英語(yǔ)作文范文

學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文范文【篇一：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文寫作通用模版】學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)作文寫作通用模版1、利弊分析型作文模板：思路：1、描述現(xiàn)象2、介紹觀點(diǎn)（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者觀點(diǎn)/結(jié)論范例作文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)，是新世紀(jì)的科技產(chǎn)物，也是新世紀(jì)的代名詞。我們的前輩不會(huì)上網(wǎng)，懂得什么叫“伊妹兒”的人真可謂“鳳毛麟角”。而今，如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡(luò)，那你就會(huì)成為新世紀(jì)“盲人”。請(qǐng)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatnetworkplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,networkshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects(havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages).generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesofnetwork.withthedevelopmentoftechnology,alotofinformationisgatheredtogetherthroughnetworks.informationissharedandexchangedquickly.byaccessingnetworksthroughvariousmeans,peopletrulyrealizedtofindtheinformationtheyneedeverywhereonthenetworksfromtimetotime.networksgreatlyfacilitatethepeople’slive,workandentertainment.evenpeoplestayingathome,work,shopping,entertainment,informationretrievalandetc.canbecompletedthroughnetworks.however,justaseverythingshastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueofnetworks.duetotheconvenienceandbroadresourceinformationofnetworks,someinternetusersonthenetworkhadaseveredependence,butignoredthereallife.theemergenceofonlinegames,alsomakessomeyoungpeopleaddictedtoonlinegamesandneglectedinthestudy.theemergenceofhackersmakessomeconfidentialinformationstolenpossibility.weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofnetworks.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofnetworksoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.模版atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesof?（介紹優(yōu)點(diǎn)）however,justaseverycoinhastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueof?（介紹缺點(diǎn)）weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.思路第一段，結(jié)合圖表，將圖表的信息描述清楚，點(diǎn)出主題第二段，圍繞主題展開討論，分析原因第三段，結(jié)合上段討論，發(fā)表自己針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論，說(shuō)明危害，重申自己觀點(diǎn)作文范例：thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthechangesintheownershipofhouses.thefirstthingwenoticeisthatstate-ownedhouses’ratioisdiminishingandprovitehouses’isincreasing.thismeansthatastimegoesby,theproportionofoccupiedprivatehousesisgrowingwecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhatstate-ownedhouseis75%oftotal,whichratiowasmuchhigherthanprivatehouses’in1990.after1990,theratioonprivatehouseisincreasedastime.thefiguresalsotellsusthattheincreasingrangeonprivatehouseismuchbiggerinsecond5yearsthaninfirst5years.inthesecondcolumnof2000,wecanseethatprivatehouseratioaccountsfor80%oftotal.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthatprivatepurchaseofhousebecomesmoreandmore.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthatpeople’sincomeincreasesmuchmore.itishightimethatweshoulddeveloptheeconomicalhousingconstructiontomeetmoreprivateneeds.模版thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe（圖表主題）.thefirstthingwenoticeisthat_increasing（圖表最大特點(diǎn)）.thismeansthatas（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明）.wecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhat_（圖表細(xì)節(jié)一）.after___（細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化）,the（幅度+時(shí)間，緊跟著的變化）.thefiguresalsotellsusthat__（圖表細(xì)節(jié)二）.（數(shù)據(jù)位置,如inthesecondcolumn）,wecanseethat______（進(jìn)一步描述）.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthat_（結(jié)論）.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthat_（給出原因）.itishightimethatwe（發(fā)出倡議）.思路：同圖表型作文模版。范例作文，根據(jù)下圖寫一篇160-200個(gè)單詞的文章1.解釋它要表達(dá)的意思2.簡(jiǎn)單描述這幅圖3.給出你的評(píng)論注：火鍋里的文字有：佛、功夫、解構(gòu)、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等作文范例：thepictureshowedusaboilinghotpotofvariousformsofbothdomesticandalienculture.thehodgepodgecouldbecategorizedasliterature,moralvaluesandperformingarts.asfarasiamconcerned,thepicturecharacterizesthestatusquoofchinesesocietyinwhichchineseandwesterncultureconflictwitheachotherbutalsomergeintoauniqueformtoacertaindegree.inthehighly-integratedworldtoday,nocountryisanisolatedisland.everynationisfacedwithmiscellaneousalienculture,roaringtooverwhelmthedomesticcultureandchinaisnoexception.however,itdoesnotmeantheforeigncultureshallbeeliminatedoreradicated.itisuptotheoptionofthetastersofhotpot,orinotherwords,thechinesepeopletoexacttheessenceofthiscombination,beitchineseorwestern,andtotakefulladvantageoftheworldhasinstoreforus.模版thepictureshowedus。（揭示漫畫的主題，再后面跟一句進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明一下）asfarasiamconcerned,thepicturecharacterizes。（全面分析漫畫主題，以及產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因）however,itdoesnotmean（提出你反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)）ithinkthat.(提出你的觀點(diǎn))4、對(duì)立觀點(diǎn)型作文模版思路第一段：引言(引山討論的主題（x），提出兩種對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)（a和b），有時(shí)還可略提及支持這兩種觀點(diǎn)的理由)第二段：正文（表明自己的看法，闡述自己支持某一觀點(diǎn)的理由，或／和駁斥自己反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)）第三段：結(jié)論（總結(jié)全文，重中自己的觀點(diǎn)）這種篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的重點(diǎn)放在表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)上，更能充分地闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)，使自己的觀點(diǎn)更充實(shí)、更有說(shuō)服力。作文范例directions:forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicdo“l(fā)uckynumbers”reallybringgoodluck?youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninchinese)below:1.有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)。2.也有些人認(rèn)為數(shù)字與運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān)。3.試說(shuō)明你的看法。①whenaskedaboutluckynumbers,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.somepeoplethinkthat②luckynumberscanbringgoodluck.theyholdthisviewbecause③theybelieveluckynumberswillhelpthemfulfilltheirwishes-toberichorsuccessful.④however,therearestillmanypeoplewhowontagree.theyarguethat⑤suchkindofideaisonlyignorantandsuperstitiousbelief.besides,⑥theythinknumbersarejustnumbersandeachnumberisequalinitsimportance.⑦personally,iamonthesideofthelatterargument.foronething,⑧numbers,includingluckynumbers,arejustatoolforcounting,theydonthavemagicpower.foranother,⑨whetherwewillhavegoodluckornotdependsonourselvesinsteadofluckynumbers,ifweworkhardandmakegoodpreparations,goodluckwillcometous.⑩therefore,luckynumbersdontbringgoodluck.itisourhardworkandgoodpreparationsthatbringusgoodluck.模版⑧therefore/inconclusion,.5、解決問題型模版思路第一段：引言(提出需要解決的問題或遇到的困難)第二段：正文(說(shuō)明問題／困難的不同方面及如何一一解決)第三段：結(jié)論(展望問題／困難解決的前景)作文范例directions:inthissectionyouarerequiredtowriteacompositiononthetopic“reducewasteoncampus”.youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegiveninchinesebelow:1.目前有些校園內(nèi)浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重;2.浪費(fèi)的危害3.從我做起，杜絕浪費(fèi)。reducewasteoncampusasisknowntoall,wasteoncampushasbecomeamoreandmoreseriousproblem.wecaneasilyseemanystudentsdumpalotoffoodinthegarbagecan.somestudentsspendthousandsofyuanbuyingfashionableclothesandsoon.thenegativeeffectsofwastecanbeshowninthefollowingaspects.inthefirstplace,itmakessomestudentsdependentontheirparentsformoney,whichisharmfultotheirdevelopment.iftheydon’tlearntosupportthemselves,theywillbe“uselesspeople”whentheygraduate.inthesecondplace,itisnoteasyforourparentstoarrangeforourschooling.lastbutnottheleastimportant,thereisnodenyingthefactthatourcountryisstillpoor.therearemanypeoplewhocannotgotouniversityandmanypoorpeoplestillneedourhelp.asfarasiamconcerned,ishouldsetagoodexampletoreducewasteoncampus.firstofall,iwillrefrainfromwastinganything,fromfoodtostationery.what’smore,i’mdeterminedtocallonmoreschoolmatestofightagainstwaste.onlythroughthesemeasurescanwehopetoreducewasteoncampus.模版①nowadays／asisknowntoall/with,we／manypeople／studentsarefacing／havetoface(theproblemof).②thereareseveraldifferentways／channelstotackle／solvetheproblem.first，③.second，④.⑤besides／furthermore，.⑥asfarasiamconcerned/astome，iprefer／chooseto.⑦thereasonsareasfollows．foronething，⑧.foranother,⑨.⑩andaboveall／mostimportantofall,.⑾therefore，【篇二：學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)(二)作文寫作通用模版】學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)（二）作文寫作通用模版1、利弊分析型作文模板：思路：1、描述現(xiàn)象2、介紹觀點(diǎn)（第二段，利；第三段，弊）3、作者觀點(diǎn)/結(jié)論范例作文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)，是新世紀(jì)的科技產(chǎn)物，也是新世紀(jì)的代名詞。我們的前輩不會(huì)上網(wǎng)，懂得什么叫“伊妹兒”的人真可謂“鳳毛麟角”。而今，如果你不懂網(wǎng)絡(luò)，那你就會(huì)成為新世紀(jì)“盲人”。請(qǐng)就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對(duì)日常生活的影響發(fā)表你的看法。atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatnetworkplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,networkshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects(havebothadvantagesanddisadvantages).generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesofnetwork.withthedevelopmentoftechnology,alotofinformationisgatheredtogetherthroughnetworks.informationissharedandexchangedquickly.byaccessingnetworksthroughvariousmeans,peopletrulyrealizedtofindtheinformationtheyneedeverywhereonthenetworksfromtimetotime.networksgreatlyfacilitatethepeople’slive,workandentertainment.evenpeoplestayingathome,work,shopping,entertainment,informationretrievalandetc.canbecompletedthroughnetworks.however,justaseverythingshastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueofnetworks.duetotheconvenienceandbroadresourceinformationofnetworks,someinternetusersonthenetworkhadaseveredependence,butignoredthereallife.theemergenceofonlinegames,alsomakessomeyoungpeopleaddictedtoonlinegamesandneglectedinthestudy.theemergenceofhackersmakessomeconfidentialinformationstolenpossibility.weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofnetworks.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofnetworksoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.模版atpresent,thereisnodoubtthatplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.weareallawarethat,likeeverythingelse,havebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.generallyspeaking,thereareseveralmainadvantagesof?（介紹優(yōu)點(diǎn)）however,justaseverycoinhastwosides,thereisnoexceptiontotheabove-discussedissueof?（介紹缺點(diǎn)）weighinguptheadvantagesanddisadvantagesof.weareinclinedtobelievethatthepositivesidesofoutweighitsnegativeones.therefore,weshouldmakefulluseofitsbenefits.whileontheotherhand,wehadbettermanagetoavoiditsharmfuleffects.2、圖表型作文模版：思路第一段，結(jié)合圖表，將圖表的信息描述清楚，點(diǎn)出主題第二段，圍繞主題展開討論，分析原因第三段，結(jié)合上段討論，發(fā)表自己針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的評(píng)論，說(shuō)明危害，重申自己觀點(diǎn)作文范例：thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthechangesintheownershipofhouses.thefirstthingwenoticeisthatstate-ownedhouses’ratioisdiminishingandprovitehouses’isincreasing.thismeansthatastimegoesby,theproportionofoccupiedprivatehousesisgrowingwecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhatstate-ownedhouseis75%oftotal,whichratiowasmuchhigherthanprivatehouses’in1990.after1990,theratioonprivatehouseisincreasedastime.thefiguresalsotellsusthattheincreasingrangeonprivatehouseismuchbiggerinsecond5yearsthaninfirst5years.inthesecondcolumnof2000,wecanseethatprivatehouseratioaccountsfor80%oftotal.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthatprivatepurchaseofhousebecomesmoreandmore.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthatpeople’sincomeincreasesmuchmore.itishightimethatweshoulddeveloptheeconomicalhousingconstructiontomeetmoreprivateneeds.模版thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe（圖表主題）.thefirstthingwenoticeisthat_increasing（圖表最大特點(diǎn)）.thismeansthatas（進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明）.wecanseefromthestatisticsgiventhat_（圖表細(xì)節(jié)一）.after___（細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化）,the（幅度+時(shí)間，緊跟著的變化）.thefiguresalsotellsusthat__（圖表細(xì)節(jié)二）.（數(shù)據(jù)位置,如inthesecondcolumn）,wecanseethat______（進(jìn)一步描述）.judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthat_（結(jié)論）.thereasonforthis,asfarasiamconcernedisthat_（給出原因）.itishightimethatwe（發(fā)出倡議）.3、漫畫型作文模版思路：同圖表型作文模版。范例作文，根據(jù)下圖寫一篇160-200個(gè)單詞的文章1.解釋它要表達(dá)的意思2.簡(jiǎn)單描述這幅圖3.給出你的評(píng)論注：火鍋里的文字有：佛、功夫、解構(gòu)、禮、畢昇、儒、后現(xiàn)代、老舍、莎士比亞、愛因斯坦、道、仁、天鵝湖、啟蒙、京劇等作文范例：thepictureshowedusaboilinghotpotofvariousformsofbothdomesticandalienculture.thehodgepodgecouldbe【篇三：英語(yǔ)-2-寫作范文】英語(yǔ)2：寫作范文howtobeagoodlearner?asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysinlearning.weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclassandalwayslistencarefullyinclass.afterclass,wemustgooverthelessonsandfinishourhomeworkontime.it’sgoodtostudyingroupsandhelpeachother.asastudent,workinghardisimportant,butdomorereadinginourfreetime.ifwehaveanyproblems,we’dbetteraskothersforhelp.ihopeallthesewillbehelpfultous.點(diǎn)評(píng)：句子較完整，能簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)習(xí)方法，但方法過于簡(jiǎn)單，缺乏自己的獨(dú)特的學(xué)習(xí)方法。語(yǔ)法上無(wú)大錯(cuò)，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。************************************************************************************************deartony:i’mgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtolearnchinese.iwillgivesomeadvice.learningchinesecanbereallyfan.first,youshouldwritethenewwordsingroupsandreadthemeveryday.youcanrememberallthewordsbydoingthis.second,it’sagoodwaytoimproveyourlistening.third,doyoulikereading?ifyoulike,trytoreadchinesenewspaperandmagazinesandpayattentiontothesentences.oryoucanjustreadforfun.last,whataboutgoingtothechinesecornerinyourschool?it’sveryinterestingtotalktochinesepeople.ifyoudothat,you’llbeabletolearnchinesewell.ithinkthisishelpfulforyou.e-mailmeifyouhaveanyotherquestions.點(diǎn)評(píng)：層次較清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，但學(xué)習(xí)方法過于老套，有所重復(fù)。womeninthemodernworldwomenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlybywomen.womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.husbandandwifearenowequalinfamily.theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachother.also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintoday’sfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinner,whereasmencomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.anumberofmenstilljealouslyguardtheirrights,andregardwomenasincapablecreature.fewwomenareallowedtoattendimportantinternationalmeetingsdominatedbymen.that’sreallytheproblemswasshouldsolveimmediately.點(diǎn)評(píng)：切題。論證充分，有說(shuō)服力；論證手段豐富（舉證、正反）表達(dá)思想清楚‘語(yǔ)言流暢，詞匯豐富，連貫性好。其本上無(wú)大的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“theadvantageanddisadvantageoftheinternet.”youshouldbaseyourcompositiononthefollowingoutline:（1）互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的好處（2）互聯(lián)網(wǎng)產(chǎn)生的問題（3）我的看法theadvantageanddisadvantageoftheinternetinternetplaysanimportantroleinlife.whenyousurfthenet,theworldbecomeasmallerplace.peoplecandiscussaboutdifferenttopicsandmakefriendswithothers.what’smore,theycanwork,play,andevenhavemeetingsonthenet.internetisindeedoneofthemostwonderfulthingsmanhaseverinvented.butjustlikemostotherinventions,theinternethasitsproblems.somepeoplearejustover-enthusiastictoofferworthlessinformation.officialalsofindithardtopreventinvasionofcriminalsonline.andsometimesbadinformationonthenetdoesgreatharmtoteenagers.thereisnodoubtthattheinternethaschangedourlives.however,weshoulduseitproperlyandscientifically.also,theinternetwillserveusbetterifstrictadministrationisapplied.范文點(diǎn)評(píng)：此文緊緊圍繞提綱中的關(guān)鍵詞---好處和問題----對(duì)互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊進(jìn)行了討論。三段文字分別對(duì)應(yīng)了提綱中的三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，并且每段的首句明確點(diǎn)明了該段的主題，中心明確，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文中句式有變化，顯得活潑生動(dòng)。$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“wealthandhealth”youshouldhaveyourcompositiononthefollowingoutlines.（1）有人認(rèn)為財(cái)富意味著一切。（2）實(shí)際上健康比財(cái)富更重要。（3）是比較說(shuō)明。wealthandhealthwhenaskedwhattheaimoftheirlifeis,thevastmajorityofpeoplesay“makingmoney”.foronething,wealthcanensurethemcomfortablelife.however,asfarasiamconcerned,ifihadtochoosewealthandhealth,iwouldpreferhealth.ontheonehand,richpeoplecanaffordeverythingtheydreamof.butsometimeswealthcannotbuyhealth.ontheotherhand,peoplewhoarehealthybutnotwealthycanmakemoneythroughtheirowneffortsandcanenjoythefruitoftheirlabor.inconclusion,healthismoreimportantthanwealth.thosewhoarerichbutarenothealthy,areactuallysuffering.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文緊扣提綱展開論述。觀點(diǎn)明確，條例清晰，用詞較準(zhǔn)確。^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^direction:youaretowriteanessayof100-120wordsonthetitle“whatdoesfriendshipmean？”youshouldhaveyourcompositiononthefollowingoutlines.（1）友誼是人生永恒的主題。（2）友誼到底意味著什么。（3）友誼的重要性。whatdoesfriendshipmean?whatdoesfriendshipmean?thereisnodefiniteanswer.asoneternalthemeinliterature,friendshipisindispensabletodailylife.friendshipisasimportanttoourlifeaswhatsaltistodasher.whenyouarehappy,friendshipislikeaddingflowerstocarpet;whenyouaresad,havingfriendsareaconsolation;ifyouareintrouble,friendswillsurroundyouandremovethebarriersforyou;ifyouarefacingdifficulties,youcanturntofriendsforhelp.weadmirethegreatfriendshipbetweenmarxandengel,whichdrewthemtogetherandpushedthemontheroadtoexploringandfulfillingcommunism.friendshipisnotalmighty,butnoonecanlivehappilywithoutit.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文類似抒情式的議論文，第二段中運(yùn)用了排比句，并巧妙地運(yùn)用恩格斯和馬克思的例子來(lái)證明友誼的重要性。+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++apersoniwillneverforgetthepersoniwillneverforgetismisswang,myjuniorenglishteacher.shewastallandnicewithlonghair.sheisalsoactivebecausesheisfondofplayingtennis,travelingandlisteningtomusic.inaddition,misswangiskindandresponsibility.atfirst,nomatterhowharditried,icouldn’tdowellinenglish.itwasmisswangwhogavemeahandintime.andmyenglishhasimprovedalotnow.howlucky,iamtobeastudentofmisswang.點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章開門見山，點(diǎn)奔主題，利用題目，完成主題的導(dǎo)入。文中使用了定語(yǔ)從句、原因狀語(yǔ)從句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等復(fù)合句使文章更顯其魅力。最后作者用感嘆句總結(jié)，給全文劃上了一個(gè)圓滿的句號(hào)。本文作者采用了“總---分—總”的寫作方法，層次清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，發(fā)揮的合情合理。asisknowntoeveryone,healthisveryimportanttous.allofusrealizeweshouldkeephealthandwewilllivelongerandbetter.thefollowingtipswillhelpyoualot.first,ifyoualwayswanttobeintopcondition,youmustleadabalancedlife.youshoulddevelopagoodhabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.don’tstayup!second,foodisaveryimportantwaytokeephealthy.itisknowntousthatvegetablesandfruithaveagoodinfluenceonus.myideaisthatweshouldeatthemmuchmorethanmeatorfastfood.third,startdoingsomeexerciseeveryday.i’msurephysicalexercisedoesalotforaperson’shealth.andthelast,trytokeepapeacefulmoodanddon’tloseyourtemperatanytime.點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一個(gè)常談話題，講到保持健康的重要性和方法，作者從自身的角度給大家一些保持健康的建議。名詞性的從句和定語(yǔ)從句的恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用讓整篇文章如行云流水般流暢自如。一些詞匯、短語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用也非常到位，整篇文章能很好地圍繞中心思想，條理清楚，行文流暢，緊扣主題。writing1)asisknowntoeveryone,healthisveryimportanttous.allofusrealizeweshouldkeephealthyandwewilllivelongerandbetter.thefollowingtipswillhelpyoualot.first,ifyoualwayswanttobeintopcondition,youmustleadabalancedlife.youshoulddevelopagoodhabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.don’tstayup!second,foodisaveryimportantwaytokeephealthy.itisknowntousthatvegetablesandfruithaveagoodinfluenceonus.myideaisthatweshouldeatthemmuchmorethanmeatorfastfood.third,startdoingsomeexerciseeveryday.i’msurephysicalexercisedoesalotforaperson’shealth.andthelast,trytokeepapeacefulmoodanddon’tloseyourtemperatanytime.2)mr.blackwillgotobeijingbyplaneattenthirtyonmondaymorning.thenhewillvisitthegreatwallandgotowangfujingtodosomeshoppingfromtuesdaytowednesday.heisgoingtoflytohainanislandateightfortyonthursdaymorning.hewillgotovisit“tianyahiajiao”andgoscubadivinginsanyafromfridaytosaturdaymorning.at4:50onsaturdayafternoon,hewillflybacktobeijing.thenhewillflybackhomeatabout3:20onsundayafternoon.3)ilovemyhometownxuzhoucityismyhometown.itliesinthenorthofjiangsuwithapopularofover5million.inthepast,itwaspooranddirty.mostofthepeopleherelivedahardlife.butgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyhometowntheseyears.ithaswideroads.onbothsidesaremanytallbuildings.youcanseetalltrees,beautifulflowersandgreengrasseverywhere.thepeople’slivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.i’msureitwillgetricherandmorebeautiful.ilovemyhometown.4)nobreakfast,nogoodnowalotofstudentsgotoschoolinahurrysothattheyhavenotimetohavebreakfast.butnothavingbreakfastwilldoharmtotheirhealthandtheirstudy.andatourage,itistimeforustogrowup.soourbodiesareingreatneedofenergy.ifwedon’thavebreakfast,therewillbenotenoughenergy.thismayaffectourgrowth.what’smore,itisalongtimebetweenbreakfastandlunch.breakfastprovidesuswiththeenergyourbodyneeds.withoutbreakfastwecannotgetalongwellwithourclasses.so,wemusthavebreakfast.5)computerscomputersarewonderfulmachines.theycanstorelargeamountsofinformati