的問題或遇到的困難)第二段:正文(說(shuō)明問題/困難的不同方面及如何一一解決)第三段:結(jié)論(展望問題/困難解決的前景)作文范例directions:inthissectionyouarerequiredtowriteacompositiononthetopic“reducewasteoncampus”.youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninchinesebelow:1.目前有些校園內(nèi)浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重;2.浪費(fèi)的危害3.從我做起,杜絕浪費(fèi)。reducewasteoncampusasisknowntoall,wasteoncampushasbecomeamoreandmoreseriousproblem.wecaneasilyseemanystudentsdumpalotoffoodinthegarbagecan.somestudentsspendthousandsofyuanbuyingfashionableclothesandsoon.thenegativeeffectsofwastecanbeshowninthefollowingaspects.inthefirstplace,itmakessomestudentsdependentontheirparentsformoney,whichisharmfultotheirdevelopment.iftheydon’tlearntosupportthemselves,theywillbe“uselesspeople”whentheygraduate.inthesecondplace,itisnoteasyforourparentstoarrangeforourschooling.lastbutnottheleastimportant,thereisnodenyingthefactthatourcountryisstillpoor.therearemanypeoplewhocannotgotouniversityandmanypoorpeoplestillneedourhelp.asfarasiamconcerned,ishouldsetagoodexampletoreducewasteoncampus.firstofall,iwillrefrainfromwastinganything,fromfoodtostationery.what’smore,i’mdeterminedtocallonmoreschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.onlythroughthesemeasurescanwehopetoreducewasteoncampus.模版①nowadays/asisknowntoall/with,we/manypeople/studentsarefacing/havetoface(theproblemof).②thereareseveraldifferentways/channelstotackle/solvetheproblem.first,③.second,④.⑤besides/furthermore,.⑥asfarasiamconcerned/astome,iprefer/chooseto.⑦thereasonsareasfollows.foronething,⑧.foranother,⑨.⑩andaboveall/mostimportantofall,.⑾therefore,【篇二:學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)(二)作文寫作通用模版】學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)(二)作文寫作通用模版1、利弊分析型作文模板:思路:1、描述現(xiàn)象2、介紹觀點(diǎn)(第二段,利;第三段,弊)3、作者觀點(diǎn)/結(jié)論范例作文:網(wǎng)絡(luò),是新世紀(jì)的科技產(chǎn)物,也是新世紀(jì)的代名詞。我們的前輩不會(huì)上網(wǎng),懂得什么叫“伊妹兒”的人真可謂“鳳毛麟角”。而今,如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡(luò),那你就會(huì)成為新世紀(jì)“盲人”。請(qǐng)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatnetworkplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,networkshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects(havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages).generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesofnetwork.withthedevelopmentoftechnology,alotofinformationisgatheredtogetherthroughnetworks.informationissharedandexchangedquickly.byaccessingnetworksthroughvariousmeans,peopletrulyrealizedtofindtheinformationtheyneedeverywhereonthenetworksfromtimetotime.networksgreatlyfacilitatethepeople’slive,workandentertainment.evenpeoplestayingathome,work,shopping,entertainment,informationretrievalandetc.canbecompletedthroughnetworks.however,justaseverythingshastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueofnetworks.duetotheconvenienceandbroadresourceinformationofnetworks,someinternetusersonthenetworkhadaseveredependence,butignoredthereallife.theemergenceofonlinegames,alsomakessomeyoungpeopleaddictedtoonlinegamesandneglectedinthestudy.theemergenceofhackersmakessomeconfidentialinformationstolenpossibility.weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofnetworks.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofnetworksoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.模版atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesof?(介紹優(yōu)點(diǎn))however,justaseverycoinhastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueof?(介紹缺點(diǎn))weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.2、圖表型作文模版:思路第一段,結(jié)合圖表,將圖表的信息描述清楚,點(diǎn)出主題第二段,圍繞主題展開討論,分析原因第三段,結(jié)合上段討論,發(fā)表自己針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論,說(shuō)明危害,重申自己觀點(diǎn)作文范例:thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthechangesintheownershipofhouses.thefirstthingwenoticeisthatstate-ownedhouses’ratioisdiminishingandprovitehouses’isincreasing.thismeansthatastimegoesby,theproportionofoccupiedprivatehousesisgrowingwecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhatstate-ownedhouseis75%oftotal,whichratiowasmuchhigherthanprivatehouses’in1990.after1990,theratioonprivatehouseisincreasedastime.thefiguresalsotellsusthattheincreasingrangeonprivatehouseismuchbiggerinsecond5yearsthaninfirst5years.inthesecondcolumnof2000,wecanseethatprivatehouseratioaccountsfor80%oftotal.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthatprivatepurchaseofhousebecomesmoreandmore.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthatpeople’sincomeincreasesmuchmore.itishightimethatweshoulddeveloptheeconomicalhousingconstructiontomeetmoreprivateneeds.模版thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe(圖表主題).thefirstthingwenoticeisthat_increasing(圖表最大特點(diǎn)).thismeansthatas(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明).wecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhat_(圖表細(xì)節(jié)一).after___(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化),the(幅度+時(shí)間,緊跟著的變化).thefiguresalsotellsusthat__(圖表細(xì)節(jié)二).(數(shù)據(jù)位置,如inthesecondcolumn),wecanseethat______(進(jìn)一步描述).judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthat_(結(jié)論).thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthat_(給出原因).itishightimethatwe(發(fā)出倡議).3、漫畫型作文模版思路:同圖表型作文模版。范例作文,根據(jù)下圖寫一篇160-200個(gè)單詞的文章1.解釋它要表達(dá)的意思2.簡(jiǎn)單描述這幅圖3.給出你的評(píng)論注:火鍋里的文字有:佛、功夫、解構(gòu)、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等作文范例:thepictureshowedusaboilinghotpotofvariousformsofbothdomesticandalienculture.thehodgepodgecouldbe【篇三:英語(yǔ)-2-寫作范文】英語(yǔ)2:寫作范文howtobeagoodlearner?asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysinlearning.weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass.afterclass,wemustgooverthelessonsandfinishourhomeworkontime.it’sgoodtostudyingroupsandhelpeachother.asastudent,workinghardisimportant,butdomorereadinginourfreetime.ifwehaveanyproblems,we’dbetteraskothersforhelp.ihopeallthesewillbehelpfultous.點(diǎn)評(píng):句子較完整,能簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)習(xí)方法,但方法過于簡(jiǎn)單,缺乏自己的獨(dú)特的學(xué)習(xí)方法。語(yǔ)法上無(wú)大錯(cuò),僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。************************************************************************************************deartony:i’mgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtolearnchinese.iwillgivesomeadvice.learningchinesecanbereallyfan.first,youshouldwritethenewwordsingroupsandreadthemeveryday.youcanrememberallthewordsbydoingthis.second,it’sagoodwaytoimproveyourlistening.third,doyoulikereading?ifyoulike,trytoreadchinesenewspaperandmagazinesandpayattentiontothesentences.oryoucanjustreadforfun.last,whataboutgoingtothechinesecornerinyourschool?it’sveryinterestingtotalktochinesepeople.ifyoudothat,you’llbeabletolearnchinesewell.ithinkthisishelpfulforyou.e-mailmeifyouhaveanyotherquestions.點(diǎn)評(píng):層次較清晰,語(yǔ)言流暢,但學(xué)習(xí)方法過于老套,有所重復(fù)。womeninthemodernworldwomenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlybywomen.womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.husbandandwifearenowequalinfamily.theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachother.also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintoday’sfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinner,whereasmencomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.anumberofmenstilljealouslyguardtheirrights,andregardwomenasincapablecreature.fewwomenareallowedtoattendimportantinternationalmeetingsdominatedbymen.that’sreallytheproblemswasshouldsolveimmediately.點(diǎn)評(píng):切題。論證充分,有說(shuō)服力;論證手段豐富(舉證、正反)表達(dá)思想清楚‘語(yǔ)言流暢,詞匯豐富,連貫性好。其本上無(wú)大的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“theadvantageanddisadvantageoftheinternet.”youshouldbaseyourcompositiononthefollowingoutline:(1)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的好處(2)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)產(chǎn)生的問題(3)我的看法theadvantageanddisadvantageoftheinternetinternetplaysanimportantroleinlife.whenyousurfthenet,theworldbecomeasmallerplace.peoplecandiscussaboutdifferenttopicsandmakefriendswithothers.what’smore,theycanwork,play,andevenhavemeetingsonthenet.internetisindeedoneofthemostwonderfulthingsmanhaseverinvented.butjustlikemostotherinventions,theinternethasitsproblems.somepeoplearejustover-enthusiastictoofferworthlessinformation.officialalsofindithardtopreventinvasionofcriminalsonline.andsometimesbadinformationonthenetdoesgreatharmtoteenagers.thereisnodoubtthattheinternethaschangedourlives.however,weshoulduseitproperlyandscientifically.also,theinternetwillserveusbetterifstrictadministrationisapplied.范文點(diǎn)評(píng):此文緊緊圍繞提綱中的關(guān)鍵詞---好處和問題----對(duì)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊進(jìn)行了討論。三段文字分別對(duì)應(yīng)了提綱中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn),并且每段的首句明確點(diǎn)明了該段的主題,中心明確,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文中句式有變化,顯得活潑生動(dòng)。$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“wealthandhealth”youshouldhaveyourcompositiononthefollowingoutlines.(1)有人認(rèn)為財(cái)富意味著一切。(2)實(shí)際上健康比財(cái)富更重要。(3)是比較說(shuō)明。wealthandhealthwhenaskedwhattheaimoftheirlifeis,thevastmajorityofpeoplesay“makingmoney”.foronething,wealthcanensurethemcomfortablelife.however,asfarasiamconcerned,ifihadtochoosewealthandhealth,iwouldpreferhealth.ontheonehand,richpeoplecanaffordeverythingtheydreamof.butsometimeswealthcannotbuyhealth.ontheotherhand,peoplewhoarehealthybutnotwealthycanmakemoneythroughtheirowneffortsandcanenjoythefruitoftheirlabor.inconclusion,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.thosewhoarerichbutarenothealthy,areactuallysuffering.點(diǎn)評(píng):本文緊扣提綱展開論述。觀點(diǎn)明確,條例清晰,用詞較準(zhǔn)確。^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“whatdoesfriendshipmean?”youshouldhaveyourcompositiononthefollowingoutlines.(1)友誼是人生永恒的主題。(2)友誼到底意味著什么。(3)友誼的重要性。whatdoesfriendshipmean?whatdoesfriendshipmean?thereisnodefiniteanswer.asoneternalthemeinliterature,friendshipisindispensabletodailylife.friendshipisasimportanttoourlifeaswhatsaltistodasher.whenyouarehappy,friendshipislikeaddingflowerstocarpet;whenyouaresad,havingfriendsareaconsolation;ifyouareintrouble,friendswillsurroundyouandremovethebarriersforyou;ifyouarefacingdifficulties,youcanturntofriendsforhelp.weadmirethegreatfriendshipbetweenmarxandengel,whichdrewthemtogetherandpushedthemontheroadtoexploringandfulfillingcommunism.friendshipisnotalmighty,butnoonecanlivehappilywithoutit.點(diǎn)評(píng):本文類似抒情式的議論文,第二段中運(yùn)用了排比句,并巧妙地運(yùn)用恩格斯和馬克思的例子來(lái)證明友誼的重要性。+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++apersoniwillneverforgetthepersoniwillneverforgetismisswang,myjuniorenglishteacher.shewastallandnicewithlonghair.sheisalsoactivebecausesheisfondofplayingtennis,travelingandlisteningtomusic.inaddition,misswangiskindandresponsibility.atfirst,nomatterhowharditried,icouldn’tdowellinenglish.itwasmisswangwhogavemeahandintime.andmyenglishhasimprovedalotnow.howlucky,iamtobeastudentofmisswang.點(diǎn)評(píng):文章開門見山,點(diǎn)奔主題,利用題目,完成主題的導(dǎo)入。文中使用了定語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等復(fù)合句使文章更顯其魅力。最后作者用感嘆句總結(jié),給全文劃上了一個(gè)圓滿的句號(hào)。本文作者采用了“總---分—總”的寫作方法,層次清晰,要點(diǎn)全面,發(fā)揮的合情合理。asisknowntoeveryone,healthisveryimportanttous.allofusrealizeweshouldkeephealthandwewilllivelongerandbetter.thefollowingtipswillhelpyoualot.first,ifyoualwayswanttobeintopcondition,youmustleadabalancedlife.youshoulddevelopagoodhabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.don’tstayup!second,foodisaveryimportantwaytokeephealthy.itisknowntousthatvegetablesandfruithaveagoodinfluenceonus.myideaisthatweshouldeatthemmuchmorethanmeatorfastfood.third,startdoingsomeexerciseeveryday.i’msurephysicalexercisedoesalotforaperson’shealth.andthelast,trytokeepapeacefulmoodanddon’tloseyourtemperatanytime.點(diǎn)評(píng):本文是一個(gè)常談話題,講到保持健康的重要性和方法,作者從自身的角度給大家一些保持健康的建議。名詞性的從句和定語(yǔ)從句的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用讓整篇文章如行云流水般流暢自如。一些詞匯、短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用也非常到位,整篇文章能很好地圍繞中心思想,條理清楚,行文流暢,緊扣主題。writing1)asisknowntoeveryone,healthisveryimportanttous.allofusrealizeweshouldkeephealthyandwewilllivelongerandbetter.thefollowingtipswillhelpyoualot.first,ifyoualwayswanttobeintopcondition,youmustleadabalancedlife.youshoulddevelopagoodhabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.don’tstayup!second,foodisaveryimportantwaytokeephealthy.itisknowntousthatvegetablesandfruithaveagoodinfluenceonus.myideaisthatweshouldeatthemmuchmorethanmeatorfastfood.third,startdoingsomeexerciseeveryday.i’msurephysicalexercisedoesalotforaperson’shealth.andthelast,trytokeepapeacefulmoodanddon’tloseyourtemperatanytime.2)mr.blackwillgotobeijingbyplaneattenthirtyonmondaymorning.thenhewillvisitthegreatwallandgotowangfujingtodosomeshoppingfromtuesdaytowednesday.heisgoingtoflytohainanislandateightfortyonthursdaymorning.hewillgotovisit“tianyahiajiao”andgoscubadivinginsanyafromfridaytosaturdaymorning.at4:50onsaturdayafternoon,hewillflybacktobeijing.thenhewillflybackhomeatabout3:20onsundayafternoon.3)ilovemyhometownxuzhoucityismyhometown.itliesinthenorthofjiangsuwithapopularofover5million.inthepast,itwaspooranddirty.mostofthepeopleherelivedahardlife.butgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowntheseyears.ithaswideroads.onbothsidesaremanytallbuildings.youcanseetalltrees,beautifulflowersandgreengrasseverywhere.thepeople’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.i’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautiful.ilovemyhometown.4)nobreakfast,nogoodnowalotofstudentsgotoschoolinahurrysothattheyhavenotimetohavebreakfast.butnothavingbreakfastwilldoharmtotheirhealthandtheirstudy.andatourage,itistimeforustogrowup.soourbodiesareingreatneedofenergy.ifwedon’thavebreakfast,therewillbenotenoughenergy.thismayaffectourgrowth.what’smore,itisalongtimebetweenbreakfastandlunch.breakfastprovidesuswiththeenergyourbodyneeds.withoutbreakfastwecannotgetalongwellwithourclasses.so,wemusthavebreakfast.5)computerscomputersarewonderfulmachines.theycanstorelargeamountsofinformati
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